New Fan Fiction

Posted: 2005-07-03T12:51:57Z

well i have a new fan fiction.

         kripa loses her child and angad loses kripa. now comes a new twist in the tail. angad calls for his friend who also happens to be rockstar. he wants hi help in wooing kripa back. he wants him to make kripa fall in love with him and then break her heart so that he can act as  a shoulder for her to cry on. then he can woo her back. he imagine that he and krpa are friends again and then they go back to becoming lovers.

     meanwhile, kripa intially has prithvi along with her. she shares all with him and they become the closest of friends. she still does not feel love as a lover for him. but prithvi is tryin hard too woo her. he tells her in the same way as saif in kal ho na ho" kaam ho to prithvi, rona ho to pritjvi, hasna ho to prithvi,par pyar ksis aur se. kripa ek  baar dusri tarah se dekho tumhe pyar hi pyar nazar aayega".

    now the new character enters at this moment . he starts to form a friendship with kripa and unknowingly falls in love with her.


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Posted: 2005-07-03T13:31:48Z


 i am not too good at hindi but this saying gud perfactly match with situation:

angad ne pair per kulhadi nahi par kulhadi par pair mara hai

angad knows kripa is so sweet that any one cud fall in love with her than y the hell does he take such a dession he has increased the compitition

1st it was only angad & prithvi but now one more rock star

it was good

lots of love


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Posted: 2005-07-03T13:40:16Z

nice but plzzzzzzzzzzz let kripa n angad gather again


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Posted: 2005-07-03T13:54:19Z
nice nice.  it kinda reminds me of the story of Pyar Ishq aur Mohabbat where Sunil hires Arjun Rampal to woo Kirty Reddy n break her heart.  Cant wait for the nxt part
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Posted: 2005-07-03T15:36:21Z


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Posted: 2005-07-03T16:34:04Z


I just love this dialogue. I'm gonna change it a bit

" kaam ho to raman, rona ho to raman, hasna ho to raman,par pyar ksis aur se. Question ek  baar dusri tarah se dekho tumhe pyar hi pyar nazar aayega".

Ok all I need to do is now, find somebody to say it to.


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Posted: 2005-07-03T16:41:11Z
please continue but dont u think it was to short by the way
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Posted: 2005-07-03T16:41:58Z
he only prob with it was tht it was quite short !gr8 so far plz cotinue!Clap
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