I don't want to be happy by hurting you :MauNal OS

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Posted: 4 years ago

I don't want to be happy by hurting you

Kunal has become a restless frustrated person.He is scared if he will hurt Mauli if Nandini comes between them.

Mauli:Kunal..let's do shopping.I will call Nandu also.

Kunal lost his control and shouted:Why are you always calling Nandini?Why are you letting Nandini come between?Why do you trust me blindly Mauli?

Tears which flowed from Kunal stunned Mauli along with his words.

Mauli:What are you saying Kunal?I trust you completely.What's the problem with that?

Kunal:Please don't trust me blindly Mauli.I don't deserve your trust.

Mauli:I can't understand what you are saying?And when I am calling Nandini to join us how does the matter of trust come?

Kunal could not keep it anymore and burst out:Don't bring Nandini here.I am scared whether I will fall in love with her more and more.

Mauli was shocked.She could not believe her ears.

Mauli:What did you say Kunal?My ears are cheating me.

Kunal:No Mauli.You heard it right.

He burst into tears.

Kunal:Mauli...I have started falling for Nandini.

Mauli was shattered.She felt that her world was crushing down.But she remained calm.

She sat down due to weakness.

Mauli stammered:Does Nandini also love you?



Kunal:I think yes.That's what I understood from her face.May be she left our house as she also did'nt want to betray you.

Mauli was shattered.The 2 people whom she trusted the most fell in love with each other behind her back.

Mauli was numb.

Kunal:Mauli...please don't be silent.Please tell me something.

Mauli did not react.

Kunal:Please slap me.I deserve your slap for breaking your trust in me.

Still Mauli did not move.

Kunal held her hand and slapped his own face.

Slowly Mauli looked at his face.She took back her hand off his.

Mauli:What kind of madness is this Kunal?

Kunal:I deserve the worst punishment from you.

Mauli looked at him tearfully.

Mauli:Don't you know that your Mauli can't hurt you.

Kunal looked at her emotionally.

Mauli was becoming restless:Kunal...good that you confessed everything to me.I am your friend also.Right?I will make everything alright.I forgive you Kunal.Let us forget everything and start fresh.

Kunal said painfully:How can you be so good Mauli?I am shamed to stand in front of you.I feel more guilty now.But Mauli...nothing can be same like before.It's true that I have done mental cheating with you.So I don't deserve you nor I deserve to stay with you.So I am leaving this house.

Mauli was shocked:Kunal...how can you leave me like this?

Kunal wept:Because I can't cheat you anymore.I can't face you.Sorry Mauli..I can't live with you.

Mauli was broken completely.

Kunal packed his luggage.

Mauli's lips shivered:Kunal..are you leaving me for Nandini?Are you going to stay with Nandini?

Kunal's eyes became wet.

Kunal:I admit that I have feelings for Nandini.But I can never give your place to any other woman.I don't want to live happily with Nandini by hurting you.I don't need any happiness keeping your emotions at stake.

His words touched touched her heart.Tears flowed down from her eyes.

Mauli:Kunal...

They shared an emotional eye lock.They broke the eye lock and came back to senses.

Mauli:Kunal..will you ever come back to me?

Kunal:Right now my heart is poisoned by some unknown emotions.I will clean it by myself.I may come back after cleansing myself.

Kunal left the house tearfully.Mauli broke into tears.

Slowly she wiped her tears.

Mauli:I am sure Kunal... that one day you will come back to me as my Kunal..only as my Kunal.I have full faith in our love.You will return one day and I will wait for that moment.

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was such a Heartfelt Emotional OS 

I totally enjoyed this read 

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Posted: 4 years ago

emotional OS! nicely written! thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb fabulous emotional OS dear

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is how it shud hv been shown. Well done! 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow beautiful...this is how it should have been down neither it destroyed maunal nor kunan...kunal admit that he has feelings for nandini n he is feeling guilty abt it...he didn't want to go to nandini...he just want peace through cleansing himself n going back to mauli...what a beautiful way of writing an EMA story w/o tainting the marriage...friendship n new found attraction...this is how ot should be shown in the show

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow this is beautiful.....loved it ❤️❤️...i wish the leap happen with this  type of story....keep writing about maunal

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow such a heartouching OS❤️!Loved it totally...if we're served this it would have been a bold move....But typical Silsila writer are predictable now they don't know how to fully & efficiently utilize their leads acting power 😵...All they do is work according the biggest fandom wishes 🤣!!!

But this was an emotional infact heartfelt one !!keep writing

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful OS.

thanks for the pm 😊