You belongs to only me Mishbeer os part 2 updated

part 1

Scene started with minakshi accusing mishti for snatchingabeer from her and respocible for breaking her family she ask her to forget him…. Mishti falls on ground and cries …. Post mishbeer convo

At night

Mishti unable to sleep and she turning sides …. She isunable to forget abeer n their memories flashes in front of her ….

b.g = nata mera teri rooh se ase juda hai na….

mishti comes outside  from the house n sits on the bench and startseeing moon and tears roll down from her eyes and makes way toward her cheeks….

Suddenly her fone rings mishti cheack it  and start reading abeer msgs ….

Msg 1 = mishti wi8 for me main bs a raha hn

Msg 2 = mishti kahan ho tum ?

Msg 3 = mishti are u ok ?

Msg 4= mishti kia hua hai ? mujh s bat kun nai kar rahi tum? sb theek to hai na ? tum theek ho ?

Mishti doesn’t controls her feelings and breaks down andcries unstoppable ……

Mishti= kase samna karon ge tmhara main abeer ….. plz matazmao mujhe plz…

itni strong nai hun main ….

Next day its Pooja at home mishti doesn’t want to go andmake excuse of being not well …..

BM = mishti  beta kiahua tu ready nai hui ?

Mishti = bari ma meri tabiyat theek nai hai kuch mn nai japaon ge….

Kuhu = dadi is ki tabiyat theek hai kuch nai hua ise bsneeyat kharab hai … dekh mishti agr tu na chali to main b nai jaon ge….

Kuhu comes close to her and wisper in her ear … mishti kibachi … scene create karna band kar …. R uth aram s warna main yehn asa scenecreate karon ge k phr tu bhool hi jana k abeer r tu kabhi…

Mishti = bari maa mn thori dair mn tyar ho k ati hn…. Ap chaliye…

BM= are waha … piyar to dekho dono behno ka… main n itni barkaha nai mani r kuhu n ek bar kaha r man gai… theek hai tu aja neechay tyar hok

Maheshwaries left for rajvensh house ….

Mashvaries enters in the house rajvensh family welcome them…

Here abeer was super excited as he wanted something to tellmishti he was eagerly waiting for her

mishti is not there abeer eyes searching for her bt he didn’tsee her … and got worried ..

Abeer to BM

Abeer = anty mishti kahan hai deekhi nai ?

BM= abhi to yahin the… shayd washroom gai hai…

Abeer = ok …

Then he goes from there to follow his mishti….

Abeer saw mishti comes out from washroom and crying … he didn’tunderstands whats going on ….

Abeer is about to calls her suddenly he heard BP wants toannounce some thing so he goes in the main hall…

BP = aj main buht khush hun … aj hamre ghr ki ek beti ki shadiki Pooja hai r ….

Everyone ask or ?

BP= or ek r good news hai … r wo yeh k mishti n shadi k liyetyar ho gai hai….

Abeer shocks … and become very happy that finally his andmishti rishta got official name n he is just steping forward to hugs bare papasuddenly…..

BP= jna chahin gaye kise …. Nishti n surav s shadi k liyehan kar di hai…… r hum chahtay hn do din mn un dono ka gordhana ho jaye … rdono betion ki ek hi mandap mn shadi ….

Everyone claps… n menu and kunal got super happy on hearingthis…

 where abeer nanu andjugnu  super shocked….

Abeer felt someone took out surface from his feet ….. he wasunable tove … doesn’t know how to react….

Awaz bahir tk sunai de hai jis ki…

Ander kuch toota to hai…

Shayad mera dil tha… han dil tha…..

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Its very good  plz continue  .waiting  for the next part.  

Part 2 is on the way 

This content was originally posted by: Zainabnaz

Its very good  plz continue  .waiting  for the next part.  

Thank u sooo much... 🥱

Part 2

Abeer is heart broken he didn’t know what to do now … hefelt some one took her breath …. He is feeling like lifeless….

Abeer comes out from his house n break down on floor … criesloudly…

Abeer : mishti yeh tm n kia kia? … kun…. He screams…

Abeer: sb kuch to theek tha hame beech phr kia hua asaachanak… no mishti you cant get rid from me that easily you have to giveanswers of my questions…

At late night

Mishti is still unable to sleep…. Mishti getup and goestoward window and start thinking about abeer seeing moon…

Mishti thinking = kal…. Kal hamara rishta hamesha hamesha k liyekhatam ho jaye ga….r mera rishta kisi r s jor jaye ga… dil chahta hai is lamhaeko tham lon … wakt ko rok loon… tmhain qismat s chura loon… bs apni sari zindgitmhare bahon mn bita don… kia karon main abeer kia karon…

suddenly its dark….

Mishti is unconscious and tied on the chair.. mishti gotconscious and unable to recognize the place …. Suddenly she heard the voice andin no time she recognize it…

A gaya tmhn hosh…

Mishti = abeer ….

He is non other then abeer who kidnaped her…

Abeer: kun kia tm n asa …

Mishti : abeer leave me mujhe janay do

Mishti tries to open the rope ….

Abeer then bow down infront of her n goes close to her ….

Abeer: mishti jawab do …

Mishti : mn tmahre jawab denay ki paband nah n abeer …

Abeer angerly opens the rope n pulls her close tohim…holding her wrist at back…

Abeer : mujhe jawab dena zarori nai smjhti tm mujhe….

Mishti : han abeer kis bat ka jawab doon tmhn jb kehnay kokuch hai hi nai….

Abeer : tm n surav s shadi liye han kun kia … tm janti the na k main tm s….

Mishti got teary eyes… n and tries to look away… bt abeerholds her face …

Abeer : mishty idher meri traf dekho….

Mishti again tries to avoid bt abeer pull her more close ….

Abeer : mishti…..

Finally mishti saw in his eyes….

Bg= Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Iss chaahat mein marr jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

Kuch aur tha main kuch aur hi tha
Tumne hi mujhko nikhara hai
Ab jo bhi mujhme pyara hai
Woh har rang tumhara hai

Jo kal tha, tera saath mile
Haathon se na yeh haath mile
Alvida mujhe tu keh jaaye
Yeh pyaar adhoora reh jaaye

Kuch aadhe adhoore lamhe liye
Dil ka yeh shehar sajaunga..
O…

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Iss chahat mein marr jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

N they  both have adeep full of emotions eyelock….

Mishti doesnot controls her emotions any more n hugs himtightly n cries…. Abeer to gives response with same emotions…. N hugs backtightly… after hugging her he have some kinds of peace in his heart … he isfeeling like the whole world is now in his arm… same is with mishti….

Rone De Aaj Hamko Do Aankhen Sujaane De
Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De
Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Dariya Woh Choot Jaayega
Hain Itna Dard Ke Tera Daaman Bheeg Jaayega

He allow her to pour out her all sorrow … after a long hugmishti breaks the hug ….. abeer wipes her tears .. n kisses her on forheard …node her not to cry…

Mishti smiles shyingly and moves away….

Abeer again comes close to her and wispers in her ear …

abeer : batao g nai kia hua tha?

He turns mishti toward him… n cups her face

Abeer: bolo mishti

Mishti : us din… us din.. jn mn n tmhan wo note dia tha… tbmain n kuch surprise plan kia tha …. Main tmhn batana chahtai the……

Abeer : kia batana chahti the ?

Mishti : batana chahti the k…. main tm se ….. r wahnmenakshi anty a gai r unhn n sb sun lia…. R wo chahti the k main tm s doorrahon warna wo kunal r kuhu ka rishta nai honay dege r wo shadi toor dege…. Rwo chati the k main kuch asa karon k tm mujh s nafrat karo …. Isle mn n surav sshadi k liye han kar di…

Abeer: what… itni bari bat mishti tm n mujh s chupai…. R ..r tm yeh kia karnay chali the han ?… use shadi karnay chali the jis k name kilawa tm kuch b nai janti ?… are you mad mishti ?…. R ma… ma n yeh sb kia ? woachay s janti the k mn un ki ego k samnay nai jhukon ga isle unhn n tmhn usekarna start kar dia… enough is enough … ab maa ko jawab dena hoga… ab maa s unki hi bhasa mn niptna hoga …

Mishti: abeer nai tm kuch nai karo gay plz…

abeer : han r tmhare r surav ki shadi ho Janay doon?… no way.. mishti main tm s wase buht naraz hun… ab mazeed kuch bol k mere sbr kaimtehan mat lo…

mishti : kia chahtay ho tm ?

abeer : ek wada

mishti : wada ?

abeer : han wada karo mujh s phr kabhi b kuch nai chupao getm kabhi bhi ….

Mishti nodes…

Mishti n abeer sitting on hay mishti’s head on abeershoulder …. And their hands are interwinked…

Both have their eyes closed…

Abeer : misht…

Mishti: hmmm…

Abeer : us din kia kehna chati the kun bulaya tha mujhebahir

Mishti opens her eyes n shyingly tries to go

Mishti : kuch nai wo to bs ase hi …

Abeer doesn’t free her hand n pulls her close …

Abeer : mishti … I love you I really love you… ab s nai uswakt s jab s tm r nanko sath the … tb s jb s tm n meri ngo join ki the… tb s jbtm n meri wo painting agg s bachai the…. Piyar karti ho na? bolo mishti… piyarkarti ho na mujh s ?

Mishti tries to go

Abeer sits on knees n holds her hands ….

Bg=Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere SaathHo... (2)
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar MeinHo Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein MereSaath Ho
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar MeinHo Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein MereSaath Ho

Abeer : haye…. Mishti …Aj nai … aj tm mere is sawal ka jawabdiye baghair kahin nai jao ge r na hi mn Janay don ga tmhn … bolo na

Mishti : nahi… mn tm s piyar nai karti…..

Abeer shocks…

Mishti : main tm s buht buht buht zyada piyar karti hn … isduniya s zyada … apni ego s zyada har cheez s zyda  … I love u too abeer ….

Both hug each other…

Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Panaah Mil Jaaye
Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye

It start raining….

They break hug …

Bg= Jitne Paas Paas Dhadkan Ke Hain Raaz
Jitne Paas Bundon Ke Baadal
Jaise Saath Saath Chanda Ke Hain Raat
Jitne Paas Nainon Ke Kaajal
Jitne Paas Paas Saagar Ke Lehar
Utne Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan
Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein MereSaath Ho

abeer stares mishti with full of desire mishti alsounderstands his sight and  shys tries tomove away abeer comes close to her holds her from waist n pulls her closer …then removes her pin n untie her hairs…then he holds her from shoulder n slowlyslips his hands on her arms… mishti feels the touch…..then holds her hands nkisses on her fingers tips….. then her cheeks and after that kisses on her eyes….Then its turn to her lips abeer goes more close to her n see her asking for herpermission mishty smiles n hugs hin tightly…… n he to hugs her back smilingly…

Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi AdhoorenHum
Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab PoorenHain Ham

Beautiful  story,amazing  songs . I appreciate your  writing  skills.  Plz do write in future  also.  As the track  moves forward  u will get different  scenarios to write about.  The show is unpredictable  to say the least  u can't  predict  it.  Since it's a sanskari  show they won't  show in ur face  romantic  scenes.  It will be classy and never   seen before scenes . Performed  to perfection  by our Mishbir.   Next time write something about  angsty  Abir. Thank u.

Thank you for giving the track, the ending we all want. 

Show me to Acha vala torture karenge ye log..

One tiny suggestion if you don't mind- keep paragraphs short and separate.. That way they are easy to read.  

Nice Story!! I really like how you brought the kidnap element back from the initial episodes. If push comes to shove, Abir should actually do this on the show to get Mishti to spill the beans, if she doesn't open up on her own. I just hope she doesn't do something like agreeing to marry Saurav on the show though.

Beautiful dear 

It's really really beautiful 

Totally loved it 

Thanks for writing this 

Abir pe kidnap karne waali habit suit karti hai 😆

Thank you for this beautiful story. Something which is very much needed at this hour. Loved it. Please write more