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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 5 years ago

#261

🥳Happy Birthday, Anindita! Hope you've had a rocking one... 🥳

Originally posted by: preyasekar
Lovely and interesting teaser

Thank you😳

Edited by lashy - 5 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 5 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151
I am doing fine Pinky didu it's just Dec was always troublesome
month for me as a Scooty rider 😆
and now from 5 Jan my exam will start 😆

Oh with the cold and the fog... do take care dear!🤗

Hope you are able to be here with us for the few chapters left,

what😲 you gotta be kidding right Pinky didu 😊 If not then
this can't be true Pinky didu there are so much for you to add
in the novel how can it be finish in few chapters 😭

First - Villain Beating at our hero hand and evil old horse end 😉
Second - Mughal Prince end and his plight of losing everyone 😆
Third - reaction of Piggy family who insulted Khan love 😲
Fourth - all good men end of suffering and fruitful result
as the reward for their good act 😳
Specially Azeez and his twin NSS Guard

Fifth - last and very important and special reason we aren't
going to survive this soon if it's end in few chapters Pinky didu 😭
Awww I know I know... but it would be a befitting end... anything longer will start feeling like a stretch and added on for the sake of keeping the story going rather than how it was originally intended to be..
Having said that, it's not like I shall not miss the lovely times here or my lovely baisas here🤗
In fact, I shall probably go a little missing you all...
and miss imagining about these two too! 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 5 years ago

#263

The Stable maids..

He waits a moment, to see if she would retreat. But she has remained in his clutches like a statue, her body not flinching from the brush of his arms.
Till the trance is interrupted by two teardrops that abandoned her eyelashes to come streaming down her cheeks.

'Please... I want to be alone... Please please DON'T force me...'

The cruel intruder! Wasn't he satisfied stealing her peace? Did he have to take away another part of hers forever?

Lashy's voice: Their journey starts...

Scintillating, Periyamma .. one can never tire of looking at these forever and ever!

Edited by lashy - 5 years ago

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 5 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: lashy
The Stable maids..

He waits a moment, to see if she would retreat. But she has remained in his clutches like a statue, her body not flinching from the brush of his arms.
Till the trance is interrupted by two teardrops that abandoned her eyelashes to come streaming down her cheeks.

'Please... I want to be alone... Please please DON'T force me...'

The cruel intruder! Wasn't he satisfied stealing her peace? Did he have to take away another part of hers forever?

Lashy's voice: Their journey starts...

Scintillating.. one can never tire of looking at these forever and ever!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 5 years ago

#265

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"And now here is my secret, a very simple secret: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye."

Antoine de Saint-Exupry, The Little Prince

When did this happen? 😊

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Testmytest

@Testmytest

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#266

Everyone here is the pencil sketch I was working on yesterday/today.

Aunty had posted this Heera pic. in her abridged version of HBAS, I fell in love with this pic. right away and wanted to do this since then, finally got time to do it. The intricate design is a bit different from the original.

Ok have 20 pages of HW 😲

Will work on it today. Have some errands to run, be back in few hours!

Edited by Testmytest - 5 years ago

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 5 years ago

#267

Very beautiful work Rekha..👏 It shows your inherent artistic talent very clearly. Have you tried any other medium before?

Aunty.

Originally posted by: Testmytest
Everyone here is the pencil sketch I was working on yesterday/today.

Aunty had posted this Heera pic. in her abridged version of HBAS, I fell in love with this pic. right away and wanted to do this since then, finally got time to do it. The intricate design is a bit different from the original.

Ok have 20 pages of HW 😲
Will work on it today. Have some errands to run, be back in few hours!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 5 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Testmytest
Everyone here is the pencil sketch I was working on yesterday/today.

Aunty had posted this Heera pic. in her abridged version of HBAS, I fell in love with this pic. right away and wanted to do this since then, finally got time to do it. The intricate design is a bit different from the original.

Ok have 20 pages of HW 😲
Will work on it today. Have some errands to run, be back in few hours!

Gosh! This is beautiful so so beautiful

Even her expressions are lovely - depicting coyness!!!! Uffooo!

This would suit the New bride of chapter 44!

And she looks a tad younger than in the original too!

So Heera has been keeping our baisa away... any secrets she told you, in the meanwhile that you'll share with us?

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 5 years ago

#269

Chapter 52

Don't know what to write... Everytime with your magical pen you have made us smile, cry, marvel, sacred, laugh,hopeful, blush but with this you made us lifeless... So many things happened in the update but Khan Sahib's flogging zoned out everything... 😭

Initially Shehzaade seemed in two minds but a visit from Farooq ruined it ...He found and hit his weak spot - his ego. That ruled him through the chapter. The worst part was he knew Farooq was manipulating, he knew he himself was wrong but not ready to a admit and was about to do wrong still... Now all the fear, aura, intrigue, respect for this so called 'Huzoor' has died for me.. 🤢

And that Farooq ... If only I could get my hands on him and that Khalil he did it for him na😡

Poor Heera... the way they treated her belongings, books, herbs and what with every man that meets her mocking her deriving pleasure from her tears and making her uncomfortable with that staring 😡

Shehzaade couldn't keep even that simple promise Thankfully Khan Sahib's gifts got saved but her herbs...Don't know but it felt they shouldn't have destroyed it

I was so sure of that Goodluck Heera prayed for Khan Sahib but 😭

Khan Sahib's conditions and the description of the dungeons . Finally Tejraj came (had some questions about his risky visit then read your replies to the same) but he too left uncertain and us hanging ..

The flogging part - can't decide, to 👏 you for being such an amazing writer or go 😡 for doing this to our Khan Sahib as it is, you make our emotions dance to the tip of your pen or in this case, your fingertips .

but it killed me a million times to read that part uper se the blood stained walls 😭 tears were rolling and I didn't even realise... Fear and terror these words were rarely associated with him that too mentally when he was searching for Heera but, physically this way pleading . . . 😭😭

I hate Shehzaade!! just hate him🤢.. He reminded Khan Sahib of the his childhood torture😭... Still I read that part though it was not at all easy but I did, because when the time comes and the villains will face Ustaad's wrath these humiliation, pain, blood will be a reminder of why and how much I will enjoy their sufferings 😈

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Testmytest

@Testmytest

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

HOLA PEOPLE

SINCE I HAVE FINALLY RECLAIMED MY PEACE AND QUIET, I AM POSTING THE NEXT INSTALMENT OF AJNABI

AUNTY TOO HAS POSTED THE SAME CHAPTER ON HER ABRIDGED JOURNEY 😉 AND, OF COURSE, WE ARE ALL CELEBRATING THE ARRIVAL OF OUR SABSE CHHOTI BAISA 😉 SO I GUESS IT ALL FITS 😆

SOME PART OF THIS SET OF VERSES IS IN THE PRESENT, AND SOME IN FLASHBACK. I REALLY ENJOYED MYSELF WHILE REVISITING THE SCENES, AND I HOPE YOU ALL WILL TOO

AJNABI PART 38 B

Lavanya I too enjoyed revisiting the scenes, thank you for finishing part 2 of the chapter!! This chapter always gives me goosebumps!! Both AMK and Heera express their feeling to each other, they become one by body, heart and soul!!

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