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abhiya23 thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
Mind blowing update ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘. Bela is confused but deep down she knows she still loves Mahir immensely. Yash Meera are also aware of Behir love but question is what exactly happened ๐Ÿ˜ฒ? this suspense is killing me now. Ah Prerna Anurag great to see them again. Mother daughter scene was emotional. This is called Mahir Sehgal's spirit of getting his bela back by any means. I am sure hindrance would be him for the wedding ๐Ÿ˜‰. Continue soon can't wait yaar 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Bela is in love with Mahir. Wonder what happened between them. Glad that Kalyani & Prerna understands Belas's pain. Bela decides to move on with Armaan for her parents' happiness. Nice 2 see Mahir boosting himself to get Bela.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb update dear๐Ÿ‘!!!
Bela became upset after seeing Mahir... Kalyani went to meet her friends MeeYa... Prerna noticed Bela being upset n asked Kalyani about it... Kalyani said that they met Mahir at d function...
Bela said Prerna not say it to her father Anurag as he will feel sad... Prerna conducted a puja... Oh panditji said there is a hindrance in BeMaan wedding... Oh God I can't wait more... I'm really curious to know the next... Eagerly waiting dear... Thanks for the PM... N really sorry for late...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Commenting so lately sorry 
There is lot of curiosity hidden in the story 
Both behir love each other but Bela is engaged to someone else 
Really want to know what was the reason which behir got separated but still have feelings for each other
And what is Bela mazboori to marry another person 
Do update soon and unfold the mystery 
Congratulations for new story ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank u so much 4 the awesome response my friends

Edit credits to the real editors

Dedicated to Mansi for giving jodi name to Yash Meera-YashRa

Dedicated to gopsss for giving jodi name to Yash Meera-MeeYa n jodi name to Armaan Bela-BeMaan



I desire you Part 3

After a few days...

Kalyani:When Bela agreed to marry Armaan jeeju,we were so happy.When papa announced their engagement we were so happy.The media was after them questioning about their relationship.Bela was cheerful.

But later I realized that Bela was only pretending to be happy.Still she shone during the engagement party.

Armaan jeeju became my good friend too.

Everything was going well.Suddenly Mahir came back.

 

Meera:That is love Kalyani.Love is so strong that it brought Mahir back.Bela is living in love.So love's pain is nothing for her.

 

KALYANI:Still her pain makes us upset.

 

Yash:If you want Bela to be happy she has to unite with Mahir.

 

KALYANI:But you know that Bela won't be willing for that.

 

Y:That is their  destiny.

 

 

Bela prayed in the temple painfully.She turned back only to get shocked.Mahir was standing there.

 

BELA:You?

 

MAHIR:The God whom I believe in brought me here.I understood that it was only to make me meet you.

 

BELA:I m going.

 

Mahir held her hand.

 

BELA:Leave my hand.

 

MAHIR:I will.But tell me why you left me.

 

Bela suppressed her pain.

 

BELA:I felt like leaving you.So I left you.

 

MAHIR:You can't escape from me by giving such a silly answer Bela.I know that you cannot leave me like that.Did your parents ask you to leave me?

 

BELA:Don't blame my parents.You know how happy they were for us.They never did something like that.

 

MAHIR:Then what made you take that decision?

 

BELA:I told you..there is no particular reason.

 

Bela removed his hand from her.

 

BELA:Don't touch me.You have no right to touch me.

 

Mahir became upset:Because you are engaged?So only your fianc Armaan can touch you?

 

Bela's heart was pierced.

 

MAHIR:I know that your heart was paining when he touched you.You can be peaceful only if I am with you.

 

He caressed her face.For a moment she was lost in his passionate touch.She closed her eyes.

 

Kuch na kahein, bas chup rahein

 

Khamoshiyan hi keh jaaye

 

Tham jaaye, yeh jahaan

 

 

 

After a long time a sweet smile appeared on Mahir' face.She opened her eyes.
Aur pal bhi, theher jaaye


Her eyes touched his eyes smoothly.

Rahein na kuch bhi darmiyaan

 

Mitey yeh saari duriyaan

 

Milke bhi hain adhuri si,

 

Yeh daastaan...

 

 

Suddenly she pushed him and ran away crying.

 

Zid yeh thi tumhein,

 

Ki hum bhi kuch kahein,

 

Hamein yeh gila that ki tum,

 

Chup rahe...

 

Mahir raised his voice:Bela...listen...the moment we shared now proved that still only I have place in your heart.Still you desire me.So I swear..I will get you back Bela.These are Mahirwathi Chandra's words.

 

Yeh Majobooriyan

 

Aur yeh faaslein,

 

Chaha nahi phir bhi badhte gaye

 

Bela was shocked.She closed her eyes in pain.




Ab joh yeh ehsaas hain,

 

Yeh joh adhoori aas hain,

 

Rehne de yunhi inhein,

 

Jo jasbaat hain...

She said in her mind:I also wish for that Mahir.But our fate is against it.

 

She walking away like a numb woman.

 

  


Rehke bhi sang hain juda

 

Bhulega na kabhi jahan

 

Hain yeh alag hi daastaan...

 

 Flash back...

 

College...

 

Bela burned with jealousy when she saw Mahir rehearsing dance with a girl.

 

BELA:What an odd pair!I can't understand why they chose her for Mahir.

 

Kalyani:You are right Bela.I think in her place you should have been there.Then there would have been chemistry.

 

Bela smiled.

 

Kalyani giggled:Blushing?Purposefully I said this to see you blush.

 

Bela was embarrassed:Kalyani!What are you saying?

 

Kalyani smiled:Bela,I know very well that you love Mahir secretly.I have been noticing your facial expression whenever you see him.

 

Bela was smiled.

 

Suddenly they heard a cry.

 

It was Mahir's partner' voice.

 

She:Oh!My leg got twisted.What a pain!I need to rest.

 

Choreographer:If you back out who will dance with Mahir?

 

She:I don't know.But I am going.

 

She sat down.

 

Bela did'nt think twice:I will dance with Mahir.

 

Kalyani smiled.

 

The choreographer was very happy:Wow!Very good.Thanks a lot.Come.Let us start the rehearsal now itself.

 

BELA:Ok.

 

Bela had a beautiful strange feeling when she danced with Mahir.

 

Kuch na kaho...

 

 

College show...

 

Bela and Mahir danced romantically.

 

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajoodh mera..

 

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajoodh mera
Tujhse juda agar ho jayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jayenge juda
Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui, ab tum hi ho...(Aashiqui).

 



 

Yash:They look like a real couple.

 

Meera:Ya.So much of chemistry.

 

Kalyani:It is partially right.Because Bela loves Mahir.

 

They were surprised.

 

M:Really?

 

Y:Then Mahir is also falling for her.Sure.

 

KALYANI:How do you know that?

 

M:Who will not fall in love with Bela?Her love is sincere.So Mahir will surely fall for her.

 

Kalyani smiled:I hope Bela gets her love.

 

After the dance...

Bela caressed her own body as it was touched by Mahir's magical hands.She blushed  thinking of those romantic moments.

Kalyani went and hugged Bela:It was so beautiful Bela.You and Mahir make a perfect couple.

 

Bela blushed.

 

KALYANI:Now let me get ready for my dance performance.

 

Kalyani and her friends wore dance costume.

 

Bela was there with them to cheer them up.

 

In between Kalyani's dance performance

 unknowingly Bela's eyes met Mahir's eyes among the audience.Bela realized with happiness that his eyes were fixed on her.

She was surprised,because during the rehearsal he never spoke a word to her.But now his eyes are flowing on her beautifully like a river.She blushed.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update 
So you started unfolding behir love story 
But part was small I felt ๐Ÿ˜†
Everyone understands behir love before them 
Nice that Bela have feelings for mahir and mahir ka side you still didn't start
Do update soon mahir side too and reason for Bela marrying someone else 
Waiting 
jasminerahul thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
yes...behir fb was short.but more to come.u will get to know the reason in future.

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Nice update 

So you started unfolding behir love story 
But part was small I felt ๐Ÿ˜†
Everyone understands behir love before them 
Nice that Bela have feelings for mahir and mahir ka side you still didn't start
Do update soon mahir side too and reason for Bela marrying someone else 
Waiting 

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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: jasminerahul

yes...behir fb was short.but more to come.u will get to know the reason in future.

Will wait update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
abhiya23 thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
Finally you started Behir flashback smart move ๐Ÿ˜‰
So good to see everybody understanding their love and pain both are going through
Bela having feelings for Mahir and him pulling close was romantic and sad at same time 
Why is she marrying Armaan if her parents were happy with Mahir and relationship?๐Ÿ˜•

Update soon can't wait this is my desire to read more ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb update dear๐Ÿ‘!!! First of all thanks a lot dear for d dedicationโค๏ธ... MeeYa talked about BeHir with Kalyani... BeHir met at temple... Bela tried to go from there... But unknowingly there is a strong connection which always connect her to Mahir even she try to ignore... BeHir college flashback... BeHir dance๐Ÿ˜ณ... Jealous Bela... Bela blushed when Kalyani said Bela is d correct pair for Mahirโ˜บ๏ธ... Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting to know how BeHir separated... Thanks dear for the PM...