Behir FF - Starting Over Again Ch 7 upd new(Page 15)

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Posted: 2019-03-13T13:27:19Z
Originally posted by fortitudeoth


Hej buddy Hug

I am finally posting my review. Sorry it took so long

Your chapters are always amazing. I don't know how to praise them anymore. Maybe I should try Danish now LOL

Bella is the perfect mother. She is a natural. She doesn't need her memories to be a mother to her children.

I want to know how Behir's night is together. I am wondering the same as Ash, not whatever you are thinking SaRah Tongue

Update SOON. It has been a long time since you updated Angry. I will send you messages to update LOL
 
BUDDDYYY Hug 

omg review in Danish would be perfect. LOLLOL Thanks you for your lovely review buddy.. Love it..  Yes Bela is perfect.. she just need to trust herself and believe that she can do it. Wink

Lol yes behir's night... will be different haha.. not exactly what you expect. LOLLOL 

I will update it soon. Wink
Posted: 2019-03-13T13:28:15Z
Originally posted by nuomi.riceball


This ff is under construction?
 
Lol... I will update soon Nuomi Wink
Posted: 2019-03-13T13:30:17Z
Sarah I want to kick you off the balcony but right now I am not able to get that post. Angry I need a new update... 
Posted: 2019-03-13T13:30:59Z
Originally posted by Monali5


This chapter is beautifully penned. The most emotional chapter so far. The way you described Bela's emotions(they way she can't relate to her past self and has this constant fear if she can remember her past ) is just commendable .It was all so natural and plain raw emotions and the best part is the dialogues and emotions hit the right chord ,it feels like it's all happening in front of me that for me is the greatest achievement for a writer .This chapter had me hooked to it . I was an emotional wreck throughout the chapter .The father and children bond is so cute!! Continue soon. 
 
Thank you Monali.. Thats so sweet of you.. Tongue So happy that you can feel her emotions and yes as a writer it feel so good. LOL 

Mahir is a sweetheart... Bela is a lucky girl to get such a good looking and amazing husband LOL 

More emotional stuff on the way.. Hope you will like it.. And thanks for your lovely review. Wink
Posted: 2019-03-13T13:47:20Z
Originally posted by The.Wanderer


Sarah I want to kick you off the balcony but right now I am not able to get that post. Angry I need a new update... 
 

omg idhar bhi kick... Yaar muhje har din kick parti hai.. LOLLOL 

I will soon pakka.. Friday ko.. LOLWink 

BTW SAME TO YOU ASH BABA... NEXT CHAPTER ?????? ROFL
Posted: 2019-03-15T09:22:28Z
Originally posted by sarahgul


 

omg idhar bhi kick... Yaar muhje har din kick parti hai..  LOLLOL 

I will soon pakka.. Friday ko.. LOLWink 

BTW SAME TO YOU ASH BABA... NEXT CHAPTER ?????? ROFL

It's Friday. AlreadyWink

waiting for update.
Posted: 2019-03-15T09:37:28Z
Originally posted by ratna.nanda



It's Friday. AlreadyWink

waiting for update.

I think it's because of time differenceLOL

It's still 4 pm in Europe. LOL
Posted: 2019-03-15T10:09:23Z
Give us an update soon! 

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