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Bepannah pyar hai tumse...I love you intensely... Part 1
This is inspired by a south movie which was remade into other languages too.Only the theme is same.I have changed the scenes and ending.I also added new characters by not including all the characters from the movie .
Edit credit to the real editor
Rajveer:Adi...have you not got ready yet?Why are you taking this much time?
Rajveer's wife Nitya:Rajveer...he is going to see the girl.So he will take time to get ready.Right?
Rajveer:To take this much time to get ready he is not a girl.
Nitya:Hey..even boys have to impress the girls.So let Adi take his own time.
Rajveer smiled.
Aditya came.
Rajveer:Finally you are ready.
Adi:Ya..Am i looking good bhaiyya?
Rajveer:Of course Adi.You look handsome.
Adi:I am going to see the girl for the first time.So I am nervous.
Rajveer and Nitya giggled.
Nitya:No need to be tensed Adi.We are sure that she will like you.But you should also like him.
Adi:I am sure that I will like the girl.
Rajveer:How are you so sure about it?
Adi:Because my bhaiyya bhabhi only chose the girl for me.I am sure that you both will choose the best for me.After all you both only looked after me like my own parents.
Rajveer and Nitya hugged him emotionally.
Aditya,Rajveer and Nitya went to see the girl.The girl's parents Anurag and Prerna invited them.
Prerna brought their daughter Zoya.Aditya was lost in her beauty.
Nitya:Rajveer and I have talked to Zoya.Now let Aditya and Zoya talk to each other.
Anurag:Exactly.Let them talk.
Aditya and Zoya were shy.But both families sent them to room to talk privately.
Adi:Hi...I am Aditya.
Zoya smiled:I know your name.
He smiled:Your name is Zoya.Right?It's a different name.
She smiled:Thank you.Your name is also good.
He smiled.
Adi:What are your hobbies?
Zoya:I hobby is to watch serials.
Adi giggled:Daily soaps...?
She smiled:Ya.All are teasing me.But I can't stop watching it.
Adi:No problem.If you like watching daily soaps you should watch them.
Zoya:Your hobby?
Adi:I like dancing.But only at parties.
Zoya:I don't know dancing.But I like it.
Adi smiled.
Adi:Do you want to work after marriage?
Zoya:No.I prefer to be a house wife.
Adi:Are you sure?You don't need to sacrifice anything.
Zoya:No no..I am not sacrificing.Actually I am not good at studies.I am an under graduate.I am not interested in studies and working.
I like cooking.I have done cooling courses too.I like catering.
Adi:Then you do catering after marriage too.I am happy with it.
Zoya was very happy:Thanks a lot.
Both of them went to the main hall after talking.
Anurag:Zoya beta...did you finish talking to Aditya?
Zoya:Yes papa.
Prerna:How is Aditya?
Rajveer:Did you like our Adi?
Zoya blushed:Yes.
Aditya blushed.
Anurag:What about you Aditya?Did you like our Zoya?
Nitya:Say Adi.
Aditya blushed:Yes.
Everyone became so happy that they all hugged each other while Aditya and Zoya exchanged sweet glances with each other.
Rajveer and Nitya took Zoya and Aditya for a date in a restaurant.
Both the couples sat together and chatted.
Before parting ways suddenly Zoya slipped and fell at Aditya's chest.Aditya held her.
Bepannaah Si Mohabbat Ki Hai
Dil Ne Bhi Yehi Chahaat Ki Hai
Both became shy.
Tere Bina Mera Lage Na Jiya
Tere Liye Hi Dhadke Jiya
Zoya looked at him slowly.They shared an eye lock.
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
(Bepannah)
Aditya and Zoya had mehendi
,sangeet
and haldi
functions.
Then they had a lovely wedding.
Rajveer and Nitya welcomed Zoya.
Nitya:Now onwards you are our family member.We have not given birth to children.But we considered Adi as our son.Now onwards you are our daughter.
Zoya smiled.
Rajveer:Yes,Adi is our son more than a brother.So you are a daughter.
Zoya and Aditya smiled.
Rajveer:This is your first day in this house.What is your wish?We will fulfil your wish.
Zoya:Will you fulful any wish of mine?
Rajveer:Yes sure.What is your wish?
Zoya:Rajveer bhaiyya...you are a family lawyer.I heard that you are the most famous divorce advocate here.My request is you should stop taking divorce cases and separate couples.
Rajveer was stunned:Zoya...
Zoya:Say bhaiyya..will you stop taking divorce cases and separate couples?
Rajveer:I promise you Zoya that I won't separate any couple.I will take a divorce case only if there is a genuine reason.
Zoya:Thank you bhaiyya.This is the best wedding gift for me.
They all smiled emotionally.
Zoya went to the room with Aditya.
Rajveer:Zoya opened my eyes.I could have joined many couples.But instead just for money I separated them.I feel guilty now.
Nitya:Zoya did the right thing by making Rajveer walk on the right path now.Good that at least now you decided to do something better Rajveer.
He smiled slightly.
Zoya was removing her jewellery.Aditya saw it.
Aditya helped her to remove her jewellery.Zoya felt goosebumps when his fingers touched her skin.
Main Tha Reh Guzar, Tu ne Thama Iss Qadar,
Ab rahi na koi bhi fikrr.
Main Tujh main Bannt lun, yun khud ko humsafar,
Reh Na Jaye koi Qasar.
Her tresses fell over his face and he started smelling them sensually. Zoya was lost in him.
Tere Bina Mera Lage Na Jiya
Tere Liye Hi Dhadke Jiya
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
He embraced her from back making her blush more.
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
Both came back to senses shyly.
Adi:Guess you are tired.You sleep.
Zoya:Guess you are also tired.You also sleep.
Adi:Ya...
They both smiled.
The next morning...
Zoya gave tea to Aditya.He sipped it.
Adi:Your hands are magical Zoya.I am in love with your tea.
She blushed.
Teri saanson mein mujhe guzaara mil gaya
Ho gaya mujh mein tera asar
Suddenly Zoya realized that her earring has fallen near Adi.So she leaned to take her earring.
She realized that she is so close to Aditya that both could feel each other's breath.
Ye Mohabbat Teri Lage Rab Ki Koi Meher
Khatam Na Ho Chahatein Umar Bharr.
They shared a passionate eye lock.
Tere Bina Mera Lage Na Jiya
Tere Liye Hi Dhadke Jiya
Slowly Aditya took the earring and put it on her ear.
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
They both smiled at each other.
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai
Mere Dil Ko Tere Dil Ki Zaroorat Hai(Bepannah).
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