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Tumi Robe Nirobe - An AnuPre OS (REPOST)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Tumi Robe Nirobe - An AnuPre OS

Anurag Basu was humming Tumi Robe Nirobe, as he sat caressing the letter he had just finished writing. The letter for his beloved wife on the special day of their life... The letter that may take years to reach her, till he cross a thousand sea to meet his dearest...

Dear Prerna,

               On our third wedding anniversary, as I cherish all our treasured moments, all those wild adventures ignited by you, I'm writing this letter as a token of our adoration. I'm writing this letter to you, my darling, to let you know what it means to me to love you, cherish you, and take care of you... even after you are dead. I want you to love me just the same. Oye Ladki, even if you don't want to be in my way, you will linger by, in my fondest memories. For you can't help it, nor can I! Maa wanted me to move on, as she thinks I'm lonely, very lonely... But I could not Priyu, I could not! Even after two years, darling, you are my only fantasy, my only reality... I've met many nice girls dear, many of them. But you, dead, are so much more beautiful, so much more better than anyone else alive. All those Mishkas, Chandrikas, Aparnas and Komolikas - they all to me are ashes, nothing else but ashes... Writing this letter, I realised - we both can live again, yes we can! Drinking a drop of 'lethe' - you and me... Making sand castles, or drenching in the rain or we can learn French together, just like you wanted! When the charm of the 'lethe' will cease - I will be standing in front of you, with outstretched arms, crossing a thousand sea, I will come to mingle into your warmth -- to find a new reality of mine.

       Happy Anniversary Love

Yours ever,

Anurag.

Tumi robe nirobe , hridoye momo...

Tumi robe nirobe ...

Nibiro , nibhrito , purnimaa nishithini shomo ...

Tumi robe nirobe ...

Momo jibono joubono , momo okhilo bhubono ...

Tumi bhoribe gourobe ,

Nishithini shomo ...

Tumi robe nirobe ...

Jaagibe ekaki tobo koruno aakhii ...

Tobo oncholo chhayaa more rohibe dhaaki ...

Momo dukkho bedono , momo shokolo shopono ...

Momo dukkho bedono , momo shokolo shopono ...

Tumi bhoribe shourobhe ,

Nishithini shomo ...

Tumi robe nirobe - hridoye momo ...

Tumi robe nirobe ...


Translation by Rabindranath Tagore himself:

Thou shalt dwell in silence in my heart, like the full moon in the summer night.

Thy sad eyes shall watch over me in my wanderings. The shadow of thy veil shall rest upon my heart.

Thy breath like the full moon in the summer night shall hover about my dreams, making them fragrant!


English Translation of the Rabindrasangeet by me:

You are in the silent crevices of my heart,

my beloved-

like the blissful moonlight

of a full moon night.

Settled in my heart

ever so quietly.

You shall fill my youth

and my world alike

with pride

like the ever so fulfilling

moonlit night.

Oh my beloved, you are

in the silent crevices of my heart.

Your compassionate eyes

shall stay awake

to cover me

in their serene shade.

You shall fill my agonies and pain

dreams and desires alike

with your 'aromatic' honor and pride

much like the ever so blissful

moonlit night.

You shall stay in the silent crevices

of my heart,

ever so quietly.

P.S :- The translation might not be up to the mark. However, it was just an honest endeavor by me. 

Song Link (YouTube): 

https://youtu.be/VBLrAfpGtxY

Edited by Briti1721 - 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago

Keep writing more👍🏼❤️

I have read this before too, it is awesome⭐️

Just a friendly advice, when writing the next one keep the surprise element(death) in the last, Don't let the reader knew that she is dead till they reach the end😛

Will be waiting for the next OS, also do write one on miscarriage and anu consoling Pre😃😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: abcdexyz

Keep writing more👍🏼❤️

I have read this before too, it is awesome⭐️

Just a friendly advice, when writing the next one keep the surprise element(death) in the last, Don't let the reader knew that she is dead till they reach the end😛

Will be waiting for the next OS, also do write one on miscarriage and anu consoling Pre😃😃

OMG Thank You So Much For The Review. This Was A Repost And Straight Story With No Mystery, But Will Surely Keep Your Advice In Mind. Your Review Means The World To Me, Thank You So Much. Oh Yeah I'll Try To Write About A Miscarriage OS. xoxox. Thanks For Commenting! BTW Have You Listened The Song? 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Briti1721

OMG Thank You So Much For The Review. This Was A Repost And Straight Story With No Mystery, But Will Surely Keep Your Advice In Mind. Your Review Means The World To Me, Thank You So Much. Oh Yeah I'll Try To Write About A Miscarriage OS. xoxox. Thanks For Commenting! BTW Have You Listened The Song? 

🤗 u deserve it for the hardwork put in to write this and the translation

@bold will be waiting for it😛

Yes, the song is melodiously pleasant although i didn't understand it ☺

Edited by abcdexyz - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

This is more like poetry than OS!!👏 

Loved it! Keep writing! and yes,would love to read about Miscarriage OS😉😃

I dont know y never got the chance to read ur OSs *hitting my head hard*  

Well written!!😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Leenaaa

This is more like poetry than OS!!👏 

Loved it! Keep writing! and yes,would love to read about Miscarriage OS😉😃

I dont know y never got the chance to read ur OSs *hitting my head hard*  

Well written!!😳

Oh My My, Dear I'm Flattered Beyond Words. Your Comment Just Made My Day. Lots Of Love To You. Will Surely Keep Writing For Y'all.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: abcdexyz

🤗 u deserve it for the hardwork put in to write this and the translation

@bold will be waiting for it😛

Yes, the song is melodiously pleasant although i didn't understand it ☺

Hugs Right Back, Thank You So Much I'm Overwhelmed. 

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Originally posted by: Briti1721

Oh My My, Dear I'm Flattered Beyond Words. Your Comment Just Made My Day. Lots Of Love To You. Will Surely Keep Writing For Y'all.

U deserve this compliment❤️

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Originally posted by: Leenaaa

U deserve this compliment❤️

Aww I'm Honoured, Humbled And Flattered Beyond Words.