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FF: PranBir/KrishDha - In Love With Devil CH17+Writer's Note Pg 37 - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks a lot ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Deepidj

No ranbir prachi meeting today, have to wait till next part. OK prachi misses her dad a lot, her childhood is little painful nd mystery like ranbir. Both r in same ship. Prachi has a caring mom but ranbir so sad,  no one. Loved the dream sequence. Ranbir handles office with college also wow. Next part soon dear. How will ranbir react when prachi will tell him that his mom wants to meet him. Loved neha nd prachi bonding. 

thank you so much buddy..... hopefully Prachi Ranbir would try to get along.... it won't be smooth though..

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Nice!.. 👌I can't imagine what the conversation will be like when Prachi passes on the message about his step mum.. How will he react given the fact that he gets soo angry with the mention of his step mum??.. 🤔

hahaha brace yourself till the next part....😉

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Maheen !!! Not fair dude!!! 😭😭😭😭😭

Yeh sahi kya

No PragBir! Mumma!!!

This one was super se upar

But I’m waiting for the Rocking one!

ASAP! ❤️❤️❤️

Hahaha sorry man.... however I'd make up for that in the next one.... thanks for being an awesome reader as always 😉

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prachi searching for her dad n ranbir saving her was a significant dream.wonder how it will reflect in real life.liked neha saying that may be ranbir will have a positive impact on her.really want prachi abhi meet.raghuveer ranbir conversation was touchy.raghuveer prachi meet was unexpected. it was lovely.will prachi be able to mend the broken relationships of ranbir? 

I can't comment on that. However, the relationship between the two would be time taking and need a lot of hardwork to get through.... 

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Chapter 6

Raghuveer had just left the college premises in his vehicle when his phone buzzed; thinking that it might be Ranbir, he picked up the call at once with the sigh of relief.

“Ranbir, where the hell have you been?”

“Sir, this is Aman…”  

“Yes, Aman – sorry, I won’t be able to come to the office; just tell them to meet me at my residence.”

“Sir, this is about Ranbir – it’s urgent.”

“What’s wrong? Tell me quick!”

“Somehow, info about Ranbir’s stay over here has been leaked – they might follow him soon.”

“I told you a million times not to entertain any stranger in my absence!!!! How could you be so careless??”

“I beg to differ, he wasn’t any stranger but, one of our resources – he saw a vehicle lingering around those premises for 3 days straight.”

“I’m coming right away!”

“No sir, you must not – we’re not sure what intentions do they have; it’s better for you to stay where you’re.”

“I can’t leave him alone either; do you have any information where they’re heading to?”

“Thankfully, they only know the college location for now. You must not worry one of our men is on campus.”

“You already know Ranbir hates uniforms around him!” 

“We couldn’t take any chances either.”

“Damn it!!”

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Ranbir habitually made his presence felt just by strolling around the cafés when most students had retired for the day or simply chatting with some classmates in E block after classes; that pretty much established the fact how much of a sociopath he was – Prachi recollected. 

The specific corners – quieter than usual; seemed oddly satisfying. She happily convinced herself that either he must’ve left a bit early or might’ve not arrived as yet or he just hadn’t not showed up at all; which meant that she could carelessly throw the object hidden in her bag and leave – without fretting about him, looking for it. 

Yet, she couldn’t leave without giving him that message – the elderly man had requested; keeping his absolute faith in her. But then again, there was no way she could explain as to how much his beloved nephew enjoyed mocking her; obviously why would he believe her? All in all, she was already tired of being disrespected from that spoiled brat all the time – for what? Dashing into his den only once? Not being able to save herself from those morons? 

From a very young age, she understood the concerns of invading someone’s personal space and always had the self-assurance of standing up against bullies; at the same time, if she couldn’t fight back for once in her lifetime; was it that of a big deal? 

She didn’t exactly hate him – she didn’t like him either. What she couldn’t understand was, as to why was he always in her path? Perhaps now Neha’s point of view made some sort of logic. 

Nonetheless, the question was where could he be at this time? She wasn’t going to make repeated rounds for him like an idiot. “One last try and I’m going back…” – She concluded.

The intensity of the hard-hitting basketball within the large metallic cage and adrenaline rush amplified along with his raging temper; adding more to his already aggravated state of mind – he kept on striking the ball harder.

How could she even think that she was worthy of his compassion? Someone who had always made sure he hated his own existence; was now seeking his shelter. Someone who made him a cold-hearted ba*****d was now craving for his undying warmth and affection. 

The woman practically gifted him life of an unwanted orphan; and now hoped to be served by his son; a family – the notion he could never approve.

Thrashing the ball one final time on the net, Ranbir sat, sweating and breathless against the cage.

Walking by the cemented pillars of the closed café, she abruptly came to halt. She could see a figure in the basketball court; after struggling a bit, she instantly recognized the face – yes, he was there; he was right in front of her. Mentally preparing herself for yet another session of countless insults; she went into the partial open space with serenity. 

The stillness around Ranbir got disturbed by the sound of the footsteps. He slowly opened his eyes with a tiny frown, and leaned forward – In the next instant their eyes met.  

Cluttered hair; crumbled and moderately soaked vest and camouflage trousers made his muscular physique even more palpable but, that was a part of him she had already seen in his den. What startled her the most; was his exhaustion beyond his physicality – she comprehended. 

For the first time, he felt relieved in her presence – though deep down he was cursing himself for that; his emotional stability had always been a trait; he was extremely proud of and in case of any emotional outburst he had a habit of isolating himself and bouncing back immediately.

Ironically, at that moment he felt as if he needed her. He watched her with pierced eyes; while she responded him with a tender gaze.

“What do you want?” – He finally broke the silence with a grave air.

“Are you okay?”

“My day just flushed down the gutter!” – He stood up from his spot reaching for his towel.

Prachi gaped in shock at his sudden insolence; she was about to make an award-winning comeback; however, recalling Neha’s advice to be friendly, she stopped. 

“Hmm… must’ve seen your own face in the mirror…” – Prachi quipped; trying to lighten up the scenario.

“And I believe you’re here as a clown in disguise; using pathetic tactics; planning to execute a lethal attack on me instead!”

“Exactly that’s what my plan is all about but, with a twist; I thought I might want to torture you with my presence a little longer – by being friends.”

“What did you say?” – He mumbled after a long pause.

“You heard it right.” – Ignoring his quizzical look; Prachi smiled; feeling accomplished.

Do you really mean it?”

“I really do.” – Prachi responded comfortingly. 

“What makes you befriending this devil?”

“As far as I know; this devil has been quite helpful.” – Prachi laughed.

She took aback as he turned his back towards her; taking off his top.

“Mind if I strip?”

“What do you mean?” – Prachi flushed as he sprayed his deodorant near her face.

“Cleanliness is important among friends isn’t it?” – Prachi slowly rubbed the mist off her face as he wore a clean t-shirt; uncertain if he was joking. Before she could gather her thoughts, Ranbir threw the vest in her feet.

“Could you just pick it up and put it in my bag?” – She didn’t say anything rather stared at him with wide eyes.

“I’m sorry; I thought you’d help me, won’t you friend?” – Till now she had realized that she was being ridiculed as usual but, remained levelheaded.

“Oh dear, now I’m really sorry; may I just touch your holy feet and wash away my sins master? For, I’ve been too stupid to notice the actual reason; for you being an asshole; I’m sorry for not admiring your heroic actions that day, which were totally uncalled for; I’m sorry for not appreciating your chiseled body enough, when you graced me with your very own strip show. Last but not the least; I apologize to have met such a gruesome human being like you!”

“I’ve an offer for you as well…”

“I don’t think I’d be keen to know.” – Prachi responded; rigidly looking at him.

“I think you’d look flawless…”

“Me? Flawless? To you? I wonder why the ceiling hadn’t crashed on me as yet.”

“Okay listen, I was hoping why don’t you just take off all your clothes; wear a bikini; perform a hot belly dance for me and I’d throw money on your face! If I’d be satisfied with your moves I might as well take you to my bedroom. But, if you failed; I’d pass you on to my friends! So, tell me Prachi; how bold are you?”

“You love talking about this filth, don’t you?”

“A shitty face deserves a shitty offer!” – She could feel her temper brewing inside. She made a big mistake indeed; still she had decided not to lose her cool and give him the sheer bliss, rather deal with him his way.

Prachi simply smiled at him whole-heartedly; leaving him further in fumes.

“Now I feel really sorry for you Ranbir; now, I understand way more deeply as to why that poor, affectionate man had requested me to inform you, that your mother wanted to meet you and surely it doesn’t surprise me at all. Someone who had been treated women as objects to play with all his life; why would he even respect his own mother? And you know what, now I wish you had led life of an orphan; so that you could’ve realized the importance of a mother, respecting women and most importantly, how it feels when a mother yearns for her son! I came here to thank you for whatever you did for me previously. But, you don’t deserve one bit of it!” – She concluded.

Prachi was about to leave, when his strong grip twisted her arm and banged her against the cage – Ranbir stood in front with his strong arms firmly placed on both sides; hence obstructing her space completely. She felt as if her heart was beating outside her chest as he gradually increased the nearness; glowering at her with swollen eyes.

The intense eye-lock continued for a few more seconds and she had only wished she hadn’t come to see him at all.

“You’re hurting me… let me go…” – Prachi whispered.

“You don’t have the slightest idea what hurt means; you don’t even have the heart to relate, how it feels to be abused by a mother! You don’t have the brains to understand how it feels being dragged to bed every night just to be shredded alive and bled to death! Praying to God in silence for mercy; yet your soul dies inside every second and you have no one to save you!” – Ranbir slowly moved back as her eyes clouded with hot tears.

“You don’t know anything about me! So, don’t you dare judge me for who I’m or what I’ve become! You won’t ever understand! No one did – no one would ever do!” – He roughly pulled his bag strap and left her weeping.

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A luxurious black car halted outside the college gates. While two men jumped out to talk to the security officers for interrogation; the other one kept seated reviewing the whole area with wireless in hands.

They didn’t have much time – they were ready as per the orders with guns in their hands. Just then they got called.

“Yes, I’m right outside – no we’re still waiting for the signal from them.” – On listening to the person on the other side, the man continued.

“I’m afraid but, executing that publicly won’t be a wise decision – we might as well have to look for an isolated path away from the college area – he hasn’t arrived as yet – yes, – we have it all – I –“

“Don’t worry we’d make sure he’s all alone this time – we’d update you once everything is done!”

Ranbir made his way towards the second exit on foot – unluckily his car had broken down in the morning so he had conveniently taken the bus to reach on time. Nonetheless, at present his mind was completely shut down and he didn’t want anyone to disrupt his solo walk back home.

It had been a while since he moved onto the main road. Keeping in view, nature had always been his best friend in stressful situations; he decided to take the route which led towards a much calmer part of the forests. 

He had only covered a small patch towards it, when a familiar voice from behind; forced him to cease his steps and turn;

“Ranbir, Wait up!” – He saw Prachi running towards him clutching the strap of her bag; apparently distressed.

“Unbelievable…” – He shut his eyes in resentment; Prachi stopped right in front of him – completely breathless.

“Did you follow me all the way through? Are you f**** insane?”

“I just – just wanted to say sorry; I didn’t mean to –“

“I don’t need your God damn apology!!!! Leave me alone!!!!”

“I just want to be friends with you.” – Ranbir stared at her surprised.

“You ran all the way after me, pulling your lungs out like a freak; just to give me this sickening offer?” – Prachi tried to answer back but, he interrupted her.

“At first I thought, you were plain annoying; however, at this moment, you have ascertained my notion about you, being mentally challenged!”

“Crux of the matter is, you saved me twice; by being friends with you, I might be able repay you in some way.”

“Keep your heroic sagas of morality for someone else and leave!” – All of a sudden Ranbir heard a shriek sound of tires coming to halt pushing him on the road.

Frightened Prachi knelt forward clasping his arm. With a blurry vision Ranbir saw 3 armed men encircling both of them.

“Are you all right?” – He simply gave her a death stare and slowly got up on his feet.

“Ranbir, who are they?” – Prachi whispered holding onto his arm.

“Just shut your mouth and get lost!!” – He jolted his arm out of her grip as one of the men came forward.

“Sir, we apologize for this act – but,” 

“My beloved mother had sent you to attack me right?” 

“We only have the orders to take you with us.”

“Elaborate the consequences in case I don’t agree.”

“I’m afraid but, we are not supposed to disclose that in front of a stranger.”

“She’s not; go ahead…” – Prachi looked at him at once, “Planning to kill me right?”

“We haven’t been asked to harm you in anyway; just come with us – or else we…”

Before the man could finish off the sentence; Ranbir moved forward scowling at him.

“Or else what?”

“Sir, humble apologies but, we were ordered to meet you in isolation. If you’d resist than you might have to pledge her.”

“Touch her and you all won’t be going back all fine!” 

In the very next second, two other armed men jumped off the vehicle; one of them hit Ranbir on the face, the other one had already given a knock-back from the sharp dagger on Ranbir’s shoulder – piercing his flesh; when he held his fist and slapped him harder. 

Prachi stood there shocked – even though crimson streaks were getting obvious from his lip as well as the fabric, Ranbir hadn’t displayed a single trace of agony on his handsome visage. Casually fixing the sleeve of his shirt, he grabbed one by the neck and kicked the other man on his chest;

“You’ve got more?”

“Don’t be mad! Let’s go from here!”

“Prachi, for the last time – move aside!”

“But…”

“NOW!!!”

“I won’t leave you alone like this.” – Both of them didn’t realize but, there was still one gun man left to be dealt with; who immediately grabbed her from behind, targeting the gun over her head; Prachi couldn’t help but squealed.

“Sir, if you don’t cooperate with us, then she’d have to pay the price – we’ve strict orders of not to kill you; but, any other person who comes in between.” – With Prachi’s terrified face in front of him and anger brewing inside, he stepped forward snatching the gun and repeatedly smashed the man’s head over the windscreen till the windscreen was completely crushed into pieces.

“I hope your injuries would pretty much sum up my take on my mother’s offer! And if you won’t convey today’s highlights to her; you’d not be alive the next time I see you scumbags!” – Ranbir remarked looking down at the bruised men; struggling to get up. 

Letting out a deep sigh of frustration and enduring the physical anguish in silence; his eyes fell on the frightened figure next to him; 

“Need an invitation?” – Feeling lifeless; Prachi quietly followed his lead.

Both of them walked by the edge of the rocky road with no words exchanged; though Prachi gathered the courage to have a glimpse of him for a second – his drained face suggested her otherwise.

“Your injuries look bad; maybe you should stop for a while and –”

“Throw this romantic sequence of the 90’s out of your head and keep moving!!!”

“Why are you always so disgusted with me?”

“Why can’t you just leave me alone?”

“That’s not the answer to my question!”

“Because you’re weak and I hate spineless people who cannot stand for themselves!!!!”

“If you’re referring to the incident with Vikram; firstly, I didn’t ask you to jump in like the knight in the shining armor! And secondly, I don’t owe you any explanations for who I am!!” – Ranbir took aback, “And if you still think of me as a cry baby then you don’t have to escort me anywhere – I’d go by myself!” – As Prachi turned Ranbir immediately held her arm.

“Don’t be crazy… those men might harm you… stay here!” – She let go of his grip at once.

“I don’t take dictations! Besides, that’s my headache not yours! And one more thing; if at all, every tiny cell in your body is done with seeing my face every now and then; let me tell you, even I never wished to see such a pathetic human being like you! I only came to return this medallion which unfortunately belongs to you!” – She threw the medallion on his torso and began to walk in the opposite direction.

Ranbir stood there speechless staring at the medallion and then towards her – struggling for the right words to make her stop…

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Edited by manu9 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I soooooo love you for this *MUAH!* ❤️❤️❤️

It was a hell intense one yaar 😲

I’m thinking to make a PranBir VM soon, will pm you the link later ⭐️

And look at Prachi! She’s on fire!!! 

Ranbir ab tera kuch nahin ho sakta 😆

I’m looking forward for some more comic & cute scenes 😳


Update soon & looooooonger 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fantastic part. Ranbir nd Prachi conversation was super. He cares for Prachi but does not show. Nd the way he fought for Prachi was nice. Looks like his relationship with his mother is not nice. Because of his past he does not want anyone in his life. Poor guy. Liked Prachi attitude at last part. Nice update 👍 

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Maheen, loved it. It was quite sometime since u wrote, so I was wondering......

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I soooooo love you for this *MUAH!* ❤️❤️❤️

It was a hell intense one yaar 😲

I’m thinking to make a PranBir VM soon, will pm you the link later ⭐️

And look at Prachi! She’s on fire!!! 

Ranbir ab tera kuch nahin ho sakta 😆

I’m looking forward for some more comic & cute scenes 😳


Update soon & looooooonger 😃

hahaha love you too for being such loyal reader..❤️.. as for Prachi and Ranbir they'd keep on pulling eachothers legs 😆don't worry... and I would love to see your work on the VM and do send me the link soon...