I knew this story was a bad influence, don't say bad words betaaji, I don't why I can't stop saying the word 'f**king' my phone keeps making it duck when ever i write that word
First of all, Congratulation for the story! I am so happy you are finally back writing.
don't you dare leave this in the middle.
Thank you so much betaaji I am out of practice, It felt weird while writing, okay good weird I promise won't leave this in the middle, I keep saying that in each and every of my incomplete story
You know I had to google what the title meant. its mean longing in German. You are freaking genius.
No, I am insane This is what happens when you watch german operas with german subtitles and randomely google words I tried learning German
The starting is so powerful! It has such a strong impact.
It blew away my mind.
And I really admire you writing the piece in second person. I could never do that.
The prologue gives a mysterious vibes and just grips you. I couldn't keep this down until I had read the whole thing.
I really like the way of writing.
thank you so much betaaji it means a lot, You always inspire me and you can definitely do that, tell you a secret, write a p.o.v instead of I write you
The girl probably has a really bad past.
I really do feel for her.
The guy is a jerk. If I am guessing right, he's the one right?
And I think there are two going by the banner.
Does the girl suffer from some kind of anxiety attack? Well I guess we will know it soon.
Yes the girl does have a really bad past. Yes there might be or might not be an another character but later in the story. I won't spoil it. But You are always right
Can you do something Mou? Since you writing this in second person could you give the character names so that readers know who they are reading about.
I did it, I included the name in the prologue, and will make a character list in my third post. Thank you so much for pointing this out, what had I done without you In the prologue you read about two characters 1) Willia Abraham 2) Mr. Ray
I love the quote, the monster are not under your bed, its in you one! I am saving this in my mind.
Me too I really love the quote Feel free to
This is so good. Please continue soon.
Thank you so much
I will continue soon, I say that and sometimes I do Just kidding, I will definitelycontinue soon
And this story is going to give a tough competition to all the others.
Really ? That't like a huge compliment but I will delete mine if I talk about yours! You have no idea how many times I deleted
Btw the banner is beautiful. I can not stop staring at it. The maker must be good, I wanna kiss her hands.
I know right, I keep staring at it too The maker is really really good and you should get something made from her too if you want such a beautiful banner like this one
Okay so now continue soon.
Love you a lot!
And all the best for the contest!
I will, i will
Love you so much betaaji :) and thank you so much for spreading so much love for this story