RoNakshi Drabble: Yaha accha lag raha hai...

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is dedicated to @sanavi who wanted me to write on yjhd concept! It's a bit different from it and thinking of yjhd do you guys want me to write a RoNakshi version of the proposal scene of yjhd?
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RoNakshi Drabble: yaha accha lag raha hai...

Raima stood near Rohit and for once in his life Rohit was hesitant to hold her!

He turned again to look at the disappearing figure of Sonakshi and somewhere in his heart he felt guilty of something which he never planned initially!

Ro: Raima bas ek minute I need to clear a thing with her!

R: but Rohit..

Ro: please i need to go!

Rohit saying this followed Sonakshi outside his Mansion!

R: Sonakshi wait! Kaunsi marathon mei part lene wali ho ki itni tez bhaag rahi ho? 

She got stunned on her spot listening his voice from behind. She immediately wiped of tears which were flowing from her eyes involuntarily!

She turned and gave a weak smile to him as he came near her!

R: itni tez kyu bhaag rahi thi jaise kisi jail se bhaagi ho! Waise 24x7 acting karvane ke liye i am really sorry!

S: it's ok Rohit!

Something in her voice told him that she was not okay.

R: are you all right?

He asked out of concern!

S: yes ofcourse! Tum bas itna kehne ke liye yaha aaye? 

R: haa apni dost ko bye bolne aaya tha but yaha pohoch ke pata chala ki you are not my friend agar hoti toh mujhse apni pareshani share karti! Batao bhi ab, kya hua? What are you hiding? And you know ki tum mujhse nautanki nhi kar sakti!

S: Rohit can i hug you for once? 

R: huhh? Yes ofcourse!

She wrapped her arms around his and he too did the same!

R: sonakshi agar tum mujhe bataogi nhi toh mujhe pata kaise chalega?

He was confused or you can say couldn't see her love because he had Raima in his life!

Love always turns simple things complicated, isn't it?

Rohit's phone buzzed and he looked at the screen

It was Raima's call.

He need to go!

R: sonakshi i...

S: bas paach minute yaha accha lag raha hai..

R: huhh?

He tried to break the hug but she still was not letting him go.

S: accha bas paach second please!

He didn't say a word but let her hug him and slowly she broke the hug!

S: bye doctor surgeon!

She smiled one last time at him before leaving!

And he returned her smile with his! Unknowingly a part of his also went away with her!
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Posted: 4 years ago

Shall we pretty please convert this to a FF???😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Shall we pretty please convert this to a FF???😍


Yes yes! Please TunesOfHeart 😍😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Shall we pretty please convert this to a FF???😍

That will take a lot of time! 

Instead I will write a long os ending it on happy note! What say? 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sehrish-Arayna


Yes yes! Please TunesOfHeart 😍😍😍😍😍

Sadly I can't but will continue writing small osesπŸ˜‹

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Posted: 4 years ago

@TunesofHeart just messed with my tunes of heart with this drabble. This was good but its incomplete na. If possible give it a happy ending...You know, Happys Endings

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpion77

@TunesofHeart just messed with my tunes of heart with this drabble. This was good but its incomplete na. If possible give it a happy ending...You know, Happys Endings

Hahaha really? 

I am thinking to end it on the happy note! 

Don't worry! That will be long so it will take time! But will come sooner! 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

This is dedicated to @sanavi who wanted me to write on yjhd concept! It's a bit different from it and thinking of yjhd do you guys want me to write a RoNakshi version of the proposal scene of yjhd?
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RoNakshi Drabble: yaha accha lag raha hai...

Raima stood near Rohit and for once in his life Rohit was hesitant to hold her!

He turned again to look at the disappearing figure of Sonakshi and somewhere in his heart he felt guilty of something which he never planned initially!

Ro: Raima bas ek minute I need to clear a thing with her!

R: but Rohit..

Ro: please i need to go!

Rohit saying this followed Sonakshi outside his Mansion!

R: Sonakshi wait! Kaunsi marathon mei part lene wali ho ki itni tez bhaag rahi ho? 

She got stunned on her spot listening his voice from behind. She immediately wiped of tears which were flowing from her eyes involuntarily!

She turned and gave a weak smile to him as he came near her!

R: itni tez kyu bhaag rahi thi jaise kisi jail se bhaagi ho! Waise 24x7 acting karvane ke liye i am really sorry!

S: it's ok Rohit!

Something in her voice told him that she was not okay.

R: are you all right?

He asked out of concern!

S: yes ofcourse! Tum bas itna kehne ke liye yaha aaye? 

R: haa apni dost ko bye bolne aaya tha but yaha pohoch ke pata chala ki you are not my friend agar hoti toh mujhse apni pareshani share karti! Batao bhi ab, kya hua? What are you hiding? And you know ki tum mujhse nautanki nhi kar sakti!

S: Rohit can i hug you for once? 

R: huhh? Yes ofcourse!

She wrapped her arms around his and he too did the same!

R: sonakshi agar tum mujhe bataogi nhi toh mujhe pata kaise chalega?

He was confused or you can say couldn't see her love because he had Raima in his life!

Love always turns simple things complicated, isn't it?

Rohit's phone buzzed and he looked at the screen

It was Raima's call.

He need to go!

R: sonakshi i...

S: bas paach minute yaha accha lag raha hai..

R: huhh?

He tried to break the hug but she still was not letting him go.

S: accha bas paach second please!

He didn't say a word but let her hug him and slowly she broke the hug!

S: bye doctor surgeon!

She smiled one last time at him before leaving!

And he returned her smile with his! Unknowingly a part of his also went away with her!
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Thank you so much 

How effectively you converted Ranbeer's Paris dream into Rohit's love for Raima.

It was really great. Plz do continue, Rohit should realize now.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Hahaha really? 

I am thinking to end it on the happy note! 

Don't worry! That will be long so it will take time! But will come sooner! 

ReallyπŸ˜₯...Han please end it on happy note❀

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpion77

ReallyπŸ˜₯...Han please end it on happy note❀

Yes I will! 

I already have an idea of it! 

Will pen it down tomorrow maybeπŸ˜‹