First of all, I totally loved that you used Veena's POV rather than Prerna or Bajaj's. It gave us a fresh space to look at the story.
The way you described the heartbreak and what lead to it was super. Slowly yet steady.π
Then Sneha ki cute entry. How soon Prerna and the little girl went on to be emotionally dependent on each other
Then came Mr Bajaj with a raaz! Sneha isn't his daughter but his ex-wife and her husband's! Yet, he accepted her as his own daughter. I love the way how humbly he asked Veena for Prerna's hand in marriage and how, in just a few minutes, Veena knew this man was the one for her daughter.
How quick and simple was the shaadi! And then slowly, RB and PRB's relationship developed over time. Ab ek ek baat par kya bolu. Every moment was amazing!
And the end, omg! How much I loved their bickering!!!!!!! It was hilarious and endearingπ
And how sweet is Bajaj the Damaad! Deal of Veena's life de daali aur successful bhi ho gaya, as always β€οΈ
First of all, I totally loved that you used Veena's POV rather than Prerna or Bajaj's. It gave us a fresh space to look at the story.
The way you described the heartbreak and what lead to it was super. Slowly yet steady.π
Then Sneha ki cute entry. How soon Prerna and the little girl went on to be emotionally dependent on each other
Then came Mr Bajaj with a raaz! Sneha isn't his daughter but his ex-wife and her husband's! Yet, he accepted her as his own daughter. I love the way how humbly he asked Veena for Prerna's hand in marriage and how, in just a few minutes, Veena knew this man was the one for her daughter.
How quick and simple was the shaadi! And then slowly, RB and PRB's relationship developed over time. Ab ek ek baat par kya bolu. Every moment was amazing!
And the end, omg! How much I loved their bickering!!!!!!! It was hilarious and endearingπ
And how sweet is Bajaj the Damaad! Deal of Veena's life de daali aur successful bhi ho gaya, as always β€οΈ
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OMG ANKIE this was such an amazingggghgh OS prerish cute nok jok at the door was adorable π³ i loved how bajaj went to SN to ask for veena's approval for the marriage even though pre already yes bol chuki thi ππΌ i loved how u narrated the whole story through veena's eyes ππΌ that was refreshing to read
Also sneha's hisTory that she is not bajaj's blood πmost unexpected surpriseπ²
I loved how bajaj announced to veena 'WE ARE EXPECTING'β€οΈ
ps. Ankie bache u have turned my boring sunday into happy sundayπ€
& GET WELL SOON β€οΈ
Thank you so much. I am glad this stupid work of fiction of mine made your sunday into a happy sunday. I am SO HAPPY βΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈ
Thank you. I am feeling much better now. Just toe hurts it will for a few days. And will be fine again ,π thank you so much π€π€π€
even for the show i dont want Sneha to be Bajju ki beti. Then hogi true Soulmate wali story βΊοΈ also when his ex wife comes back PreRish will give a good fight. βΊοΈ
Thank you so much. I am glad this stupid work of fiction of mine made your sunday into a happy sunday. I am SO HAPPY βΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈ
Thank you. I am feeling much better now. Just toe hurts it will for a few days. And will be fine again ,π thank you so much π€π€π€
U know just the other day I was thinking of writing OS on sneha not being bajaj 's daughter π€£ GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE π
U know just the other day I was thinking of writing OS on sneha not being bajaj 's daughter π€£ GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE π
U know just the other day I was thinking of writing OS on sneha not being bajaj 's daughter π€£ GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE π
OKAY I am CRYING ππππππππππππππππππ THANK YOU DO MUCH
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