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School Ishq (Love in school) DiRa Varun Helly TS Last Part pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely Update 


Cute , Pari is hiding her love story from her sister

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting Part 

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Sorry for the late comment. In part 1, Gogi and Maunal are family friends. Sad that Ratan didn't want to come to the picnic spot because of Diya. When Gogi came with Ratan, Diya was not happy. Sad that Pari is sandwiched between Dira.

In part 3, the Dira football match reminded me of the basketball match in KKHH. Ratan and his team are overconfident as they were way ahead of Diya's team. Diya's fake kiss towards Ratan was funny. Her way of fooling Ratan was like a war. Barbie is very cute as she tried to play a cupid role between Dira. Ratan getting jealous of Diya and Abhay's closeness seems that he is in love with Diya. Sad that Abhay started malpractice in the examination hall. Ratan saw that. I wish he should have told this to the supervisor instead of telling this to diya. Sad that question paper got leaked. I guess it is Abhay's work.

Edited by vatika_r - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank u very much 4 the lovely comments

This SS is ending here.So plz give a detailed comment on the last part n plz write ur favourite scene,favourite character n fav jodiesSchool Ishq(Love in school) Part 3

An unexpected incident took place in their school.The question papers got leaked.

It created a storm in the school.

In CCTV footage they saw a masked person covered with coat and suit stealing the question paper.They could not recognize the person.But they found a ear stud from the room and concluded that the ear stud belongs to the student who stole the question paper.They investigated secretly and and found the owner of the ear stud.

The school authorities reached the classroom.

Principal:Finally we found the culprit because of the ear stud.

All were eager to hear that name.

Principal:The culprit is Diya Malhotra.

All the students were shocked.

Diya was shattered:What are you saying Sir?I did'nt steal it.

One teacher showed her the ear stud:Is'nt it yours?

Diya:Yes.But I had lost one ear stud much before.I searched for it,but I did'nt get it.I really don't know how my ear stud reached there.

Teacher:Don't try to fool us Diya.

Diya cried:I swear..I did not steal.

Pari held her hand tearfully and said:Diya..don't cry.We know that you have not done it.

Principal:You are her twin sister.So you will only support her.No one else will support you Diya.

Diya was crying bitterly.Ratan felt upset seeing her tears.

Ratan:Sir...I also think that Diya is telling the truth.I am sure that she cannot do such a big cheating.

Diya looked at Ratan in disbelief.

Principal:Since the proof is against Diya we are suspending her.

Diya was shattered:Please Sir...please don't do that to me.

Ratan:Please Sir...just because of an ear stud suspending Diya is cruelty.

Principal:You don't teach me what is right and wrong.If you open your mouth again you will also be suspended.Anyways we are only suspending her for 2 weeks.If anyone gets proof to prove Diya innocent we will cancel her suspension.Otherwise she will be dismissed.

Diya was shocked.

Diya was crying in her room.Mauli,Kunal,Pari and Barbie tried to console her.

Diya hugged Mauli crying:Mumma...I have not done anything wring.

Mauli caressed her emotionally:I know bacha...your innocence will be known to everyone.No one can hide the truth.


Surprisingly Ratan came.

Ratan:Diya...I know that you are worried.But don't worry.I will prove you innocent.Trust me.

Everyone smiled.

Diya could not believe it.

Diya:Ratan..I am your biggest rival in school.Then how are you supporting me?

Ratan:Because I know that you can never be a cheat as you are Kunal uncle and Mauli aunty's daughter.

Diya was touched by his words.Everyone smiled.

Ratan:Ok then I am leaving.

Mauli:So fast.Have a tea.

Ratan:I will have it later Mauli aunty.I have some work.Bye.

Ratan left.

Pari:Diya..at least now stop fighting with Ratan.

Mauli:Yes.Ratan is trying his level best to save your reputation.

Kunal:One thing is sure.Though Ratan fights with you he never hated you.

Barbie:Ratan buddy is so cute Diya di.Stop fighting with him.

Diya became emotional.

Diya nodded her head with a smile.Everyone smiled.

Kunal:Finally the long fight is coming to an end.

Mauli:That's like my daughter.

Diya hugged Mauli.

Diya:I was wrong in judging Ratan.I did a mistake.

Mauli became upset seeing Diya in guilt.

Mauli  caressed her face:Diya...at least now you understood that.That's enough.

Everyone smiled emotionally.

Ratan and Sanskar were discussing about the issue.

Sanskar:Do you suspect anyone?

Ratan:Yes.I suspect Abhay.

Sanskar was stunned:But why?

Ratan:Because I saw him copying doing a test paper.

Sanskar was shocked:So he scores good marks through copying,not through hard work.

Ratan:Yes.

Sanskar:But why would he trap his friend Diya to save himself?

Ratan:Because he is a fraud.He was never a genuine friend.He was cheating Diya also.

Sanskar:Oh my God!

Ratan and Sanskar caught Abhay when he went to the washroom.

Abhay:What are you doing?

Ratan:You stole the question papers.Right?

Abhay:What nonsense!It's already proved that it's Diya who did that.

Ratan beat him and said:Never dare to say Diya's name.She trusted you as a best friend.Still you are accusing her shamelessly.

Sanskar started beating him:Say the truth.Otherwise you cannot even imagine what we can do.

Abhay:What will you do?

Ratan took a compass:If you don't say the truth this compass will make you say the truth.

Ratan moved the compass towards Abhay.He got scared.

Abhay:No please...I will say the truth.

Ratan:Then say...

Abhay:I only stole the question papers.I got Diya's ear stud from the floor.To save myself I decided to put the blame on her head.That's why I put her ear stud there.

Ratan:How dare you?Because of you the innocent Diya is suffering.I will not leave you.

Pari was recording everything in her phone.

Pari,Ratan and Sanskar went to the Principal's room with the phone.

Ratan:Sir..please see this.

Principal:How dare you bring the phone to school?Don't you know that the phones re not allowed in school?You people deserve a big punishment for violating rules.

Ratan:Sir...we are really sorry.But we broke the rule only for today as we wanted to collect the evidence to prove Diya innocent.

The Principal and the teacher looked at them eagerly.

Pari pleaded the Principal and the teachers.

Pari:Please watch the video.It's request.

Sanskar looked at the teachers:If you watch it you will know who the actual culprit is.

Ratan played the video which Pari recorded.

They were stunned to hear Abhay confessing his crime.

Diya was brought back to school.The school authorities apologized to her.

Diya looked at him Abhay emotionally and angrily:I considered you as my friend.But you betrayed me so terribly that I can't believe it even now.You don't deserve my friendship.

Abhay was silent.Ratan watched them silently.

Abhay was dismissed from the school and his parents took him away.

Ratan and gang smiled.

Sanskar:Good that our biggest obstacle Abhay is out of the school.He was shining too much among the girls.

 Ratan just smiled.

Diya saw Ratan near his gate.She went near Ratan.

Diya:Thank you Ratan.If you had'nt trusted me and helped me I would not have been able to return to school regaining my reputation.

Ratan:No mention Diya.I supported truth.Sanskar and Pari also helped me a lot.

Diya:I know that.I already thanked them.

She looked at him emotionally:Ratan..I am sorry.You had warned me about Abhay.But I did not believe you.I did a big mistake.

Ratan:It's ok Diya.It's that Abhay's fault.He had trapped all the girls in his sweet evil smile.

All the girls were after him like butterflies as if he was the sweetest honey in the world.

They both laughed.Ratan was mesmerized by her beauty.Suddenly Diya noticed his eyes falling on her and blushed.

Ratan turned off his face to hide his attraction towards Diya.

Diya:Ratan...

Ratan looked at her.

Diya:If you don't mind can we stop fighting and be friends?

Ratan was silent.Diya was nervous about his reply.

Ratan smiled:I already stopped fighting with you Diya.

Diya smiled happily.

She extended her hand towards him:Now friends?

Ratan smiled:Yes..friends...

Barbie who was standing behind Diya looked at Ratan and gestured 'superb'.

Ratan smiled at her.

As Ratan saved Diya,her gang members also ended the enmity and made friends with Ratan's gang.

Both gangs merged into one gang and became thick friends.

Ratan Diya became friends.They started hanging out together.

Even after reaching home Ratan-Diya chatted with each other.

Valentine's day came.

The students who were in love celebrated Valentine's day secretly during the lunch break.

Sanskar stood before Pari waving his hand like a typical Bollywood hero and said:Pari...will you be my Valentine forever?Even when we grow old will you be with me?

Pari smiled :Yes Sanskar..

They  held each  other's hand and shared a romantic eye lock.

Ratan and Diya were surprised to see Sanskar and Pari in love.They were very happy for them and congratulated them.

Ratan thought:I wish I could confess my love to Diya.I want to confess my love to her very badly.But I am scared of her rejection.

Ratan felt upset.

He went out of the classroom and prayed:God..please give me the strength to confess my love to Diya.

Without his knowledge Diya watched it with a smile.

He took a flower from his cover and moved towards Diya.

Ratan:Diya...

Diya was excited.

Ratan shivered:A special flower for my dearest friend Diya.

Diya became dull.She closed her eyes in frustration thinking:Oh God...why can't you make him admit what's in his heart?

She hid her frustration and took the flower from him with a plastic smile:Thank you Ratan.

Ratan thought:I can't open up my heart and lose her friendship also.

Diya:Ratan...what are you thinking?

Ratan smiled artificially:Nothing Diya.

Diya:Ok.

Ratan and Diya started doing combined studies.Jaggi-Gopi and Kunal-Mauli were surprised.

During studies Diya prepared juice and gave it to Ratan:Ratan..you are tired.You drink this.

Ratan:You are also tired.You also drink it.

Diya:But there is only one glass of juice.

Suddenly Ratan saw an empty glass on the table and poured some juice into it.Then he handed over it to Diya.

Ratan:We can share and drink.Remember Kunal uncle had made us share the icecream in childhood?

Diya smiled:Yes.

They started drinking the juice.

Jaggi-Gopi and Kunal-Mauli were watching them secretly.

Mauli:Diya and Ratan are showing so much of concern towards each other.

Gopi:That's the biggest surprise.

Kunal:This is love.

Jaggi:Yes,after fighting a lot they got fed up and started loving each other.

Pari and Barbie joined them:Exactly.

Mauli:You both also feel so?

Pari:Yes mom.

Barbie:I am sure that buddy and Diya di love each other.

Kunal lifted her up in his arms:Naughty girl.Now itself preaching about love.

Barbie:Because I am not a kid.

They all laughed.

After the exams got over...

Ratan:Today I have to confess my love to Diya.

He managed to get courage and went near Diya:Diya...I want to tell you something.

Diya's face blossomed:Say...

Ratan:I...I....

He was sweating like hell.

Diya took a kerchief and started wiping his face.

Ratan:Diya..I...

Diya:Leave it.You won't be able to say anything.

Ratan became dull.

She smiled seeing his facial expression.She moved closer to his ear and said:I love you Ratan.

He was so surprised that he looked at her in disbelief:Diya!

Diya nodded her head blushing.

Diya:Will you share your icecream with me till eternity?

Ratan smiled:I promise you that I will share everything with you forever.

They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

The school reopened for 12th STD classes.

Ratan-Diya went to the canteen.

Ratan ordered:One mixed chocolate mango  icecream.

The canteen boy:How many scoops?

Ratan:Just one.

Ratan looked at Diya with a smile:We will share it.

Diya smiled.

Ratan got the icecream cup and they both started eating it from the same cup smiling at each other romantically.

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Great sleuthing by Ratan in catching Abhay. Some people just can not be trusted.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Ratan and Diya moments are amazing

Beautifully written

Thanks for pm

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amazing update! great end! thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful and so Awesome Part



Ratan and Diya's moments were so beautiful

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Posted: 4 years ago

Abhay is so cheap that he framed Diya only to score by unfair means. Glad that Ratan, Pari, and Sanskar stood for Diya & successfully proved Diya's innocence. Loved Mouli supporting Diya. Dira patch up was sensational. Dira love confession, juice & ice cream scenes are romantic.

Oved all the couples and scenes equally.