Note - Well I had no comments on episode so felt like writing a story on these characters in three parts. I have forwarded the story to the point where our Cop Asmita has finally managed to get confession of Nivideta Majumdar in front of Shan and his seniors as proof.. Here are my take on mainly feelings of Shan and Puchki after the darkest night of their life is nearing its end to make way for a bright morning... But where will they go from here... Together or on their separate ways.. This is what we go through in these chapters... First one I will post tonight and other two pretty soon..
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Edited this three shot to be a FF with many parts .
Part 1
Yes Yes .. I kidnapped my husband , I wanted to avenge his wrong doings .. I wanted to take revenge from his illegitimate son , I wanted to put all blame on that stupid son of his who ruined my and mine son's lives. That emotional fool considers me as mother and I used it to make him do things my way... firstly made him go away from his birth mother and then filled him with hatred towards Puchki , that little brat who always came in between of my planning.. Yes Yes I tried to even kill him as a kid... But that Puchki managed to save him but I managed to take her out of Shan's life forever.. I wish one day though I can kill that low life from my own hand... I hate him more than anything in this world...
Those words hit hard .. he did not know the impact yet but world stopped for a while for him as he heard those words from his Nivi Maa. It felt like someone just punched his heart out , it was difficult to breathe there , everything turned hazy around as tears clouded his eyes while he turned his back from the place where it all unfolded...
Asmita had finally hatched a plan to get confession out of Nivideta Majumdar and it was a successful one.. She was happy and relieved that finally it all had ended... With confession in front of police , Nivideta Majumdar had accepted all her evil deeds and yes Arindham was finally found . Though he was recovering in hospital but he was fine. Finally Police had managed to get him out of the long captivity at last... Ridoy was in tears.. with his Mom caught red handed.. He was fully out of control . He was begging police officers to let her mumma go.. All this is a misunderstanding.. She cant do this .. He was coming in the way and begging Asmita to stop them.. Asmita though was somewhere else... She followed trail of footsteps ignoring loud cries of Ridhoy who then was pestering his grandfather to take control of situation..but this time no one was paying attention to his childish antics.
Asmita quietly moved out of the scene to follow her bondhu.. Where was he? This was time may be he needed her the most...
Shantanu.. Shantanu... She cried out loud.. She saw him standing at their place... A place where they used to find each other whenever they were in trouble... Somehow she knew that he will be there only... He was quietly staring at the sky there unable to hold it longer inside..huge volcano of emotions just wanting to come out somehow to relieve his pain but he wanted to keep it inside..He deserved no peace he believed... He looked at her call .. and somehow there came a smile on his lips with eyes depicting a different story altogether..
She can't leave him alone... Can she...He thought for a second and got amused... He had often cursed their friendship.. blamed her for so many things going wrong in his life.. made her life hell by getting her married to a person she did not love.. and when he accidentally married her in that mandap.. He never accepted that to keep her away... He remembered how she cried that day.. begged him ... but he did not listen to her... He remembered all those moments of her unconditional selfless love for him when he let her down but she never did... How she put her life in danger for him.. Only to get his name clear..
and then his smile was accompanied by those string of tears he was holding back.. He knew she cant bear his heartache at this moment, he was numb in the moment for a reaction to the events of the day and yes It will be difficult for her to watch him in this state... so he looked away from her...somehow gathered courage to come near her.. and ask her to give him sometime... he will be home soon...
I wont leave you alone .. I know you need me... I know you are breaking inside... I understand your pain Shantanu .. She hugged him tight in her arms... those tears falling from her eyes for her shantanu... and you remember the promise I made to you when we were young.. that i will never leave your side... ever..
He looked at her,gently patting her head and comforting her that he is alright .. if not now then may be later but yes he knew he will be alright as he had her..in his darkness she was one bright shining light always.. he used to feel so alone all these years when she was not beside...his chandini..
I am sorry Puchki for everything.. He just managed this much as his voice cracked up..
His Puchki held him more tightly.. not letting him fall apart but trying to be his strength like always.. but she knew he was broken too much from inside.. She was scared for him.. but she knew her love will be enough to heal every scar that his heart bore...
Part 2 - Link
Part 3 - Link
Part 4 - Link
Part 5 Link
Part 6 Link
Part 7 Link
Part 8 Link
Part 9
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=5063898&TPN=12&#p149785188
Part 11
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