Trials Of Fire !!
This is not a story...with screenshot pics, these are episodes to be watched in your mind's realm.
Amitji has taught us when realities don't happen, dwell in your dreamworld, " Main Aur Meri Tanhaayee Aksar yeh baatein karate hain!Tum hoti to kaisa hota!..."
( Myself and my solitude, always converse...had you been there, how it would be?...)
This is that saga which Barun chose to connect with fans on TV screen again, we shall not let it stop ever!
Storyline to justify Barun's choice for the show
Pics to commemorate Barun's talent and give a live show feel.
Hindi Dialogues to reminisce Barun's dialogue delivery
English Translations for Sweet Barun's global fans who must not miss the story pleasure.
Songs fitting for the episode and the youtube version to enjoy the song in real
Index with links
Index with links
Edited by Loving2Missing2 - 8 months ago
For all genuine Barun Fan, IPKKND3 was a story with huge potential which got butchered up and closed prematurely.
But such stories always linger in our hearts......very much same as the legend of Madhubala remains immortal.
It was Barun's choice for a comeback and connect with fans on daily basis..... so naturally the story is close to my heart. I found his acting far more matured like an ageing wine; so the expressions linger in your heart.
This FanFic is not just chapters with only character names being the same and rest story entirely new. No!
This story starts exactly where the show closed..... and takes the journey ahead of Advay's true revenge......So Here Advay is like Arnav, having known his foe separate from his love but still carrying the same anger inside.
The story closes a lot of loops left open in the show with logical explanation for each twist and then opens further loops for the story to move ahead making justice to all characters.
Take a complete enjoyable experience replete with fitting screen shots of expressions, songs and Barun's own dialogues used in the show.
As readers, you gals may realise I have changed the title of the FF as the story moved further.
The show had started as Inteha , Intezaar ya ilzaam doon, iss pyaar ko kya naam doon?
Inteha, that's limit/epitome ........Advay and Chandni will both show "Inteha" in exhibiting their emotions- anger love included
Intezaar, waiting....... both have waited for sixteen years and even now their destination has not arrived, it's going to be an interesting long wait! For us too!
ilzaam, the censure.......The story started with ilzaam, the blame, even today, the blame game continues in the couple and will continue to do so.... because ilzaam is integral in their saga.
Yet, this is the Untold Saga which is after the Suhaag raat episode. The story is now turning into Imtehaan, the trial/ examination of both where both will have to go through Trials of Fire before they find their unified equilibrium!
The reference of fire was used again and again in promos..... The original story intended was perhaps different than what got shown. My effort is to bring justice to those original promos.
My start of FF writing had been just scripting of Suhaagraat that we all wanted desperately but did not get..... it was the Lamha..... a moment that we wanted to linger in..... so I titled this Lingering moments.
Because friends loved my writing, they wanted me to continue and what initially was just remembering the earlier moments again and again and doing a true repentance.
But somehow the story grew on me and turned into revenge saga..... So now I feel the original title doesn't make justice to content.... hence changing the title.
Buckle up your seat belts, we shall ourselves witness Inteha (Limit) Intezaar (Waiting) ilzaam (censure) of this beloved Adni couple as they go through their Trials Of Fire
The story will make us adore Advay.
The man has emerged through so many different colours!
When he explained his show actions about Sasha to Chandni.....
Whatever I did then wasn't because of what I felt for Sasha; but it was because of what I did not want myself to feel about you...
When he explained his ways to Chandni
Memories needed to be forgotten stirred inside of me, something unwelcome and unmistakable!...I wanted to blot out the memories; I wanted to hate you with my whole and soul...
But, refusing to accept those memories, didn't resolve the sensations that plagued me, that dogged me...I wanted you!
When he is wise explaining Krishna's ways to her when he creates destruction
Life is neither simple nor innocent like how you think...Destruction is part of life...Why are you so averse to it?
Did Krishna not do destruction in Mahabharat... Have you not imbibed his Geeta philosophy to do what is right, what is required at the moment!
When he is so compassionate with her; yet wants her to accept that they two are enough; even if they don't get a child
"You had asked me a question that day, Chandu. I wish I had all the answers... but I don't! And for me, I am not concerned about our answer to such question...it's our working together to search the answer... for me, It's not about the end, it's about the journey.
Chandni, our love is going to be the stuff of legends..". He urged. He wanted her to accept that their love would be enough for them to live.
The way he urged her to come to terms with his illness
"God isn't hovering above us waiting to punish us. Remember Chandu, in life nothing is certain.
Life cannot be trusted. Death is the only ultimate truth.
Life is beautiful because we all know someday there is going to be death. And death coming as Kaal to us is beautiful because without it just continued living would make life drudgery."
And now in this scene, the same things which are reflecting in her mind; are reflecting in his mind.....She wants the blessing that is a gift of rain..... He thinks of her as the blessing same as the gift of rain.
When she tells him her dream, her desire; he understands the fragility; he understands that the dream makes her eyes sparkle. And then.... he does not counter her; neither does he console her......no other words..... just his acceptance and acknowledgement
"yes, My Love"
Absolute beauty in a moment..... in our beloved couple!Edited by Loving2Missing2 - 10 months ago
The very initial Suhaagraat chapters
Hope the usage of same dialogues as in the show; but now taking completely different interpretation, gave you a nostalgic reminiscence and a pleasurable experience in chapter1. The Suhagraat begins but does not culminate. So enjoy the continuing pleasure in chapter 2.
Here, Chandni will see the true change of Advay to Dev which she had been urging for so long but he kept denying her. And having accepted his love, his need for her in the heavy rain, he now gets engrossed in enjoying the natural beauty of transformation of his childhood friend Chandu to the Young Lover Chandni.
The physical union alone can never form a solid basis for true unbreakable relationship; the minds and thoughts need to mingle too. So, as the first start of Advay's redemption, he reflects upon his stern, torturing actions against Chandni. Again Advay becoming like Arnav who reflected on his acts, the day he agreed to re-marry Khushi.
The story gets enriched with further beauty because in addition to Advay, Chandni also has her own redemption starting and admitting.
America and many across the globe may fantasise about Christian Gray who calls the first sexual experience as "correcting a situation"; but for us, Advay enacted so very perfectly by Barun is the hero and our eternal fantasy; because he respects his woman and takes her permission before enjoying her body.
General outline of story in first thread
The story opens on SR which has soulful confessions and repentance of both DevNi. The SR came alive so beautifully, as I had myself not expected when I first started typing...the love coming alive in the way they both became one...the care shown by Dev, an ideal for any hubby of the world...that's what made the SR beautiful...the dialogues reused from Advay and Chandni in the serial and the pics from serial itself perfectly matching each scene... even today, when I read it, I do get the feeling that it's actually happening in front of me.
Then comes fun-filled morning between couple followed by family gathering at breakfast. His relationship with family and his attachment to Aadi; getting portrayed so wonderfully through small scenes... The discussions lead to Chandani's grief about Sasha, then a clarification by Dev... In the same heart to heart talk, Chandani shares her perspective. It leads to giving Dev the pleasure of union which he wanted before going for B/F.
The loop closed in 8th chapter when Dev knows that Sasha is wiped out between the couple... but it was over only between Dev and Chandni; is it over between Advay and Sasha gang? What might he do ahead and where could it lead... well even I don't know myself as of now and I am as curious as any reader now will be.
The B/F discussions have led to Bromance and opening out of original show open loop as to how Chandani found Miku. The revelation makes Dev fall in love all the more and then wanting to Undo the hurt caused by him to Chandani.
When one reads chapter 5, there are loops getting closed at the same time further chapters opening. KC topic was opened in 5th chapter itself when maasi was doing sargi preparation. Chandani approached her to ask about Dev but in vain. Then there was Dev wanting to give new marriage vows and go ahead given by Nani... this has lead to new marriage vows at the Sunrise of beautiful KC morning.
It's first day after SR and Chandani is unable to eat because she is hugely missing Dev. The morning B/F is missed due to sudden topic of Sasha coming up. Evening dinner is missed due to Dev's sudden illness attack owing to his kidney problem. The next morning she wants to have sargi but Dev's outburst stops her and then her eventual fainting has led to KC completed privately with both doing the rituals. Truly a memorable KC for Chandani, I would say!
Earlier Chandani had approached Naani which eventually led to women gathering for Geeta pathan. This in turn led to her going for women's function and then her PTSD attack... So it's like one small convo opening out a wonderful loop closure track later... n very logically, too...
In the same chapter, Chandani discussion with Pooja explained the sudden jerk of the show, where a maths professor originally coming from London suddenly became a business tycoon of Mumbai. It also builds logic in Advay's working through the nights for online consulting and lecturing. This was shown in show earlier and does intermittently pop up in my FF as well but not as a shock rather as a convincing option.
The PTSD attack later took DevNi to Diwali shopping and further building of their love as well as romance. At the same time VeerKha nok-jhok romance and MurShi romance ran as parallel story. Maasi and Chandani are building the drama conflict in Dev's mind about a tragic past and hopeful happy future.
An earlier evening had Dev getting angry at Chandu for speaking about an abduction bringing in beautiful Devni song moments and later a heart rendering soul talk between DevNi.
Miku, in line with his prankster character, played up on women at home, bringing up an important issue about women working and becoming independent. This in turn later gets linked to Chandni's being a lecturer in religion and Geetha, an innovative option.
Devni had beautiful romance moments left yearning with sweet disturbance from some or other family member. In the evening, Chandu's accidentally falling into the pool opened another loop of her PTSD. It lead to beautiful night between DevNi followed by a mubaarak Diwali morning...where truly Dev's lovemaking to Chandni took a new dimension reaching the souls...
Chandni explained the concept of Laxmi in its true sense beyond just money...A lovemaking night and further a beautiful nok jhok morning between DevNi which built to Aadi getting disappeared. This led to sudden outburst of Dev on Chandni out of guilt.
An honest effort at appeasing Chandni's angry hurt by Dev showed how true his love for Chandni is and makes her realise that too. Devni have another soulful discussion about how Chandni is the only person with whom Dev relates his every emotion.
Then came Bhaidooj when Miku has risen above everybody's expectation and brought a beautiful dimension to the whole drama.The whole family will now move to Europe.
This story has been sheer pleasure seeing ADNI life going ahead after 6th October when the show ended and truly made me feel that the show never ends in our hearts, our minds... hope you readers have got at least a little pleasure with the same feeling in your minds... looking forward to seeing all your reactions!
A few memory pics
Dupatta mere hi naam ka pahanogi
Tum dupatta ke bina jyada achhi lagati ho
Family enjoying breakfast together
Dev is sick with kidney pain and time for Chandni to pamper
Argument between DevNi over KC fast
Marriage rituals again in private... a beautiful remarriage
Dev saving Chandni from PTSD in woman's organization hall
Roothe roothe piya, manaau kaise... Chandni manaoing Dev
Pooja, a heart of gold with a tinge of tear
Ab Dev kya kare? Aadi knocking ...
When you love, there is always pain
Aadi is so lucky to have CM
Mujhse judaa na hona kabhi
A sweet roothana manaana between ADNI... murga banana ADNI special
Acchu se mulakaat karavaani hai
Kaise banegi Shikha Veer ki sahchareeni
Some romances will go on forever
A few minutes invested in giving an honest response , goes a long way to give happiness of many months
A response given by a reader against chapter no. 6
Haven't read the seventh chapter yet..So sorry for the late Se bhi late reply on sixth update. I wasn't feeling my cheery self so postponed giving reply.. I don't want to give a reply half heartedly bcoz your update deserves the most heart felt comment.
It's been almost two days that I read your update and now when Iam commenting I didn't find the need to go back and give a look to remember the scenes bcoz everything is still so fresh in my mind , such was your description. You have done a great job and nailed each and every scene.
The way Advay got disappointed bcoz he can't give his wife the special night he promised. Chandini Ka rootna ... APNI Nahi hua ? Wonderful scene.
The whole karvavchaut setting is good. Just adding the right bit of family moments. Shikha completely being herself. Advay outburst at pooja made me raise my eyebrows but we can ignore it saying he was so concerned about our chandini or may be that scene was indeed necessary for the beautiful explanation of karvavchaut ...
You know ... During rain seeding episode ... Everyone went a head and researched every thing about it... If any asks anything about that in future we can give them all the info they need. Why ? Bcoz this man there makes us do such crazy things. Your update doesn't feel like out of story to me at all.. you had it all.. it just feels like continuation of the show. So this is Advay.. the same advay.. now so we are equally crazy here too. From now on if anyone says a word about karvavchaut.. we can give tanatan answers and your beautiful explanation word to word.
It was a very good scene. And this is very important step in their character growth and their journey towards each other.
Next comes the epic scene. How did you even think of that. I wouldn't ... It was so original. The whole thought if taking sun as the live fire . It was pure , soulful and most meaningful way for them , our adni , to complete their marriage. I don't want talk more about it bcoz the scene itself screams what a wonderful writer you are. This is something I would remember forever. Your words formed such a beautiful picture in my mind I wish I could take a printout and send you. I tell you it was magical .. serene..
Now... You know how I have my reservations reading hot stuff when barun sobti is involved.. somehow you make it easy for me. May be.. your whole point even writing such scenes us more about building trust . . Making the connection. Healing eachother... And not about how hot and steaming the scene is playing . I read your and Priya conversation and your explanations are beautiful.. it made me understand the point more and I agree with you.
Phew... Looks like Iam done here. I can go on talking more and more . But then I would be repeating myself like... How beautiful.. wonderful... Meaningful ... Your update is. So let me just say.. 'Neha ! I loved your update dear'
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