As we are all getting lost in Mishbir land , I wanted to modify an earlier OS that I had written .
This is set on the day of Kukus sangeet and also the day after Mishti hears that Abir has agreed to marry someone else.
This has some scenes from my earlier OS but now has a bit of a conclusion to the scene that I was unable to write earlier . Hope you all enjoy it. Grab some tea since this OS is long :)
It was all laughter and joy in the Maheshwari household on the day of Kuhu and Kunals sangeet but Mishti had forgotten to smile.
Mishti was on cloud nine as she had cycled to Abirs tent last night. It was 2 weeks after the accident. It was that morning after the accident when she had realised her love for Abir. She was both excited and nervous every time she met him after that cyclone night. He was getting closer to her and she was not pushing back but neither of them had confessed their love to each other yet.
Abir usually spent most Friday evenings by his tent and she wanted to just see him today as he was finally able to move around freely after getting a clean chit from the doctor. Mishti was so excited that she did not notice that a girl was sitting with Abir on the bench.
As Mishti got down from her cycle assuming the girl to be one of their NGO employees, Mishti heard the girl saying that Abirs Mother had told her parents to ask her to go meet him as Abir had agreed for their alliance .... Mishti could not believe her ears and as she retreated back in shock, she banged against the cycle and the cycle fell down with a thud.
Abir turned around right then to see Mishtis eyes filled with tears . He could read her well enough to know that she had heard Tripti. Mishti could literally hear her heart break . She knew love and now she knew the pain of it as well. As she saw Abir she realised that she needed to plaster a smile on her face . She quickly turned , wiped her tears in the pretext of picking up her cycle and turned back to face him. She smiled at him and told him that she had to hurry back to continue with the arrangements at home.
BigBen had kept a condition that she would allow Kunal to marry Kuhu only if Abir would agree to marry Tripti , a family friend of theirs . Abir had played with Tripti as a kid but from what Naanu told him she was now the exact Gai type ki Bahu that BigBen was looking for. Now that her Munna was going to marry a pataka and she had to accept that with the sole purpose of keeping Abir away from Mishti, she thought keeping Abir away from Mishti was her only chance of maintaining some sense of control over the house.
Abir was of course not going to marry any girl that his Mother chose for him but he needed to first get Naanko married before he fought for his love. Hence he had agreed to meet Tripti near his tent and to his relief Tripti had continued to talk to him after Mishti left and Tripti wanted out of this alliance more than he did. She was in love with her college Friend and she wanted her family to wait until her boyfriend finished his higher studies. She was being forced to marry saying that ‘she was at the right age’. Abir had assured Tripti that they could both break this alliance as soon as Naanko was married.
Abir went back home and tried reaching Mishti through messages , calls and even tried calling Kuhu but all had failed. He was waiting for the Sangeet to drag her into a corner and clarify to her that what she saw was not what she understood . He needed Kunal to be married before he dealt with his mom in his own way. No way was his Mother going to manipulate him out of his love.
Now as Mishti readied herself for the sangeet , Mishti did not know where to hide. She had to perform with Abir but she did not want to speak to Abir yet. She wanted to fight for him but she did not know if she had the right to. She was adopted into a family and she knew that Bade papa would be mighty disappointed in her if she told him that she loved Abir. That was why she was holding back from confessing her feelings to him. And had Abir given up on his love for her so easily that he had agreed to marry this timid sweet looking girl who sat beside him near the tent.
Mishti was wearing a black and gold lehenga . She needed to match Kuhu who was dressed in a gold colour gown. Abir was excited to see Mishti wearing that black lehenga with a plunging neckline and smiled to himself thanking Kuhu who had bought her the dress for Mishti as part of the wedding shopping where they had all gone together.
Mishti pinned up her sheer dupatta that managed to add some modesty to an otherwise racy attire. She wondered why she had accepted this dress and thought she could pull it off. She did want to make Kuhu happy and she was going to make the most of it. Yesterday as she rode to his tent , she was actually excited for Abir to see her in this, but now she just wanted this sangeet to be over and for her to crash on the bed and cry in peace.
She had worn contacts because her makeup lady wanted her to sport a Smokey eye look . Mishtis hair was lightly curled today and along with her eyes that were a sultry gold and black, she looked a bit unrecognisable to her even.
Abir looked around for Mishti in the hustle and bustle of the sangeet but when he did not find her , Abir headed straight to Mishtis room and locked the door behind him softly saying Mishti why aren’t you replying to my .... His breath caught in throat as he took in her sight. Mishti looked into the mirror to see the love of her life wearing a Black and gold Sherwani with his hair tied up in a man bun . She had not seen anyone sexier. She did not know what to say. She realised he was looking at her through the mirror with something unreadable in his eyes and she turned her head away lest she let her attraction to him show through her eyes that were not masked behind her spectacles today.
Mishti looked down wishing Abir would just go away. Yet he looked so good that she did not want him to. Abir could not resist himself and walked closer to where Mishti stood with her eyes looking away. He came close to Mishti and turned her around slowly. He did not realise what he was about to do but his resistance had reached a limit. He delicately tilted her chin up with a finger to get her to look at him.
For the first time he let his desire for her show and he read a reciprocation of the same look in her eyes. That gave him the encouragement that he needed and Abir cupped her face in his hands uttered her name and slowly lowered his head. Mishti but felt butterflies in her tummy and went into a trance as Abir looked into her eyes with so much longing and passion. She closed her eyes and let herself just savour this moment without any hope of the future or worry about their circumstances.
As their lips were about to meet there was a knock on the door, it was Badi maa calling out for Mishti.
Mishti opened her eyes to look into Abirs shocked hazel coloured eyes and returned to her senses. She moved away from Abir and screamed out to Badi maa that she was still changing and will be down in a minute.
Abir waited for her to say something but she just said that their dance was next and walked out of the room.
They both danced to a romantic number (Suraj hua madham) and each time Abir touched Mishti , she did not know whether to pay attention to the new feeling of butterflies in her tummy or remind herself that her heart was shattering with each touch.
Mishti was so relieved when the song ended that she went out into the courtyard for some much needed air. She was on the verge of crying and she needed to put some distance between her and Abir.
Abir made sure no one noticed him and slowly slipped out of the house. He pulled Mishti gently into a corner where no one could see them. He could see her in the background of the fairy lights that lit up the house today and he had not seen any girl prettier.
Abir- Mishti , why are you running away from me ?
Mishti- Abir, main kahan baag rahin Hoon ?
Mishti looked away from him and said ...Tum jaante Ho main kitni khush Hoon ki tumne apna jeevan sathi chun liya hai?
Abir- Tum khush ho ya khush hone ki naatak kar rahi ho ?
Mishti- Abir, tum mere dost ho(her voice stuttered as she said those words, that word dost now seemed like an insult to their relationship , they were friends but more like two souls who were using friendship as a stepping stone to come together )
Aur apne dost ki khushi apni khushi jaise hi hai na
Abir- Mishti ...you did not answer me that day also.. tum accident ke baad kyun mere paas baiti rahi woh bhi mere haath thaame?. Main to sirf dost hoon na tumhara?
Mishti- Abir, hum dono mar sakte the, shaayad us dar ki vajah se main tumhare hath thaam ke baiti thi
Abir- Aur hamaare beech aaj jo hua, wo kya tha ?Mishti? (Abir linked his hands with hers while looking into her eyes with a look that stole her breath away. She felt all those butterflies return and as she saw the love and desire in Abirs eyes for her , she could not take this anymore.
She closed her eyes and let the pain of what she heard yesterday take over and let a tear roll down her cheeks. Abir bent slowly and kissed one cheek then another tracing away her tears that he could not bear to see.
He realised then that she was not going to confess her love anytime soon. He would have to assure her that what she saw yesterday was not what she assumed. What if she had thought Tripti was the girl in the painting ?
Abir- Mishti, Open your eyes and look at me.
Mishti slowly opened her eyes and looked into those hazel eyes of the man who had just kissed her tears away..
Abir- Mishti, jis ladki ko tumne mere saath kal dekha woh Tripti hai. I used to play with her as a kid, woh hamaari family friend hai. Bigben put a condition yesterday that if I don’t agree to marry her then she will not let Kunal and Kuhu get married . Main jaanta Hoon meri maa kya kar rahi hain aur kyon.
Mishti , Tripti kisi aur se pyaar karti hai. Usne mujhse vaada liya hai ki main usse reject kar doon, jo main kar doonga Naanko ke shaadi ke baad.
Mere agar kisi ke saath shaadi hogi to usse hogi jise main pasand karta Hoon , naa ki meri maa.
Lekin Mishti, ek taraf se ladai nahin jeeti jaa sakti. Tumhe khush hone ka Haq hai aur us Haq ki kurbaani karne ka haq tab nahin hota jab kisi aur ki khushiyaan tumse judi ho.
Mishti looked into his eyes and wanted to say a lot, that she was relieved, thankful and more than anything in love with him more than she could express but she was also scared. Instead, she just wrapped her arms around him and allowed the friend in him to comfort her like he knew to do always.
Abir knew this angry Chorni was not going to be easy to love but atleast he knew for certain now that she was experiencing all the feelings that he felt towards her. There would come a day when she would find the courage to express it openly and he would wait patiently for that...
As she was about to pull away from the hug, he slowly bent toward her ear and told her in whisper into her ears. By the way, Angry Chorni, aaj tum badi hot lag rahi ho.
Mishti for the first time pushed away from him , looked into his mischievous eyes and blushed so hard that he saw the colour fill her cheeks before she started to run away into the house.
As she was running, Abir called out to her - Suno Angry Chorni...
As she turned back to look at him with now a shy smile on her face.. he said with a content smile on his .. Kuch nahin.. Jao...
As we are all getting lost in Mishbir land , I wanted to modify an earlier OS that I had written .
This is set on the day of Kukus sangeet and also the day after Mishti hears that Abir has agreed to marry someone else.
This has some scenes from my earlier OS but now has a bit of a conclusion to the scene that I was unable to write earlier . Hope you all enjoy it. Grab some tea since this OS is long :)
It was all laughter and joy in the Maheshwari household on the day of Kuhu and Kunals sangeet but Mishti had forgotten to smile.
Mishti was on cloud nine as she had cycled to Abirs tent last night. It was 2 weeks after the accident. It was that morning after the accident when she had realised her love for Abir. She was both excited and nervous every time she met him after that cyclone night. He was getting closer to her and she was not pushing back but neither of them had confessed their love to each other yet.
Abir usually spent most Friday evenings by his tent and she wanted to just see him today as he was finally able to move around freely after getting a clean chit from the doctor. Mishti was so excited that she did not notice that a girl was sitting with Abir on the bench.
As Mishti got down from her cycle assuming the girl to be one of their NGO employees, Mishti heard the girl saying that Abirs Mother had told her parents to ask her to go meet him as Abir had agreed for their alliance .... Mishti could not believe her ears and as she retreated back in shock, she banged against the cycle and the cycle fell down with a thud.
Abir turned around right then to see Mishtis eyes filled with tears . He could read her well enough to know that she had heard Tripti. Mishti could literally hear her heart break . She knew love and now she knew the pain of it as well. As she saw Abir she realised that she needed to plaster a smile on her face . She quickly turned , wiped her tears in the pretext of picking up her cycle and turned back to face him. She smiled at him and told him that she had to hurry back to continue with the arrangements at home.
BigBen had kept a condition that she would allow Kunal to marry Kuhu only if Abir would agree to marry Tripti , a family friend of theirs . Abir had played with Tripti as a kid but from what Naanu told him she was now the exact Gai type ki Bahu that BigBen was looking for. Now that her Munna was going to marry a pataka and she had to accept that with the sole purpose of keeping Abir away from Mishti, she thought keeping Abir away from Mishti was her only chance of maintaining some sense of control over the house.
Abir was of course not going to marry any girl that his Mother chose for him but he needed to first get Naanko married before he fought for his love. Hence he had agreed to meet Tripti near his tent and to his relief Tripti had continued to talk to him after Mishti left and Tripti wanted out of this alliance more than he did. She was in love with her college Friend and she wanted her family to wait until her boyfriend finished his higher studies. She was being forced to marry saying that ‘she was at the right age’. Abir had assured Tripti that they could both break this alliance as soon as Naanko was married.
Abir went back home and tried reaching Mishti through messages , calls and even tried calling Kuhu but all had failed. He was waiting for the Sangeet to drag her into a corner and clarify to her that what she saw was not what she understood . He needed Kunal to be married before he dealt with his mom in his own way. No way was his Mother going to manipulate him out of his love.
Now as Mishti readied herself for the sangeet , Mishti did not know where to hide. She had to perform with Abir but she did not want to speak to Abir yet. She wanted to fight for him but she did not know if she had the right to. She was adopted into a family and she knew that Bade papa would be mighty disappointed in her if she told him that she loved Abir. That was why she was holding back from confessing her feelings to him. And had Abir given up on his love for her so easily that he had agreed to marry this timid sweet looking girl who sat beside him near the tent.
Mishti was wearing a black and gold lehenga . She needed to match Kuhu who was dressed in a gold colour gown. Abir was excited to see Mishti wearing that black lehenga with a plunging neckline and smiled to himself thanking Kuhu who had bought her the dress for Mishti as part of the wedding shopping where they had all gone together.
Mishti pinned up her sheer dupatta that managed to add some modesty to an otherwise racy attire. She wondered why she had accepted this dress and thought she could pull it off. She did want to make Kuhu happy and she was going to make the most of it. Yesterday as she rode to his tent , she was actually excited for Abir to see her in this, but now she just wanted this sangeet to be over and for her to crash on the bed and cry in peace.
She had worn contacts because her makeup lady wanted her to sport a Smokey eye look . Mishtis hair was lightly curled today and along with her eyes that were a sultry gold and black, she looked a bit unrecognisable to her even.
Abir looked around for Mishti in the hustle and bustle of the sangeet but when he did not find her , Abir headed straight to Mishtis room and locked the door behind him softly saying Mishti why aren’t you replying to my .... His breath caught in throat as he took in her sight. Mishti looked into the mirror to see the love of her life wearing a Black and gold Sherwani with his hair tied up in a man bun . She had not seen anyone sexier. She did not know what to say. She realised he was looking at her through the mirror with something unreadable in his eyes and she turned her head away lest she let her attraction to him show through her eyes that were not masked behind her spectacles today.
Mishti looked down wishing Abir would just go away. Yet he looked so good that she did not want him to. Abir could not resist himself and walked closer to where Mishti stood with her eyes looking away. He came close to Mishti and turned her around slowly. He did not realise what he was about to do but his resistance had reached a limit. He delicately tilted her chin up with a finger to get her to look at him.
For the first time he let his desire for her show and he read a reciprocation of the same look in her eyes. That gave him the encouragement that he needed and Abir cupped her face in his hands uttered her name and slowly lowered his head. Mishti but felt butterflies in her tummy and went into a trance as Abir looked into her eyes with so much longing and passion. She closed her eyes and let herself just savour this moment without any hope of the future or worry about their circumstances.
As their lips were about to meet there was a knock on the door, it was Badi maa calling out for Mishti.
Mishti opened her eyes to look into Abirs shocked hazel coloured eyes and returned to her senses. She moved away from Abir and screamed out to Badi maa that she was still changing and will be down in a minute.
Abir waited for her to say something but she just said that their dance was next and walked out of the room.
They both danced to a romantic number (Suraj hua madham) and each time Abir touched Mishti , she did not know whether to pay attention to the new feeling of butterflies in her tummy or remind herself that her heart was shattering with each touch.
Mishti was so relieved when the song ended that she went out into the courtyard for some much needed air. She was on the verge of crying and she needed to put some distance between her and Abir.
Abir made sure no one noticed him and slowly slipped out of the house. He pulled Mishti gently into a corner where no one could see them. He could see her in the background of the fairy lights that lit up the house today and he had not seen any girl prettier.
Abir- Mishti , why are you running away from me ?
Mishti- Abir, main kahan baag rahin Hoon ?
Mishti looked away from him and said ...Tum jaante Ho main kitni khush Hoon ki tumne apna jeevan sathi chun liya hai?
Abir- Tum khush ho ya khush hone ki naatak kar rahi ho ?
Mishti- Abir, tum mere dost ho(her voice stuttered as she said those words, that word dost now seemed like an insult to their relationship , they were friends but more like two souls who were using friendship as a stepping stone to come together )
Aur apne dost ki khushi apni khushi jaise hi hai na
Abir- Mishti ...you did not answer me that day also.. tum accident ke baad kyun mere paas baiti rahi woh bhi mere haath thaame?. Main to sirf dost hoon na tumhara?
Mishti- Abir, hum dono mar sakte the, shaayad us dar ki vajah se main tumhare hath thaam ke baiti thi
Abir- Aur hamaare beech aaj jo hua, wo kya tha ?Mishti? (Abir linked his hands with hers while looking into her eyes with a look that stole her breath away. She felt all those butterflies return and as she saw the love and desire in Abirs eyes for her , she could not take this anymore.
She closed her eyes and let the pain of what she heard yesterday take over and let a tear roll down her cheeks. Abir bent slowly and kissed one cheek then another tracing away her tears that he could not bear to see.
He realised then that she was not going to confess her love anytime soon. He would have to assure her that what she saw yesterday was not what she assumed. What if she had thought Tripti was the girl in the painting ?
Abir- Mishti, Open your eyes and look at me.
Mishti slowly opened her eyes and looked into those hazel eyes of the man who had just kissed her tears away..
Abir- Mishti, jis ladki ko tumne mere saath kal dekha woh Tripti hai. I used to play with her as a kid, woh hamaari family friend hai. Bigben put a condition yesterday that if I don’t agree to marry her then she will not let Kunal and Kuhu get married . Main jaanta Hoon meri maa kya kar rahi hain aur kyon.
Mishti , Tripti kisi aur se pyaar karti hai. Usne mujhse vaada liya hai ki main usse reject kar doon, jo main kar doonga Naanko ke shaadi ke baad.
Mere agar kisi ke saath shaadi hogi to usse hogi jise main pasand karta Hoon , naa ki meri maa.
Lekin Mishti, ek taraf se ladai nahin jeeti jaa sakti. Tumhe khush hone ka Haq hai aur us Haq ki kurbaani karne ka haq tab nahin hota jab kisi aur ki khushiyaan tumse judi ho.
Mishti looked into his eyes and wanted to say a lot, that she was relieved, thankful and more than anything in love with him more than she could express but she was also scared. Instead, she just wrapped her arms around him and allowed the friend in him to comfort her like he knew to do always.
Abir knew this angry Chorni was not going to be easy to love but atleast he knew for certain now that she was experiencing all the feelings that he felt towards her. There would come a day when she would find the courage to express it openly and he would wait patiently for that...
As she was about to pull away from the hug, he slowly bent toward her ear and told her in whisper into her ears. By the way, Angry Chorni, aaj tum badi hot lag rahi ho.
Mishti for the first time pushed away from him , looked into his mischievous eyes and blushed so hard that he saw the colour fill her cheeks before she started to run away into the house.
As she was running, Abir called out to her - Suno Angry Chorni...
As she turned back to look at him with now a shy smile on her face.. he said with a content smile on his .. Kuch nahin.. Jao...
Bold -the line and this suno kuch nahi jaao 😍😍😍😍😍
I am in love with this os
Mishbir's emotion, intensity, love all displayed so beautifully
Mishti's emotion made me overwhelmed, a girls feeling what we say
The way abir confronted mishti and made her trust her love
Standing ovation to you
Awesome 👏
Thanks a ton for such encouraging words . I write very rarely but Mishbir are such sweet characters and their situation this week is so unique that I had to pen this down before Meenu Ben spoils the fun next week 😆
Thanks again 😃
Bold -the line and this suno kuch nahi jaao 😍😍😍😍😍
I am in love with this os
Mishbir's emotion, intensity, love all displayed so beautifully
Mishti's emotion made me overwhelmed, a girls feeling what we say
The way abir confronted mishti and made her trust her love
Standing ovation to you
Awesome 👏
Thanks ..I wanted to finish it with some hope and love 😳
The end...the end..
It had my heart.
I literally can see that scene in my head.
Thanks a lot .. I soo miss that suno jao thing of theirs that I added it . Waiting for them to say it again in the show
