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Hey guys... I am finally here...I know, I am super delayed ever since I have been posting that I am writing a fiction.

But, instead of making you all wait for forever, let me break it into multiple parts, so that the loop goes on...

So, leaving this post for the Index, the first part follows in the post below, have fun.πŸ˜ƒ

INDEX 

PART-1- BELOW

CHAPTER-2-PAGE-2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149768914?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-3 PAGE-3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149772917?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-4 PAGE-5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149775737?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-5 PAGE-9-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149782735?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-6 PAGE-12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149789149?tid=5073224
CHAPTER-7 PAGE-16-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149802135?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-8 PAGE-19-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149811544?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-9 PAGE-27-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149849400?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-10 PAGE-33-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149898117?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-11 PAGE-43-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150032977?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-12 PAGE 50-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150109046?tid=5073224

CHAPTER-13(LAST) PAGE 62- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150755801?tid=5073224

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Magar jee nahi sakte tumhare bina 


CHAPTER-1

 

"Mujhe mera bachha waapas chahiye!" Malhar was fed up hearing the same sentence for the last few days. Only this time this screaming monologue came from Kalyani's mouth, who was getting uncontrollable by every minute standing in the verandah of the house. They had gone to the hospital for Moksh's checkup when while returning, a van with an unnumbered plate opened in a flick of a second and Moksh was snatched out of Malhar's hand while Kalyani was taking help of Malhar's shoulder to put on the strap of her footwear that had come out. By the time Malhar could rush his jeep off, the van was totally out of sight. He had put up his entire force to find his son out, but there were still no reports. And here Kalyani was getting inconsolable. He had turned around to snub her from crying, just in an attempt to help her hold stronger, did a standing Kalyani fall thud on the ground, even before he could catch her... All the Deshmukhs came running to her who had been standing around helplessly, watching Kalyani lose herself into the loss of her son. Everyone was sure that this doing is of Sampada and Atharva, and every accusing eye came upon Pallavi and Aparna who were blood relatives of both the culprits... Both the ladies cursed heart in heart the moment when Atharva and Sampada met... Leaving all the thoughts aside, everyone ran towards an unconscious Kalyani. 

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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice but small
Ye dil maange more
Updated mine
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ThanksπŸ˜ƒ
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This content was originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

Nice but small

Ye dil maange more
Updated mine

I know dear... I have been trying to post a bigger update, but its not taking, since I am copy pasting from MS-Word...
God Knows what the problem is, I will post the second part sooner.πŸ˜ƒ
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I know dear... I have been trying to post a bigger update, but its not taking, since I am copy pasting from MS-Word...

God Knows what the problem is, I will post the second part sooner.πŸ˜ƒ

I do the same maybe your font size is too big
Chalo koi nahi will wait
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I do the same maybe your font size is too big
Chalo koi nahi will wait

I don't really know what new happened this time. I have been writing the same way, as I have been for the last many years.
Whatever it is, will post the second part on page two, so that the post doesn't get lost..πŸ˜ƒ
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CHAPTER-2

"She's shocked ACP Malhar... She's wallowing into the loss of her child... The way she is deteriorating, it's no good news..." the doctor who had come to check on an unconscious Kalyani broke the news to him. He had injected sedatives to calm her down, though that could not be a permanent solution. 

Malhar politely nodded at the doctor, escorting him out of the house. While his fingers angrily punched on his phone's screen, dialling to his team to know about the updates. 



"Pawar, main nahi jaanta ki ye kaise hoga, Eknath industries ki agli-pichli har khaal udhed daalo, lekin Artharva aur Sampada ko dhoondho. Mujhe Moksh chahiye..." Malhar hissed in anger.

 

"Sir, Eknath industries ki maalkin toh khud pagalkhaane mein admitted hai... Wo sirf yahi bata rahi hai ki Atharva uska pati hai... Lekin na ghar pe, na office mein, Atharva aur Sampada ka koi ata pata nahi hai... Wo dono shayad Moksh ko lekar bhaag gaye hain..." Pawar updated with the news. 



"Saare bank accounts par nazar rakho Eknath industries ke... Itne aish-o-aaraam ki aadat ho chuki hogi Atharva aur Sampada ko, kahin na kahin se toh amount draw karenge... Track karo..." Malhar instructed, and disconnected the call... His eyes held angst and fury... He, till now hated his ex-wife and her lover for hurting him so much... Now his hatred looked so belittle before the hurt that they have caused to Kalyani and Pillu... He turned around to address to Aparna. - 

"Aatya!" 

Aparna was shocked to hear this address from Malhar's mouth... "Aai hoon Na main tumhari?" she stammered. 

"Aap Sampada ki Aai hain... Dhoondhiye apni beti ko... Aur mere bete ko bhi... Kyuki agar mujhe mera beta nahi mila, toh aap mein se kisi ke liye bhi achha nahi hoga..." he eyed towards Pallavi as well... 

"Arre Deva! Malhar... main nahi jaanti Atharva kahan hai..." Pallavi's breath was stuck into her throat. 

"Toh dhoondhiye Pallavi Maami... bhai hai na aapka... Kaafi dinon se ghar mein apne ameer bhai ka rob bhi jata rahi thi... Aap nahi dhoondhengi toh aur kaun dhoondhega... Lag jaaiye kaam par..." Malhar shouted.  

His sound made Kalyani stir in her sleep, and she again begun crying for Moksh despite under the influence of sedatives... Malhar sighed in desperation... He felt so helpless for her... Going by her bedside he sat there, patting her head... instantly, she calmed down and scooted her head on his lap... The father of her child gave her the solace maybe. 

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Posted: 5 years ago
very nice! waiting for moreee
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Very amazing
But too short! 
Can we have longer updates? 
Update soonish