PreRish SS- Green Eyed Monster (Updated Final Chpt 8 Pg 39) - Page 2

Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Tada.. Such a beautiful os depicting varied emo 

Please please this deserves another part

Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome! 

So Prerna misses Mr Bajaj and goes green with envy when his ex-wife descends the stairs. 😎

But this one shouldn't be a one-shot. I'm curious to know what transpires next as Prerna is clearly upset with the wedding. 😳

Why has Menaka come back? What's her equation with Rishabh?

Continue karo. Prerna can't go ahead with the wedding now. Let her melt into RB's arms in front of the whole MM in the next function. 

Posted: 4 years ago

Res

Unres

Sanya🤗

This was so awesome. Prerna’s emotions were so beautifully captured. This deserves RB’s POV. I really want to know what was going on in his head when he came down the stairs. 

I also loved how he would always start to address her as Mrs. Bajaj but then stops. *sighs*

👏👏👏

PS: You are making me feel incompetent😆

Edited by Eternized_Blues - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Definitely wonderful but it deserve another part.cause the way you finish it ,its perfect to called a os.but we the reader yours are very thirsty to get more.so plz z plz bring an another part soon.thanks 

Posted: 4 years ago

Hi 

I got the first page 

Yayay

Now that you wrote such an awesome os you deserve a gift. 

And the gift is this.... 

https://www.instagram.com/p/B0NpgwjFG0c/?igshid=5hfkrz93jvhx

Kaisan laga apko hamara gift?😘 

alsp here is the monster that you have been referring to. 

Image

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Why this one is one short..???

You should continue.. Preyu ka chota dimaag didnt get menka's hint.. Mai wo hu jo aap hai..😆

Lovely sanya.. But you have to continue..😳

Posted: 4 years ago
You should seriously continue this shot
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by AnjuRish


Tada.. Such a beautiful os depicting varied emo 

Please please this deserves another part

Aw thank you ❤️

Second part? Hmm not a bad idea😎

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