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AKSHAN SS- Ham Jo Milne Lage..... Last part 24 feb updated..

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Posted: 5 years ago

AKSHAN SS- Ham Jo Milne Lage...


Namashkaar to the forumwaasi. Aap sabhi ko iss valentine's week ki badhaai. Or aane wale valentine's Day k liye best wishes.


After thinking two or three ideas I picked this one. Ho Sakta hai ki two shots ho. Ho sakta hai zyada ho isiliye main SS man Kar hi likh Rahi Hu.


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After that valentine's Day party kand was over. They reached home. They didn't utter anything to each other. She changed n go to poolside for sleeping.


He also changed n lied on the bed.

Flashbacks of the party incident was traveling to their eyes.


He remembered she was saying to Khanna.

G-dekhiye aap hame Jo chahe Kar lijiyega but pls hamare family or guests ko chhod dijiye. Pls ...


A- guddan are u out of your mind. ... Khanna MERI BAAT suno gun neeche rakho n just surrender urself. Apni biwi Ka khoon Kar k tum Zinda Nahi bachoge.samajhe...

G-. Nahi Jindal Sahab isme inka koi dosh Nahi  hai ye unki medical problem hai. Pls ... Pls Khanna ji MERI BAAT suniye put down the gun pls...

Just then Vikram rawat jumped on him n snatched the gun from him. All were relieved n went outside.

Rawat was bleeding a bit. he excused himself n went somewhere.


Guddan ran to him ...

G- rawat ji aap thik to hai na... 

V- ha guddan ji ham bilkul thik hai.


Or aaj hame ehsaas hua hai ki ham kitne doshpoorn vyakti Hain. Kitne neech Hain jisne apni Bahan se sabse zyada pyaar Karne wale shakhs se Apne hi Bahan k pati or Apne jijaji par shak Kiya...

G- rawat ji aapko galatfahmi ho gayi thi.. or galatfahmi Kisi ko BHI ho Sakti hai.

V- Nahi guddan ji... Galatfahmi sirf usi ko Hoti h Jo insan ko samajhne ki parakhne ki samajh Nahi rakhte hai... Warnaa aapko Kahan hui galatfahmi .. jabki Aapka or Akshat ji kaaa rishta kin halato me Juda ye main janta Hun...

To us mushkil samay me b Aapne unn par vishwaas Kiya apna patni hone Ka farz nibhaya...


MERI ek dhamki Dene par Aapne Akshat ji se bedroom me some k liye zidd ki or jab wo Nahi maane to aap itni thand me terrace par poolside par soti Rahi...


MERI dhamki par Aapne rum pee li.. jab ki aapko laga ki usne zahar thaaa... Yeh vishwaas hai guddan ji Jo aap Apne pati par Karti hai... Sirf Kuch mahino ki shadi me b u trust him...

G- sach kahe rawat ji ... Ham itne bade Nahi hai na hi Umar me na anubhav me magar ... Jab b unki ankhon me dekhte Hain na hame usme Sab k liye pyaar or sachchaii Nazar aati hai... Ham zyada Nahi kah rahe magar sach yahi h ki agar bhagwaan b AA k kah de na ki Jindal Sahab doshi Hain to ham Nahi manenge...

V- aapse bus itna hi kahunga ki jab b lage ki Zindagi me koi mushkil ho to Yaad rakhiye ki Aapka ek BADA Bhai b hai.

Saying this he put his hand


On her head. She smiled


He asked


V- kya aap mujhe bhaiya bula Sakti Hain . Mujhe lagega ki MERI Bahan hi bula Rahi h pls...


G-  ji.. bhaiya... Aaj se ham aapko bhaiya hi bulaya karenge...

Vikram went outside n she turned.


To the limit of her shock she found him staring at her there was a  drop fell from his right eye.


She looked at him painfully...

Just then dadi called them. They went outside n drove to home.


Flashback ends


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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow kash show me v yhi hta guddan ko uska bara bhai mil gya
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice story kavya
Main bhi soch rahi thi guddan aur rawat ke beech sibling wala love ajaye to tumne wo likh bhi di

Update soon kavya 

Tumhari stories padhne ke liye wait hi nahi hota
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Posted: 5 years ago
Rawat aur Guddan emotional conversation was superb
Rawat ne Guddan Ko behan mana it so nice
Nice story
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow kayu!!!
Glad to see Rawat realising his mistake, and Guddan considering him as a big brother
Do update next part soon πŸ˜ƒ
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fantastic
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful story...just loved guddan and Vikram bonding...Tell me one thing dear do you know mind reading πŸ˜‰ you know what I was thinking same about Rawat bhaiyya and guddan...Rawat injured,guddan's concerned for him,their emotional talk,Guddan calling Rawat bhaiyya same to same I was thinking...plz update the next part soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome start
Love it
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😲ye toh ek bdhiya twist hai
Main kuch aur expect kr gyi thiπŸ˜†
Continue soon
Or thoda lamba wala!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: nish_vir

😲ye toh ek bdhiya twist hai

Main kuch aur expect kr gyi thiπŸ˜†


Kya expect Kiya tha nish ne???πŸ˜‰

Continue soon
Will update soon 


Or thoda lamba wala!