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Akshan os tere Bina last part page 7 Jan 4 updated

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Posted: 5 years ago

AKSHAN TS - tere Bina


on the special request of our one n only yashi here is another two shots.


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It's been two. Half hours since guddu left. The three DIL are very happy. Dadi is in her room. Sons went to restaurant.


Here he was in the balcony sitting on the jhoola where she used to sleep. He clinched the pillow in his right hand n was looking at the door. From where she left. She was looking at him with so much expectations but today Akshat Jindal his "SHER KHAN" was helpless. He was about to go inside just then kathor came on his shoulder.


He recalled the moment when they were arguing n guddu pick him from his shoulder.


He said to kathor in a low voice " Nahi aayegi wo ab tujhe mere kandhe se utaarne k liye."



He then realized kathor didn't eat something from morning.


He stood up with kathor on his shoulder took kathor 's bowl n tried to feed him.


He again recalled her when they were feeding kathor together. The smile of her face made him smile for a sec but he realised again. "Nahi ayegi wo waapis."

He then left to terrace for some fresh air. Kathor was still on his shoulder.


He decided to sit at the poolside.when he sat he again recalled


1. The night when she came to his house n their first proximity of hugging each other. Her laughter when he fell down in the pool.


2. When he saved her from shweta's plan.

He again realised "Nahi ayegi wo waapis".

He decided to get up n he went to his bedroom. He saw there was a Diya lighted up in antara's picture he smiled. He saw yellow flowers there n said "guddan kitni Baar Kaha h ki Antara ko Peele Nahi safed phool Pasand the."  He saw a shadow coming from balcony it was not of guddu. It was maaa.


Kathor flew away n sat somewhere.

Akshat saw his mother n was about to leave when maaa hold his hands.


Akshat couldn't stop himself now.


He just turned n hugged his mother. He was not crying.but still he wanted some peace of mind. He just closed his eyes. Her mother rubbed his back.


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As guddu's parents were out of town so she decided to go to her Mama's house. After her mother died her mama n mami loved her a lot they had no children so they treat her as their daughter.


Guddu told them everything which happened. They asked her to go n get Changed. So she could have her dinner.

Mama informed revati about the same n asked not to inform Bhushan about it.


Guddu went to change when she opened her bag there was a photo frame in which   there was only two persons who means the world to her now first was her dadi or should she say maaa now. N the other was her maaa Ka beta his Akshat.


She didn't felt strange on calling him his Akshat.


She sat on the bed holding the photo.


She recalled when they met in the temple. His eyes his strong arms


Around her waist.


She realised "Kabhi Nahi mil payenge ab ham"

She recalled him holding her in his arms n taking her to the ground floor when she was wetted in swimming pool.

She recalled him when they rescue  the Diya when she asked help to remove perv From revati's life.


She recalled him holding her hand when Durga decided to throw her out from the house on the day of her grihpravesh.

She recalled him catching when she was falling from the cupboard on the night of their suhaagraat.


A year dropped from her eyes when she realised.


"Kabhi Nahi mil payenge ab ham.


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So guys here it is. It will be a three shot pahle socha tha ki two shots me ho Jayega magar akshan scenes itne saare h ki three shots lagenge.

Is story me emotions romance drama or action Sab Kuch milega. I promise u that telll me how was that.


Criticism is also welcome. Love you alll 

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Wow this is very interesting.
Akshan seperation is really painful 😭
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Akshan remembering all their moments and saying they will not meet again it was so touching😭
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