MishBir OS + Snippets (Surprises - pg13) - Page 7

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by ShenzK


I surely didn't. But why would that be? 

I can start with a lot more but then it's better to keep the place sane. πŸ€£

Maybe his planning didn't work yet.. but we never know what's next in stores for him. πŸ˜‰

Thank you.. 

meri morning kabi kabi Abir jaisi ho jati hai.. And one of my dream scenarios they have gone to coffee which gets crashed. 

I agree but mostly for my sanity🀣 because right now I'm wide awake.. 

They'll have plenty of chances with this project. My mind is concocting different things right now. I'm sure you'll come up with something great 

I can see it started as steamy one then blended into a frustrating oneπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Edited by meen123 - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

I feel bad for abir πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Coffee date turns out in a highly professional meeting with the uninvited duo 

You started with abir's neck, and my imagination started  running wild πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Please continue soon 

Posted: 4 years ago

ShenzK, such a good write up! I enjoyed reading this! I feel bad for poor Abir who couldn't get a first date. I love how Kuhu and Kunal are positive characters who genuinely care for their siblings. Please write more.. would love to read more!

Posted: 4 years ago

Oh gosh 

I love how flirtatious Abir is in this 

I think somehow the show and you get his nature absolutely bang on

It's always endearing never inappropriate 

But, cannot wait to read what happens next 

Intersted to see how Mishti feels about this 

As always a big thank you for writing these lovely snippets 😊

Posted: 4 years ago

U have written so well.

Btw date Ko meeting kyon Bana diya. 

Plz write more

Posted: 4 years ago

 I could absolutely envision Abir with the zephyr caressing his neck and tousling his hair ..☺️it was amusing to see him trying to regain his composure!!πŸ˜†.. Kuhu’s rejoinder was an added bonus πŸ˜† waiting for the next πŸ˜Š

Posted: 4 years ago

Lol...Abir k plans coffee bigad Gaye...πŸ˜†

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by meen123


meri morning kabi kabi Abir jaisi ho jati hai.. And one of my dream scenarios they have gone to coffee which gets crashed. 

I agree but mostly for my sanity🀣 because right now I'm wide awake.. 

They'll have plenty of chances with this project. My mind is concocting different things right now. I'm sure you'll come up with something great 

I can see it started as steamy one then blended into a frustrating oneπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Abir and his dreams. πŸ˜‚ I bet he has a lot more of these dreams with coffee dates and beyond. That too without being crashed. πŸ™ˆ

Oh it does. His chances are pretty bright though. With project, it's just an added advantage. I have a few to get onto with. 

By the way, he won't always end up frustrated. Kabhi na kabhi toh chance mil hi jayega to let off his steam. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by vssdp


I feel bad for abir πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Coffee date turns out in a highly professional meeting with the uninvited duo 

You started with abir's neck, and my imagination started  running wild πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Please continue soon 

Oh, Abir feels bad for himself too. πŸ˜‚

I had to stop at the neck, had I gone any further I would have entered the danger zone. My imaginations might run way more wild. 

I will. There's more to this coffee date. Just saying. 

And Thanks. :)

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by socioboss9797


ShenzK, such a good write up! I enjoyed reading this! I feel bad for poor Abir who couldn't get a first date. I love how Kuhu and Kunal are positive characters who genuinely care for their siblings. Please write more.. would love to read more!

Thank you so much, socio. I am glad you enjoyed this. Don't worry he is going to get one, someday. I believe, situations are bitchy enough to destroy a relationship, I don't want bitchy-vampy people around them. Honestly, I like bonds like these. The ones with concern and affection. Not like the show, they unbearable there. 

I will write more. I have more coming on this and otherwise as well. So you surely have more coming your way to read. :)



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