FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY- PreRish FF [Thread1 Ch 1 - 14] - Page 2

Woww...you write so well. Prerna's actions and feelings seem so much more attuned to reality. This is the farewell we did not get in the show. Please continue writing this story. Really looking forward to the next update.

Dear all, 

Thank you so much for your lovely comments on my first ever attempt at writing. This is so encouraging and makes my effort worth a try, I am glad you found it worth giving a read. I was deeply disappointed by the way the only character that I liked was treated towards the end, specially the lifeless farewell. I tried to pen down how I would have loved to see it happen. I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes, will work on it.

I would be responding to each and every message personally in a while. Thanks again you all!

Love

Sunn_shine

"Sun will shine on us again!"

Welcome Dear,

Nice take on this particular scene....

 you really penned down it in a beautiful and realistic way...

far far better than we saw..

hope you will continue it with next part...

First of all congrats on joining IF

Second my dear your OS was awesome

Like it seriously touched my heart and connected so efficiently 

You have a great way with words and expressions that all things came alive

Hence I request you to kindly continue this OS and turn it into ff if you comfortable that is

Bas baaki sab toh Shruti Wistfulness already said

Oh btw why dont you join the AT of prerish??? Just a  suggestion though 

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Whoa! Finally something to read! 😃

What a brilliant debut! 👏

I absolutely loved the OS and its brilliance has left my parched heart craving for more. This one carried a significant level of similarities with the farewell episode and I must admit your writing effortlessly outclassed the latter. 

Moreover, I liked how you handled the ending. Prerna's decision and the following action isn't explicitly stated and it's up to the readers to interpret it. I believe it's a positive ending as Prerna has decided against the impending wedding and is all set to return to Mr Bajaj. :)

This one deserves a sequel.

Title suggestions:

I Know I'd Go Back to You

Tied by the Threads of Destiny

Tangled by a Nameless Void

Thank you Wistful for your encouraging words and amazing titles for the story. You are right it is highly inspired by the farewell scene and I tried to recreate my own, because show left me extremely disappointed. I am glad you found it worthy of your time.

Thank you again! 

Originally posted by: davinajebakani

nice story...but why did you stop half way, please do continue it asap...at least all prerish fans will get to see some prerish moment here since there are none in the show...

Thank you Davina..

Originally posted by: shajeeah

Amazing story, I loved it

I am glad you liked it, Thank you!

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

thank you Darling, you have expressed whatever i wanted to in the perfect words. 

Yes dear please continue it. Though it looks like you are going to. 🤗

Thank you Waqtzaya!

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

I guess Shruti (wistfulness) has said everything what every PreRish fans and reader feels here.. it's really an awesome story... Pls write more

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Awesome 

Thank you!