Akshan os- sanskriti..
Ok so this was not even decided... I read a post of Kavya n decided to write this..
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The moment he heard the news he was dumbstruck...he was numb....he doesn't even know how to reply on the phone ...
Then he heard her calling his name...
Kya hua Jindal Sahab ??...kya BAAT hai???..kiska call tha....
Firstly he look at her ...his eyes were blank ...then he looked at buaji ....who was very happy with family members....
He looked at her again n said...
Police station se call tha guddan...fufaji Ka accident ho Gaya hai ....
He said only this much to her... waiting for her reaction...kyaaa...magar kaise ...that's all she could just said at the moment....
When they give this news to buaji ....she lost her balance n was about to fall when guddan hold her .... She made her sit on the sofa .....she was crying hugging her...
She somehow managed to control her....
N that day too arrived when they heard the news that fufaji is no more.....
Buaji was in a great shock ...she was numb...not talking to anyone....looking at the zero ...her eyes were blank ...
Everyone in the house was sad ...
But there was Akshat in his room ....sitting on his bed ... wearing a white kurta pajama ....he did the last rites of fufaji as they don't have kids...n fufaji consider him as their child....
For Akshat also fufaji was there after his father passed away....
He was silent trying to calm himself ....behaving as much composed as he can ....
.When she entered In to the room
She has never seen him this much broken before ....she knows that he was not saying anything but there was a turmoil inside him....which was making him weak...
She walked towards him...his eyes were closed... although he knew that she was here ...but he didn't opened his eyes ...
She went in front of him n go to his level by sitting on her knees....he made a hold on his hands which was there on his knees...this was the moment when Akshat opened his eyes....
He looked at her ...there was her eyes filled with moisture... There was the strength which he needed the most...
She said in a low voice....
Sambhaliye Khud ko.....agar aap iss Tarah se haar man lenge to buaji ko kon sambhalega.....aap jante Hain na k unke liye aapki ahamiyat kya hai .....
Please....
She said with a request yet a determined tone....
Akshat said to her ...janta hu main ....ki main un k liye in k bete se Kam Nahi...magar main kya karu guddan ....main thak Gaya Hu ...Apne apno ko Khud se door Jate Dekh k ....16 Saal Ka tha main jab papa hame chhod kar chale Gaye...maa ne mujhe or angad ko sambhala ....main iss Kabil ban paya ki Apne pairo par khada ho saku .....USS waqt fufaji me hi mujhe papa Ka aks nazar Aaya ..unohone hamesha mujhe guide Kiya...Kabhi b ...mere Kisi b jokhim bhare faisle me unhone mujhe Akela Nahi chhoda ...or aaj wo BHI ...wo BHI muje chhod kar chale Gaye.....
By this his voice started choking.....
Guddan stood up to rub his back ....she rubbed his back gently n made him drink a glass of water .....she has never seen him this much weak ..she wanted to help him ...but was afraid of his reaction ...the consequence....of her condolences...
This was the moment when Akshat asked her.. Guddan bahut kamzor mahsoos Kar raha Hu aaj aisa laga Jaise phirse Maine papa ko kho Diya ... mujhse ye bardaasht Nahi ho raha ....guddan kya main....
Meanwhile she just nodded with her head n Akshat just wrapped his hands around her waist n dug his shoulder in her stomach....she reciprocate ....n held his head by her both hands ...by ruffling his hairs through her right hand ....she said....
Apko pata hai ...ansu bahana insaan ki kamzori Nahi Hoti ....yeh ansu ...jab ankho se girte Hain na to Dil Ka bojh Kam Kar jate hain ...or jab Dil par koi bojh Nahi Hota to yeh Apne apno k liye sabkuch kr sakta hai....aapko b Karna hai ...buaji or maa ko sambhalnaa hai apko ...
Akshat came out of the embrace...n looked at her ...she was glowing with the purity ...with strength she has given him...she sit beside him ...took of his specs...n wiped his tears with her hands .....she cleaned his glasses by his kurta n make him wear them again .....she come forward n kissed his forehead n said....
Ham hamesha Aapke sath Hain or jab BHI apko hamari zarurat hogi ....aapki patni aap k sath khadi hogi....
Hearing this Akshat's heart did a summersault n he just hugged her ....guddan hugged him back.....
After this they went to buaji n console her ...she cried her heart out on guddan's shoulder n slept....
When they came out they heard a noise of priests n some sadhvi woman in the hall ....
They were their to do the ritual of a widow lady....that is to make buaji bald...n made her wear a white saree always....
This was something which Akshat could not tolerate ...but he could not protest cause buaji herself called them....
But guddan protest....
Hearing the noise buaji Came outside...
Kya BAAT hai...buaji asked...n found what's the matter... guddan hamne hi Inge bulaya hai...yeh parampara Ka palan hame Karna Hoga ....
Kya aap sach me ye Karna chahti hai buaji....or agar ha to main sirf itna Janna chahti Hu ki aisa Karne se kya Hoga....
Guddan asked ...buaji was silent ...she got her answer...she stood in front of the priest n asked ...iski zarurat kya hai ...pandit ji ...
Pandit replied ye hamari sanskriti or parampara hai .....nari Ka dharama hai ki wo apne pati k mrityu k baad Apne sansarik sukh Ka tyaag Kar de ....
Guddan replied..
Kyon ...kyon sirf nari hi Apne pati k mrityu k baad sansarik Jeevan k sukh chhod de ....jabki ek. Purush to apni mrityu k baad b doosri shadi Kar Sakte Hain....kyon....
Priest replies
Kyo ki purush nari k rakshak hote Hain or rakshak k mrityu k baad ye zaruri h ki wo vairag dharan Kar le or yahi hamari parampara hai....
This is it...now the lioness roared...
Jab purush or parampara nari ki Raksha na Kar sake to unka mit Jana hi achcha Hota .....isiliye apni ye jhoothi or doguli (double sided) parampara Ka tamasha or kahin Ka k kijiye.....yeh Jindal Bhawan hai ....or is Jindal Bhawan me har Surat Ka Samman Hota hai ...or Yaha aisi koi parampara Nahi nibhayi jayegi Jo ek strre ko dukh de....
Pandit was highly ashamed but he said...lekin ham to Yaha apni sanskriti ki Raksha Karne Aaye the...
Guddan said in a firm tone...
Sanskriti kuaan (well) Nahi hota ....Nadi Hoti hai ...or Nadi ki Raksha rok Kar Nahi ki ja Sakti ..... Sanskriti ko samay k sath bahane dijiye ye apni Raksha Khud Kar legi.....
Saying this she folded her hands in a namaste.... All the gang was ashamed so they ran away....
Buaji came n said sorry to her ...n hugged her....today Akshat Jindal was proud of her wife .....m
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Bhai mere chal rahe hai exam ...4 din Ka gap Mila to Likh Diya ye....agar achcha Nahi laga to Ande tamatar joote Sab allowed hai....
Check my work on akshan in the index of FF ....I have updated it ..n will update it in time to time....
Superb OS, Kavya👍🏼⭐️
Loved the breakdown of Akshat Jindal & opening up his feelings to Guddan & she consoling him.⭐️
Also liked Sanskriti comparison to river👏
Just my view, Bua's hug will be more impactful at the end if you add Bua remembering the flashbacks of witnessing the Akshan emotional convo when she had gone to tell them about Sadhvis upcoming and also of Guddan consoling her at the same time giving strength to Akshat through her eyes while hugging Guddan with happy tears.
All the best for your exams👍🏼
