Originally posted by: SixteenAgainbaad muddat ke ye ghadi aayi
aap aaye to zindagi aayi
ishq mar mar ke kaamyaab huaa
aaj ek zarraa aaftaab huaa
Waah waah! Kya shayari hai May! Thank you so much dear! π³
This is how I felt reading this update!
Thank you for unveiling some bits of what Naina has been through these last few years. It helped me connect better with her pain and her side of the story. Preeti be bhi muh mod liya Naina se?? Chachaji stopped his brother from killing her and then left her to fight with the world on her own... makes me wonder if he was trying to do her a favour or his own brother. That's really sad yaar.
Yeah- yahan pe the family dynamics are a bit different...though chachaji is the responsible one, Naina and Preeti's bond is not as intense here as in the show...remember she didn't confide in her about Sameer and her feelings for him...but still who is at fault remains to be seen...π
There is a book I used to read to Inu when she was younger, The Kiss That Missed. Suddenly uski yaad aa gayi tumhare Samaina ke almost kiss ka padh kar. Along with them the readers also missed it! But, it felt right that it wasn't rushed into.
Ahh...π the name of the book is so apt yaar! Am glad you resonate with me here...didn't want them pouncing over each other with some many misunderstandings in place.
Sur, that scene of Naina bathing was so beautifully written. It brought back memories of another time when she had tried to wash away the first night that happened between them. And now she clings on to the memories and tries to recreate them. Life can be so uncertain, right?
I'm so happy that you linked these two versions together May...yeah life is full of uncertainties...perhaps that is what makes it all the more liveable or not...well that's life...can't really know what's in store for us!Initially Naina wanted to wash off her sins- the traces of him on her in a frivolous attempt to regain her chastity...but now, she pines for him knowing she can't have him!
The interaction and light banter between Sameer and Chottu made me smile, ekdum dil se!
Hehe...thanks May...kabhi kabhi Sameer joke bhi maar leta hai yeh wala...zyadatar gusse mein rehta hai...vaise naam maine Chintu rakha tha...but Chottu is so much better! Am kind of thinking of editing it! π
Sameer praying for a miracle and asking god to make her his in at least some life... Sur, bahoot feel hua yaar woh. :(
π But miracles happen! π€
And that last scene of Sameer sleeping with her photo close to his heart was so soothing and hopeful.
π Am glad that scene pacified you! π³
Ab bus ek guzarish hai.. please keep update soon!!!Jo maine nahi puri kiπ Bad, bad me...! π Just stuck somewhere in the next part May...but would try to hurry it up!
Lots of love and big hug!
MayLoads of love to you too May!!Thank you for such a fabulous review!My response in pink!LoveSur
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