A NAKED MAN'S CONFESSION - a naked soul chapt 9 UPDATED. - Page 3

Posted: 4 years ago

I Read All Your FFs.

they Are All Nice.

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by SilverBell


I Read All Your FFs.

they Are All Nice.

πŸ˜› you did ??? really ! 

wow !! thanks so much....πŸ‘πŸΌ

i hope you will like more.......to come...

Posted: 4 years ago

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A MIGHTY SAFETY PIN  -   LIVING UP IT'S NAME !


# How to confront without facing the contender ?  - go Naked.


Kabir felt Pooja giving in. She went still - inviting him to devour into her delicious mouth a little more.... further deep.

He decided to retreat as his mission was completed but he couldn't.

Instead - 


He lingered.

His thoughts set off a debate - 


Get off kabir ! its done 

Yes ! yes ! just a few more seconds.

But mission already completed

I know but her lips are so soft and they taste coffee.

Shut up ! the war is over kabir

So don't pry on enemy's property

But she isn't the enemy.

She is wife

His wife

Get off now ! you're eating her kabir !

Fine !

just a little bit - lower lip.


And he sucked hard - and then harder  - and one more time onto her lower lip.

She moaned and parted her lips gasping for air enraging fire through his body - he was sweating now.



Kabir she need oxygen and space - your are pressing her too hard !

Yeah ! just just....

just a sec...

Really !!

Don't you need oxygen for yourself as well?

yes !

so that we can do this again.

Right !


That hit kabir – he knew he needed air in order to live - to do this again Even if it's close to impossible.

So he sucked one last time soft and slow making a loud kissing sound – poring into all his energy and emotions. Inventing a new language of lips to convey his message into hers.

Then stepped away breathing hard. He felt he needed that cold shower again.

He watched her – when she opened her eyes and mouth at the same time -

She looked as she was drowning and got out of water. She was wet from sweat. he watch as a small droplet slipped from her chin slowly travelling way down into her blouse. Right in the middle. 

He gulped down - never ever he had imagined be in a situation like this. His fierceness red marks wherever his hands touched her. He could see her blouses neck and the bulges above it ...... also red ....from being pressed under his hard chest. Her saree's Pallu was threatening to slip down any time soon lest it wasn't secured somewhere in the back with a safety pin. 


A MIGHTY SAFETY PIN - living up to it's name !


Her eyes looked as if she has been drugged and she was visibly gasping for air.

Dude ! you could have killed her !

He was shocked himself. He completely forget that she needed air too.

She opened her eyes with a little difficulty and looked at him to understand or confirm -

What is it ? She looked as if she is daydreaming !

Kabir moved his hand and wiped his mouth  - as he had just eaten and cleaning his mouth is compulsory.

He looked at his hand to find the her dark red lipstick color.

He looked at her back and she had her eyes widened.

He just confirmed it actually - involuntarily though !

OMG ! She couldn't believe it - actually happened ?

Then another expression overtook her.


"Oh my god !

you are so brash kabir !

cover yourself up !!"


Now he was confused !

He looked down - well ! he has a towel wrapped around him.

Ohhhhhhhh ! she doesn't know that.



"Hahahahhahahahaahha.................."


– this time he didn't stop himself and laugh out loud clutching his stomach.

She really believed that he would be naked by now.

And kiss her.

Ok.

That was just ..............

ummmmmmm....

awkward.


He stopped laughing, But suddenly a thought crosses his mind.


"no"


he said - confirming her doubts.

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Pooja heard him saying a loud no.

What ???? He said no !

He wants to stay naked all nigh-



" I need to talk to you "


She didn't replied.


"Now"


She was about to turn to have a look at the matter in hand he sounded serious but he must be on drugs !


"Stop !

I am naked.!!"


She heard his panicked voice.


"Oh shit !"


She assumed her original position.


"kabeeeer ! if you are naked than put on some clothes !"

"And why were you showering !

At this hou- ...........3:24 in the morning.

You can catch a cold or worse a fever."



"Are you done."



"No I am not done.

And I am going "


She took one step ahead but stopped at his dangerously threatening voice-

"Don't you dare pooja Sharma.

I am talking to you.

Stand right there and listen to me

Or........"


She waited for him to complete.

"Or I'll kiss you

Again."


Pooja's flushed all red - but not because of his threatening, but because her even stronger will to try to move now !

" to kiss him -

AGAIN "

Thank fully he was standing behind her so he could not see. She breathed and she stood there.. She was curious now - to know what he has to say :

Trying to set aside thought which were portraying - other possibilities when he he wasn't naked - ALONE - replaying his kiss -

She remembered god and gained her control back. She begin again :

"Kabir we can talk tomorrow"



"I am requesting you please listen to me this once

Trust me this once pooja

I will sort everything ! you won't regret it."


He seemed confident.

" If you can put your clothes on so we can sit and talk "


She tried negotiating.

"No I don't want you look at me while I am ......talking"


Now he was being completely mindless.

"You'll catch a cold kabeeer !........... pleeeaaase !"


She couldn't hide the worry.

"Exactly ! Pooja

I'll definitely catch a cold.

So please let me talk -

and shut up !"

Pooja had no option but to listen to him talking.

Behind her.

Naked.

"Oh Shit !"


She whispered to herself.

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Edited by Tanu221 - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

I NEEDED YOU - THE MOST !


Kabir again feel the air whispering " oh Shit " - he knew it was her in real. But he also knew this was not for him.

So he took that as a cue.

He took a long deep breath before racing his words against her hear :

And he begin :


"Look pooja !

Pooja Sharma

Pooja kabir mittal !

I am sorry !" 


One more breath down.


"I am sorry - 

for now 

for before and 

for everything ever happened that made to drape yourself into this hard - fake - detached turtle shell."


Breath.


"For everything you have to go through.

for everything you should have never happened to a person like you."

" SORRY !  ..........Even for the things you know I am not responsible.

I don't even know why i am actually saying this - i wanted to talk about a completely different subject - yet here I am .........."


kabir chuckled at his own foolishness. He remembered reading somewhere " MAN CAN'T EXPRESS THEIR LOVE AT LEAST NEVER AS MUCH AS THEY REALLY DO " - those words were true.


"Guess I feel sorry for you !"


Kabir whispered to himself but he noticed pooja back tightened a little but he already said before she can relax back.


"No ! Not sorry. 

I feel responsible for you !"


Firm and resolved.


"I know we have come so far but we never actually talk about this.

And although I know you prefer to pretend as if nothing happened and move on. But I can see that you can't......

Pooja ! something are needed to be said."


Breathe.


"You are in the same dilemma as I am.

and we both have been dreading this day so I decided -

I'll make the first move."



Deep long breath.


"He wasn't my hero.

Honestly ! I never liked him. As a person.

He has this aura around him that scares me.

The truth was his greed was always priority over his Family.

I Knew it everyone knew it but I guess they were cool with it."


Relaxed breath.


"I wasn't I was looking for escape so that's why I joined the army -

I Was scared I will turn into him if he will be around - I wanted to abandon him.

Wanted a normal family who even don't have much money but they have each other.

But at the same time I couldn't deny that felt guilty for my thinking.

You can't just abandon a man - who is your ........"


Kabir was visibly making effort to form his next words.


"FATHER !

Kids are supposed to respect their parent ain't they.

And I couldn't.

So I just tried to be a good kid for the rest o the family.

I know you might find it hard to believe after what happened with your father that -

My mother and grandfather are actually good people.  Pooja !

See the problem I not everyone can afford to be nice !

Not everyone is strong enough to stand on their principles.

Some people falter and bow down – sometimes for love other times for family, pride fake reputation and more than often because they are scared.

I have seen my family doing the same for a long time. I didn't wanted to do that.. so since teenage I started separating myself it was like I was a part of family but at the same time I was alone .

I choose a career path for me where I can stand for the right thing. I wanted to feel empowered in the right way. I didn't wanted to be a coward. I wanted to stand by my beliefs."


Kabir relaxed a bit ..........."Well begun is half done" ...........he reminded himself.


"And then you came.

No janhvi mittal came."


Kabir watched her body going tense. She winced a little.


"You were just perfect.

Initially I was scared of you. I didn't like perfect pooja.

Perfect reminds me of my dad. He use to fake perfect.

Perfect scares me...........

But you befriended me."


He was smiling now. his mind wandering in the memory lanes.


"While I was in the army you were the only one who was interested to know more about me rather than how I was and what I have eaten or when will I came.

You listen to my stories and I shared my feelings with you.

I founded a friend.

And I always thought dhruv was lucky to have you.

He is a nice man or was at least then."


He closed his eyes in pain feeling sorry for his brother's behavior.


"I was happy for him - 

I thought  - to have a women like you and get married like him."


He smiled again ....... feeling ease that she wasn't looking at  him.


"But there was no one like janhvi mittal.

Janhvi mittal was one and only piece.

Because she was a dream. An illusion .

Right?"

"Then you know how kavya and Aarush came by ...."


He smiled remembering Aarush and janhvi's bond.


"I know you love him ......... but I really think he loves you more......

By the way - she was asking for you.

She called last week.

She wanted to meet you and asking for a party for......

Marriage.........you ...kno...w....."


He completed awkwardly.


"Anyways.

I know janhvi was not true.......yet I believed not everything was a lie........

May be your care for maa was a lie........but your love for jay was true....

Maybe you never respected my grandfather but you have always considered sonali as your own little sister......

I just can't get it out of my system .......... I think .........even though it was a part of your plan but you were actually there for me..........when you used to talk to me .........I think I was also talking to pooja......to you....... You were just buried somewhere inside her..........but at rare moments........there was glimpse of you..........

And when I saw you with arush .......... The way you behaved around him...... I just knew that it is not the same janhvi........that was you pooja .........right ? so I believe that our journey – pooja and kabir -  is much beyond......... much before we actully met. It's like I knew you.

I knew you from a dream. From a phone call. From your food. From your eyes......."


He stick out his tongue a the slip. It is not time to talk about her eyes.


"When you turned into pooja.

I was shocked pooja.

I knew my father was a bad person ang greedy and corrupt.

But I didn't knew he would stoop so low.

Betraying a friend.

A murderer."


He closed his eyes again in agony and pain.


"And that hurts."


Kabir do not want to continue now ! but he had to ...for her, for himself and for their upcoming life where they both will walk ahead hand in hand through the gardens of love, trust and happiness.


"You know Pooja ! You are really lucky - because you were able to avenge your father's death. It was worth it. Your father deserved that. And mine did not....I can't even bring myself to hold even a tiny grudge against you because you were indirectly the cause of my father's death. I have no reason to be angry with you or even have bitter feelings for you. That's why even though it's not the most soothing idea or best consolatory words to say to a wonded person..... I would still like you to hear me clear - THAT YOU ARE LUCKY TO HAVE SOMEONE WORTH FIGHTING FOR - NOT EVERYONE HAS THAT."


Kabir's word send shivers through pooja's body. If she wasn't sure that It was love - the way she felt for him - she was now. Ignorant of these events kabir continued after 3 heavy breaths :


"He was my father and whether it was his priority or not he provided me with all the comfort  and so I loved him even if i never respected him - I thought it was my duty so I loved him - for being my father.

But what scared me most is other's involvement.

My own mother

Grandfather

Chachi ....??

It just broke me. I knew there must be their own issues, problems, fears, insecurities......

But justification don't diminish the gravity of situation.

And so -  I AM SORRY  - form their side as well !

It is not just a word.

I am apologizing with all my heart and god knows if I can make even the tiniest bit of your pain go away and give up my everything. I would do that.

If I can turn time.......... and give you one more smile...........

But i can't !

So sorry is all have and  all I can provide.

I know it's not enough I knew you can't be able to forget with a sorry

And you don't have to.

You shouldn't - I wouldn't have if I were you.

And I toally understand. Yes I do !"


BREATHE.


"This scenario also asked me for my duty towards my family. I was obliged to them in even I knew they were at fault.

But everyone makes mistake it's not a justification. It is just what is it.

What are we !

You and me !

I needed a distraction that's when I think of you  -

The pooja Sharma.

Somewhere I was happy that janhvi was fake.

It just doesn't fir well

But you were new.

Different.

And my kind

fierce like fire.

bright Like lightening.

I was drawn to you.....

I don't know how and I don't know why until now........

Now I know......... you don't have to agree with me !"


Pooja's heart was threaterning to jump out of her chest and spring straight into his - right next to his heart. She tried to calm her mind - "it is not what you think - he is not falling for you - he cannot- you don't let yourself go that crazy - he must be talking about something else... wait till he finish" . She tried  to soothe herself down.


"But it was destiny...may be it's not true for you.

But it is for me.....

It was my destiny - you were my destiny

I wanted to know you.

I liked you pooja.

I felt guilty for it and yet liked you.

How could I let myself to like you -you ruined my family !

I should have supported my family against you but I couldn't !

In fact i keep lying to myseIf, keep on refusing but the truth cannot be hidden- I felt more than sympathy

An understanding towards you......

I feel like I know you ...... more than you can imagine.

I could see through you.....

So I wanted to be near you to check if I was right about you !"


He chuckled loud - realizing he used to behave so boyish around her - She always had that effect on him.


"No matter how much I tried to convince myself against it - 

All I can think is - it's just fair.

You were right.

I know we didn't like you

But pooja I feel - we all needed you !

Dad needed you ..... he needed all that comes along with you -  for his wrongdoings.

I wish he atleast for once understand that where he went wrong  and to what extent so god can forgive him.

And my family.

They needed you - to learn that - family should stand together but only for good deeds.

Family is suppose to guide each other and not let one another commit the crimes.

We needed to see you - 

And learn how to do that !

Just like now ..... how you stand against rani when she was going on the wrong path even though  I know that you can give up your life for her.

But you didn't let her be a criminal you fought with her but you made her a better person.

In fact it's ironic even though we are so many yet divided in the family.

You know chichi right? She is always by our side and we can never trust her !"

Kabir's voice had pain. He continued - he needed to get over with this all.

"But you and rani and your amma........ I always find your family complete.

I know no one can replace parents and a happy childhood. But - 

God gave you an incredible gift – even it it's not the ideal it's a loving family

And pooja kabir mittal !

I - of all the people - Needed you the most ! 


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I swear i was done............but for those who wanted confrontation........... this is for you........thank you for being with me and supporting me............giving you the longest chapter....... happy reading and keep smiling.

with love 

Tanu

Posted: 4 years ago

We will be Making Love.☺️


# how to chide a naked kabir - Curse him bad !  


I of all the people needed you most !"


"I pretended to take revenge you know I am not very avenging kind of guy - I forgive.

It's hard but I have experience perks of being pk mittal's son

You learn to forgive !

But I wanted to know you more.

Even though you pretended to be strong I could see the vulnerability masquerading behind those fire fuming eyes.

I saw you paining pooja."


Kabir voice was low  - pooja needed to shift all her focus on his towards in order to listen to him. Her mentioned pain was causing him pain as well. She could feel it - It's been their thing - Feeling each other so easily.


"So I roam around....... you........ enchanted .......

And I didn't realise when I started liking it.

When it became a habit.

May it's family circumstances and banter that I wanted to avoid or m ya be it's just me.

I started liking playing games with you.

You insult me I tease you . and than I got few wonderful things to watch.

Remember the lift"


and he started laughing


"stop laughing or I'll take your picture and post it on fb"


Came a curt reply. He went silent for few second. He knew she wasn't kidding. If there was one thing he was sure she would never ofrgive him for - was that incident in the lit - and he wouldn't mind. If he get a chance he would do it all again. If she feels she can't be weak or scared in front of anybody it's her problem. For kabir - it's just another one of storied he would tell again and agian to  - MADHAV AND VAIDHAYI - their future children. But till then he needs to go low key so that he would live to tell those stories and at least produce them.


"It was going well. I was happy you know !

I had an imagination about you and you were falling into it just fine

More than what met the eye

But then the fashion show happened and I married you forcefully in revenge pooja I am so sorry  but -

I never thought it would go to far.

I was so angry I am so sorry

I couldn't think straight

I was hurt

I knew we weren't friends so I had no right to have expectation from you but when you accused me of trying to harm you..............

I went insane !

how could think so?????.........

How could I have ever hurt you....

How could I...........

I was in pain and angry so I did what I could think of...

Anger make you mad - but it is not enough explanation - I wanted to cut it even on the last day but I didn't -  because - I wanted to marry you - for real. 

I know I sound crazy and I think may be I am a little crazy !"



Kabir was now to himself and Pooja was smiling. Her  heart was dancing in joy. She never repented marriage. despite the circumstances it was real for her. She was glad He married her. Now ! that he confessed that it was his own will and not just circumstantial - she  decided to latch upon those words. she let herself dream wildly of possibility of beautiful future ahead and wish to keep dreaming unless he himself will break them all. He knew her fate - bit till them she will enjoy these beautiful dreams.



"Pooja ! no girl deserve that - i know everyone has dreams of a day like that.........everyone but I took it all from you. I am so sorry !  I really thought you will never through it. I know I was not your dream bridegroom but hear me speaking only truth here pooja ! - It was not a joke - It was - Our marriage - It was real - Real for me at least - No matter what i said or did - Deep down ..........Every ritual, every vow - I promised to muself to fulfill it with my soul. Till you let me and may be after that. I married you with all my heart and soul in my conscience state with clear vision - to be a good husband  - just what you deserve and more.


And it wasn't for revenge  - not for a moment.

You have seen yourself - I know I used your mother.

But the moment I met her I always treated her my own mother and the women is god pooja.

I often wondered why are you so nice well credit goes to her the genes,

I never would have hurt her even if you haven't marry me !

I thought if can just be in access - around you - I could make you see the other side.

The revenge does no good to anyone.

So you can never move on if you keep this shit going on.

And most of all I wanted you to understand me.

I just want you to see that I can never ever for any reason hurt you like that.

For that i needed to be around you  -  I felt it was the only way........I thought If I coud marry you - you will be around me all the time- your all time will be mine and i needed time to make you see........that I CAN NEVER HURT YOU ! NOT EVEN IN MY DREAMS.

So I did it.

I thought you would never marry me.

I seriously never thought you would actually marry me.......

I knew my status pooja..... I'm pk mittal's son......

And I understand if you can never see me as anybody else but his son.

But You did. It happened.

You marry me.

And because of that now we are here like this.

I mean I can finally let it out.

Then I did some more bad things.

I never realized that by marrying you I was also putting you in this dirty place of my family and you have to grow through my family's vile behavior. I am so so sorry !  It was all because of me. I was so wrong - We all were  but I started it - See I told you it was always like that - with you I always act so whimsically - whether it's joining your company and then helping you or scaring you or teasing you - protecting you - I have no control on my actions..... It's like your presence control me. And no I am not putting all the blame on you - I just wanted you to know _ ALL THIS."

"Actually I am a little slow pooja..........i takes me a lot of time before I can actually understand my own feelings.

When you marry me I was worried and guilty and concerned...... marriage is a big responsible ad a very very big deal for me. I felt responsible and I Just couldn't take it...my emotion I never understood them. I was angry at you for marrying me...for making me feel guilty and for being rude with you..........but it's just very strange........everything with you is very strange............

I became a totally different person around you.........I lose control and I think I am being guided by some supernatural force..........

And somehow things always turn out well.

You know your mother once told me – " when my pooja will be a big girl she will make everyone's life happy "

She was right pooja..........because right now in this moment.............having you in my life my house my room ...........in front of me...........I am very happy pooja....

So thank you !

Thank you pooja Sharma for marrying me."


Pooja stand there for him to continue - her eyes running streams of tears now.

He didn't continued so she shift on her leg sand said :


"hmmmmmmmmmmm"


"I have a few other thing to say as well which are really important reason for the current scenario but

I am getting cold ...........would you mind if I get dressed."


Pooja tried to suppress her chuckled but failed she was sure he heard her.


" I will see you in 10 minutes

Get dress and please use a blanket.

And also one more thing - "


Kabir was attentive to what she has to say. Without looking back she form her words slowly and strongly :


"if I ever found you again - Naked - like that 

Kabir Mittal - I won't be turning my back on you.

 I will be take a picture of you running around and post it with a 

#meetmyhusband'scutelittlebum

So beware ! or you'll regret it I promise - I'll come up with better ideas everyday."


And then she quickened her pace almost running towards the door hearing kabir's whispering voice as she closed the door and ran to kitchen planning to make coffee for them.

His voice was so low that she couldn't believe his words. She mentally slap hersel for daydreaming like this - "but maybe it was true - you thought kiss was  a dream as well but it wasn't ! was it ?"

She remembered again :


"No ! next time when I am naked honey !

We will be making love !"

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hey guys !! i had whole pooja's version typed and i lost it😭😭 i don't know what to do now ...........it was pretty seriously..........πŸ˜­πŸ˜’ anyways i hope you liked the confrontation i really think this all needed to be said in order to move on..........so please rate and review

with love and regards

tanu

Posted: 4 years ago

Another fabulous chapter. You are so creative. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hugs and love ❀️

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Honey_berries


Another fabulous chapter. You are so creative. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hugs and love ❀️

thanks dear ! i didn't get any comments. but this one made my day !! β˜ΊοΈ

thanks for the compliment ! i hope everyone likes these confession point πŸ€—

keep reading !⭐️❀️

Posted: 4 years ago

JUST NOT PREGNANT ! Okay !


"I am sorry Kabir ! "


Pooja held onto the coffee mug for warmth. She was feeling lonely again. After months though and that too in kabir's presence. It barely happens. Only when there is mention of that man - even kabir's presence couldn't calm her turmoil.


"I can't be polite and sweet like you.

That was janhvi mittal not me

But

I know my tactics were wrong.

For many nights I wondered if there was a better way to do it.

I waited for others to do it.

And other families like mine. 

But guess ! no one could dare to move against him just like you said - If his own family was scared of him - I can just imagine.

And I couldn't take it - my little baby sister suffering, hungry and helpless. 

I decided to make the first move

Since no body came forward to fight for me i had to do it for myself !

And I want you to hear it clear and curt  -  I do not repent it.

I just couldn't. 

No matter what Amma said - or  what My own mothers think of me or yours."



She tried a little smile. He reciprocated with a small and sad one of his own. A first one this kind for kabir. He nodded in understanding. She was surprised but she also expected that. Kabir had always been fair - just like her. 


TWO PIECES OF A BROKEN HEART -  that's what they are !



"I wanted to cause minimum damage kabir but I had to protect my sister so I took the only way possible. The only way I knew.

And I take full responsibility for it.

I was wrong !

Even if my intentions weren't - my methods were certainly something I am ashamed of ! See kabir - I am not An Army Man - I am  - was young, broke, helpless, furious and lonely little girl !

And still I don't think it's an enough explanation for my behavior. To be very honest Kabir - 

But if I can go back I'd do it again.

I had to end him kabir.

In order to live I had to."



She took a sip from her coffee mug trying to get some time and let kabir digest her words. Kabir was sitting right across her. They were sitting on window sealing facing each other -  their feet touching each other. Kabir was still avoiding her gaze - while  she was looking at him trying to read him - he was looking at the stars above.


Pooja looked at the night sky. He is not avoiding her - It was a beautiful night. Some day she would like to sit again like this with Kabir under the same star filled and hazy sky. It was usually bright and beautiful. Someday it could be an additional romantic factor in their little moment - when they both were not sitting face- to - face, but side by side.


When she had her head leaned on his shoulder.

When their fingers en-twinged with one another.

When he held their tangled hands right over his heart.

And she will kiss those hands. 

He would smile at her.

And whisper I LOVE YOU to her.

And he will be speaking truth then. 

His eyes will be his alibi.

And she will smile even more and whispered back - 

I love you more ! ALWAYS AND FOREVER.


Kabir looked at her. He looked serene. he nodded her to continue.



"There is no justification.

I do not repent being a reason for.........ummm"


She hesitated to continue - to be so blunt about her father-in-law. The spoken man was in fact the father of the man she has fallen in love with ! 

But she has to continue. She closed her eyes unable to see him hurt again by her words. 


"PK Mittaal's death.

I was naive Kabir - I didn't know what to be ? So i became her -  Janhvi Mittal !

My method is wrong and I do not want to make any excuse.

I was forced I was traumatized !

I couldn't sleep  - had nightmares !

I was alone

Angry

Homeless

And what not

But that doesn't change the fact that I scarred your brother for life.

I can't tell you how happy I was - when i get to know that he is finally getting married !

God knows I only wish the  best for him !"



Kabir knew that she was just Pooja being Pooja - asking for everybody's wellbeing but hers. And he knew it was very inappropriate to think like that about his own brother or wife like that - especially when they have a history like that - but he felt a sharp current in his heart - JEALOUSLY !! UMMM...........came a voice...... He ignored and decided to listen her first before acting on his ......ummmm ...... jealously. 


He had this feeling - that given Pooja's true nature which was hidden especially from her family and visible for the rest of the world- and not to forgot her angelic beauty and that perfectly carved figure - all curves in right places............jealously is going to be his one true friend.


He didn't even knew he was the jealous kind until recently. But then again he didn't know anything until recently - until her. He has been this specially and exclusively manufactured for her kind of kabir -  around her - always surprising other as well as himself. She is ........ never mind - he knew it all along. He thinks even she knew it. No point in repeating - 


He is all hers.... and He will make her his. soon ! very soon.


"When I started it I knew one thing -

That pk mittal needed to get a taste of his own medicine and maa dadaji and chahci - 

They were equally responsible - in my mind.

So I am not sorry."

Another sip of coffee.

"But I am sorry to you

For not feeling sorry

If that makes any sense !"

She makes a cheeky face at him smiling like a child. Kabir wanted to give a light peck on those lips.

" I want to feel bad and I do but for other reason -

Not for actually going through it.

But at the same time-

I am extremely guilty for what I have done to you guys.

I mean jay and sonali !

They are so innocent and young to be drangged into this but I have put them through so much.

And I know they have moved on but I can never forgive myself for what I made them see.

And most importantly dhruv !"


She closed her eyes to fight the tears. And kabir closed his fist to fight back his urge to shout - "No ! you are not allowed to take any man's name but mine only "


"You know kabir

Amma liked him !

Ammma............you were right about her -

She is my real mother.

That's why I couldn't just leave her.

Now that I have my mother I can't let her be alone.

It would not be fair ! 

I love my mother but if I let love myslef love amma any less it would be injustice to her !

And what she did for us !

She made us our world"



Suddenly she started laughing –


"I am so sorry I don't know why I am saying this !

It's so much personal and obviously

You don't knw her you wouldn't be interested I am sorry I went off track bu-"

"Hey that's rude !

And who said I don't know her.

Besides I honestly think she likes me more than you."


She rolled her eyes watching him trying to lighten her up. He can do it just like that. How easily. One of the many things she likes about him. Leave alone their time - rest Kabir was a gentleman,  always there for everybody. He just saved his angry young man - and manhandling for her. She like it though- if he saves something exclusively for her - she will take take it. 


"And she me awesome halwa ! Muaaaaa ..........! 

If only she could teach you like that -

I don't have to endure yours"



" hey ! you are such a shamelss jerk"



She couldn't stop herself at that. He just knew how to get on her nerves. For future she need to make a note - that not talking to him when angry- isn't going t work ..... she needed better plan for future !



" you have to endure my halwa !!!!

Then why did you finish my bowl even though I always gave you an extra...... remember last Sunday.

Look at your tummy kabeer it's all halwa that you love so much."


Kabeer was looking at her intently then he looked down.

Touched his tummy.

She was right ! 

Then he looked back at her

Feigning irritation ........

Janhvi was smiling now looking at him funnily.

Suddenly they both burst into laughter.

They laughed and laughed hysterically.

Suddenly she went silent now shy smile. He continued though faking attitude :


"so what ! you know it's nice !

The  tummy - It's a proof of wife's cooking skill !

Its very common for man to get a little tummy after marriage !"



"First ! of all - its not a little tummy - its huge !!!

And secondly that was a saying for women......usually women get fat after marriage.......

Look at me ! I am perfectly fit - means you are not a good husband"



"oh please ! that saying goes for pregnant women.

Women get pragnant after marriage - that's why they get fat !

So you are not fit - You are Just Not Pregnant !"

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And here we start pooja's confessions. i think you guys also can feel how quickly their relation is getting deep...heartfelt conversation and stripping emotions is the best way to express love and strenghten it ...............so i really hope you guys can understand why their story need this .............please bare with me while i am done with pooja's confession..........ill be ending with a cute chapter ......will wait for reviews !!!! 

love to all

Tanu

Posted: 4 years ago

I loved kabir's words.what I liked the most is kabir saying that he didn't marry pooja for revenge he is not a avengeful person.he is right in saying that revenge doesn't allow us to move on.kabir feeling guilty for forcefully marrying pooja was nice.kabir saying that he was angry with pooja for marrying him as it made him guilty was unexpected.kabir saying that he married her so that she will be around him always n thus she will understand that he can never do wrong was surprising.kabir apologizing for using pooja's mom but swearing that he considers her as his mom was nice.kabir saying that her mom is right in saying that when pooja becomes big she will make others happy was too good.kabir thanking pooja for marrying him was lovely.kabir apologizing to pooja for putting her in this family condition was nice. pooja feeling that the kiss was real was awesome

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by jasminerahul


I loved kabir's words.what I liked the most is kabir saying that he didn't marry pooja for revenge he is not a avengeful person.he is right in saying that revenge doesn't allow us to move on.kabir feeling guilty for forcefully marrying pooja was nice.kabir saying that he was angry with pooja for marrying him as it made him guilty was unexpected.kabir saying that he married her so that she will be around him always n thus she will understand that he can never do wrong was surprising.kabir apologizing for using pooja's mom but swearing that he considers her as his mom was nice.kabir saying that her mom is right in saying that when pooja becomes big she will make others happy was too good.kabir thanking pooja for marrying him was lovely.kabir apologizing to pooja for putting her in this family condition was nice. pooja feeling that the kiss was real was awesome

πŸ€—πŸ˜Oh dear thanxxxx......😍  I am so glad you get all this and made an effort to show itπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ it just means a lotπŸ€©πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— also the purpose itself was to make clear their standπŸ™‚πŸ™ƒ so that a confession can be accepted without hesitation ...... πŸ˜πŸ˜›πŸ˜œ I always Kabir is a sensible person who always accepts the right right even if it means to stand against his dear ones😊😎😎 that's why it was never difficult for him to fall for Pooja😘 he gets her and respects her before loving herπŸ€—πŸ€— while Pooja was unable to stop herself from loving him because he is the gentleman every girl dreamsπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜† so now it's all about their acceptance of love ..... 

But you noticed these details it's just so much for meπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜πŸ˜ thank you



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