Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed}

Posted: 5 years ago

New Here Had a plot regarding Akshan in mind.

Character sketch:

Akshat Jindal (30yrs):  successful businessman

Guddan Jindal/ Gupta(29yrs): a PhD doctorate student

Angad Jindal(26yrs):  younger brother of AJ

Nimisha Jindal (25yrs):  wife of angad

Aarti Jindal (20 yrs) : sister of AJ and the light of Jindal House

Savitri Jindal:  mother of AJ

Revti Gupta (25yrs) : sister of guddan

Will update chapter 1 soon.

Let me know how is the character sketch😊



INDEX

INTRODUCTION:  PG 1
CHAPTER 1       :  PG 1
CHAPTER 2       :  PG 2
CHAPTER 3       :  PG 2
CHAPTER 4       :  PG 3
CHAPTER 5       :  PG 4
CHAPTER 6      :   PG 6
CHAPTER 7      :   PG 7
CHAPTER 8      :   PG 9
CHAPTER 9      :   PG  10
CHAPTER 10    :   PG  13
CHAPTER 11    :   PG  14
CHAPTER 12    :   PG  15
CHAPTER 13    :   PG  17
CHAPTER 14    :   PG   18
CHAPTER 15    :   PG   20
CHAPTER 16    :   PG   22
CHAPTER 17    :   PG   23
CHAPTER 18    :   PG   25
CHAPTER 19    :   PG   26
CHAPTER 20    :   PG   28
CHAPTER 21    :   PG   31
CHAPTER 22    :   PG   33
CHAPTER 23    :   PG   35
CHAPTER 24    :   PG   37
CHAPTER 25    :   PG   39
CHAPTER 26    :   PG   41
CHAPTER 27    :   PG   43
CHAPTER 28    :   PG   45
CHAPTER 29    :   PG   48
CHAPTER 30    :   PG   50
CHAPTER 31    :   PG   53
CHAPTER 32    :   PG   56
CHAPTER 33    :   PG   58

CHAPTER 34   :    PG  62

CHAPTER 35   :    PG 65

CHAPTER 36   :    PG 69

TEASER            :    PG 71

CHAPTER 37   :    PG 73

CHAPTER 38   :    PG 77

CHAPTER 39  :     PG 80

CHAPTER 40  :     PG  82

CHAPTER 41  :     PG  85

CHAPTER 42  :     PG 89

CHAPTER 43  :     PG 94

CHAPTER 44  :     PG 97

CHAPTER 45  :     PG 98

CHAPTER 46  :     PG 100

CHAPTER 47  :     PG 103

CHAPTER 48  :     PG 104

CHAPTER 49  :     PG 106

CHAPTER 50  :     PG 107










Akshan51482019-04-21 11:17:56

Edited by Akshan5148 - 4 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Introduction: 
 Guddan and AJ are married(arranged) for a year now and so are Angad and Nimisha. 
Guddan is doing her PhD but nobody knows she is Mrs Jindal.  Everybody knows her by her maiden name in the university. 
AJ and Guddan have a cordial Relation not even friendly.  They are ok with each other and not developed the bond as such. 
Guddan is a good daughter in law and everybody in the family love and respect her. 
Angad and Nimisha have a love marriage. 

Edited by Akshan5148 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
please do continue soon
really interested to read  more
Posted: 5 years ago
Interesting concept
Akshan are cordially but relationship is yet to start
Update soon
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice concept. Looking forward to read the next chapter. ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 5 years ago
Amazing 
Really Interesting 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 1
It was a normal day in Jindal House but all the family members excluding AJ and Guddan had gone out for Pooja early in the morning. 
Guddan woke up and saw AJ was not there and realised he was in the washroom as usual. Guddan got up from the bed and tied her hair in a bun and moved to AJ's cupboard to take out his clothes.  This was her routine.  She put his clothes on the bed and moved to her closet to look for her clothes.  She chose  her dress and put it adjacent to AJ's suit on the bed. 
Akshat came out of the washroom in a vest and trouser and headed towards the dressing table.  Guddan took her suit and went to freshen  up.  She left the dupatta on the bed. 
Akshat started dressing up and once guddan came out of the washroom with hair tied in a towel.  Guddan unwrapped the towel. 
Akshat:  aaram se as water sprinkled on his face
Guddan:  sorry dhyan nai raha
Akshat:  isn't that dupatta too bright. 
Guddan put her hair to one side and picked up the dupatta and places it on her shoulder and looked in the mirror and asked "is it"
Akshat:  acha lag raha hai tumpe just that never seen this color on you before. 
Guddan smiled and left. 
Guddan was in kitchen smiling to herself and preparing coffee for him.  
In the room: 
Guddan:  aapki coffee
Akshat:  thanks.  Waise aaj itna santa kyun hai subah subah. 
Guddan:  Wo sab log kuldevi k mandir gaye hain. 
Akshat:  ok.  I am leaving. 
Before guddan could say bye he had already left.  After that she too left for the university. 





How is it?? 
Edited by Akshan5148 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by nahtani88


Amazing 
Really Interesting 
Update Soon 
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I am new here,  so not sure how to do that
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Awesome Update 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Chapter 2
Guddan was in the university but she was gloomy not smiling as she was back in her kitchen. But then she told herself he has always been like that never saying bye to her nor giving her the time to say bye to him.  She thinks he has always been busy and a workaholic but loved his family too much especially Aarti.
Her thought process was broken by the ring of her phone. It was her saasu maa(SM).

Guddan:  Hello

SM:  beta kaise ho tum log

Guddan:  Maaji hum theek.  Aap log pahunch gaye theek se. Howz Aarti?

SM:  Haan wo theek hai.  Le kar baat.

Aarti:  Bhabhi kaise ho miss kar rahe hain aapko aur bhaiya ko.

Guddan:  koi nai waise b it was your plan only to leave without telling the two of us. Ab kar enjoy hamare bina.

Aarti:  ye lo Nimi Bhabhi se baat karo

Nimisha:  Guddan di kaise ho aap dono.

Guddan:  hum theek hain but nimi tum log sab aise kyun poocha rahe ho jaise bahut din se nai mile ho humse.  Baat kya hai.

Nimi: nahi di bas aise he pooch liya(trying to control her laughter).  Chaliye bye rakhiye phone and enjoy.

As guddan disconnected the call she got thinking why they were behaving weirdly but shrugged off the thought and went to the library.
Guddan was super busy in the university, her day was totally hectic as her doctorate degree was almost done and she was doing some penultimate things as it was her final viva tomorrow.

She opened her phone and went straight to the gallery and opened the first picture.  All her fatigue just washed away just by looking at the picture.  It was AJ's picture.  She had taken it secretly when he was pacifying Aarti.
"Cute" Guddan said and put her phone down smiling to herself. 



Edited by Akshan5148 - 5 years ago

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