Sabse pehle to IPTO ki stories...she always says she has some hot stuff'''😆
Tum btao??
Mee..I'll suggest muskaan di's stories..
U me aur..,Geetanjali,mrityunjai,Guzaarish,Ipti di's illicit condition..of course my humshakals🤣 and the list goes on...
Aww baby such a lovely os this is.. As someone new to writing you have done a tremendous job. Kudos 👏 Please do write more.
Coming to the os - I loved the simplicity behind this story very much. And also this one is a lot different than your first attempt. That was humorous and this has deep layers.
A simple tale of one sided love from Maan's perspective. Loved how he described her and him. Lol mostly distinguishing between their variations. Geet of course accha hi gaayegi aakhir uska naam hi hain na Geet 😘
But then I laughed loud at that bathroom singer line..hahahah 😂😂
So Maan is quietly in love with her as they work in the same office. It seemed to me that Geet senses that Maan loves her, specially when she dragged him out to have fun on the trip but alas that was not the case. Good that Maan proposed at last since Geet was absent for days. She is yet to grasp the bomb dropped onto her. But she did that gladly by telling him that she loves him. Good that she took time. However what about her engagement? Oh well idc..Maaneet are together that matters only.
Thanks for sharing this lovely sweet story baby. Proud of you 💕
Edited by WaveTeal - 4 years ago