MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8

Posted: 4 years ago

Hai guys....wishing you all a very happy DIWALI....🥳... Just I was thinking it's been a couple of years since I stopped updating and now I realised I have missed Maneet a lot...and this is what makes me happy.. thinking about their new avatars and fantasising about them....so I'm going to start a new story as a part of Diwali celebrations... hope you all like this Diwali gift from me.....and once again wishing all Maneetians a lot of fun this Diwali and let this happiness last for the whole year fulfilling all your dreams, and hopefully this Maan and Geet too have a wonderful romantic journey this time...come and join their journey.....

Character sketches....

Maan Singh Khurana....NRI...a Canadian citizen...it's role reversal this time and hope it turns out to be fun....

Dev Khanna: the knight with the shinning armour who saves our damsel in distress..... he is the latest hit amongst the builders of Mumbai...

Geet Handa: our very own Geet from GHSP.... typical Punjabi innocent, beautiful, simple and dreamy small town girl....

That's it....all other characters will be revealed as and when they appear in the story just to keep things interesting...I think I already revealed a lot with the character swapping of Maan and Dev.....

Now let's straight away get into business...I mean let's start with the story....

It's Mumbai....

Maan is staying at the Taj...he is trying to kill his time rather wants to fast forward the clock to 10 pm which is his flight' s departure time when he would be free from all this unpleasant memories related to India....how he wished he had never returned to India....it's not that he forgets India and the Indian people ( specially that stupid person, the last person he wants to remember) as soon as he lands in Canada, but this trip has made him relive that fateful  first ever summer that he spent in India....his life has changed from not so bad to the worst forever after that summer.....no matter how hard he tries to erase that from his memory and just get back his normal life as the carefree easy going MSK who never bothered about anything or anyone but himself....how easy it was to live life on your own terms without any unwanted baggages attached to everything you do....just live the moment without thinking about the consequences of your deeds....as a loner he was free from any kind of pressure from anyone for he always remained aloof staying away from the only relationship he had , his namesake father...there was no one to judge him and he was at peace..... though he might not have been happier than he was in India, still it was much better and easier with no complicated relationship to maintain....but happiness comes with a hefty price tag....he had to give away whatever he had, his peace of mind and his trouble free life.....but Maan is yet to realise that to get something you have to give something... everything has its own value....even if it's stupid human feelings....damn it...now Maan has become this emotional fool... what's wrong with the Indian mitti...on stepping his foot on this land of sentiments even a emotionless Maan Singh Khurana has become all senti......how nice it would have been had he not met his father Madan Khurana one last time on his death bed driven by those stupid emotions which always disappointed him....

Maan came back to India for the second time to attend his cousin Vicky's wedding...and also Dadi wanted to see him one last time for she thinks that her time has come to leave this earth...you know our drama queen Dadi.... only she can blackmail Maan....

Maan was so uncomfortable to be back at the Khurana Mansion in Delhi for a lot happened there which he wants to forget....but it is not that easy for him to escape from the memories of that unforgettable summer....those memories have been haunting him like a ghost all these days and coming here didn't help much....it's like refreshing those memories.....

Maan looks at his watch and it is just 11 am....has time frozen? or has his clock just stopped ticking?....he has got another 13 hours before he could board the plane and escape.... actually he had planned a tight schedule with no time to spare for those unwanted thoughts but instead of being at the wedding as per his plans here he is struggling with himself trying hard not to go back into the past....as the wedding scenario reminded him of someone atop his hate list Maan left earlier....alas! he has landed himself directly into the flames trying to escape from their heat....this lonely date he has with himself doesn't help at all to improve the situation....Maan has become so stupid that he believes that he can easily bury his memories in India itself and he can forget everything just like magic leaving everything back here....but atleast he wouldn't have to live in the fear of coming across that person responsible for all the mess surrounding his life....or maybe his heart yearns to get a glimpse of the ghost from his past...but his useless dimag is scaring him that it would be his worst nightmare if at all he gets to meet that person.....and he doesn't know how he would react if such a situation arises....will he turn mad and hurt the two of them more than what they are endearing already... what's he thinking? He is the one who had to suffer while the other one is happy...is that so? How would he know about that? He has already failed terribly trying to know that person better....how would he know if he doesn't meet?

Maan knows very well that his heart is aching to meet that person and is desperately confusing him so that he would take some step to find the person.....but he is not going to take that path again....he hates that emotional roller coaster....in the end all he is left with is the memories and never ending pain.....

Maan switches on the TV and tries to divert his mind....but the TV becomes a mere furniture that makes some noise for Maan has gone back to his past....

Maan being a single child was pampered so much by his mother Sheetal...but as they say everything that is too good is short lived, Maan lost his mother when he was a 10 year old.....his papa Madan was as usual busy with his business and Maan was left on his own....the only responsibility that Madan took care of is Maan's financial needs...he thought he took good care of his son... later Madan married someone from work, a Canadian women and Maan started hating his father for he forgot his mother so easily.....Maan then started to live with one of his friends and later got his own place.....he then slowly started earning and took care of his needs on his own....later he stopped bothering about his father and stopped interactions with him until one day he got a call from that other woman that Madan is terminally ill and he wants to meet Maan and talk with him before he dies....Maan didn't want to hear anything from him but he just wanted to go and ask him, how on earth he still remembers Maan?

That meeting turned out to be the turning point in Maan's life... Madan felt guilty for being so selfish and not taking care of Maan after Sheetal left....he realised his mistake and he doesn't want Maan to be left alone in this world for he has a big family back in India....Madan tells Maan about his own family, his mother Savitri Devi Khurana and his younger brother Mohan Khurana...Madan had never tried to contact them after he came to Canada with Sheetal.....they also didn't have the courage to contact him until his father Amarnath Khurana left....

Maan didn't want to revive that relationship which was never there for him when he was desperately in need of a family when Sheetal left him alone....but after Madan left, as per Madan's wish Maan had to convey the news of Madan's demise to his mother Savitri Devi..she deserves to know that her Son left this world or she'll be waiting forever for his return and she wouldn't even die in peace... Madan had already given her a lot of pain and he doesn't want to trouble her even after his death...but Madan just had their address and contact nos from 25 years back which were not valid now...Maan didn't even know they existed.... Madan just leaves an old picture of him with Savitri Devi Khurana.... something about his dadi pulled Maan like magic...you know blood is thicker than water...Maan set off to India to just meet her once....that's how he ended up finding a new family for himself but someone snatched the joy of his reunion with his family that he had to return to Canada leaving his new found family behind again....dadi is still mad at him but Maan can't help much...

Maan still remembers the day he landed in Delhi with the picture his father gave him as the sole family property that Maan would inherit as a Khurana clan....

Maan is in India....but he had little idea what fate had in store for him here...how would he know that there awaits a surprise new member to become a part of his life, however brief it would be yet leaving a mark forever, or to put it Maan's words that someone special who crashed into his life like a tsunami taking away whatever little happiness he ever had .....but as we know how big MSK'S ego is that he keeps telling himself that he is not affected by anyone and there is no one who could change him...he is still the same carefree MSK who never bothers about anything but himself...but what he fails to realise is that he has already shared a part of himself with that person...now that should definitely bother him, haina?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Happy Diwali! Congrats on the new FF! thanks for the pm! 

awesome character sketch! 

Maan's feelings and dilemma well portrayed!! what did he do? he is running away from his feelings!

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations on your new FF

Posted: 4 years ago

A Fantastic Start


Maan lost his mother to death at the age of 10 years 

later he even lost his father to a second marriage 

leaving Maan alone in his life 

later he found out that he has a Dadi in India 

but there is something bothering Maan

it seems like he holds pain 

Posted: 4 years ago

                       Part - 1

Maan keeps looking at his watch....the time is moving very slowly....he is frustrated and feels like each second is a torture for him....he gets angry and orders a drink so that he could get rid of his unwanted thoughts....

But when the drink arrives and he just stares at the can for a long time, images of his past keep flashing...someone holding the very  same brand and sipping it and Maan could easily tell that it's their first try, Maan was amused to see the reactions for just a simple beer...if you are so bothered then why touch it at all? Even now he has a smile on his face when he thinks about that...what? Why is Maan again and again reminded of the past....noooo....why would the hotel give him the very same brand while there are lots of better brands..... Maan comfortably forgets that he got only whatever he ordered...he curses his fate for all this unusual coincidence and doesn't understand that it's only himself to blame for its just his own mind games....he is angry with himself and in the end throws it in the bin.....

It's just 4 pm and Maan decides that he should get going for this is suffocating in here and he needs some fresh air to clear his mind....he books a cab and goes to the airport straight away....he thinks that he could engage his stupid mind in the buzz of the airport....he keeps strolling so much from one place to other that an employee thought that he has lost his way and offers to help....Maan is embarrassed but is happy to engage in a conversation with that man rather than sit idle and let his devil mind work against him....he shows his ticket and that man says that Maan has got another 3 hours until his flight's arrival...he suggests Maan waits at the lounge.....he thought Maan didn't see the timings properly....

Maan tries to immerse in some book, not any business magazine....Maan Singh Khurana with a book.... strange...but just to remain sane what all poor Maan has to do?....his eyes are staring the book while his mind is as usual wandering in Delhi...this book has turned into his Indian Summer journal....he is turning mad slowly and steadily and he is just obsessed with those memories...he could only see the flash back in that book....he closes it and gets rid of it immediately....

After a very long wait he is called for security check and is relieved that his miseries are finally going to end...as he waits for his planes arrival his eyes are fixed on someone coming up the escalator...he couldn't see the face clearly but he could easily recognise that person even from their vague figure...he then rushes up to find out who that was but he has missed by a fraction of a second....he then realises that it might only be his imagination for he has been thinking of her and her only....(*like it's a big mystery.... I've been trying not to disclose the gender of the person all this time and I know you all know who it is from the beginning itself....it's Maneet story and who else could disturb Maan other than our Geet Handa....*)

Maan returns to his seat but he couldn't stay there more than a minute...he is going back to just confirm that it's not her so that she won't trouble him even when he returns to Canada and still keeps thinking about whether it was her or not...if he knows that it's just his imagination then he could get back his peace....so thinking he just goes in the direction of the arrivals...he has a hunch that she went in that direction only...as his eyes yearn to get a glimpse of her after so many years his mind is multitasking thinking about her first entry into his life to the day they last met....all are very fond memories for him...how would she look now...he has not missed the changes in her wardrobe...she looked more urban and she has no problems carrying on such a suit with ease...sure she has changed a lot...but she still drives him crazy...

Maan is right...she is there only waiting for someone....that is a flight from Dubai... suddenly a stupid notion arises in Maan's confused mind...some of the flights from Canada have a connecting flight from Dubai....is she still crazy enough to come wait for him on those odd days when she couldn't overcome his thoughts like any bollywood heroin..... maybe that's what Maan wants....how would she forget the MSK that easily....

Maan stands at a distance and watches her....wow...like Salman Khan getting younger by age Geet gets more beautiful with her age...she has sure lost that innocence....how would Maan know that he probably took it with him when he ran to Canada abandoning her....but her captivating charm has only increased exponentially and she could easily make anyone go nuts with those beautiful eyes....Maan couldn't see her eye to eye but still who knows Geet better than Maan?

He just wants to have a little peep into her ever so expressive eyes that has always conveyed her thoughts to him....he has mastered the art of reading her eyes and he knows that it's still a cake walk for him if only he could get a glimpse of her eyes...

As Maan waits for her to turn towards his direction where he is hiding...he doesn't have it in him to face her eyes directly for he knows they always have a million questions for him....most of them he has no answers....does that mean he feels guilty somewhere deep in his mind...no Maan Singh Khurana can never go wrong....it's only the fault of this stupid Geet... don't you dare think of her like that Mr.MSK for she is no more stupid enough to blindly  believe you...

Geet is only looking towards the arrival gate....oh stupid girl I'm just behind you and you are looking for me in the wrong place...Maan wants to shout...Geet, I'm here.....but his mammoth ego would never let him follow his heart.....with the years it has only grown and not otherwise like everyone wished... it's not about everyone's will and wish but what matters is only MSK's yearnings... what does he want? No one has an answer for this silly question not even the MSK... that's the problem...

The passengers start coming through the gate one by one and Geet's eyes are searching for that special someone....Maan is just staring her....Geet moves forward with a big smile on her face just as she would have welcomed the MSK had he not messed things up....she just goes and hugs someone...Maan is shattered to see a handsome hunk standing in front of her...what happened to her reservations about socializing in public places? She doesn't seem to be uncomfortable hugging him as if he is some teddy in front of all the people...nahi nahi..in front of the great MSK...so now she is fine with all this...she only had all the problems with him...he would never understand that it happens only with him for he is the MSK as he always says...he loses his temper and with all those unfair expectations he was sure to get hurt....

Maan is pissed off and he just starts leaving that place in a hurry....his heart is pumping faster and faster that it would break from overload... Maan just wanted to just vanish into thin air... How great it would be if we could just delete our life like some digital story and start it afresh all over again....he doesn't want to look back...he has not got the answers for all those endless questions that pop up in his mind everyday....but he has definitely got the one answer that he needed to know desperately..... Yes, she has moved on and it's time for him to move on too.... he'll go find his life back in Canada and would never turn back..... good bye India forever.....but what Maan has failed to realise in his madness is that he can only find his life back from where he lost it and not somewhere else......haina?

Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely stsrt story loojs interesting waiting for next plz pm me 

Posted: 4 years ago

interesting starting.............

Posted: 4 years ago

Part 1

nice update! 

So Maan has abandoned Geet.... why? 

he is shocked seeing Geet but cannot help but admire her! 

who did Geet hug?

thanks for the pm

Posted: 4 years ago

congrats for new story

seem very interesting 



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