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RaYa FF: Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga/Chahungi updated Part7 page 1

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part-1 :Priya and Duggu

Sunday evening...

Priya is holding a photo and saying "Aap meri zindagi me ek thehraav leke aae the, me apko apne dil se kbhi bhi mitaa nhi paungi , chahe apne hi q n mujhe apne dil se mitaa diya ho... me apki thi hu, or hamesha rahungi I Love You" suddenly dugu(priya's son) comes, priya immediately hides photo.

Dugu: Mumma mudhe (mujhe) bhot bhoot(bhook) ldi h...
Priya: oh my baby...aaj mera bachcha kya kya khel k aaya...
Dugu: mumma aaj mene hide and seek khela...
Priya: Apko mja aaya...
Dugu: haa mumma bhot atta(acha) lga
Priya: dugu guess mumma ne aaj apke liye kya bnaya h ? 
Dugu: ye mumma mudhe Pta h ...apne aaloo ta palatha  bnaya h...
Priya : apko kese Pta chla baby ?
Dugu : aap lod lod mudhe aaloo ta palatha hi dete ho...
Priya: roj roj kha deti hu beta ...last Sunday to bnaya tha...wese apko PTA bhi h roj roj ka mtlb kya hota h?
Dugu(says in cuteness): haa mumma aap jis din aaloo ta palatha bnate ho wo loj day hota h.

Priya jor jor se haste hue dugu ko God me utha leti h n kisses him and hugs him and says : oh my baby ,I love u so much , my intelligent bachcha
Dugu: Like my dada(papa), mumma
Priya : ya Betu.
Dugu : mumma dada kb aaenge?
Priya : bhot jald my love.
Dugu : mumma aap loj esa hi bolte ho
Priya: Duguuu ...chlo baby late ho rha h abhi khana bhi khana h, and yes story bhi to sunna h , or kl school bhi Jana h ,mumma ko office bhi Jana h...bhot Sara kaam h baby chlo jaldi kro...
Dugu : Okay mumma
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Priya is a single mother and her son is 5 year old . She faced many problems in her life. She lives alone in Mumbai and works as executive manager , her son keeps on asking that where is his dada ? When will he come ? I want to meet him and priya answers him with smartness and cuteness that ur dada will come soon baby and smiles...but behind her smile the great pain is hidden ... 
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Kon h dugu k dada? Or wo kb aaenge?
Kb dugu k questions ko answer milege?
Priya kbhi apni life me happy hogi?

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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 2:Entry of "The Ram Kapoor"

Ram comes in India for business deal . SunShine company's manager welcomes him n says how was your journey sir?..
Ram replies good.. both of them directly goes to SunShine company.. everyone welcomes him.. MD ask to secretary that where  is our executive chief (priya)? 
Suddenly  ram turns and feels that he feels some connection in that name.. secretary says sir she will be reaching soon...
MD takes ram to his cabin. 

Here priya is dropping dugu in school n says that : dugu school me mastii mat karna,  aapki sudha didi (caretaker) aapko 2pm pr lene aaegi, lunch pura finish karnaa, ghar pr rest krne k bad didi k sath playground jaana...kisses him n hugs him and says goodbye dugu 
Dugu : okk mumma bbye

After half an hour ...
She reaches to office... there she got the news that Kapoor Industry's MD have come for a deal wid our company...
Priya shockingly asks Kapoor Industry??
Colleague : Are Kapoor Industry priya.. The hot shot bachelor, The Ram Kapoor.. Asia's top businessman have come... Priya is shocked as well as happy and thinks "mene aapko 6 years phle dekha tha.. ab Pta nhi aap kese dikhte hoge... aapse milne ka bhot man to ho rha h Ram but aapka kiya Hua dhoka yad aa jata hai...aaj to me aapse mil k apne sare swalo k jwab leke rhugii..."

Priya tries to meet ram but she fails as ram left office wid MD to see the perspective site for the deal...
She feels dissapointed... n thinks " aap mujhe yha dekh kr pta nhi kese react krege.. khush hoge ya shock ho jaoge.. mujhse milkr aapka kya reaction hota hai mujhe iska intezaar hai...is Pal k liye mene 6 saal intezaar jo kiya hai... or me ye jaan k hi rahugii ki aapne mere sath esa q kiya?.."your countdown starts now... ram.

Priya waits for ram... nd comes to know that ram directly reached hotel from site...she dissapointedly lefts the office..

In the Evening...
She came back to her home and find that dugu is sleeping... priya ask to sudha: sudha dugu had taken food properly?? Or aaj mera shaitan bachcha itni Jldi kese so gya???

Sudha: haa didi dugu ne ache se khana kha liya... or playground me khelkr bhut thak gya tha isly aaj jldi so gya... didi aapke liye khana lga du?..
Priya : nhi rehne de me thoda late khaugii ...
Sudha : achcha didi to fr me jau...
Priya : okk sudha kl dugu ko school se time se ghar le aana... 
Sudha : okk didi Bye good night...
Sudha lefts...
Priya takes dugu  with herself and says that" bhot jald tujhe tere saare  swalo k Jwab milne wale h..." and she lost in her old memories ...
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Guys yha pr present k sath flashback  bhi chlega so dont get confuse...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Part-3 Ram bana bakra (1st meeting of Raya)

Precap : priya takes dugu in her arms and says dugu tujhe bhut jald tere swalo k jwaab milne wale h and she lost in her old memories when she first met wid ram...

Flashback...
Sunday 8am morning...
Shipra comes to Priya's room and tries to wake her up by saying to priya uth jaa 8 baj gye h...
Priya : maa aaj to sone do aaj to Sunday h.. Sunday means Priya's funday...
Shipra : to kya aaj uthegii nhi???
Priya : maa plz aaj to sone do...
Shipra : achcha 10 minute or so le...
Shipra turns to leave , priya gets up nd hugs her mother from behind nd says mamma kya aap mujhe mere sasural me bhi ese hi uthane aaegi ??
Shipra: htt pagal ladki... kuch b bolti h... mene Nashta lgaa diyaa hai..jldi se Fresh n up ho k aa ja...
Priya: yes mom...
After 10 minutes priya comes out of her room nd says good morning to her father.. sudhir(Priya's father) reciprocates to her by nodding his head...
Sudhir : or beta aaj ka kya plan h ??kise bakra  bane wali h...??
Priya: oh papa aaj me kisi ko bakra nhi bnaugiii, me aaj sirf shopping karugii 
Or aapki jeb(pocket) khalii karugii...
Layiye dijiye 5000rs..
Sudhir gives money to priya n shipra interrupts n says usne mange or tumne de bhi diye...
Sudhir : haa to hm kmate kiske liye h??
Apni beti k liye...
Priya : thanks papa... love u...

At Mumbai airport...
Ram to vikram : vikram kha h tu mujhe lene aa rha h nn..
Vik : nhi ram mujhe jaruri kam se pune aana pda ... mene driver ko tujhe lene bhej diya h...
Ram : tere driver se keh dena ki gaadi mujhe deke chla jaye me khud drive kr lunga..
Vik : ate tujhe Mumbai ki sadko ka ptaa nhi h or tujhe address b to nhi ptaa...
Ram : tu bs gaadi phucha de... me sab smbhal lungaa... google h to shii..
Vik : okk baba bye...

Priya wid her friends gone for shopping, here ram is driving car wid help of google baba but by mistakenly he takes wrong route bcoz of network problem in Google...
Ram stop the car n calls vikram...
Here our queen priya is driving her open car very rashly nd collides with ram's car... ram in car n hears the sound of thud...thud...thud... and says what the hell n comes out ...
Priya's friends says tune bechare ki gaadi thok di... priya replies chill girls.. me abhi handle kartii hu.. its not a big deal... priya comes out from her car...ram lost in her beauty...
Priya storming on ram nd says : hlw mr. Kya ye tumhare papajii ki road h jo tumne apni khtara car bich sadak me park kr di h...
But ram doesn't reply bcoz he is lost in her beauty...
Again priya by snapping her finger (chutki bjate huye) : ohh hlw mr. Me aapse bat kr rhii hu... tumhara dhyan khaa h?? India k bahar se ho kya??
Ram nodes his head in yes...

Priya(thinks) mil gya bakra...
Imagine ram as bakra  nd wickedly smiles n says : tumhe pta nhi h kya India k rules k bare me?? Ese khi bhi gaadi nhi rokte, tumhe kisi ne btaya nhi kya???
Ram : what?? Me to yhaa first time aaya hu...
Priya : ohh chlo its okk... ye tumhara first day h india me to me tumhe maaf kar deti hu.. ab chli ftafat mujhe sorry bolo...
Ram : ohh hlw what's wrong wid u??
Me sorry q bolu?? 
Tumne merii gaadi thoki h tum sorry bolo...

Priya : ek to road pe gaadi khadi karte ho, India k rules todte ho or mera itnaa time bhi waste kar diya or mujhse hi sorry bulwana chahte ho, tum jante nhi hu ki me kon hu...ACP ki beti hu me... ek call me ander karwaa dugii fr sadte rehnaa jail me...
Ram (thinks) : ram is musibat se bachne k liye is aafat ki gudiya ko sorry bol de warna first day jail day ban jayega...
Finally ram says : sorry madam 

Priya : its okk (evil smile in inside ) next time be carefull..
When priya turns to leave ram interrupts nd says excuse me can u plz tell me the direction of miraa road???
Priya : yeah sure...y not ...
She gives some directions... ram thanks to her...
Ram happily starts the car & murmurs dekha mene kitni smartness se address puch liya...

Priya's friends: wow priya tune kitni smartness se use bakra bnaya or usse sorry bhi bulwa liyaa, bechara tujhe yaad rakhega...
Priya : wo bhul b nhi sktaa..
Qki  qki mene use wrong addresses btaya hai..
Priya's friends: ohh god priya bechara kitna paresan ho jayega...
Priya : chill yrr
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Ram pahuch chuka h...ek viraan si , sunsaan si jagah pr jha koi parinda bhi par nhi marta...or vikram ka call bhi nhi lag rhaa hai...
Ram : us ldki ko to me chodunga nhi...

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Posted: 5 years ago
Part-4 :RaYa's meeting after 6 years

Precap : ram is continuously  calling  vikram but his phone is coming out of reach... ram murmurs us ladki ko to me chhodugaa nhi๐Ÿ˜ก

Finally ram phones connects to vikram.. ram tells vik i m sending  u my location.. send u r driver  to take me.. vik : q kya hua??
Ram frustratingly says jo bol rha hu wo kr... ghr aa k sab btata hu...

After 30 minutes Vikram's driver reaches n takes him to the Vikram's house...ram knocks on the door.. neha opens the door n welcomes him...
Neha : how was your journey??
Tu itna tired q dikh rhaa h??
Ram : tu abhi mt puch... mera swagat India me itne achche tarah se hu a h ki me bta nhi sakta.. vik ko aane de fr btata hu...
At evening..
Vik comes nd hugs ram n asks : ab bta bhai kya huaa tha???
Ram tells the whole incidence... suddenly vik n neha laughs loudly... n says the Ram Kapoor  ko kisi ne ullu bnaa diya... wo ladki to bdii damdar hogiii jisne tera popat bnaa diya...
Ram : guys plz yrr don't make fun of me... agr next time mujhe wo ladkii mili n to me use chhodugaa nhii...
Uski shaql to mere mind me fit ho gyii h...
Flashback end...

Present..
Dugu steers from his sleep n ask for water priya comes out of her memory land n gives water to dugu... n she falls in sleep...
Next day she gets up n makes dugu ready for school, nd drops him,  and reaches to office and thinks aaj to me ram se kisi bhi hal me milkr hi rhugii...
She directly goes to MD(mr. Mehra)'s cabin n firstly she say sorry for coming late yesterday that's y I couldn't make to meet Mr. Kapoor ...
Mr. Mehra interrupts  her and says itsokk priya I know you from last 3 years... nd I know you're very sincere and hard working woman...
Priya : Thank u so muchh sir...
Sir where is Mr. Kapoor??
MD : come wid me I'll introduce u to mr. Kapoor...
Now priya is fighting wid her own feelings that whether she should be happy or sad or shocking or fear of losing someone...
Priya (thinks) while walking : ramaap mujhe yha dekh kr bhut shock ho jayege.. aap ne to socha bhi nhi hoga ki me aaj aapko yha milungii..
MD knocks on the door of Ram's cabin.. Ram gives the permission: come in...
Priya enters following MD... MD introduces priya to ram... ram n priya bith shakes hand and MD again rdsays this is the same girl Mr. Kapoor  whom I  was talking yesterday... she is very hard working n I think she is the best choice to assist in this project,  if priya n u both allows...
Mr. Kapoor : not at all a problem sir...
Priya(hesitatingly) : sure sir...
MD : I think I should take a leave now.. n u both may discuss the project...
MD lefts the cabin... Ram says have a seat miss sharma...
Priya's heartbeat is beating very fast n our Ram is behaving very normally wid priyaa... priya is constantly staring at ram  n thinks koi insaan itna bhi kese badal sktaa hai ki uska past uske present me aa k khda on ho jaye to bhi use koi fark naa pde...
Mr. Kapoor: miss sharma... miss sharma... r u okk?? 
Priya (stammers) : yes Ra... sir..
Ram : r u okk miss priya??
Priya (irritatingly) : yes sir I m okk.. mujhe kya hoga??
Ram : so miss sharma finally aapse mulakat ho hi gyii...
Priya : ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Both chitchat for a while about project... again MD comes n says sorry to disturb you both I have a news for u Mr. Kapoor that our company's owner owns to throw a welcome party for u tonight at Oberoy hotel...
Ram : mr. Mehra iski kya jarurat thi...
Priya (smilingly) : are sir aap kesi bat 
Kar rhe hai... 1st time aap hmari company k sath kam kar rhe h to party to bantii hai sir...
Priya to MD : sir can i go now??
MD : priya aapne mr. Kapoor se project discuss kr liya??
Priya : yes sir... n she left the cabin...

Priya comes in her cabin.. n starts weeping very badly in between her sobs.. she says.. Ram aAp itna badal kese gye mujhe yakin nhi hota ki mene aap jese insaan se pyaar kiyaa... me aapko kabhi maaf nhi karugiii...bs  ram ab aap mera fayda nhi utha sakte jo dhokha aapne mujhe 5 yrs phle diya th me use kabhi nhi bhul saktii... us priya ko me bhut piche chhod chuki hu jo aapki bato me aasani se aa jati thi... ye priya ek strong woman hai... aapne mera pyar to dekha h.. ab aap meri nafrat dekhege...
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To be continue...

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Posted: 5 years ago
Part-5 :ACP ki beti

Precap  : ye priya ek strong woman hai... aapne mera pyar to dekha hai ab aap meri nafrat dekhege...

She again lands in her old memories...

Flashback...
On Monday priya gets teady for office... nd comes to dining table..wishes good morning to her father... sudhir reciprocates... priya remembers yesterday's incidence and starts laughing  loudly...
Sudhir  : why are u laughing baby ?
Priya : are Dad kya btau apko...kl mene ek NRI ko bakra bnaya and she tells the whole drama to sudhir. He also starts laughing  wid her...
Sudhir : beta esa q kiya tune...use kitni pareshani hui hogi...esa kr k kya milta h tujhe beta ?
Priya : chill papa... ye mere khelne kudne k din h...masti krne k...or wese bhi bakra bna k jo sukoon milta h wo aap nhi samjhenge...

Shipra comes out from kitchen serves breakfast  to priya and says ab to bdi ho jaa, tu job krne lgi h MNC (infotech) me , kb tk bachpana dikhaegi .
Priya : Maa me kbhi nhi badlungi hamesha ese hi rahungi...chubly bubly types jo kbhi bhi dukhi nhi hoti h samjhi...chlo ab bye mujhe jaldi office jana h...aaj London se client aane wale h, or mujhe presentation bhi deni h...just wish me luck.

She reaches to office,  her colleague comes to her and says priya tu late ho gyi h...London wale client aa gye h nd sir tera wait kr rhe h in projector room go fast... and all the best
Prita : yaa, thanks am going...

When she enters in projector room, the room was dark , she comes and sit on her chair...Mr. Shah(MD) invites priya to give the presentation. 
She stands up and explain the details of the project on screen , Ram is also sitting in projector room and he feels that he had heard this voice somewhere... as soon as presentation  ends.. lights are on.. everyone claps nd praises priya... ram is shocked to see priya in front of him but priya didn't noticed ram. MD introduces priya to ram by saying meet Mr. Kapoor this is miss priya sharma our very efficient employee nd very hard working girl... priya nd Ram are shocked to see each other but priya controls herself nd thinks priya kuch react mt kr and just chill.. nd she smiles faintly... & says hello to ram... 
Ram to MD : Is she ACP's Betii...
Priya : (scared)...
MD : not at all mr. Kapoor.. her father is CA but aap esa q puch  rhe h??
Ram (wid devil smile) : ese hi... inki masoom si surat ko dekh kr mujhe lgaa ki ye ACP ki betii hogiii...
MD : you are so funny Mr. Kapoor... esa kuch nhi h...
Ram : Mr. Shah ek request h merii.. kya miss sharma is project me mujhe assist  kr skti h... while saying this he blinks his eye to priya...
Priya reciprocates him wid devil smile...
MD : yes ofcourse... me aapko yhii suggest karne wala tha... infect she is best choice for this project...
Ram is shocked to hear this and thinks ye lady gabbar kha se best choice hai... ye to worst choice hai.. isne mera popat bnaya tha nn ab me iska popat bnaugaa... itna tang krugaa ise ki logo ko ullu bnana bhul jaye...
MD ask to priya : are u okk with this??
Priya : why not sir... n thinks  ... ek bar bakraa ban kr man nhi bhraa iskaa... dubara bnna chahta hai...
MD : Mr. Kapoor if u have any doubt in this project  so u can discuss it wid priya... I'll just be back...
Now Raya are alone in cabin and giving killer look(full tashan) to each other...
Ram comes very near to priya nd taunts her that... or ACP ki beti aap yha kya kr rhii ho... are jra apne ACP papa ko phn to lgayiye...
Priya  : q.?
Ram : are mene India ka rule jo toda tha...
Priya(with fear) : konsa rule sir??
Ram : mene aapse address jo pucha th to aapke hisab se address puchna bhi ek crime hi hoga jese aapne kl meri gaadi thoki thi wo mera crime tha aapke hisab se... ab sorry bulwao na mujhse... chlo me sorry nhi bol rha...
Lgao apne papa ko phn or karwa do mujhe jail...
     Priya is listening everything but not replying nd thinks sorry to me nhi  bolne walii...
Priya : sir ho gya  aapka.. to me jau 
N she left widout his permission...
Ram : kesi pagal ladkii hai mene itnaa kuch bola fr bhi usne sorry tk nhi bola mujhe... me bhi ram kapoor hu sorry to bulwa kr hi rhugaa...
Flashback ends...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 6: RaYa's Date


Precap : me bhi ram kapoor hu usse sorry bulwakar hi rhugaa...

Priya gets distract when she heard her colleague voice... priya kha kho gyi hai me tujhe kabse awaz de rhi hu...
Priya : kuch nhi bs dugu k bare me kuch soch rhi thi...
Col : wese tu aaj party me aa rhi hai na??
Priya : nhi yrr I can't come... tum to janti ho... dugu ko me akela nhi chhod sktii... wo abhi bhut chhota hai..
Col : to dugu ko bhi le aa...
priya : nhi la sktii... morning me school hoti h uski.. u go n enjoy...
Col : okk.. as your wish... but tu aati to achcha lagta...

Lunch time at office...
Priya calls to sudha n ask her that : tum dugu ko le aayi...
Sudha: ha didi dugu ko le aayii... yhi h...
Dugu snatches phone from sudha to talk with his mother...
Dugu : hy mumma
Priya : hy mera bachcha ...apne lunch pura finish kiya ?
Dugu : yaa mumma...apne lunch finish  tiya...
Priya: yes
Dugu: mumma mudhe toklate(chocolate) eclair khani h 
Priya : dugu baby apko pta h n chocolates  sunday ko allowed h...
Dugu: no mumma mudhe aaj khana h starts crying faintly...
Priya : okk mera shaitan bachcha apko aaj chocolate mil jaegi ab apna jhut mut ka rona bnd kro and don't trouble sudha didi.
Dugu  : okk mumma...love u
Priya  : love u too baby.

At 6 :00 pm
Priya reaches to her apartment and finds that dugu is waiting for her...dugu comes to priya and she picks him in her arms and kisses him...
Dugu : aap itna late q aaye...me tb se apta wait kl lha hu...
Priya : aap mera nhi apni chocolate ka wait kr rhe ho
Dugu  : apko pta h...to fir dijiye n
toklate(chocolate)
Priya gives him chocolate eclairs... and they finish their dinner.

9:00pm Oberoi Hotel :
All are enjoying party along Ram kapoor ...Ram to Mr. Mehra : Sb dikh rhe h Ms. Sharma nhi dikh rhi h??
Mr. Mehra : No, she will not come...qki wo apne bete ko akela chod kr nhi aa skti..
Ram : okk...its fine...

At Priya's house...
Flashback:
Priya again lands in her past :
Ram messages to ACP ki beti (priya):
Ms sharma meet me at Oberoi Hotel at 7 pm...its very urgent.

Priya receives msg from bakra (ram): she reads it and murmurs ab is bakre ko kya kaam h mujhse...ek to phle hi din me mujhe chain se jine nhi deta h...raato ki nind to phle hi uda rkhi h...ab meri shaam bhi barbad krna chahta h...

Priya to shruti : she tells her the msg of ram...and she says ab me kya kru tu hi bta...
Shruti : to mt jaa...usko mna kr de..
Priya : but ese kese mna kr du..
Shruti: to fir chli jaa...
Priya: tujhe to pta h n mujhe unhe dekhkar something something hone lgta h...
Shruti: to mt jaaa...
Priya: sss...tujhe pta h n unhe dekhe bina me reh nhi skti...or unse kuch keh bhi nhi skti...
Shruti: to fir chli jaa...
Priya: are shruti...
Shruti: dekh priya tu chli jaa...atleast  tujhe pta to chl jaega ...ki tu esa weird behave q kr rhi h...spent some time alone wid him...
Priya : okk, tu bol rhi h to me chli jaati hu...

5:30 pm...
Priya video calls to shruti...
Shruti : ab kya hua tujhe??
Priya: mujhe kuch samajh  nhi aa rha ki kya pehan kr jau??
Shruti:tu kisi ki shaadi me jaa rhi h kya??
Priya :no
Shruti: to kya kisi party me jaa rhi h ??
Priya :No
Shruti:to kya kisi date pr jaa rhi h jo itna pressure le rhi h...kuch formal pehan le
Priya : ese kese formal pehan lu...is bakre ko to me chodungi nhi...meeting ka agenda bhi nhi btaya usne...



Priya is wearing yellow top wid blue jeans. Bracelet in her right hand wid watch in her left hand... her kohled eyes is enhancing her beauty... she is looking very mesmerising nd very cute...

At Oberoi  Hotel...
Ram is eagerly waiting for priya nd he is continuously blabbering... hai bhagwan ye ACP ki beti kb aayegiii... ise 7 bje ka time diya tha 7.15 ho gyi h... time ki koi value hi nhi hai ise... ohh god plz aaj ki ye sham yadgar ban jaye hm dono k liye... he is shaking from head to toe.. nd says... ram relax.. ye priya hi hai jise tu pure 3 months se janta hai... koi sherni nhii jo tujhe khaa jayegii... he sits on chair..
Priya comes... priya is very nervous nd ram tooo.. 
Priya : hello mr. Kapoor...
Aapne mujhe yha q bulaya??
Ram : have a sit priya...
Priya sits infront of him...
Ram hesitatingly holds her hand and says: "i love you priya... me tumse bhut pyar karta hu ... i can't live without you..."..
Priya slaps on ram's face nd says : how dare you...
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To be continued...

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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice story... Fast moving updates... Waiting eagerly for knowing Data's past.. please update soon... Thanks for such a nice story..
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Posted: 5 years ago
Part-7:I LOVE YOU

Precap :  says: "i love you priya... me tumse bhut pyar karta hu ... i can't live without you..."..
Priya slaps on ram's face nd says : how dare you....
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Mr. Kapoor... Mr.  Kapoor ...
Ram comes out of his dream...and places his hand on chick and sees that priya is standing  in front of  him...
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Ram thinks : wow she is looking very beautiful and mesmerising...
Priya snaps her finger infront of ram to get his attention... Mr. Kapoor khaa kho gye hai aap?? Mai kabse aawaz de rhii hu...
Ram : ohh... I am sorry...
Plz have a sit...
Priya sits nd notices that other tables are empty except them...
She gives confused look to ram and ask... sir  aapne mujhe yhaa kyo bulaya???
Ram (hesitate) : kuch serious bat karni thi...
Priya : okk... kya  bat karnii hai sir aapko??
Ram : ye tum mujhe baar - baar sir q bolti rehtii ho?? My name is "Ram".. you can say Ram or whatever  you want...
Priya thinks : mujhe to tumhe bakra bolne me mzaa aata hai ๐Ÿ˜†
Ram : wese tum iss dress me bhut pretty  lag rhii ho...
Priya  aapne ye bolne  ke liye bulaya hai mujhe yhaa...
Ram : are tum hmesa mujh pe bhadkti hi q ho?? Just chilll... make yourself  comfortable...
Priya : ab bolenge ki q bulaya hai mujhe yha ??
Ram orders juice for her... & he drinks  whole glass of water in one sip...
Priya is constantly  watching him and thinks : iss bakre ko kya ho gya hai aaj?? Ye itna ajib behave q kar rha hai??

Ram thinks : ye waiter kha mar gya... or ye shernii mujhe kab tk ese hii ghuregiii... jldii aajaa mere baap...
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Waiter comes... places  the juice nd says : sir dinner lgwaa du...
Ram : yes...

Priya : sir ab to bta dijiye n q bulaya hai yhaa...
Ram : are priya phle juice to lo...
Priya slowly sipping the juice... 
ram is gazing at her and thinks... ram beta yhi moka hai apne dil ki bat btane ka... bol de abhi... no... no.. khi sach me thappad mar diya to... nhi mai abhi nhi bol skta...
Priya thinks : kya khichdii pkaa rha hai ye bakra... bta bhi nhii rha hai ki kya chl rha hai iske man me...
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Waiter comes with dinner... ram serves  to priya... priya says : are sir rehne dijiye me khud serve kar lugii...
Or phle aap btayiye ki aapne mujhe yha q bulaya hai...??
Ram : kya priya jab se aayi ho bs ek hi bat pr atki huyi ho... hm log achche frends bhi to hai na to kya hm u hi sath me dinner bhi nhi kar skte...
Priya smiles and both are eating their dinner silently... 
While eating ram again thinks : beta ram ab nhi bolega to kab bolega...
Or kya hua priya ne agar thappad mar bhi diya to... are pyaar me log mar mit jate hai... ye to bs ek thappad hai.. wese bhi 3 din bad to tu jaa hi rhaa hai... atleast bad me tujge koi guilt na rhe ki tune ek bar try  bhi nhi kiya...
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After 10 minutes priya says : Mr. Kapoor ab to dinner bhi over hone wala hai... ab to bta dijiye nn q bulaya hai...
Ram drinks water  nd thinks Ram bol de... abhi nhi bola to fr kbhi bolne ka moka nhi milega...
He hasitantingly stands up nd goes near to priya... nd forwards his hand to priya...
Priya gives what?? Look...
Ram : trust me... give me your hand...
Priya gives her hand to ram...
Ram drags priya little away from table... and he sits on his knees...

Ram : priya mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai ki kha se start kru...
Priya : Mr. Kapoor ye aap kya kar rhe hai... plz uthiye...
Ram : plz don't interrupt me... let me complete...   mujhe nhi pta ki ye sab janne ke baad tum mujhse baat karna bhi chahogii yaa nhii... but ye bhi janta hu ki me ye baat bole binaa reh bhi nhi sakta... or aaj nhi bola to kbhi nhi bol paunga...
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Smilingly he says : jab bhi tum mere aas paas nhi hoti ho... merii dhadkan tham sii jatiii hai... or meri nazre sirf tumhe hi dhundhne lagti hai... jab bhi tumhe samne pata hu to merii dhadkane tej ho jatii hai... meri nazre tumse hatna hi nhi chahtii hai... jab bhi me kisi tension me apnii eyes close karta hu to wha sirf tum hi nazar aatii ho... or tumhe dekhkar meri dhadkan me jaan aa jati hai... or me sara tension gayan ho jata hai...you are my stress buster...
.You are my reason to breath...

Priya: Mr. Kapoor plz mujhe kuch smjh nhii aa rha hai.. aap kya kar rhe hai...
Ram : priya plz just listen to me... me chahta hu ki tum mujhse ek second ke liye bhi dur na rho... me hmesha ke liye tumhara bakra bnna chahta hu...
I love  you priya... I can't live without you... me nhi janta ki tumhare dil me kya hai but...jo bhi ho I don't care..."me fir bhi tumko chahunga "...
Priya is listening  everything very shockingly...her throat is chocked due to sudden confession...she is not in any state to say anything...

Ram stands up and take out a beautiful diamond ring which has letter "R" written on it...as soon as ram tries to make wear that ring in Priya's  finger...she jerk ram's  hand and left from there...

Ram is disappointedly standing over there wid mouth open...
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Tring...tring...tring...tring
Priya comes out from her past due to alarm on her mobile...she hurriedly off that alarm and thinks...Ram me nhi janti ki us din aap ne jo kha tha wo sach tha ya nhi...me apse kitni bhi nafrat krne ki koshish kru...me nhi kr pati hu...qki aap hi ki wajah se mujhe zindagi jine ki vajah mili h...or me nhi chahti ki ye vajah apko kbhi pta bhi chle...apne jo dhoka mere saath kiya h...uske baad bhi aap se nafarat nhi kr paungi...aap chahe badal gye h but..."MAI FIR BHI APKO HI CHAUNGI"
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Special thanks to my cousine cum best friend shivani jamne writer of "Ek din tum bhi mujhse pyar karogi" for supoorting me and thanks to all others who supported us(kitty and shivu)


Precap : .apne jo dhoka mere saath kiya h...uske baad bhi aap se nafarat nhi kr paungi...aap chahe badal gye h but..."MAI FIR BHI APKO HI CHAUNGI"
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She again lie downs... kisses on dugu's forehead and says... mera shaitan bachchaa bhi nnaa... alarm kisi bhi time ka lgaa deta hai...bilkul apne papa pe gya hai... techno-freek khi ka...
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2 days passed...
Raya didn't met in this 2 days bcoz ram went to pune...

Sunday  morning...

Priya wakes up duggu while tickling...
Duggu is moving nd smiling... n says : mamma plz no... no... no... mt klo naa...
Priya : duggu baby get up... aaj to sunday hai na... your favourite  day...
Duggu : mamma aaj sunday h itliye tone do na... plz...
Priya : baby aaj to Sunday hai... & its your cricket day...
Duggu : yeh mumma... aaj to tricket day hai... me to bhul hi dya tha...
N get up n says : tlo mumma dldii se leady klo mudhe...
Priya : okk my baby... chlo... mamma abhi aapko jldi jldi ready krtiii hai...

She takes duggu in her arms nd goes  to the washroom... after 15 minutes... duggu is ready nd wearing red t-shirt wid dungry nd he is looking very cute...



Priya takes blessing of dugu n says : haye... mera bachcha kitnaa cute lg rhaa hai... kisi ki nazar naa lge... cuteness bhi apne papa jesi hi hai...
Duggu : off ho mamma or kitna time... mujhe  tricket khelne jana hai...nd you know i love tricket...
Priya : i know baby... n thinks... ye or iska cricket... aakhir apne papa pr jo gya hai... ek bhi aadat mere jesii nhi hai...

She hears knocks on the door nd says : lijiye aapki sudha didi bhi aa gyi hai aapko le jane k liye...
Jldi se milk finish kro...
She goes to open the door... sudha  comes in... n sit near to duggu...
Priya : sudha duggu ko shoes pehna do... me jb tk duggu or tumhare liye lunch pack kr detii hu... or plz take care... ki ise bahar ka kuch mat khane dena... or agr jyada jid kre to fr kuch dila dena but mashroom to bilkul bhi nhi...tujhe pta hai naa ise mashroom se allergy hai...
Sudha : okk didi ... me dhyan rkhugiii
Duggu say : bye mamma...
Priya : bye baby... didi ko presan mt karna n take care...
Duggu n sudha  left...

Priya is all alone in the flat...
Chl priya jldi kr aaj saaf sfayii bhi karni... n duggu ka study room bhi clean krnaa hai... priya is rhyming a song... "sawachh bharat ka irada... irada kr liya hmne..."
    N then she heard landline's sound... she picks up the call...
Priya : hello...
Other side : silent...
Priya :  hello... is anybody  there??
Os : silent...
Priya : papa... is it you?? I know papa aap hi hai...
Os : no response...
Priya: papa aap apni priya se itna naraz ho gye ki baat bhii nhi karna chahte... me manti hu ki mujhse glti huyii h ki mene aapko sach nhi btaya... papa plz mere liye naa shi.. duggu k liye man jayiye...
Plz papa I miss you...I lo... call ends
Priya :
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She wipes her tears and says : priya itni jldi haar mt maan... ek na ek din sab thik ho jayega...

After dusting whole flat... priya goes to duggu's study room n finds that dugu's toys are lying everywhere in the room... she murmurs: ye duggu bhi na itnna shaitan ho gya hai... ye aadat to use apni mamma se hi mili h...  she collects all the toys... put back in the cupboard... than she opens another cupboard... n sees dugu's books... some her books... photo albums... some files... nd her personal diary...

She opens one album nd sees...

1st Album......
1 photo : sudhir n shipra...
2 photo : priya holding trophy in her hand wid her parents...
Priya keeps her hand on sudhir's photo n says: plz papa mujhe maaf kar dijiye... in 5 salo me mene aapse milne ki bhut koshish ki but aap her bar mujhse mile nhi... i missed you...
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One by one she flips the photo than she takes another album...

2nd album...
1 photo : Rajat n Priya's engagement..
2 photo : she holding varmala infront of rajat...
3 photo : rajat is tying mangalsutra on Priya's neck...
4 photo : priya's photo wid baby bump (7th month pregnancy )
5 photo : Priya's baby shower...



6 photo : rajat's hand on Priya's shoulder on her baby shower...
7 photo : priya n rajat's wid Priya's parent nd Rajat's parent...

Next photo : duggu's 1st photo on his birth...



Next Photo : rajat is holding duggu in his arms... taking priya in his side... its looking like a perfect family picture...
Priya murmurs: thanks rajat tumne mera bhut sath diya...
Next photo : dugu's annaprashan...
Next photo : rajat's mom is giving bath to duggu...
Next photo : shipra n sudhir is holding duggu...

NP : duggu's 1st birthday photo
NP : Priya's college gang (rajat, priya, shruti n apeksha) wid duggu..
Priya murmurs : I hope apeksha... tum or rajat apni life me bhut khush hoge... n yes shrutii special thanks to you... you have always supported me... jldi wapas aa jaa yr apne honeymoon se... i missing you alot...
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NP : duggu on tricycle...
NP : duggu eating chocolate eclair nd his mouth covered wid chocolate... .
NP : duggu playing cricket in his 4th year...
Next : duggu's birth certificate...
She says : ye sudha bhi na... ise birth certificate  smbhal k rakhne bola tha to isne yha sambhal k rkha hai...
N then she reads dugu's name nd his father name : Rajat Kapur...
Smiles n says : ohh i forgot next month my baby's birthday is coming... surprise party to bantii hai...
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After seeing all the albums... she notices that her personal diary is also there...
Then she remembers ram k usko chhod k jane k bad usne kbhi us diary me kuch nhi likha...
Diary's title : MY LIFE.. MY RULES...
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Opens 1st page...n reads...

Hii diary.. i m your partner.. priya sharma... mai tumse apni sarii bate share karne wali hu... or ye idea mujhe apne papa ne diya hai... nd i wish ki hm dono ka sath kabhi na chhute...

1st entry: Priya's bonding wid her dad..
2nd entry : nokjhok wid her mom...
Next : masti wid frnds...
Next : jhagda wid best frnd shrutii...
Her chubli bubli naughty harkte...
Shrutii ko mnana...
Her crush.. : her physics professor...
Tit for tat...  given to shruti's boyfrnd...
1st time pub jana or talli hona... jo usne ghr pr nhi btaya...
Hangover nd then kasam khana kii aaj k bad NO PUB...
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Internship in Infotech MNC...
Her 1.5 years journey in Infotech...
Logo ko bakra bnana

Note: Guys here comes our Raya's love story which u were waiting to read. And it wil move in flashback when she met 1st time Ram  To Ram's proposal to priya...

Next entry : 1st meeting wid ram nd usko bakra bnana...
Aaj mai ek NRI se mili... or usko mene kya bakra bnaya... i can't tell you... or mene usse kha ki mai ACP ki beti hu... he convinced... after that his face was worth watching... or mene smartly usse sorry bhi bulwa liya... ohh priya  you r great...

Next entry : tumhe pta hai aaj meri kya halat huyi hai... mujhe 1st time life me itna dar lgaa hai kisi se... jis NRI bande ko kl maine bakra bnaya tha... he was standing in front of me as my senior... nd i was feeling like... I am standing in front of an NRI Lion...
N my MD said to him... that miss sharma will assist you in this project... n my mouth was shut like my throat was choked ... n that NRI was looking at me like that he will eat me up anytime... that was soo horrible... and he challenged me that... he will make me say sorry to him... but i m priya sharma...I will not say sorry to him... is janam me to kya... me ise agle janam me bhi sorry nhi bolne wali...
Wese wo hai bda handsome nd smart... but pta ni wo mujhse kese bakra ban gya... jo bhi ho priya... tujhe usse bach kr rehna pdega... wo itni aasani se haar manne wala nhii hai...

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So guys ram priya se sorry bulwa paega ya nhi...in coming updates u will see their cute nokjhoks , tashanbaazi, ram will feel guilty ,  friendship , love story and much more...stay tuned with the story...thank you and plz do comment on it...

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Morning at Dinning table... 

Sudhir to priya : priya beta kl tera mood q off tha... or kl pehli bar hua jb tune apne papa se day out  share nhi kiya... 

Priya : wo papa kuch nhi bs wo office se related kuch baat hai... 

Sudhir : tu apne papa se jhut bolegi... chl btaa kya bat hai 

Priya tells the whole story of Ram's and her argument of over sorry... 

Sudhir laughs... 

Priya : papa... aap has rhe hai.. 

Sudhir : tu esa q krti hai beta... aaj tere new boss ko jake sorry bol dena...sab sort out ho jayega.. 

Priya : Aapko pta hai na papa mai sorry to nhi bolne wali... mai bhi use full on tashan dene wali hu... 

Sudhir : beta ye to galat baat hai... 

Priya : papa chill ab dekhiye me usko kese mzaa chkhati hu...office me... 


Shipra's entry... 

shipra : aap dono fir se shuru ho gye or aap bhi kya iske sath lg jate hai... 

Priya ab tu bachchi nhi rhi.. bdi ho gyi hai... aaj ja k us new boss ko sorry bol dena to sab sort out ho jayega... 

Priya : okk.. thinks(sorry to mai nhi bolne wali...) 


At office... 

Priya is working in her cabin... 

Peon comes and says... mam aapko kapoor sir bula rhe hai... 

Priya : okk... (ab isko kya kam pad gya... fir se agar isne sorry ki baat ki n... to mai usko uski nani yad dila dungi... are nani se yaad aaya bhut dino se nani se bat nhi ki... chlo thik hai... phle isko nipta du...fr nani se bat krugii) 

Priya knocks at Ram's cabin.. 

Ram : come in... 

Priya comes... 

Ram : sit Ms. Sharma .. 

She sits down... 

Priya : sir apne bulaya mujhe ... 

Ram : haa... wo ek important kaam tha tumse.. 

Take this file ye hmare new project se related tender file  hai and I want you to check the figures of this project and I want it in 1hour... 

Now you can leave... 

Priya : okk sir (mockingly) 

Ram (thinks : ACP ki beti tumhe to mai achcha mza chakhane wala hu... ab aayega mzaa...) 


After 1 hour of hardwork priya comes in Ram's cabin with tender file and report.. 

Priya : sir... your work is done... 

and passes the file 

you can check it... 

ram takes the file and checks it and throws in dustbin... 

priya : what was that sir?? Aapne report dustbin me q dali? 

Ram : konsi report? 

Priya : sir abhi jo mene apko di check  karne ke liye.. 

Ram : wo bhi koi report thi... jisme kuch smajh nhi aa rha tha... 

Priya angrily : aap mujhe bta dete ki report me kya mistake thi... ese aap dustbin me nhi dal skte... 

Ram : ohh just shut up Ms. Sharma... mujhe mat sikhayiye aap... ye dekhiye ise kehte hai report... check it.. 

Priya : sss... jb aap ne khud report prepare kr hi li thi to mujhe q pareshan kiya... 

Don't tell me ki aap kl ka badla le rhe hai... 

Ram : mai koi badla nhi le rha hu... Ms. Sharma I was just checking your ability... 

That's it... now you can leave.. 

Ram (thinks : Ms. Sharma tumhe to mai itna irritate krne wala hu ki tum mere nam se bhi darne lag jaogi... 

Sorry to tum bologi ... & I will make sure of that...) 


Priya comes to her cabin and murmurs... smjhta kya hai apne aap ko...  boss hai to kya kuch bhi krega... mai bhi haar nhi manne wali hu... I know wo ye sab mujhse sorry bulwane ke liye kr rha hai... or wo to mai kabhi nhi bolne wali... 


At lunch time... 

Priya was about to leave for cafeteria... 

Peon : mam aapko kapoor sir bula rhe hai... 

Priya : is waqt... unhe bolo mai lunch karke aati hu.. 

Peon : no mam... he said come to cabin now... its very urgent... 


Priya : okk... 

(ab kya kaam reh gya hai isko... sir ko bhi mujhe hi iska assistant bnana tha...) 

Colleague (anjali) : are priya kha jaa rhi hai? 

Lunch nhi karna hai kya... 

Priya : are phle us bakre se to nipat lu... fir lunch karti hu... 

Col : kon bakra... tu kya bol rhi hai ye sab... 

Priya : tujhe mai aakr btati hu sab... abhi mujhe jane de... 


Priya in cabin.. 

Ram : are Ms. Sharma aap yha kya kar rhi hai... wo bhi lunch ke time pr... 

Priya very sweetly : sir aapne hi to bulaya mujhe.. 

Ram : maine bulaya ? 

Priya : yes sir... 

Ram : ohh yes maine hi bulaya hai... come sit.. 

Priya sits... 

Priya : sir kya kam hai aapko.. 

Ram : are 1 minute... abhi to aayi ho... lo pani pi lo.. 

Priya (thinks : is bakre ko koi btao ki khali pet pani nhi piya jata...) 

P : no its okk sir... aap bs kam btayiye... 

Ram : okk... Ms. Sharma... 

He takes his lunch box and open it and smells ... 

Wow... aaloo pratha... my favourite... 

Ram : tum khaogi.? 

Priya : no sir mai apna lunch layi hu... bs aap jldi se btayiye ki aapko mujhse kya kam hai... wo bhi lunch time me.. 

Ram : tumhe itni jldi kis bat ki hai... 

Wait dear 

He starts eating the aaloo paratha... and grinning  inside... (ab aayega mza...) 

Slowly and slowly with full enjoyment he is eating... 


Priya is watching (ye bakra jaan bujh kr  ye sab kr rha hai... ise koi kam nhi hai mujhse sirf time waste kr rha hai... ohh god bhut joro ki bhuk lag rhi hai... kya kru... or ye bakra kitni dhire dhire kha rha hai... ) 


Priya interrupts ram : sir aapka khana ho gya ho to kaam bhi bta dijiye... 

Yaa fir mai jau.. 

Ram : ohh Ms. Sharma aap yhi thi.. wo lunch itna tasty tha ki mai bhul hi gya ki aap bhi yhi hai.. 

Ohh yes me kaam to bhul hi gya... koi baat nhi mai bad me btata hu... abhi to aap lunch ke liye jayiye... its only 5 minutes left.. 


Priya angrily stares at him and left from there... 

She eating her lunch very fastly.. in her cabin itself... 

Priya (thinks : is bakre ne mera din to bigada hi sath me mera lunch time bhi waste kar diya... but mai bhi dekhti hu ye or mujhe kitna irritate karega...) 


At 6:00pm 

Priya and her colleague anjali in lift... 

Anjali : priya fir tune lunch kiya ya nhi... and ha tu kya bakra bakra kr rhi thi us time... 

Priya tells the whole story about bakra.. 

Anjali starts laughing loudly... and says sorry bolke sort out kr na.. 

Priya : no way ab to me sorry bilkul bhi nhi bolne wali... mai bhi use achcha mza chakhaugi... 

Anjali : all the best my dear.. 


Next day... 

Priya is full in mood that she will not let Ram to annoy her... 

Aaj to us bakre ko mai ek bhi moka nhi dene wali mujhe tang krne ka... 

Priya is working in her cabin with full concentration... 

Anjali comes there and says.. 

Anjali : so madam kya kr rhi ho?? 

Priya : nothing anjali wo jo deal bakre ke sath kr rhe hai. Bas usi pr kuch kam kr rhi hu.. 

Anjali : wese tune R.K. sir ko bhut hi achcha naam diya hai... 

Both hii fii to each other.. 

Priya : anjali ye to kuch bhi nhi hai... maine uska no. Bhi bakre ke naam se hi save kiya hai... 

Anjali : laughingly ohh that'so funny... priya tumhe ese ideas aate kha se hai madam... 

Priya : you know na anjali mai hmesha se hi esi hu... masti khor... chubbly bubbly types... and logo ko bakra bnana to meri favourite hobby hai.. 

Ram is over hearing all these... 

Anjali : be carefull priya ... sir ko pta n chal jaye ki tu unhe bakra bolti hai... 

Priya : mai koi darti thodi hi n hu us bakre se... shaql dekhi h uski...mendhak jesi aankhe hai... or usi ki tarah din bhar tur... tur... tur krta rehta hai... 

{Ram is boiling with anger...} 

P : or idhar udhar fudkta rehta hai... apne cabin me shanti se beth nhi skta.. 


Ram stomps his feet and goes to his cabin.. 

Ram : sss... frustrateddly  ... esa kese bol skti hai wo mere bare me... kis angle se me use bakra nazar aata hu... meri personality dekhi hai kabhi... London ka top most bachelor hu mai or ye mujhe bakrka samjh rhi hai... 

He sees his face in mirror and says or wo kya bol rhi thi meri aankho ke bare mai... kya word tha wo... yes mendhak jesi aankhe... konse angle  se meri eyes use mendhak jesi nazar aati hai or din bhar me tur..tur karta rehta hu... 

Or kya haa usne  mera no. Bhi bakre ke naam se save karke rkha hai... 

Sss... she has crossed all the limits... I won't spare her... 

So arrogant, rude, and nakchadi khi ki... use kya mai kuch bhi kru... wo hoti kon hai mere bare mai ye sab bolne wali...

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To be continued... 



Edited by kirtiraya95 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
The constant reminder of past with present is great but still it hurts for both of them who seems can't get over from their past. 
Something big happened in their relationship and love which lead them to separate from each other but Priya is mother to Duggu n may be Ram is the father.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice storyโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Please continue sooon