This is the first story of yours I read. The story plot is AMAZINGfull of romance, suspense and even action too.....this story was suggested by a friend when I asked her for some good Arshi FF and I am glad that she suggested me this one...the best way to spend lockdown thoughI loved the way you moved the story from sadness to happiness, from suspicion to belief, from hatred to love, from loneliness to companionship, love.... FULL OF LIFE......I enjoyed reading this story very much...the beauty of different places you have given in detail like Udupi, Hebri and sea beaches are fascinating and made me dream about the places The rituals and pooja 'Nagamandala and Bhoota Kola' you have mentioned in the story I never knew untill you explained it....The story is full of ups and downs with Arshi moments...... all in all the story is
Absolutely beautiful this story was.
Life always has a way of surprising us when we least except. Coincidences are just well planned happenings in our path through life.
I loved your Arnav and Khushi and the bond they shared.
Great work....going to read more of your stories now!
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I really liked the story Kavitha. I loved it until the portion Payal comes back alive. I will honestly tell you that I didn't care to find Payal alive and well, living with her son somewhere. I can't get over the fact that she stayed away from her parents in spite of being alive. I felt she should have somehow let them know that she was alive at least. No parent deserves to mourn their child and definitely not when he or she is alive and well! They may have had issues amongst themselves but they have never made either Khushi or Payal feel unwanted, right? And even that does not give any child the right to pretend to be dead. Her dad died mourning her !! That's just so piteous!!
Anyways, apart from that, I really liked the story. The mystery and romance. I think the Arnav in this story is one of the most genuinely good Arnav's I have ever read. I loved his characterization.
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