Awesome OS Ankie.... Loved it... The gussa of Mrs.Bajaj ....and the way she showed it was fabulous... She didn't even spare Bechare Mehra ji.😆...woh bhi kya sochtha hoga kaha phas gaya mein inn dono ke beech mein 🤣 ...but then the subtle way Rishabh cajoled her is ....the ending lines are pure love😍 ....wonderful!!!
awww thank you so much 🤗i hope it was worth your time 🤗♥️🤗♥️🤗♥️🤗♥️🤗♥️🤗🤗♥️Originally posted by: esha143Awesome OS Ankie.... Loved it... The gussa of Mrs.Bajaj ....and the way she showed it was fabulous... She didn't even spare Bechare Mehra ji.😆...woh bhi kya sochtha hoga kaha phas gaya mein inn dono ke beech mein 🤣 ...but then the subtle way Rishabh cajoled her is ....the ending lines are pure love😍 ....wonderful!!!
this is lovely OS Ankie ji, her gussa frustration is right on top while he is busy with work... bechare Mehra ji is also not spared lol
the ending their aankhon ka ishaara and his crooked smiles and wink .. i can so imagine this
your writing in first person is such a delight to read ji 🤗 write more and soonish
haiyee Yea kiska comment dekh rahi hoon mera OS likhna safal huyii gava *breaks into celebrationOriginally posted by: munnihyderabadthis is lovely OS Ankie ji, her gussa frustration is right on top while he is busy with work... bechare Mehra ji is also not spared lol
the ending their aankhon ka ishaara and his crooked smiles and wink .. i can so imagine this
your writing in first person is such a delight to read ji 🤗 write more and soonish
I believe when you reach a certain age in your marriage har baat ke manana nahi hota hai. Guess that's what mature couples generally do, even if they throw a tantrum max to max but then little moments like this, makes it up unlike the honeymoon phase couples. It all about moments and living up to them 🤗
I love to write in this narrative so much. It's difficult but i LOVE IT. I have always preferred to write in this narrative but majorly people generally do not like as it's one of the most confusing and unconventional methods to write in. 🤭 But thank you soooooo much for taking out time even after so much of work you have and then reading and then commenting. Thank you 🤗 i feel so much loved 😭
Ps this has a part two 🤭
When do we get to read Part 2 .. I am just so excited for the next update narrated in your style
Please update soon!!
i will start to write today 👍🏼Originally posted by: Sunn_shineWhen do we get to read Part 2 .. I am just so excited for the next update narrated in your style
Please update soon!!
Originally posted by: WaqtZayai will start to write today 👍🏼
Yey.. you start today, so happy to know that..
But the real question is when do you finish and post ☺️
Just kidding.. I'll be here to read whenever you post
i am trying my best Honestly. 🤣Originally posted by: Sunn_shineYey.. you start today, so happy to know that..
But the real question is when do you finish and post ☺️
Just kidding.. I'll be here to read whenever you post
Originally posted by: WaqtZayai am trying my best Honestly. 🤣
Well your best is what we want..
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