KHKT OS ** Jab Baarish Chidake

Posted: 4 years ago

OS 1 Jab Barish Chidke

She asked if there was a temple nearby, she needed to pray. Her siblings had left the hospital. She had insisted, they were tired, needed rest. She had signed the required papers, now standing outside the operation room, she knew she had nothing to do. She was told there was one outside in between two buildings of the hospital. There was a short cut, but a wide one, and one street lamp. It might rain, they warned. She nodded, she left.

He was done. Yes his Hippocratic oath brought him here. The patient may recover needs heavy observation. He steps out of the room. Washes up and comes to the attendant for completing paperwork. Some one calls him out, he recognizes her as the TV producer and in his heart he knows she may be the only one he can fully trust. He informs the producer that the patient is fine, after a nod and some awkward silence, just as he is about to leave, she stops him and explains how wrong he has been. 

She is lost. It’s a small road, but the street light doesn’t seem to be working. The darkness has engulfed her, she starts to fetch her phone, but it slips from her hand. She panics slightly and tells herself she must be strong. She bends to try and retrieve it and the only thing that supports her search in the darkness in the sudden lighting post a huge thunder. She yelps and stands. She shivers in anticipation of the rain that is about to come. Is the rain the blessing in the darkness she wonders. She speaks to herself again all she wanted was to pray, maybe she needs darkness to pray more. She faces ahead like she is looking into a mirror and speaks away with no fear, no hesitation, her lonesome fight, her tiring days and lonely nights. 

Until she hears a voice. He says kisse baat kar rahi ho tum? She is startled, no one has ever asked her that before, jee main..He looks at her, he can’t see her, but he can feel her. Her hiccuped voice, her startled breath, her choked tears, he can. It’s the very same unknown feeling that envelopes him often. She looks at him, doesn’t know where she is looking, but can feel him. His ruffled sigh, his tired voice, his looming frame. It’s a very similar loneliness she shares with him. They see each other. 

Rain falls on them like nothing else. It is still dark. She moves toward him, and he toward her. They don’t touch..not yet. They see each other, and yet, the street lamp magically comes on. Far away, a piano plays. They watch each other in the light. He raises his hand, she bends her face. He touches her tears washed by the rain. She moves her face into his palm. They have been looking for each other. 

Where has she been all this long? Where has he been all this long?

Kahaaa Hum Kahaaa Tum??

Edited by columbia - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful.... Absolutely speechless.... 

Thank you so much for such a wonderful one shot.... It is writers like yourself that make us readers and viewers remain hooked to the show... 

I just hope that the makers too go through this forum.... It might just help them Know what the viewers wanna see... 

Please do write more such shots... 

Posted: 4 years ago

So beautiful OS yar 


Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome OS❤️👏...thk u for this beautifully written OS....at least we can enjoy these OS until CVs decide to bring the show on track

Plzzz do write more

Posted: 4 years ago

“Where has she been all this long? Where has he been all this long?

Kahaaa Hum Kahaaa Tum??”


Congratulations! This piece of art has soothed my wrenched heart !

Dude you better be up with your spectacular work so that we never run out of surprises! 


Love 

Arayna


Edited by Sehrish-Arayna - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you for your kind words 

Posted: 4 years ago

Oooof, beauty! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!! So good! <33333333

Posted: 4 years ago

this was beautiful! would love to read more from you! 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Redrose1208


Beautiful.... Absolutely speechless.... 

Thank you so much for such a wonderful one shot.... It is writers like yourself that make us readers and viewers remain hooked to the show... 

I just hope that the makers too go through this forum.... It might just help them Know what the viewers wanna see... 

Please do write more such shots... 


Thank you so much. That’s so encouraging, I have written two other shots 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5114774

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