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Arhi FF : Destiny Games T5 (New updates in T6) - Page 63

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Posted: 4 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Savera84

The happy go lucky girl Anjali was in trouble with Mafia and the leader is our very own Shyam Manohar Jha.

What a twist!

Amidst what happened at the mall, that message seems a bit odd and it will definitely makes one wonder.

But, Khushi is a bit casual about stuff.  Was she doing her own investigation on the side?

Abhi is a true police officer.  He is not sparing even Khushi.

Anjali covered her tracks well.  She did not let her family have a clue of what she was going though.  Either she is very strong or no one noticed the change in her demeanour.

Can Abhi tackle the mafia and save Arnav and family?

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Cheers.........

thanks Savera for the honest feedback. Khushi's reactions were not disclosed and that's why you felt so. Since it was a shock for both Arnav and Khushi, capturing her reactions in the write-up would have been a repeat as they both would have mirrored each other that way. I was little pressed in time and preferred to leave the obvious out. 

However, I shall try to better it when I find time

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh poor Anjali was threatened n she didn’t tell anyone from her family bcoz she was afraid of their reactions so opt the cowardly way to end her life I don’t know how ppl are so heartless who do such horrendous business but now the cat is out n this Shyam manohar jha will see his end soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

oh lord again shyam nice update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Heyy finally shyam has came..😜

I dont know why, but like abhi i also doubted khushi for a minute. But she is acting casually. So there is no such chance.

It was a good update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Whatte! Why does Shyamji have to make his entry now? If the existing issues weren't already too much on the the table. Urgh. Loser. I wish Anjali had confided with someone! It would really have been great. 


People have to have that comfort with loved ones that they can confide in. That's a very serious issue and I'm glad you've written about it. 


I liked Abhi's not so subtle throw of shade here and there about Arshi. 


Cheers

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Posted: 4 years ago

Shyam's entry into Raizadas lives . Anjali has three brothers , why didn't she tell about it to anyone ? Agreed she was scared , did she think the person whoever is threatening has stopped because she has paid enough . 

Payal could have helped her if she had told about this . Khushi seems to be investigating in her own way . Now that the problem is out Arnav - Khushi and Abhi are going to rest only after punishing the culprit . 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Here comes the snake Shyam ...missing Arshi...plzz update soooon...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Didn't we just know it? It would have to be that snake shyam.

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow that was some twist...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for the update

Was stuck in suspense from beginning to end..

Beautifully written

Waiting for Anjali to gain consciousness and revealing the missing pieces

Update soon

Love

Vandie