PreRish FF || Lost In Time || [Note - Pg 29] *17/05*

Posted: 4 years ago

Hola Amigos!! 🤗

Here’s presenting a new PreRish story. And I am writing this one as a collaboration with Aavnii and Ankie 😳

Aavnii has written half of this chapter and it’s her prompt. Ankie has given a lot of suggestions for the story (aur aage bhi deti rehegi) . Hope that you guys will enjoy the story 😃


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Index


Chapter 1 - Below 


Chapter 2 - Pg 8


Chapter 3 - Pg 15 


Chapter 4 - Pg 18


Chapter 5 - Pg 23


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Edited by Niyati_T - 3 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 1


Sitting in his chair he closed his eyes and took a long puff of his cigar. He rubbed his fingers on his forehead to calm the throbbing headache; he knew that nicotine will only make it worse. But at least it would help him deal with his heartache, the thought made him laugh at himself. He was the successful businessman whom the world called ‘Emotionless and Crude’ had now fallen in love. Before his thoughts could wander any further a knock on the door broke his trance and he looked up to see his PA, Mehra walk into his cabin with a small smile on his face. Nonchalantly Rishabh asked him the reason for his happiness while taking another puff of his cigar 


‘Sir, Ma’am  ka pata chal gaya hai… vo Manali main hai… she is working over there with an NGO ….’


For a moment Rishabh felt his whole body go rigid. Suddenly, the headache had evaporated but his heart ached more; it was after days that there was some news about her. He got up from his seat and asked Mehra to make all the arrangements for his travel. He wanted to leave immediately and not waste another second to bring her back into his life


‘Aa raha hun aapke paas, aapko manane… iss baar aapko kabhi apne aap se door nahi jane dunga… I am going to bring your back in my life, Mrs Prerna Rishabh Bajaj..’


Rishabh vowed to himself silently; he grabbed his coat as he put off his cigar. He walked out of his cabin with a new determination to win his wife’s heart once again.

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Prerna sat alone on a bench in the children’s park and rubbed her arms to keep herself warm as the evening wind of Manali gave her chills. She adored the small kids who were playing in the park and a bittersweet smile formed on her face as she remembered her own daughter. She missed Kukki terribly, her heart cried to go back and hold her daughter tightly in her arms

 

‘Prerna… yahan aise akele kyun baithi ho?’

 

An eldery woman walked her way up to Prerna and sat next to her, she noticed a lone tear escape her eye and questioned her about the same


‘Apko pata hai Asha ji, meri bhi ek beti hai... vo bohut pyari hai aur mujhse bohut pyaar bhi karti hai... lekin pata nahi abh vo kesi hogi….’

 

Prerna tried to fight back the tears that threatened to fall from her eyes 

 

‘Itna pyar karti ho apni bachi se to fir yahan kyun ho? Usse itni door?’

 

‘Kabhi kabhi humara pyaar hi hume un logo se door kar deta hai, jinse hum bhut pyaar karte hai… kuch aisa hi hua hai mere saath…. Unke liye hi unse door hui hun jinse main bohut pyaar karti hun, sirf unke liye…’  and she smiled through her tears

 

‘Aacha, toh kon hai vo jisse tum itna pyaar karti ho ke unke pyaar ke wajah se tum apne beti se bhi door hui ho, jo pichle 15 din se tum yahan tadap rahi ho uss tadap ka kya? Aisa kon hai jiske pyaar ke liye tum apne aapko dard de rahi ho?’

 

‘Mere husband, Rishabh Bajaj…’

 

With a slight pride in her voice Prerna took his name, and the smile that formed on her face was enough for the lady to guess the amount of love that Prerna had in heart for her husband. She wondered what must have happened between them that Prerna had left their daughter and him for his sake

 

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Flashback:

 

During the Ganpati puja, Prerna could tell that something had surely changed in her husband. The way he looked at her told her that. Even his eyes held something different in them. She was getting restless due to his constant gaze at her; but she was not feeling uncomfortable. She thought to speak with him once he would come back from the office when Anupam told her about the intentions of her husband of hitting Anurag with his car. She walked to him and caught up with him right when he was about to sit in the car


‘Aapne deal ki thi na mujhse ki aap Anurag ko tab tak hurt nahi karenge jab tak main aapke saath rahungi, toh kyun uski jaan lene ki koshish karne ja rahe hain?’

‘Mrs Bajaj … I can explain..’

 

‘Kya explain karenge aap? Yeh ki iss plan ko aapne kyun banaya? Kyun aap Anurag ki jaan lena chahte hain? Well, yeh sab aapko batane ki zaroorat nahi hai because main janti hun ki aap yeh sirf issliye kar rahe hain taki main kabhi laut kar uske paas na ja sakun… lekin yaad rakhiyega Mr Bajaj ki agar aapne aisa kuch bhi kiya toh main aapko ek pal main chod ke chali jaungi…’

 

She turned on her heels and walked inside the house angrily without giving Rishabh a chance to tell her the truth, he ran his hand through his hair in frustration  before getting in the car and driving off

 

A few minutes later Prerna was on the phone with Anurag. She had to warn him about Rishabh’s anger and his plan when she heard a loud bang from the other hand. It was like a car had collided with something or someone, the next minute she heard a lot of people screaming. She understood that the situation had become chaotic and got worried 


‘Anurag..’


She almost yelled his name to know what was happening. A man from the other side responded, he was not Anurag


‘Hello… aap kon hai? Aur yeh jiska phone hai vo kahan hai? Vo theek hai na?’


‘Madam Ji, yeh phone jin se gira hai vo theek hain, vo toh kisi ki madat kar rahe hain… yahan ek accident hua hai… shayad vo unhe jante hai… Mr Bajaj … Mr Bajaj… keh rahe hain baar baar….’


Before the man could continue there was a dead drop silence on the other end of the call as the phone had slipped from Prerna’s hand. Seconds ago she was worried that Rishabh would kill Anurag; but now she had come to know that he was the one who was hurt in the accident. She glanced at Kukki who was playing with Tanvi in the other corner of the room and suddenly she felt her heart stop beating. By the sound of the crash she was sure that the accident was a huge one. If Rishabh was the one who would have gotten hurt his injuries might be severe. She had to go to him right now.


Before Prerna even realised she found herself running towards the gate. She hoped that she could escape everyone’s eye but the panic in which she had ran from the house she did manage to grab almost everyone’s attention. Anupam called her out making her stop in her tracks


‘Prerna kya hua?’


Though he somewhere knew the reason for her worry he wanted to confirm it 


‘Accident… Mr Bajaj… accident… mujhe jana hai..’


Failing to form a concrete sentence Prerna ran out of the house leaving everyone worried and confused. Anupam, Shivani and Nivdedita followed her car while the rest of the members just stood anxious at their places. 


As soon as they reached the accident spot they were informed that the person who had met with the accident had been taken to the nearby hospital. Once they reached there Prerna ran straight to the reception where they spotted Anurag along with Mr. Mehra. 


Anupam who was under the impression that Prerna was worried for Anurag now understood what Prerna was trying to say earlier when she kept repeating Rishabh’s name. He was the one who was injured and not Anurag 


‘Mr. Mehra, kahan hai vo.. Doctors ne kya kaha hai …. Unhe zyada chot toh nahi lagi na?’


‘Ma’am unka accident bohut bada tha, unhe seedha operation ke liye leke gaye hain uske baad hi…’


Without letting Mehra finish his sentence Prerna walked past him towards the operation theatre and entered the room without paying heed to the nurses’ constant warnings.


She halted in her spot when she had a glimpse of him. He was lying there. His face was covered with his own blood and doctors were trying to stop the bleeding.


‘Aap andar kaise aa gai, nurse inhe bhar lekar jaiye please…’ 


One of the doctors spoke through his mask but Prerna shot a glare at him


‘Main inki wife hun… aur main tab tak yahan se nahi jane wali jab tak aap mujhe nahi batate ki mere husband ko kya hua hai…’


‘Ma’am please understand, filhal hume aapke husband ko treat karne dijiye… unka already bohut blood loss ho chuka hai.... aap jab tak yahan hain hum treatment nahi start kar sakte… aap please bahar wait kijiye…’


The elder nurse tried to explain the situation to Prerna who thankfully listened to her and walked out of the OT in a trance. Shivani came to her and caught her by the shoulders to give her some support. Prerna recalled the last few words she had spoken to him and sobbed loudly 


‘Sab meri galti… maine hi unhe itna kuch kaha ki vo iss tarah se gusse main aakar ghar se chale gaye… mujhe unhe rokh lena chahiye tha… I shouldn’t have let him leave when he was so mad…’


Anurag who stood in the corner of the room felt guilty listening to her words, he knew that it was not her fault but his


‘Galti tumhari nahi meri hai… yeh sab mere wajah se hua hai…’


Anurag spoke in a low voice, yet he managed to grab everyone’s attention 


‘Mr Bajaj toh office ja rahe the, main hi jaan bhuj ke unke gadi ke samne aa gaya taki unke gadi se mujhe chot lag jaye and sab ko aisa lage ki unhone meri jaan lene ki koshsih ki..... But last minute he took a sharp turn and his car collided with the tree… vo toh meri jaan bachane chale the aur…’ 


Anurag was cut off in the middle by a hard slap that his sister had given on his right cheek 


‘Tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya tha… kya karne chale the tum Anu…. apni jaan dav pe laga ke tum Mr Bajaj ki gadi ke samne aane wale the. Unhe apne murder ke planning liye frame karne chale the… nateeja dekha … abh vo khud apni jaan ke liye lad rahe hain… aur soch lo agar vakiy main jo tumhe socha sab vaise hi hota tab kya? Mr Bajaj ke jagah tum apni jaan ke liye lad rahe hote ..’


‘Janta hun Di, lekin main yeh sab sirf issliye karna chahta tha taki Prerna mere paas laut aaye… main janta hun ki vo aaj bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai aur main usse pana chahta tha issliye maine yeh sab plan kiya tha….’


He slowly went towards Prerna and tried to hold her hand when she pushed him hard


‘Don’t you dare touch me Anurag Basu…’ 


Anurag was shocked by her actions and her words


‘Prerna…’


He tried to speak again but she stopped him by pointing a finger at him


‘Mrs Prerna Rishabh Bajaj…. Mr Rishabh Bajaj ki wife, jo iss waqt tumhare wajah se zindagi aur maut ke liye lad rahe hain…’


Prerna felt her own body shiver in rage and was shocked that she was feeling so strongly for her husband right now. Ever since she had met him it was for the first time she had felt something for Rishabh, it was fear. The fear of him losing his life and she was confused as to why she was so scared for him.


Before she could process her thoughts or say anything else to Anurag the doctor stepped out of the OT. She ran to him and bombarded him with questions about Rishabh’s health 


‘Mrs Bajaj, I don’t want to give you false hopes but your husband’s condition is very critical. Accident ke wajah se unka sar bohut buri tarah se unke seat ke headgear se takra gaya tha.... Impact ke wajah se unhe kafi severe head injuries aai hain and though the operation is successful the next few hours are very crucial for him. It seems like his body is not ready to react to our treatment. And I am afraid that if he doesn’t wake up in that time frame he might slip into coma and in worse case, he might lose his life…’


The doctor just gave them an apologetic look as he instructed the wardboy to start shifting Rishabh to ICU ward. Prerna felt her body go numb again for the second time in the past few hours. The first was when she had heard the news of his accident and then now when the doctor gave her an update of his health


‘Nahi unhe kuch nahi hoga… kuch nahi hoga unhe…’


She kept repeating these words to herself like a chant and looked at the others. She looked helplessly at her sister who tried to console her. Anupam and Nivedita too had tears in their eyes as they witnessed her breakdown while Anurag looked at the floor ashamed of his own act and the outcome of it.


‘Prerna…’


Nivedita took a step towards Prerna to console her but Prerna shook her head negatively 


‘Mujhe aap logon se koi sympathy nahi chahiye… mujhe console karne ki aapko koi zaroorat nahi hai, agar kuch karna hai toh please apne husband aur bhai ko yahan se leke jaiye… yeh jo kuch bhi hua hai inn dono ke wajah se hi hua hai…’


Anupam looked as guilty as Anurag right now. He wasn’t surprised that by now Prerna had figured out that he must have helped Anurag, after all he was the one to tell Prerna about the whole accident thing and that is why she had accused Rishabh of it. Without even giving him a chance to say anything


‘Nivi di please… aap sab yahan se jaiye…’


Shivani said in a low voice and tried to calm her sister who was still shivering due to fear and rage. Nivedita just gave her a small nod and grabbed Anurag and Anupam out of the place. Prerna passed a thankful look towards her sister 


‘Shivi... tu bhi abh ghar ja… aur dhyaan rakhna ki Kukki ko kuch pata na chale.. Uska khayal rakhna please…’


After great efforts Prerna had managed to send Shivani home and she asked Mehra to take care of the hospital formalities while she went to the ICU room where Rishabh had been shifted. He looked like he was in a peaceful slumber. Despite of the fact that he had an oxygen mask on his face and various wires attached to his body to keep his vitals stable. She took slow steps towards him and sat on the stool next to his bed. Tentatively she caught his hand in hers and brought it to her cheek. She felt her tears roll down as she sobbed softly  


‘Jaisa bhi ho ek rishta hai humara… aapki patni hun main… aur aapki beti ki Maa hun… uss nate mera haq banta hai ki aapse yeh zid karun ki aap apni life ke liye ladiye… main janti hun ki aap ek fighter hain aur aapko hamesha jeetne ki aadat hai… toh please Mr Bajaj, iss ladai ko bhi ladiye aur isse bhi jitiye… apne liye na sahi toh aapke aapno ke liye… apki beti ke liye… mere liye…’


Prerna was not sure if Rishabh could hear her words but she hoped that he would listen to her and wake up soon, she gripped his hand tightly and placed their intervened hands next to his body as she rested her head on the side of the bed and dozed off 


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Waiting for your likes and comments 😳

Edited by Niyati_T - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

New story! 🥳


Amigos ne mujhe woh promised story bhi nahin di. 🥺

Edited by Wistfulness - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Wistfulness


New story! 🥳


Amigos ne mujhe woh promised story bhi nahin di. 🥺

Kisne nahi di aur konsi wali??? 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Niyati_T


Kisne nahi di aur konsi wali??? 

Amigos...our AT member.

She promised me an OS long ago but vanished without posting it. 😆

Posted: 4 years ago

This is going to be One of the best PreRish fictions ever and I am so proud to be involved in its making 😎

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Wistfulness


Amigos...our AT member.

She promised me an OS long ago but vanished without posting it. 😆

Ohh... I have never spoken to her before or heard people speak of her.. Toh I didn’t know 😳

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by WaqtZaya


This is going to be One of the best PreRish fictions ever and I am so proud to be involved in its making 😎


@italic : Ameen to that!!! 😳

yeh humara saubhagya hai ki aapka guidance mil raha hai 

Edited by Niyati_T - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Oooooo that was a nice chapter👍🏼. I mexcited to read more😆. 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Niyati_T



@italic : Ameen to that!!! 😳

yeh humara saubhagya hai ki aapka guidance mil raha hai 

 🤣too much hindi 😆



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