Posted: 18 years ago

well i have a new fan fiction.

         kripa loses her child and angad loses kripa. now comes a new twist in the tail. angad calls for his friend who also happens to be rockstar. he wants hi help in wooing kripa back. he wants him to make kripa fall in love with him and then break her heart so that he can act as  a shoulder for her to cry on. then he can woo her back. he imagine that he and krpa are friends again and then they go back to becoming lovers.

     meanwhile, kripa intially has prithvi along with her. she shares all with him and they become the closest of friends. she still does not feel love as a lover for him. but prithvi is tryin hard too woo her. he tells her in the same way as saif in kal ho na ho" kaam ho to prithvi, rona ho to pritjvi, hasna ho to prithvi,par pyar ksis aur se. kripa ek  baar dusri tarah se dekho tumhe pyar hi pyar nazar aayega".

    now the new character enters at this moment . he starts to form a friendship with kripa and unknowingly falls in love with her.

NOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN......... WHAT DO U GUYS THINK.....❓

Posted: 18 years ago

 

 i am not too good at hindi but this saying gud perfactly match with situation:

angad ne pair per kulhadi nahi par kulhadi par pair mara hai

angad knows kripa is so sweet that any one cud fall in love with her than y the hell does he take such a dession he has increased the compitition

1st it was only angad & prithvi but now one more rock star

it was good

lots of love

esha

Posted: 18 years ago

nice but plzzzzzzzzzzz let kripa n angad gather again

 

Posted: 18 years ago
nice nice.  it kinda reminds me of the story of Pyar Ishq aur Mohabbat where Sunil hires Arjun Rampal to woo Kirty Reddy n break her heart.  Cant wait for the nxt part
Posted: 18 years ago

😆

I just love this dialogue. I'm gonna change it a bit

" kaam ho to raman, rona ho to raman, hasna ho to raman,par pyar ksis aur se. ❓ ek  baar dusri tarah se dekho tumhe pyar hi pyar nazar aayega".

Ok all I need to do is now, find somebody to say it to.

 

Posted: 18 years ago
please continue but dont u think it was to short by the way
Posted: 18 years ago
he only prob with it was tht it was quite short !gr8 so far plz cotinue!👏
Posted: 18 years ago

that was good

can u plz update it as quickly as possible

i'm waiting to see wants gonna happen next

😊

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