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FF: Manthan: Vish ya Amrit (completed) - Page 6

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On your posts u have that copy link function. Simply posts those links in my media thread.


I will add them to the required section.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Part: 5

We Lost...???

"PIAAAAA!!!"

          Both Nishant and Saavi stopped dead in their tracks... Their hearts sank.


Sa: D-Dad ye kya tha??

Ni: Pata nahi... Chal kar dekhna padega.


          And they both rushed back towards Pia's room... 

          They were praying hard for Pia's safety and were having a hard time stopping their minds from focusing on all those worst scenarios which popped up in their heads... While leaving, they had hoped that everything would be fine soon and Pia will be cured but Vedashree's terrified scream had doused that last spark of hope in their hearts.

          All the family members were rushing towards Pia's room from every direction... They were all scared to death!!!

          They reached Pia's room... One look at Vedashree's tear strained face brought a lump in their throats and told them that their worst fears had come true... 

          For the bed was empty... Pia was nowhere to be seen.

          What had happened to her?? Had she vanished completely??? Had the antidote failed??

          Everyone was staring at Nishant in shock... They could not believe their eyes... They could not believe that Nishant's experiment had failed!! Professor Nishant... Who had the solution to each and every problem had failed?? They had thought that this was something impossible... Yet, this time the impossible had become possible!!! This was unbelievable...


Ni: Ye sab kaise hua Vedashree ji?

Ved: Main yahan Pia ke paas baithi thi... Phir mujhe ek phone aaya. Main dekhne gayi aur jab wapas aayi to Pia yahan nahi thi.

Ni: Aap kitni der ke liye bahar gayi thi?

Ved: Main... Main bas ek ya do minute ke liye hi bahar gayi thi.

Ni: Kya?? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai?? Gudiya ka shareer itni jaldi gayab nahi ho sakta...


          They all looked at Nishant with a ray of hope in their eyes... But, what they saw shocked them too... Nishant was lost in a reverie and was mumbling something...


Ni: Hum haar gaye... Hum Mohona se haar gaye!!! (With a sudden fury) Nahi, main... MAIN haar gaya! MAIN Mohona se haar gaya!!! MAIN apni Gudiya ko bacha nahi paya... MAIN uske ke liye kuch nahi kar paya!!


          He could not believe what had happened. He had failed... He wasn't able to save his Gudiya... He had lost!! And his eyes welled up with tears again...

          All were standing petrified and were crying when suddenly they heard a voice behind them...

"Aap sab ro kyon rahe hain???"

          They all whirled around, shocked...


Ni: Gudiya!! Tum... Tum theek ho gayi??

Pia: Haan Baba... (Looking at herself) Lekin ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai???

Ni: Kuch nahi Gudiya... Sab theek ho jayega. Don't worry...

Pia: Par Baba, mera aadha shareer gayab kaise ho gaya hai??

Ni: Ye sab us Jamuni Vish ki vajah se hua hai...


          And he told her exactly what had happened to her... How she had slipped into a coma, how her body had started disappearing and how another Pia had been created... Pia was shocked to listen to the train of events...


Ni: To isliye, ab tumhe us dusari Pia ko khatm karna hoga... Tabhi tumhe apna poora shareer wapas mil payega.


          Meanwhile, Pia was looking around as of she was trying to find someone...


Pia: Ansh kahan hai??

Ni: Tumhare behosh hone ke baad Ansh poori tarah se Davansh ban gaya...

Pia: Kya??

Ved: Haan... Aur pata nahi kyo usne achanak se Mohona par humla kar diya... Aur Mohona ne use Patthar ki murati bana diya. (Sobbing) Mera Ansh theek to ho jayega na, Nishant ji?

Ni: Don't worry Vedashree ji... Ek baar Gudiya ko uska shareer wapas mil jaye, phir hum Ansh ko bhi theek kar denge. (Turning towards Pia) Lekin usse pehle, tumhe us dusari Pia ko khatm karna hoga.

          (Meanwhile, the Rathods took Ved away as she needed rest...)

Pia: Theek hai Baba... To mujhe kya karna hoga??


Mo: Main batati hoon...

Pia2: Theek hai...

Mo: Sabse pehle tumhe us Pia ko kamzor karna hoga...

Pia2: Lekin wo to pehle se hi kamzor hai...

Mo: Hai lekin poori tarah se nahi... Tum dono ke paas apna aadha-aadha shareer hi hai. Isiliye, jaise-jaise wo kamzor hoti jayegi, tumhari shakti badhti jayegi aur tumhe bacha hua aadha shareer milna bhi shuru ho jayega...

Pia2: Theek hai...

Mo: Aur haan, ek baat aur... Tumhe use maarne ke liye ek hi mauka milega.

Pia2: Aur wo ek mauka hi mere liye kaafi hoga... Par main use maarungi kis hathiyar se? Aise hi apni shaktiyon se ya...

Mo: Use maarne ke liye ek hi hathiyar hai...

Pia2: Aur wo kya hai?


Ni: Aur wo hathiyar hai Sarp Talvar...

Pia: Lekin ye Sarp Talvar hume milegi kahan??

Ni: Pata nahi... Sarp Talvar ke baare main koi nahi jaanta. Aur ye raaz surakshit rahe isliye Sarp Shastra main bhi iske baare main zyada kuch nahi likha hai...

Pia: To phir hum us Talvar ko haasil kaise karenge?? Aur agar wo Talvar nahi mili to main us Pia ko khatm kaise kar paungi??

Ni: Main zyada kuch nahi janta par Sarp Shastra ke hisaab se, jab ek Sarpika ko apne bure swaroop se ladna padta hai, to wo Talvar us jagah par aur ek khaas samay par apne aap prakat ho jaati hai.

Sa: To Dad, iska matlab ye hua ki jahan par bhi Di ka apne bure swaroop se saamna hoga, wo Talvar Di ke paas apne aap pahunch jayegi??

Ni: Haan bhi aur nahi bhi...

Pia: Matlab??

Ni: Matlab wo Talvar tum dono ke beech main prakat hogi aur tum dono ko ek-ek mauka milega us Talvar se vaar karne ka.

Pia: Aur agar main ek vaar main use khatm nahi kar payi to??


Mo: To wo Talvar apne aap dusare ke paas chali jayegi... Aur wo Talvar khud is baat ka dhyaan rakhegi ki wo vaar khaali na jaaye.

Pia2: Matlab jo pehle chook gaya, uski maut pakki??

Mo: Haan... Aur isiliye tumhe savdhaan rehne ki zarurat hai. Wo Talvar sabse pehle tumhare haath main aani chahiye aur tumhara vaar bhi khaali nahi jaana chahiye... Warna tum janti ho kya hoga.

Pia2: Don't worry... Mera vaar khaali nahi jayega. Main pehle hi vaar main uska kaam tamam kar dungi.

Mo: Bahut badhiya... Mujhe tumse yahi ummeed thi. Is baar jeet achhai ki nahi, burai ki hogi!!! 


Pia: Main use jeetne nahi dungi... Burai chahe kitni bhi taakatvar kyon na ho, achhai ke saamne use ghutne tekne hi padte hain.

Ni: Yaad rakhna Gudiya, tumhara vaar khaali nahi jaana chahiye.

Sa: Lekin Dad, hum sure bhi to nahi hain ki pehla vaar Di hi karengi...

Pia: Uske liye mere paas ek raasta hai...

And she told them her plan...

Sa: Aapko poora yakeen hai ki aapka plan kaam karega?

Pia: Karna to chahiye... Waise bhi, humare paas dusara koi raasta nahi hai.

Sa: Ye sab to theek hai... Par Dad, aapne kaha tha ki wo Talvar ek khaas samay par prakat hoti hai... Iska kya matlab hai?

Ni: Sarp Shastra ke hisaab se wo Talvar ek khaas jagah par aur ek khaas samay par prakat hogi... Aur hume us jagah ko dhoondhna hoga...

Pia: Lekin us khaas jagah ko pehchanne ka tareeka??


Mo: Us jagah par chaar khaas nishaan dikhayi denge... Aur unhi chaar nishaano ke zariye hum us jagah ko pehchaan payenge.

Pia2: Aur wo nishaan kaun se hain?

Mo: Yeh lo...


          She waved her hands in the air and the balck smoke appeared yet again... Soon, various shapes began to appear out of that smoke.

          The first shape was that of a five headed snake...


Mo: Ye Neelkesh Naag ki chhavi hai... Ye hai pehla nishaan.


          Next, the smoke formed the shape of a star with six points...


Mo: Ye Sarp Taare ki chhavi hai... Ye dusara nishaan hai.


          Next, the smoke formed a shape of what seemed to be a twig with three leaves...


Mo: Ye Trinetra Mani ki chhavi hai... Ye hai tumhara teesra nishaan.

Pia2: Aur chautha nishaan??


Ni: Chauthe nishaan ke baare main yahan kuch bhi nahi likha hai...

Pia: Aur Maa ki diary main?

Ni: Divya ki diary main bhi kuch nahi likha hai... Shaayad Divya ke saamne kabhi ye chunauti aayi hi nahi. Isiliye use bhi chauthe nishaan ke baare main kuch nahi pata... Kyonki apni diary main bhi Divya ne sirf teen nishaano ke baare main hi likha hai... 

Pia: To phir hume kaise pata chalega ki wo Talvar kahan prakat hogi?

Ni: Filhal hume in teen nishaano se hi kaam chalana padega... Humare paas waise bhi samay kam hai... Aur barbaad karne ke liye to bilkul bhi nahi hai.

Pia: To chalo, chal kar ye nishaan dhoondhte hain.

Sa: Lekin Dad, ye nishaan kahan dikhayi denge? Zameen par dikhenge ya aasmaan main ya kisi patthar par bane honge?

Ni: Kahin par bhi ho sakte hain... Ab chalo, humare paas waise bhi samay kam hai. Hum ise aise waste nahi kar sakte. 


Mo: Ab chalo bhi... Hume jald se jald wo jagah dhoondhni hogi jahan par wo nishaan prakat honge.

Pia2: Theek hai chalo...


          And all of them left to find the place where those four special marks would make their appearance and finally Pia will vanquish her evil side and save herself, Ansh and the others... 

          But, will she be able to do so?? What will be the outcome of this battle?? Will good defeat evil?? Or will evil succeed in it's devious plot? Pia did not know what the future had in store for her... But, she knew one thing. She had to fight till her last breath...

Edited by Nikki_srk - 3 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update dear!!! 👏 👏 👏


Itna sara ajeeb naam to serial mein bhi nahi suna! Tum kaha se leke aa gayi! 😆


Loved Nishant's breakdown. But Ved ko aise hi chod diya!!!  Kyun?????? 😭 😭 😭


I loved the black smoke and all the symbols. So fourth one is a mystery! 🤔 Is that gonna play an important role in the war? 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update dear!!! 👏 👏 👏

Thank you... Glad you liked it. 🤗


Itna sara ajeeb naam to serial mein bhi nahi suna! Tum kaha se leke aa gayi! 😆

Told you... I am a part time Reevavanshi myself!! 😆

Jokes apart, several names have been picked up from the show only... Rest all are a result of my wierd imaginations...


Loved Nishant's breakdown. 

Thanks... I myself liked this part (although, I rarely like what I write...)

But Ved ko aise hi chod diya!!!  Kyun?????? 😭 😭 😭

Well, I had planned something for Ved too...

The initial part of this chapter was to be included in the previous one... But, due to my phone I wasn't able to and had to include it here... Which is why, I had to cut out Ved's part because this chapter became too long... (And even I am feeling bad for cutting that part...)

I loved the black smoke and all the symbols. So fourth one is a mystery! 🤔 Is that gonna play an important role in the war? 

Thanks... They were a last minute addition though!! I had not planned to add these symbols...

Edited by Nikki_srk - 4 years ago
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Thank you... Glad you liked it. 🤗

🤗


Told you... I am a part time Reevavanshi myself!! 😆

😆 😆 😆



Well, I had planned something for Ved too...

The initial part of this chapter was to be included in the previous one... But, due to my phone I wasn't able to and had to include it here... Which is why, I had to cut out Ved's part because this chapter became too long... (And even I am feeling bad for cutting that part...)

Ved ki kismat dekho!!! 😲 Yahan pe bhi bach gayi! 🥺 Mera ek request hain. Ek chapter zaroor likh na jaha pe use blast kiya jayega. 


Thanks... They were a last minute addition though!! I had not planned to add these symbols...

Cool! 👍🏼

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Ved ki kismat dekho!!! 😲 Yahan pe bhi bach gayi! 🥺 

She is indeed really lucky!!

Mera ek request hain. Ek chapter zaroor likh na jaha pe use blast kiya jayega. 


Well, I am thinking of something like this... How about an OS featuring Ved, Gs, Nishant and EDV??

Anyways, for that, first of all I would like to discuss it with you... Can we discuss tomorrow??

Edited by Nikki_srk - 4 years ago
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Well, I am thinking of something like this... How about an OS featuring Ved, Gs, Nishant and EDV??

Anyways, for that, first of all I would like to discuss it with you... Can we discuss tomorrow??

Sure. PM me. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!

Reserved again! Today seems an update day.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sure I will... But later. Right now, I have to first end this story. 

Edited by Nikki_srk - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

It's getting more and more interesting.  Great imagination Nikki 👏



In the first page could u add links with pg no like a table of contents. Makes it easier to find the the different parts.