GUDDAN AKSHAT JINDAL (OS)

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Posted: 4 years ago

As Antra was standing in balcony and observing the house ...whole environment is changed...this ia not the same house she left...

Everything was of her...she makes every decision...what to cook..how the things will happen..

But why this guest...this girl Guddan is doing all the things like..she is doing this all for a long time..

She is not liking her...everyone was seems to be dependent on her..

Maa: Guddan..beta dekh na kal hi naya chasma aya tha..pta nahi kha rakh diya mne..

Gudd: Maa ji ayiye hum btate hai..humne hi to rakha tha..

Laxmi: hume to samajh hi nahi a rha ki konsi saree phne..aap bataiye naa

Gudd: ye red wali ..and smiles at her..

Kishore: nashta bhi tayyr nahi hai..mai late ho rha hu..

Gudd: bas 2 min kishore ji..and she serves him..

Vard: aaj bht imp meeting hai..aapka wo best of luck bolo naa..last time meeting bhut acchi gyi thi..

She smiles and fed him chocolate..

Every servant is asking her for work..

She was guiding her bahus..all three are working under her instructions..

And then she got shock of her life...when he called her..

Aj: Guddan...guddan...mera koii saman nahi mil rha kha rakha hai tumne...

And she rushed straight to her room...she also went behind her but hidden to both of them..

Gudd: kyu chilla rhe hai...Antra ji hai ghar mai bhul gye kya..

Aj: mai to bhul hi gya..aur koii bhi chz mil hi nahi rhi thi..

She went to his wardrobe..and take out his things with ease..like she did that every day..

As she was leaving..he held her hand 

Aj: kuch khaya subha se..raat ko bhi bina khaye so gyi thi...

Gudd: nahi wo kl hume bhuk nahi thi aur abhi ...abhi aapne bhi nahi khaya..to hum kese 

Aj: tumhe bhuk bilkul shen nahi hoti..fr kyu bhukhi rheti ho..chlo phele dono nashta karte hai..

Both went down to the table where all other members are sitting..after a while Antra also joins them...she was silent just watching thing unfolding infront of her..

Aj signals Laxmi and she serve Guddan milk ..

Guddan look towards Aj and he gave her stern look..and she gulped it at once..

Antra was watching this..

Antra:Akshat mne tumhara fav pasta banwaya hai..khaoge nahi..

And she start serving him..

Guddan put her bowl away...she also make poha for him..

He saw her and asked for poha..

Aj: Antra mera taste badal gya hai...Maa zara poha pass kariyegaa..

Guddan served him..and Antra was fuming with anger..

As Akshat was leaving..he went to kitchen secretly and pecked on Guddan's forehead...

As he left..Antra dragged guddan to the hall and throw her on the floor..

Antra: kabse dekh rhe hai..tum humare ghar walo ka har kaam kar rhi ho..mehmaan ho naa..fir kyu sab kuch ghr ki bahu ki tarha kr rhi ho..ye jo jagha tum lene ki kosis kr rhi ho wo humari hai..aur tum humare bedroom mai ese hi bina knock kiye ghush jati ho..aur tab jab humare pati shirtless the...aur jo yha ishare chal rhe the...sab dekh rhe the hum..

Khud ka pati to sath rehta nahi..aur humare pati ko fasana chati ho...aaj hi nikalenge tumhe hum is ghar se..

Guddan was silently crying and all others were watching the scene..

Guddan stood up ...

Gudd: humne kuch galat nahi kiya hai..wahi kiya hai jo humara kaam hai...

Antra : ye ghar mera hai..Antra Jindal ka..aur yha wahi hota hai jo mai chati hu..

Tum niklo abhi humare ghar se..

Aj: Guddan kahi nahi jyegi..

All turned towards him..

Antra: kyu Akshat kyu nahi jyegi..kyuki isne humare jane ke baad tumhara dil lgakr rakha tha..

Guddan closed her eyes..

Aj: Antra!!

Iske sath koii bhi badtameezee mai bardast nahi karunga..koii haq nahi hai tumhara ise kuch bhi khne ka...aur nahi ise ghar se bhar nikalne ka...

Infact agar ye chahe to esa kar sakti hai tumhare sath...kyuki..ye ghar iska hai..GUDDAN AKSHAT JINDAL ka...meri patni..is gharki saas hai ye..

Antra was in shock...

Antra: to tumne dusri shhadi kar li..isse..itni kam umar ki ladki se...ye….ye ladki to hume phele din se hi ajeeb lag rhi thi…isi ne tumhe fasaya..

Aj: patni hai wo meri..pyar karta hu mai usse..aur izzat bhi…kuch bhi ulta seedha nahi sunuga uske bare mai..

Itne dino se kya ho rha hai sab dekh rha hu mai….jo tum kar rahi ho wo bhi aur jo dusre kar rhe hai wo bhi…(glared at Durga and Saru) ..ma ichup tha kyuki meri patni nahi chati thi ki mai uski bahuyon ko kuch kahu…aur uske ghar aye mehmaan ke sath ese behave karu…

Lekin tum..tum sab ne majboor kar diya mujhe..

Antra:  mehmaan…mai mehmaan..aur ye ladki tumhari patni..aree ise pata hai ki pati patni ka rishta kya hota hai..tum dono ke beech to esa..

Aj: jo humare beech hai wo tum kabhi nahi samajh pyogi…aur pati patni ka rista to tumhe nahi pta kesa hota hai..is rishtey mai dono barabar hote hai…lekin humare beech to kabhi esa tha hi nahi..humesa hota wahi tha jo tum chati thi…

Agar  tum kuch seekhna chati ho meri patni Guddan se seekho…ek dusre ke liye jaan bhi de sakte hai hum…aur jaroorat padne par le bhi sakte hai..

Pta hai kya Antra..tumhe thoda aur jaldi a jana chahiye tha…tab tumhe samajh ata ki GUDDAN AKSHAT JINDAL kya chz hai…

And  he went towards her and put his hand on her one cheek….

Aj:  abhi kch dino seye bhut samajhdarr ho gyi hai..itni ki tumhare itna sab karne par bhi chup hai…nahi to puri sherni hai meri Guddan…kisi ko nahi chhodti..khaskar ki use jo humare beech ane ki kosis kare..

And guddan smiled at him..

Gudd: hum itne bhi seedhe nahi hue hai..wo to bas inki tabiyat beech mai aa rahi thi…aur rahi baat durga ji aur saru ki to..wo humari bahuyen hai..hume pta hai unhe kab aur kese thik karna hai..

She went towards Antra..

Gudd: aapne kha tha na aapko apne pati ke ass pass ladkiyan madrati hui acchi nahi lagti…bilkul esa hi hota hai…kisi bhi patni ko esa hi lagta hai..

Aur  hume bhi..jab aap jabardasti humare pati se chipakti thi…lekin hum aapki tarha nahi hai Antraji..agar hote to aap phle din hi ghar se bhar hoti…kyuki hume phle din se pta tha ki Jindal shab sirf humare hai ..apke liye to unke man me sirf sympathy hai..

Dadi came forward..

Dadi: tu ise rishtey nibhana kya sikhayegi..tune to kabhi lalla ko is parivar se judne hi nahi diya..humesa use bhar ke kaam..aur khud mai hi uljha kar rkha…mere lalla ko uske parivaar ke pass meri Guddan layi hai..ab wo sabko samjhta hai..sabki chinta karta hai aur sabka dhyan rakhta hai..

Aj: to ab to tum samajh gyi hongi na tumhari jagha..aur Guddan ki jagha..ab faisla guddan legi..kyuki is ghar ke sare faisle lene ka haq usi ka hai..

Bolo guddan..

Gudd: hum aapko ghar se bhar nahi nikalenge…laxmi bahu Antraji ke liye guest room tayyar karwa dijiye…

Mehmaan hai aap is ghar ki jabtak chahe rh sakti hai…lekin mehmaan thode din ke liye hi acche lagte hai..

Aur durga bahu aaj se kitchen ka sara kaam aapka..wo kya haina khali bethe behte dimag thoda jayada chalne lga hai aapka..

Aur saru bahu..baki ke ghar ke kaam aapke…to gin lijiye kitne kaam hai..aur aap dono hume akele mai baat karte hue na mil jye..nahi to aap janti hai ki aapki saas kya kya kar sakti hai..

Aur  Antra ji aapka sara kaam laxmi bahu karengi..aap mehmaan hai..aram kijiye..

Aj  was admiring her proudly…she turn towards him..

Gudd:  ese hi dekhte rahenge ya kaam par bhi jyenge…ab hum sab sambhal lenge..aap tension mat lijiye..

He  came forward and cupped her face and kissed her on forehead..

Aj: mujhe pta hai tum sab sambhal logi..

And he take her leave..

Three persons are happy while other three were fuming in anger..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hayee hayee Jindal Saab ne dil jeet liye 

Meri Guddan puri sherni hai waah kya dialogue hai

Kash show mein bhi yeh Antara chudial ka isse tarah band baje mazaa aajayega 🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

superb ....kaash Guddan main bhi aisa hi ho ...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kya baat Kya baat Kya baatttt....

Akshan rocked and bhootni gang shocked....

Hope to see this in show also....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aaye haaye 

Serial me bhi agar antara ki iss tarah band baj jaye to maja aa jaye na 😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yeh Best hai!!! 👏

I loved Guddan's BBB to Antara and Chorni-Dayan jodi was just 😆 Maza aa gaya...!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing

Bhootni aunty ka mast bbb hua

Do.write more and continue ff woh ajnabee soon