24th June not-so-brief update with commentary

Posted: 4 years ago

---> Guddu hands over the ring to AJ & says, she has committed a mistake, that she got ready for engagement. So keep the ring with himself, she doesn't want to any engagement or keep any relation with him bas !

---> AJ tries to say, "guddan..." but she says, his Guddan is dead, not to take her name after today. Anyways since Antra ji is back, there is no need of this Guddan. Since always, in his heart, their relation & even in this room, Antra's pic has been there. 

---> Now when she came back to take her right, now there is no need of this sautan in his life right ? She doesn't want to stay with him. No relation..... she sees her picture in the wall & continues, the natak he did of putting away Antra ji's photo & replacing it with hers, is not needed. 

---> She goes on to take of the picture from the wall.  AJ stops her holding her by arm  asks what is she doing ? 

---> Guddu says, she is doing the right thing, what is the need of this pic when there is no need of her in the house ? 

---> AJ pulls her away from the pic & bring her to their previous positing & tries to explain, "dekho, Antra..." Guddu interrupts with venting out her frustration, "Antra, Antra, Antra....", he never understood her dard right ? he is only concerned about Antra ji, did he ever think about her ? how much takleef she feels ? till date, she has been filling in for Antra's place right ? she even forgot what to call herself ? A saas ? A bahu ? A patni ? A dost ? or .....or a sautan ? AJ looks taken aback. 

---> She says ok, for him she accepts,... she is ready to call herself "sautan" too. But now ? now Antra ji has come back right ? now what is her kaam ? he should stay with her as she was his past, now she is her present, he should make his future with her, she doesn't want to stay here. She can't stay here as teesra in this relation. She can't bato her pati & her haq. She knows, he even wants the same that she should not keep any rishta with him. Then its ok, she is making his job easier, by making him azaad from this relation. 

---> Guddu tries to go but AJ gets hold of her arm. Guddu apologizes to AJ in her thought saying that she had to talk to him like this for his own good. 

---> Guddu gets teary & asks why is he grabbing her hand ? He knows na he can't ? She asks him to leave her hand. 

---> AJ smiles slightly & turns her around as she wipes tear from her face. He cups her face & turn it to face him as tears flow from her eyes. He says, she watches SRK's pictures but does acting of B-grade movie villains. So much anger ? does she know, she is doing the acting of being bad so bad that even by mistake, if she gets some negative role, then she shouldn't do it as audiences will start laughing instead of getting scared & producers will be facing loss. She is that cute, he says with smile. (aww....  So now we know Jindal saab has experience of watching B-grade movies πŸ˜† kabhi Guddiya ke saat bhi dekh liya karo πŸ˜‰)

---> Guddu hugs him & he reciprocates without any delay & pats her head comforting her while smiling as she cries in his arms. 

---> He asks her to say, why did she lie, doesn't want to stay with him ? 

---> Guddu replies, what would she do if not lie ? does he know, all the guests downstairs are making so much baatein ? 

---> She separates from him & says, she knows, that due to Antra's return he is stuck in majhdhaar. How can she ask him to choose ? she can't do this. 

---> He holds her shoulder & asks, she felt she will go away from him ? She looks at him helplessly & he cups her face & asks, & he will let her go ? Hargiz nahi Guddan ! 

---> Yes, he didn't expect Antra to come in front of him like this, he didn't know what happened to him but he is definitely not stuck in any majhdhaar. He cups her face & says, she is his kashti & she is his kinara too. He doesn't want to lose his present due to his past.  She is his present & future. And due to Antra coming back, this truth is not going to change a bit. He promises her. 

---> She asks him then all that happened, downstairs, what was that ? 

---> He says his concern for Antra is just the bunyaad of the salo purana rishta that he spent with her together. Now that relation isn't there, but bas fikr is there.  ( and aab ye fikr bhi bhaar mein jaane wala hai πŸ˜›πŸ₯³)

---> Guddu cries & hits on his chest asking why didn't he say her ? pata hai how mushkil it was for her ? how tough it was for her to say that she doesn't want to stay with him, not nibhao this rishta. Truth is, she wants to stay with him in every janam, she only wants to see him as her pati. AJ holds her hand & smiles. ( Matlab "Antra" deleted )

---> She doesn't know why her mann is ghabraoing ? she is not understanding anything. he won't leav....

---> AJ interrupts with sshhh.... putting his finger on her lips & says sternly, main tumhe kabhi bhi chhod kar nahi jaunga. Everything will be alright. Once Antra comes back to senses, he would say the truth of their relation to her. 

---> Guddu asks but will she understand ? 

---> AJ says she will have to understand, their relation, all that has happened in all these years, he will make her understand. He will make her understand, he promises. 

---> He pulls her in a hug. 

--->In guest room, Nautanki doctor is checking the bhootni. Bhushan asks where are Guddu & damad ji ? 

---> Akshan come holding hand in hand, AJ holds Bhushan's hand & tells that, his concern for Guddu is lazmi. He knows that, at this moment, there are many questions in his mind but, he will just tell this much that, Bilkul fikr mat kijiyega. He & Guddu have talked among themselves & as soon as bhootni wakes up, he will tell the full truth of his relationship with Guddu. He will tell her Guddu is his wife, not any mehman. 

---> Nautanki doctor says what ? she is his wife ? as him his ship just sank. AJ replies yes, kyun ? 

---> Nautanki says, he can't say this to her.  After staying in coma for so long, her brain is very weak. With such a big jhaka, it can be very dangerous. Dayan is happy. ( khus ho le.... ek aur tamacha khane ka waqt qareeb aa raha hai... πŸ˜ˆ)

---> AJ says but this is truth, that Guddu is his wife, so how can he not say that ? 

---> Nautanki says, its not about not telling the truth, but about telling the truth at the right time. Her brain is not ready for such new information. He has to keep things as much close as possible to as it was before she left. They don't know how will her brain react to anything new. Her life can be at risk too. Hence he will advice, them to tell her everything dheere dheere. Baki nirnay is theirs.  ( CHAL bhag panauti ! πŸ€¬ Nikal ! manhoos ! kash ki raste mein tera accident ho jaye & tu ilaaz ke liye wo dusra nautanki doctor ke paas pauche ! πŸ˜ˆ) 

--->  Chorni expresses her happiness saying even if bhootni's time is bad, their time is good. Both uparwala & nichewale are with them. Dayan smiles & isharoes her to be quite. ( I hate that smile on dayan's face & everytime i see that, I feel like slapping her even if she doesn't say a word & is smiling. Anyways the nadaan witches don't understand, the whole kaynaat is is doing saazish to make Akshan's bond even stronger than ever πŸ€“)

---> AJ asks Dadi how can he hide this truth from bhootni ?  Bhootni asks kaisa sach ? 

---> Bhootni has woken up while from nautanki sleep. The nautanki doctor goes to AJ & says, she has come to senses & now he has to take bohat accha dhyan of her ( kyun ve ? what do you mean by "rakhna hoga" ? koi zabardasti hai ? samaj nahi aata tereko ? wo kyun dhyan rakhe iska ? he has a beautiful hot jawan wife now wo teri baat kyun maane ? tu jaldi foot yaha se ! )

---> he adds another bakwas line of, to keep in mind of all what he said & leaves finally. 

---> Bhootni sits up & asks AJ why is he standing so far ? she calls him to sit next to her. ( Cause tu abhi uske liye ek parai aurat hai ! πŸ€“) 

---> AJ sits after a lot of hesitation. Bhootni holds his hand & says, she knows he has a lot to say to her but lets start from here, what is the truth ?

---> AJ is thoughtful & all others are tensed. Guddu comes & says, she will say. She says the truth of engagement, she asked na ? she was asking right whose sagai was it ? its just that. 

---> Bhootni says, oh yes, she says with a nautanki face, who is the "unlucky" couple whose sagai stopped for her ? ( chup bait bey panauti, sabse unlucky toh tu hai ! just wait for the epic baizzati & zillat ke ladu with which you will be sent back πŸ˜ˆ phir iss word ka samaj aayega tujhe ! badi aayi Akshan ko unlucky kehne wali )

---> Guddu says, this was Angu & Revti's sagai. This is Revti & this is their mummy papa. Bhootni does namaste. 

---> Bhootni asks Guddu & she ? in what relation is she here ? ( teri toh ! abhi abhi bola na usne "humare" mummy papa while introducing Bhushan-Lomri ? sunai kam deta hai kya ? dimag ke saat saat kan bhi kamzoor ho gayi hai kya ? And what type of question is this to ask a guest ? that phasing of question was not at all polite, manners coma mein chhodke aayi hai kya bey tu ?  πŸ˜‘)

---> She further asks, does she even has a mangetar ?  dayan & chorni are very happy as Guddu looks at AJ. Bhootni asks AJ why isn't she saying anything ? ( tereko kya bey ? tujhe jo janna tha wo jaan liya na ? ab Guddu ki mangetar ka achar dalegi ? after coming to senses who inquires so much about a guest's mangetar ? before going to coma was she a rishte wali aunty ? πŸ€ͺ )

---> Bhootni says, she is so sundar, that whoever marries her will be very lucky ( jali na ? teri jali na ?  πŸ˜ˆ)

---> Guddu says, no she has no mangetar, but she is here as Angu's to-be- wife's sister in her & Jindal saab's ghar. 

---> Laxmi is on verge of crying. 

---> Guddu says this is the only relation of hers with this house. 

---> Bhoonti stands up & AJ helps her. Bhooti says why is she saying such ? she clings to AJ who is least interested & says she is a mehman in their ashiyana & mehman are bhagwaan ka roop. She is always welcome to be here. ( aur tu toh mehman bhi nahi hai.... just a refugee. Our Akshan's dil are bada, they are just letting the refugee feel at home out of sympathy )

---> Laxmi bahu looks like she is in pain seeing Guddu like this. 

---> Bhootni congratulates, Revti & hugs her. Meanwhile Akshan do luka chupi with eyes. AJ keeps looking at his guddiya & looks like he isn't liking bhootni's company at all. 

---> Guddu tries to go, but bhootni holds her hand & turns her around. Mannerless bhootni holds Guddu's MS & asks she told the has no mangetar then this MS ? ( seems like wakai iska dimag kamzor hai ! if she is wearing a MS, it means she is married & husband ko pati kehta hai not mangetar πŸ€“)

---> Guddu takes her MS out of her hold & says she means to say...she was about to say her mangetar... so nadaan dayan says the obvious that Guddu has pati not mangetar. her pati has went for some work, so he couldn't come. 

---> Bhootni says, she knew it how can anyone let such a beautiful girl in Indore stay single ? (exactly & soon the man beside you will make her, his baby's mummy ) 

---> She herself chipkaos to an not-interested AJ's hand & says, just look at herself, since before shaadi he is pada hua bahind her & still chipkaoed to her. ( hume dikh raha hai, waha khare har ek ko bhi dikh raha hai except may be dayan & chorni that, kaun kiss se chipak raha hai πŸ€“)

---> Bhootni giggles like a fool & rests her head on AJ's shoulder. 

---> Guddu says to bhootni that she is very lucky but bhootni says, her husband is really very unlucky, does anyone go leaving like this ? She asks her not to worry she will talk to him. ( why so nosy aunty ? πŸ€“ pakka she has been a rishte wali aunty all this years. Ye kabhi coma gayi hi nahi ! )

---> Guddu says no, not to do so, he is stuck in some majburi or else he never does anything like that. 

---> Bhootni asks what type of majboori in front of parivaar ? does she knows how busy AJ stays ? yet when there is a family occasion, he never leaves her alone. ( aur teri portrait ko kamre se akela bahar chhod aya hai apni marzi se )

---> Bhootni adds, Guddu should also tell to her husband that those are moments of happiness. No problem, if not her, AJ will talk to him or both of them will do & also give him some tips. Afterall, she is her to-be devrani's badi behan, this much haq they have. ( abe mu band kar apni. Jab se khola hai bak bak kiye jaa rahi hai ! ) 

---> Guddu says, thank you but not to say anything such as he is very good. Had he not been majboor today, he would have been standing by her side. Exactly how, Jindal saab is standing with her. (Except Jindal saab would have done that more than willingly πŸ˜³)

---> Dadi says, enough of the talking, now let bhootni take rest. This can go on. 

---> All are about to leave, with AJ following Guddu, bhootni stops him holding his hand & asks him where is he going & asks him to stay. Dadi, Laxmi, Saru & Dayan turn around & see this. Dayan & chorni enjoy. 

---> AJ agrees hesitantly & everyone else leaves except Guddu who walks slowly. 

---> Bhootni makes him sit & lies down on his lap. Guddu stops at the door & turns around & AJ looks at her. 

---> Bhootni holds his hand & does some bakwaas reminding him, when she used to fall sick, he would sit by her like this. & whole night he would caress her head. No one can love as much as he loved her. 

---> AJ looks at his guddiya as if he just wants to throw away the burden on his lap & rush to hold her in his arms. 

---> In the kitchen, Guddu opens a strawberry icecream & haves some & remembers AJ touching bhootni's cheek. She takes out a chocolate icecream & has some & recalls the bedroom scene moments back. She takes out vanilla ice cream & has some. 

----> She takes a bowl, mixes all 3 & starts having but AJ comes & grips her hand. He takes away the spoon & keeps the bowl down. He turns her holding her arms & makes her face him. 

---> He asks her lovingly, was she going to eat all the ice cream brought for the mehman alone ? what if her tabiyat got kharab ? 

---> Guddu replies, all his mehman left right ? now the only one mehman is left na ? atleast let her do mu meetha. Anyways she is getting very angry let her cool it down by eating ice cream or else she will burst at someone. 

---> She tries to turn towards the table again but her turns her back with a pull to face him again. 

---> he asks is she angry cause their sagai stopped ? she says to leave her hand

---> But he ignores & asks or cause Antra held his hand that's why she is angry ?  Guddu says she told na to leave her hand. 

---> he says abit more loudly, or she is angry cause he couldn't say the truth of their relation in front of Antra ? 

---> Guddu says, no fark padta with any baat & struggles to get out of his grip. 

---> He pulls her closed & encases her in his arms & says, fark padta hai Guddan , her eyes are saying how much fark padta hai to her.


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p.s.  Pervy ko dher sari duwayein for his lambi zindagi taki aur flop "foolproof" plans bana sake. Beton ke liye dher sari lollipops ki kamna taki wo chup hi rahe ! & most important, 

Lakh di lanat tere mu tay Durga Jindal !  

Posted: 4 years ago

Yaar Kya episode tha mazaa aa Gaya

( CHAL bhag panauti ! smiley35 Nikal ! manhoos ! kash ki raste mein tera accident ho jaye & tu ilaaz ke liye wo dusra nautanki doctor ke paas pauche ! smiley15

And the other nautanki doctor will say that aapne inhe yahaan laane mein bahut der Kar di πŸ€ͺ

Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome post  ❀️and your commentary was too good🀣

Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing episode!! Never expected this much .. I was sure about ajs choice ... overall it was good πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.. 

Posted: 4 years ago

I so like your commentary genieπŸ’“πŸ’“

Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for wu πŸ€—

Commentry ke jariye to apne hamare man ki baat hi bol dali. I hope bhootni jindal apne khilaf koi saboot na chodne ke liye us docter ka accident krwa de aur vo docter apne bare bhai ke pass ja pahuche aur vo apna purana dialogue bole ye bechara to aise hi mar jayega uski sadistic baate sunkr🀣

Waise   jiske man me v jindal sahab ke prati krodh aur avishwas tha i hope kl ka episode dekhne ke baad akal aa gyi hogi agar nhi v ayi hogi tb v ham kuch nhi kr skteπŸ˜† Bhootni aunty agar kitchen ka scene v dekh leti na to wapis coma mein chali jayengi

Kl kitchen scene dekhne ke baad lag rha hai ki jindal sahab apne gudiya ke feelings ko uske juban pr lane ke liye is bhootni aunty ka istemal krne wale hai😈


p.s.  Pervy ko dher sari duwayein for his lambi zindagi taki aur flop "foolproof" plans bana sake. Beton ke liye dher sari lollipops ki kamna taki wo chup hi rahe ! & most important, 

Lakh di lanat tere mu tay Durga Jindal !  

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by TC_FA


Yaar Kya episode tha mazaa aa Gaya

( CHAL bhag panauti ! smiley35 Nikal ! manhoos ! kash ki raste mein tera accident ho jaye & tu ilaaz ke liye wo dusra nautanki doctor ke paas pauche ! smiley15

And the other nautanki doctor will say that aapne inhe yahaan laane mein bahut der Kar di πŸ€ͺ

& whoever takes him to the hospital, he will keep ranting pakaoing the person,

"aab aap aur hum kuch nahi kar sakte"

"bohat der ho chuki hai"

"inka bachna na mumkin hai" 

.....while himself doing nothing πŸ€£

Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you Captain for the wonderful WUπŸ€—

I loved reading your commentary 

Bhootni is 100% Nautanki

I loved Akshan scene, AKshat Jindal is vested his wife Guddan Akshat Jindal. When Guddan was attempting to remove the painting it pained him, like she was taking out a piece of his heart. To him its not a portrait its a part of him. πŸ˜³

Jindal Saab observes and keeps all of his wife's habits, likes and dislikes in mind.  Since Jindal Saab is health conscious in his engagement with his Gudiya, he kept Ice Cream as dessert something is wife enjoys. 

To me Bhootni Aunty is Nautanki & her presence is making Jindal Saab suffocate and he wants to throw her away. 

Posted: 4 years ago

Yesterday I told you captain that I also noticed something. 

I'm glad to know that you also noticed it that,

Jindal Sahab sach mein B grade movies dekhte hπŸ€ͺ

I was rofling after listening it .

Sach kaha aapne Jindal Sahab ko gudiya ke saath movie dekhni chahiye πŸ˜Ž

Aur Nautanki ko yhi salah dungi ki tera dimaag kharab ho chuka h, SRY ab tera kuch nhi ho sakta

Yeh Bhootni lagta h coma mein pakka marraige bureau kholke bethi thi. Isse badi panchayat h aur kitna bolti h, BAPREE... mera toh kaan dard karne lage the. 

Laxmi bahu toh❀️ le lo. Apni Saas ka dard ache se samajh rhi thi. 

Dayan aur chorni ko toh yhi kehna h ki tera bhi time aayega...

Guddu aur Jindal Sahab aap DIL le lo

Aur commentary ke liye aap bhi dil le lo

Posted: 4 years ago

One of the best episodes.the way guddan hugged aj.i did not expect to enjoy this much after antara's entry.

Thanks for the update captain πŸ€—



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