Akshan FF - IS LOVE WON chapter 7 pg 7

Hlo everyone according to current track i am writing a FF on our akshan. So enjoy. 

Story starts from wedding day of aj & antra.  All are busy for wedding preparation. On other hand guddan is talking to someone on phone & order that person to do as I say. 

 After some time aj & antra come to mandap for wedding Pandit ji ask them to sit & start rituals but suddenly power is off & dadi tell to vardaan go & check what is  the problem vardaan said yes and about to leave but than lights are on & all looked shocked  

Aj - guddan ab ye kya naya drama hai ye itne sara luggage yaha kya kr raha hai. 

Guddan- koi drama nahi hai ye sara luggage aap sb ka hai ab iss shadi k baad app sb hamare  ghar me kese rah sakte hai iss liye iss shadi k hote hi aap sb ko yaha se to jana hoga isliye hamne aap sb ke bag pack kar diye taki aap sb ko baad me koi problem na ho. 

Durga- thumara ghar matlab ...ye  hamara ghar hai or iss shadi ke baad tum  jaaogi iss ghar se bahar samjhi 

Guddan- samjhna to aap sb ko hai & she goes to aj & show him some papers & said aapne iss  sari property ki100 % malkin hame banaya hai or ab aap dono ki shadi k baad  aap sb ka iss  ghar me hamare saath rahna to.. Na ho payega. Or jb ye ghar ye property ye restorent sb hamara hai to ham kaha jayenge jana to aap sb ko hai. (In my story aj ne guddan k naam 100% property ki thi not only 51%)  

Antra - ye kya bakbaas hai ye sb to mere akshat ka hai tumhara nahi akshat kuch bolo iss ladki ko...kya sach me tumne ye sab iske naam kar diya hai  

Akshat - nodded yes 

Antra is shocked....  Guddan come to antra and said slowly  antra tumne hamse vo China jise ham pyaar karte the to lo hamne tumse vo chin liya jo tumhe pyaara tha. Guddan kabhi v hisaab adhura nahi chodti.  Antra look at her angrily & guddan smile to har. Isse kahte hai nahle pe dahla. 

Antra - akshat ab ham kaha jayega or kya jarurat thi tumhe ye sb iss ladki k naam karne ki. 

Lakshmi come forward to antra and said koi baat nahi antra ji hum sb  aapki shadi k baad yaha se chale jayenge Or hum sb saath hai iss se badi baat kya ho sakti hai hame nahi chahiye ye paisa .Or ye sb Aap hi rakh lijiye saasuma..

Akshat is about to say  but angad Interrupted and said ha ha aap hi rakh lijiye ye sb Or aap ko kya lagta hai hum sb iss property Or iss eso aaram k bina nahi rah payege. Chale jayenge hum iss shadi k baad pandit ji aap shadi shuru kijiye.  

Guddan  come forward and take off all Jewellery of antra & said aapko iss ki kya jarurat hai. Ab aap aaram se shadi kijiye Or yaha se jaiye. Pandit ji shadi shuru kijiye Or ha thoda jaldi kijiye vo kya hai na ab hame apna ghar me thodi shanti chahiye.  Or ha aap sb v jaldi se ye soch lijiye kisi ab aap kaha jayege orr kya karege kyoki sirf shadi tk ka time hai aap k paas uske baad iss ghar pr aap me se kisi ka koi adhikaar nahi rahega. All are shocked & worried. 

Akshat- guddan tum ye jo kr rahi hona vo galat hai 

Guddan clap & said aap to sahi or galat k baare me baat na hi kare to dheek hoga. 

Pandit ji jara jaldi kijiye

Lakshmi-  antra ji aap kya soch rahi hai  jaldi se phere pura kijiye Or chalte hai hum sb yaha se. Sahi kah rahi hu na mai AJ. 

Akshat  - nodded yes & said  Pandit ji aap shaadi suru kijiye iss shaadi k baad main apne pure parivaar k saath yaha se chala jaunga.  Mera pura parivaar mere saath hai mujhe or kuch nahi chahiye.

Hearing all this antra look Very angry and frustrated 

Pandit ji - aap dono phere suru kijiye.

Antra - kya phere suru karo ha  mujhe nahi karni koi shadi samjhe Or guddan tum apne aap ko bahut smart samjhti ho magar ek no.  ki bevakoof ho tum and she come forward to guddan with a knife and put it on her neck. 

All are shocked.  

Dadi  - antra ye tu kya kr rahi hai.

Akshat - antra chhodo guddan ko. Tum ye kya kr rahi ho  

Antra- vohi jo mujhe bahut pahle karna chahiye tha. Ye guddan  phale din se hi bahut smart ban rahi thi mere saare plans barbaad karne me lagi thi pr kya hua sab k samne jhoothi ban gyi. Kisine v iss pr yakeen nahi kiya yaha tk ki tumne v akshat. Jis k liye ye mujhe ladaai kr rahi thi usne hi uska bharosa ni kiya. Mujhe laga tumse shadi kr k iss sari property kisi malkin ban jaungi pr nahi tumne to ye property iss bevakoof ladki k naam kr di to ab iss marna hoga. Kaha tha iss pagal ladki ko ki chup chaap chali jaaye pe nahi iss to apne parivaar ko bachna tha ab Tumhe kon bachega ha. 

Akshat is hall shocked he can't believe what listened. 

Dadi - ye tu kya kah rahi hai antra Tu esa nahi kr sakti tu to bahut pyaar krti thi na laala se phir ye sb kyo. 

Antra - agar pyaar karti to phale chhod k kyo jati. Kya karti me tb akshat k paas kuch v nahi tha or upar se in teeno ko godh le aaya. 

Or ha an main iss guddan ko nahi chhodugi iski vajah se aaj ye property meri nahi hai. 

Angad - aap esa nahi ke sakti chhod dijiye guddan bhabhi ko. 

Antra- esa nahi ke sakti ka kya matlab hai jb main apne bhai ko maar sakti hu to ye kon hoti hai. Bhai v  iss ki tarah mahaan ban rahe the mera saara sach aap sb ko batane bale the. Ki main pregnent nahi hu. Are jb mere or akshat k beech kuch hua hi nahi to main pregnent kese go sakti hu. 

Akshat in angry tone  guddan ko chhod do antra varna aacha nahi hoga. 

Antra- kya baat hai akshat aj bada pyaar aa raha hai apni guddan pr. itne dino se to bharosa v nahi tha  iss pr. Tumhe bewakoof banana bahut aasan tha mere liye  phale v  yahi kiya tha or iss baar to jyda mehnat v nahi karni padi tumhara jo bharosa tha na mujh pr bus usi ka faayda uthaya mene or isme tumhari iss durga bahu ne v saath diya mera sahi kaha na mene durga bahu tum na apne aap ko bahut smart smjhti ho are ek no.ki bewakoof ho iss guddan ne to tum se sirf ghar ki chahiye li thi pr main to tum teeno ko or tumhre in patiyo k saath  iss ghar se hi nikalne vali thi shadi k baad pr iss guddan ne sara khel hi bigaad diya mera .isliye ab main isse nahi chhodugi & she is about to harm guddan. 

but suddenly vikram come and take  knife from antra and slap her tume kya laga main itni asani se mar jaunga vo sb ek naatak tha.

All are shocked specially guddan but she is happy 

Vikram - Ha guddan ji vo sb ek naatak tha hamara. Hame Or saboot chahiye the jo ye saabit kr sake ki antra yaha kis makshad se aayi hai or itne saalo se kaha thi or thi. Sorry hum aapko kuch bata nahi paaye jb isne hume maane kisi kosis ki or aap hame hospital le gayi thi tb hum bach gaye the pr antra ko ye lage ki uska plan sahi ja raha hai isliye hamne marne ka naatak kiya or aapko isliye nahi bataya kyoki hum nahi chahte the ki apko antra se koi khatra ho.

He ordered lady officer to arrest antra.  She take antra with her & leave. 

Vikram- hum jante hai jo kuch v hua us pr aap sbko yakeen karna muskil hai pr sach yahi hai. 

Or aap sb bahut  kismatwale  hai ki guddan ji iss parivaar ka hissa hai or unhone haar nahi mani aap sb ka gussa or nafrat sah kr v antra ka sach samne layi. 

Dadi  - sahi kah rahe ho tum .hum sb ne  bahut galat kiya hai guddan  k saath pata nahi vo hum sb ko maaf v karengi ya nahi. Main abhi baat krti hu guddan se   pr Guddan hai kaha 

All looked around but guddan is nowhere.  After some time guddan some there with her  bag and some papers.

Guddan - ye lijiye divorce papers hamne sign kr diye hai in pr. 

All are shocked 

Dadi - ye tu kya kah rahi hai beta. Manti hu bahut badi galti hui hai ham sb se pr uske liye ye rishta mat tod iss ghar ko chhod k mat ja beta. Main maafi maangti hu tujhse and she folded 🙏her hands. 

Guddan  - ma aap esa mat kijiye. Hum ye nahi kahege ki hume dukh nahi hua bahut dil dukha hai hamara jb hame hamare pati Or parivaar ki jarurat thi tb kisi ne hamara saath nahi diya. (And she look towards akshat). Isliye ab yahi sahi hai ki hum yaha se chale jaaye. And she is about to leave 

Lakshmi- AJ rokiye na saasuma ko aap bolege to vo ruk jayegi.  

Akshat- jaane dijiye guddan ko vo sahi kah rahi hai mujhe use rokne ka koi adhikaar nahi hai ab.  

Dadi - ye tu kya kah raha hai pagal to nahi ho gya raha payega iss k bina. 

Akshat stand lifeless.. 

Guddan is leave from there.  

All are sad . Angad & lakshmi bahu is Very upset with aj.  dadi is crying. Akshat is also leave from there.  

Durga (in mind)  pata nahi ab mera kya hoga. Aaj to AJ ne kuch nahi kaha pr kal kya hoga.  Ye antra khud to jail chali gyi or mera sara sach sbko  bata gyi. 

Saru - durga di main apki koi help kr du packing mujhe kya lagta hai aaj ki raat aapki aakhri raat hai iss ghar main kl apko v jana hoga yaha se. 

Durga angrily looked saru and leave. 

Precap-- akshat & dadi convention.  Akshat behavior shocked everyone. & guddan ka kya haal hai . 

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Aapko kya lagta hai 

akshat kya karega ab 

Uska behavior kesa hoga family members se specialy durga bahu k saath. 

Or kya hoga guddan or akshat kikil parmkahani ka. 

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Chapter 2

Akshan room 

Akshat was sat on his bed & hold guddan's pic & lost in thoughts when dadi come there and put her hand on his solder akshat come out of his thoughts. Ma aap yaha 

Dadi- lalla ye tune kya kiya roka kyo nahi guddan ko rah payega uske bina. 

Akshat- ma kis haq se rokta main use .  Us pr bharosa na karke sare  haq kho chuka hu. Ek accha pati to chhodo ma main to guddan ka saccha dost v nahi ban pata. 

Sahi kaha tha usne jb use uske pati ki sbse jyada jarurat thi tb main uska saath chhod diya. Iss ghar me  sabhi ne to guddan ka dil dukhaya hai.  Durga or saru bahu ne kabhi v guddan ki respect nahi ki or to Or Durga bahu  to antra k saath mil kr guddan ko iss ghar se bahar nikalna chahti thi vo v sirf property or apne ruthe k liye .or iss baar to aapne Or mene v guddan ka bharosa thodi diya. Isliye accha yhi hoga ki vo iss ghar se or hum sb se door rahe Or apni jindgi ki nayi suruaat kare.  Yaha rah kr Meri guddan ko sirf taklif hi milegi jo vo bilkul v deserve nahi karti. Meri guddan ka haq to sirf khusiyon pr hai jo use mujhe door rhe kr hi milengi. 

Dadi -  tujhe kya lagta hai lalla  guddan tujhse door rah kr khus rah payegi.are vo tujhse bahut pyaar karti hai to tere bina kush kese rahegi. Mana ki vo abhi gussa hai pr tu ek baar kosis to kr vo tujhe jarur maaf kr degi. 

Akshat - ek baar kya main to hajaar baar kosis krne ko Tiyar hu ma. pr  mene jo guddan k saath kiya hai na uske liye saayad vo to mujhe maaf kr v de pr main khud ko kese maaf karu. Or Meri saza yahi hai ki mai apne pyaar se door rahu.  

Ek galat insaan ( antra) se pyaar or bharosa karne ki saza to mujhe milni chahiye. 

Dadi take divorce papers & give  to akshat  

Dadi - agar yahi baat hai to ye le pen on  in divorce papers pr mere samne sign kar. 

Akshat  took pen but unable to sign .his hand was shaking. 

Dadi - Dekha lalla yaha in papers pr to tu sign kr nahi pa raha Or kahta hai jindgi bhar guddan se door rahega. Guddan se door rahna tujhse na ho payega. 

Or yadi tujhe saza chahiye hai to  jo saza guddan de use pura kr. Uska bharosa jeet Or guddan ko iss rishte pr phir se yakeen dila. and dadi leave. 

Akshat touch  guddan's pic with teary eyes and hug her pic & said sahi kaha ma ne ki tumhare bina jina mujhe na ho payega pr ab yahi meri jindgi hai. 

In morning 

All were tenced  for akshat  .Durga was super duper scared how will AJ react. 

Akshat come down stairs and said ma mai restorent ja raha hu. 

Dadi - lalla nasta to kr k ja. 

Akshat-  mn nahi hai ma. & leave

All are shocked specially Durga.

Durga ( in mond)  - ye AJ ko kya hua kuch kaha v nahi chalo jo v hai mere liye to accha hi hai. 

Akshat return home late night. 

It become his daily routine his mostly time spent in restorant  & his behavior towards family members was totally changed. Now he was not interfere in their life. 

Dadi notice that akshat was complete changed ab na to vo jyada  baat krta  or uski smile v sirf uski ma k liye thi. esa lag raha tha ki vo jeena hi bhool gya bus apni duty puri kar rha hai apne family members k liye. 

Dadi - ye kya ho gya mere lalla ko guddan k bina ye nahi rah payega. Ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.  

Ye akshat k side ki story thi. 

Guddan ki story kya hogi 

Or kese milenge hamare akshan. 

Kyoki akshat to apne guilt k karan guddan ko manane ki kosis v nahi kr raha. Phir kese manegi  guddan or kya maaf kar payegi akshat ko. 

Or dadi kya karegi ab.  

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Ignor all grammatical mistakes.