Bepannaah

The childhood Promise AdiYa OS

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The childhood Promise

Two kids were playing in the park.

They were none other than little Aditya and Little Zoya.

Zoya:How interesting this game is!

Adi:Exactly.

Zoya:Come Adi..we will play it again.

Adi:Ok Zoya.

They played the game again.

Zoya:Adi..let us play till evening.Because after today we won't be able to play.Right?You are going to London.

Aditya became dull:I will miss you Zoya.

Zoya:I will also miss you Adi.But promise me that you will chat with me online.

Adi:I promise you Zoya that we will chat daily online.You promise me that you come to chat daily.

Zoya:I will think about it.

Adi:What?

Zoya giggled.

Zoya:I was just joking.How can I not chat with you daily?I will chat with you daily without any fail.

Aditya smiled.

Zoya smiled:I wish we never get separated.

Adi:We will never get separated.When we grow up we will get married.

Zoya asked excitedly:Really?

Adi:Yes.

Zoya:Promise me that you will marry me when we become big.

Adi held her hand:Promise Zoya.

Zoya:I also promise to marry you Adi.

They both smiled.

They continued playing.

The next day Aditya flew to London with his family.

15 years have passed.Aditya and Zoya are adults now.Still they are best friends.All these 15 years they chatted online as they decided.

The Hooda family has decided to return to India.Both Aditya and Zoya are excited.

Aditya-Zoya were having video chat on the laptop.

Zoya:Adi..when are you reaching here?I can't wait anymore.

Adi:Chill Zoya.I am reaching on Saturday.

Zoya:Wow Adi.Only 2 more days.I am so excited.

Adi:Me too Zoya.

Zoya:But still 2 days are very long for me.

Why these days are moving so slow.

Adi:I just wish these 2 days pass very fast.I can't wait anymore.I am becoming restless.

They smiled.

Adi:Come to the park where we used to play daily.

Zoya:Sure Adi.That's the best place to meet.

Adi:Ya.

They chatted a lot.Aditya cracked jokes which made Zoya laugh.

Zoya:You are so funny Adi.

Zoya:Just like in childhood you are joking a lot now also.

Adi:And just like in childhood you are laughing listening to my stupid jokes.

They kept laughing.

Finally Saturday arrived.Zoya was really excited.

Zoya:Adi must have arrived.He must be waiting in the park for me.

Zoya went to the park with a lot of excitement.

There she saw a hooded person.Her heart beat faster due to fear.The hooded person unveiled his face.It was Aditya with a naughty smile.Zoya was surprised.

Zoya:Adi..you?

Aditya laughed:It was fun to see your scared face.

Zoya started beating him:How can someone do this prank?

Adi:Ok..sorry baba.

Zoya pouted.

Suddenly she embraced him.Aditya smiled.He got goosebumps in his stomach.

Haaa~aa AAaaaa~aaa

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Zoya:I am so happy to see you after many years Adi.

Adi:Me too Zoya.

Aditya thought:Zoya..you don't know how happy I am to see you.In the last 15 years we chatted a lot.But never ever I let you know that I love you.

How can I tell you that I love you?

Bepanah si mohabbat ki hai-i 

Dil ne bhi yahi chaht ki hai~ii

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Zoya smiled in his arms saying in her mind:I feel so protective in your arms Adi.

How can I make you understand that I love you a lot?

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a

 Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

Adi said in his mind:During childhood you wanted me to marry me.Do you still want to marry me?

Zoya said in her mind:Adi..do you remember that in childhood you promised me that you will marry me?Will you really marry me or was that proposal a childhood stupidity?

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a 

Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa


Zoya:Adi...now I won't let you go away from me.I spent 15 years without you and it was very difficult.

Adi:Even it was difficult for me to live without you.I don't want any separation now.

Zoya extended her hand:Promise me that you will not leave me and go.

Adi held her hand:Promise.

They smiled.

Zoya:Adi...you look the same in real life also.

Adi:You are slightly different from video chat.

Zoya:Really?

They both giggled.

Zoya:Adi.now you must be tired after a long journey.So go home and rest.Tomorrow we will celebrate your come back.

Adi:Sure Zoya.But the place will be decided by me.I really miss the street stall food which we used to eat together during childhood.I want to go there.

Zoya:Sure Adi,Instead of a restaurant we will go to the street stall and re-live our childhood moments.

Adi:Yes.

They did high five.

The next day...

Aditya and Zoya went to the street stalls where they used to go during childhood and bought food.

Zoya was eating from Aditya's plate also and Aditya was eating from Zoya's plate too.They enjoyed a lot.

Adi:I really enjoyed our India's spicy food.

Zoya smiled:Anyways you are not going back.So you can have it whenever you want.

Adi:Ya.

Zoya was invited to Hooda house for Diwali celebration.

Zoya also joined Aditya in decoration and lighting lamps.Aditya's eyes were fixed on her.


Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai 

Zoya noticed it and blushed.They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai

Aditya and Zoya were thinking of each other and blushing in their respective rooms..

Zoya:I have seen love in your eyes for me.I know that you also love me Adi.Then why don't you propose me?I think I will have to remind you of your childhood promise.

Aditya:From the way you look at me I understood how much you love me Zoya.I am going to propose you for sure.

Aditya rang up Zoya.

Adi:Zoya...let us go to the beach and spend our Sunday there.

Zoya:Wow...beach...I love it.I will surely come Adi.

Adi smiled:We will enjoy.

Zoya:Yes..we will enjoy like how we used to enjoy in our childhood.

Adi:Yes.

Adi said in his mind:I will propose you on the beach.

Zoya said in his mind:I will wear my best dress as this day on Sunday is going to be special.Because I will confess my love to you.

Zoya went to the beach in a beautiful light orange dress.

Aditya was mesmerized by her beauty.Zoya blushed thinking:Your eyes are full of love for me.



Haaa~aa AAaaaa~aaa 

Mai tha rehguzar 

Tune thama iss kadar 

Ab nahi na koi befikar 

Mai tujhme baant lu 

Yun khud ko humsafar 

Reh na jaye koi kasar

Adi:Zoya..why did you wear this dress?

Zoya:Why?You did'nt like it?

Adi:No.It's beautiful.You are looking damn beautiful in this.

Yun khud ko humsafar 

Reh na jaye koi kasar

But this is a beach.

Zoya:This is a special occasion for me.That's why I wore this.

Adi:Of course yes.It's a special occasion.

Zoya:What?

Adi:I will give you a surprise.

He led her to an area where there was a table and 2 chairs.Different kinds of icecreams were kept there.

Adi:We are partying here.Just both of us.This is why I called you here.

Zoya:Wow..What are surprise!In this hot climate icecream is so refreshing.

They both sat there and started having icecream.

Zoya:I am reminded of our childhood icecream moments.

Adi:To remind you of that only i arranged icecream here.

She smiled.

Adi and Zoya made castles with sand like how they used to do in childhood.

Adi:Zoya..let us enjoy in the sea waves.

Zoya:Sorry Adi.Now I am having cold.So I can't.You go enjoy.

Adi:Ok.

Adi wore his beach wear and let his body wet in the sea waves.Zoya smiled.

She started relaxing in the sun in various poses.

Adi's eyes got stuck on Zoya.

Her each movement was passionate for him.


Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a 

Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa 

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a 

Ab Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

He could not control anymore and came out of the sea.He walked towards her and pulled her closer.

Zoya was stunned:Adi...


Mere dil ko tere dil ki jarurat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai

They were so closer to each other that they could feel each others breath.

They looked at each other passionately.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki jarurat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai

Zoya's lips shivered:Adi..what are you doing?

Aditya took his hands off her.Both were breathing heavily due to their passionate closeness.

Teri sanson mai mujhe

 Guzara mil gaya 

Ho gaya mujhpe tera asar

Adi:Zoya..why should be there a formality between us?

We are best buddies.So without any formality I am finally telling you.I love you.

Yeh mohabbat teri lagge rabb ki koi mehar 

Khatm na ho chahte umr bhar

Zoya was surprised:Adi..

Adi:Sorry Zoya.I brought you here to propose you in a grand manner.but I am not able to propose you in a filmy style.I am a fool in that.So I confessed my love directly in the most simple manner.

Zoya:You fool!You only said that there is no need of any formality between us.Then why are you apologizing for a simple confession of love?

Adi smiled.

Zoya:Adi..Even I dressed up like this to confess my love to you in a grand manner.But I could'nt.

Aditya was surprised.

Zoya:So I am also confessing my love in the most simple manner.I love you Adi...


Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a

 Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

They both smiled happily and embraced each other.

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a

 Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

Zoya:Adi...do you remember that in childhood you promised to marry me?

Adi:Yes Zoya.How can I forget it?

For me,that was not a silly childhood promise.Zoya..you also remember that?

Zoya:Yes Adi.Since childhood I have been waiting for you to marry me.

He was surprised.

Adi:Since childhood I have been waiting to marry you.

She smiled.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki jarurat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai

 Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai

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Adi held her hand and asked:Zoya..will you marry me?

Zoya:Yes Adi..marry me soon.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki jarurat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai

 Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai

They embraced each other again.


Haaa~aa AAaaaa~aaa

The Wedding day...

Zoya was led to the mandap.As he promised Aditya held her hand

 and helped her to sit.

Bepanah si mohabbat ki hai-i 

Dil ne bhi yahi chaht ki hai~


Adi:I will never leave your hand Zoya.

Zoya:I know Adi.I have complete faith in you.

Bepanah si mohabbat ki hai-i 

Dil ne bhi yahi chaht ki hai~ii

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a

 Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

 Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a

 Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

Adi:Finally as per my promise I am marrying you Zoya.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai 


Zoya:Yes and we proved that our childhood promise to each other about marrying each other was serious and not a joke like others thought.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai 


Adi:Yes.

The rituals started and the Panditji started chanting mantras.

Haaa~aa AAaaaa~aaa 

Mai tha rehguzar 

Tune thama iss kadar 

Ab nahi na koi befikar 

They exchanged garlands.

Mai tujhme baant lu 

Yun khud ko humsafar 

Reh na jaye koi kasar

 They smiled at each other.

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a 

Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa 

Tere bina mera lagge na jiya-a 

Ab Tere liye hi dhadke jiyaa

With Saath phere,sindoor and mangalsuthra, Aditya and Zoya had a fairy tale wedding like they wished.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 


Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai

Their wedding night moved with passionate romance.

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai

Mere dil ko tere dil ki zaroorat hai 

Mere dil ko tere dil ki-i zaroorat hai(Bepannah).

The End

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Posted: 4 years ago

This isss soo beautiful!!👏 

HC childhood pic r soo cute😆 Jenni with baby snapchat filter🤣

awww the story isss so adorable❤️

Thanks for writing it out🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats on the OS! 

awesome OS!! 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful OS 👏

I really loved it!

Aditya's childhood pics are too cute and Zoya turned into a baby using the snapchat filters 😆

AdiYa in childhood made a promise to stay in touch and marry in the future...how cute.

Aditya returns after 15 years and their love for each other is still intact.

Aww..their first meeting reminded me of AdiYa's meet in the show when he returned post leap

The two love each other and are thinking whether the other also loves them the same or not. Budhhu people don't know that they can't love anyone else.

So Aditya plans to propose Zoya by the beach. Even Zoya thinks to confess when they meet there.

His planning was very beautiful and Zoya says yes 😳

In the end, the two got married and lived happily ever after. Perfect ending for a perfect couple and a perfect story

The pictures, song and the dialogues were beautiful as always.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Keep writing such wonderful stories

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice os dear

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely OS ❤️AdiYa's childhood scene was too cute and their promise to marry once they are adults 👍🏼I am happy that they also promised to stay in touch and did all this year's 😳Video chat was ❤️Adi scaring her 😛Their meet up and hug 😳Both thinking of their childhood promise 😉They relieving their childhood memories 🤗Beach proposal ☺️Very romantic scene ❤️Grand wedding 🤗Night was 🤪Song and pics ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice one...

BTW..

ZOYA'S CHILDHOOD PICS WERE AWESOME..LOL

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Posted: 4 years ago

Enjoy reading their journey.. 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was such a Beautiful and so Adorable OS