Originally posted by: Archie0405Dear Sur
Please update next part soon, this time lapse is not good for health of readers. they get irritated when they find nothing good in show which is happening a lot nowadays and not getting required dose of happiness of getting their favorite ffs updated. My other fav ff can be updated only after 24th as May is busy, so it is yout duty to keep lalchi readers of forum happy.Do update
Originally posted by: munchkinlandSur I am soo very upset with you
You know I went through this particular chapter so many times so that I could unres and commentbut every freaking time I finished reading it I was crying ๐ญNow also I have tears in my eyes and then writing.how can you make me cry so much.Mujhse toh or dard bardasht nhi ho rhaseriously I feel like in dono ko ek ek thappd laga kr aamne samne bitha du ki baat kro.uthna mt baat kiye bina.Naina has this habit of not listening to things completely and jumping to conclusion whether be Dia or her fatherShe blasted on both of them unnecessarily and later on realises her fault.I know Mundit are right that Sameer should move on and all but no not happening.He was fighting for his life๐ฒWhat?This is getting intensehua kya tha and I am damn sure there is someone behind all this misunderstandingKhi voh A toh nhihe loved Naina and in order to have her he played such tricksmy brain is working on overdrive.I really adore this daughter father duoshe isn't aware that he is her father but she has gotten this closer to him that she shares things with him and not her motherhow sameer is in a turmoil that he can not fulfill Diya's small small wishes as well.Will Naina's jealousy lead to the confrontation between the two?Oh btw I am sure Diya wanted those sandwiches ordered by her father and not what her mother wanted her to haveNaina ko sachi Rakesh ki aatma ghus gyi hain kyashe slapped diya that hardbechari bachiSameer ka gussa hona bilkul jayaj thabut wait what what disease does Diya haveI am pretty scaredAnd I am again saying it Naina ke jo bhi reasons ho she is completely wrong in separating Diya and Sameer.He has the right to know.
Please read her Note on pg-51..she is on a trip with family till Tuesday.Originally posted by: MANSHITASaturday aagaya . You was told us that you gave update on weekend. Plzz update fast as possible.
She will not be able to update because she is on a trip..Read her note on pg-51Originally posted by: apoorva_jToday's Sunday plzzz update
I love this story so much! the real-ness of it all.. amazing.. Cant wait for the next chapter
Hey dear Shreya!You know...that was one of the first things I noticed when I updated this part- Part 28 is on Page 28! Haha!Aww I know dear...I'm a rain lover too...and somehow we received a couple of drizzles early this month in the midst of the summer heat! Imagine my delight! :DI'm glad you liked the song selection here- typical rainy hits from 60s to 90s I guess! :D You know what- I'd initially planned to have them kiss in the car like this, but then now the story has steered in a little different direction...plus your views on their intimacy before any revelation occurs from Arvind's side made me rethink...I agreed...I didn't want the story to denote anything extramarital or something...so I let it be...meanwhile..the undercurrents of passion are stirring again! :DShhh...Bhagwanji zarur sunenge! ;)I wanted to give a lighter note to the story after the emotional parts...so while Naina's part was still heavy, I tried to make Sameer's a bit cheery!Naina indeed had it real bad...Preeti hasn't been as close to Naina as she is in the show...and this was a reason why she never confided in her sister for support or advice on Sameer...And yes, Sameer's heart is hopeful...but the mind in unaware of what the future brings! :)So happy that you enjoyed the update wholeheartedly! Thank you so much for the review dear!Love,SurOriginally posted by: MayashikaPart 28: Torn Between The Heart And Mind
I will say two things first:1) It's a funny observation. The Part 28 is on the Page 28.๐2) It's a scorching hot day and you started the chapter with the ever soothing monsoon showers and the peaceful (for me) thunderstorms. The steady and soft white velvet drops. It washes the world, the quenching soil and the life.I am looking out, at the sky, hopeful of a summer shower.The rain songs you chose, Sur Di was apt especiallyRim Jhim GireandLagi Aaj Sawan Phir...Well, the atmosphere was set and both lost control; my heart was racing along with them and I almost expected a kiss. But, later I wouldn't have liked it because Mr. A is still in the picture. Good that they didn't kiss but one thing is clear, the passion is reignited!The prayer to the Almighty in the car. The answer will be positive, right Sur Di?*hopeful eyes*The conversation with Chintu was funny and light-hearted! Was needed to break the high note (about the feelings and desires) the writing had taken.๐The past is still unclear but you revealed some glimpses and now, I can understand her better. My heart broke when I read Preeti had given up on Naina at that time along with others.๐Her photo close to his heart, he slept with peace. A hopeful heart has been born and now, I am eager to read how this is going to turn out! Hoping to catch up with the latest chapter soon!๐คMayashika2019-04-10 04:25:18
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