PreRish Ficlet: Yeh kya haal banaya hai ghar ka?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Guys, here is my third Ficlet on PreRish. Hope you like it.

Do comment.

This is for you, Shunshine!!!🤗❤️



'Mom, lagta hai aaj humne kucch zyada hi shopping kar li.' said Kukki.

Kasak-! Kya baat hai! Mom, am I dreaming? Aaj meri shopaholic di khud bol rhi hai ki zyada hi shopping ho gyi hai? Waah!'

'Kasak!Ruk!

The elder sister tightened her grip on the bags and ran behind the younger, who, in the meantime had raced to the entrance door of the Bajaj Mansion.

Smiling, Prerna followed her daughters.

'Mom!' 

Prerna ran inside the house hearing the shrieks of her daughters.

She entered the house and asked, 'Kya hua, Kukki and Kasak? Chillaye Kyun ?'

'Look at the floor,Mom' replied Kasak.

The mistress of the Bajaj Mansion was stunned to see the whole house messy.

The hall, study, living room, kitchen, dining room and even the corridors were messy.

The Junior-Senior Bajaj duo were standing their with their head hung down.

Kasak- Mera vase! Toot Gaya!

Kukki asked, 'Mera pocket mirror kisne toda?'

Prerna - 'Yeh Sab kaise hua? Prem, Rishabh, Yeh sab kya hai ? '

Realising that the men won't say anything, Prerna yelled, 'Chandu!'

The faithful servant came running at his Mistress's call.

'Chandu, Yeh Tandav kaise hua?'

Hesitating at first, Chandu replied, 'Maam, Sir aur Prem baba football Khel the ghar mein. Yeh Sab un dono ne Kiya. Prem...'

'Kaka, chup kariye Please!'

Prerna showed her palm to her son and said, 'You shut up instead, Prem! Chandu, Carry on.'

'Kukki beti ka Mirror and Kasak beti ka vase Prem baba me toda hai.'

Chandu fled away from there, after earning an angry glance from Rishabh.

Prem thought of a way to escape from the slaps of Kukki and the perfect karate kicks and punches of Kasak.

Prerna burst out at husband and son, 'Apka Umar bohot dino pehle half century kar Chuka hai. Yaad hai aapko? Aur tum Prem, pura din toh padhte bhi ho, saal bhar complaints aate hai tumhare college se .Aapne Papa Ko ungliyon pe Matt nachao!'😆

'Par Papa toh aapke isharon aur ungliyon par nachte hain!'🤣

 Rishabh and Kasak chuckled softly and Kukki facepalmed.

Prerna's face was red.

She twisted her son's ears and said to Kukki, 

' Kukki, aaj se Prem ka football and phone tumhare paas rahega.'

Later it is seen that The two Bajaj men are cleaning the house with Poor Chandu. Kasak is seen instructing them.

Prerna is seen sitting on the sofa.

Kukki, a software engineer, goes through everything of Prem's phone.

The scene ends with Kukki showing Prem and others a girl's pic on his mobile and asking, 'Yeh "Mukti" Kaun hai? Aur uska photo tere phone ke   gallery mein Kyun hai?' ☺️😆


The end. 

Love, Mishti. ❤️ 


 

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is hilarious..🤣🤣

Rishabh nd prem babu playing football at home...😆prena Nd daughter taking class of both...

Pls do write more....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu8193

This is hilarious..🤣🤣

Rishabh nd prem babu playing football at home...😆prena Nd daughter taking class of both...

Pls do write more....

Thanks a lot for liking it. 🤗😊❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hehe this is funny...👍🏼

Aur likho...🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ektamaddan42

Hehe this is funny...👍🏼

Aur likho...🤣

Thanks a lot. 🥱

Aur likhungi. Soon Naya Ficlet.😉

😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MISTInew

Thanks a lot. 🥱

Aur likhungi. Soon Naya Ficlet.😉

😊

 will be waiting...👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wàh wah kya ficlet h🤣

Pure ghar ka satyanash kar diya junior& senior bajaj ne🤣

Par papa toh aapki ungliyon par nachte h🤣

Both prem & rishabh cleaning floors and kasak instructing them🤣

Yeh mukti kaun h aur iski photo teri gallary mein Kaise🤣Bechara prem🤣

Likhti rahiye aise hi ficlets🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: 456

Wàh wah kya ficlet h🤣

Pure ghar ka satyanash kar diya junior& senior bajaj ne🤣

Par papa toh aapki ungliyon par nachte h🤣

Both prem & rishabh cleaning floors and kasak instructing them🤣

Yeh mukti kaun h aur iski photo teri gallary mein Kaise🤣Bechara prem🤣

Likhti rahiye aise hi ficlets🤣

Thanks a lot!!!

Love you , Pooja!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

ouchhhhhhhhh ..hilarious 🤣


do write in regular basis 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is such a lovely update.

Ladies busy with shopping👍🏼 and men busy with football spoiling the whole house😆. This is so funny. So Prem is the naughty one here. His 'Par Papa toh aapke isharon aur ungliyon par nachte hain!’ is highlight of this Ficlet. Prem saving Mukti’s pic in his mobile.