This chapter is beautifully penned. The most emotional chapter so far. The way you described Bela's emotions(they way she can't relate to her past self and has this constant fear if she can remember her past ) is just commendable .It was all so natural and plain raw emotions and the best part is the dialogues and emotions hit the right chord ,it feels like it's all happening in front of me that for me is the greatest achievement for a writer .This chapter had me hooked to it . I was an emotional wreck throughout the chapter .The father and children bond is so cute!! Continue soon.
Sarah I want to kick you off the balcony but right now I am not able to get that post. I need a new update...
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