I'm so sorry for being so awfully late hun! Really sorry. 😭
Chapter 1:
The flawless flow of the chapter was really commendable! A very, I don't know how to put it, but it was so delightfully desi if you know what I mean. 😳 I really enjoyed that feel hun! 😃
Chapter 2:
This one was full of sweet naughtiness! Also, the emotions flowed so freely from those words! The build-up of the theatrical tension was AMAZING!
Chapter 3:
This was so beautiful! A glimpse into the awe-imposing personality of Janaka rajarshi! Also, the metaphor with Haimavathi devi also very composing! 😳
Chapter 4:
The use of music and dance was ever so elegant! And the explanations were soo pleasing, and sort of a revision, get it? 😉
PS I would so so love to read this story unto it's completion, do consider continuing it, pretty please?! 😳
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