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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

Uff such a hot story. Me still blushing😳



Thanks Sanchita!! Glad you liked it!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago
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ash you still havent left your negative wali theory and you want me to complete your redemption its a long way out there

see i am not behir to get smitten by anyone's puppy look pleasing face

sumi is desperately frustrated sasu ma

WO zombie isliye bane the k bas ye shuru inka har bar ka baccho wali kissy mai na man raha is bar

is bar bed tut jayega aisa kehar aayega behir ka tum dekhna

see meri har bat me ek idea hota hai par tum sare pure nahi karti

ye wali punishment ki bahot jarurat hai show me

nothing is too much dear what we see on sat and sun is too much

mahir is not naagraj he just mahir

mujhe jyada nahi chahiye behir progeny yar disturbance bhi hota hai aur bella kitna handle karegi i dont want anything that hampers performance they can adopt as much as they want every time they do in between 9 months isase kya bacche bhi milenge aur behir bhi rahenge always together

Naagrani loses control in front of mahir prani

they are leaving mandap along with barati

i dont think so wo complaint wapis lenge kyunki bela ko bhi wahi saza milegi. ab knife fruit pe gire yar fruit knife pe fruit salad to banega hi

wow that will be great imagine all these things happening and mahir ab kahi bhi rahega to uska dhyan kaha bar bar jayega






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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

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I have reread it a few times and I think I will repeat what Anees said: OMG 😳

I wish Mahir really was faking his memory loss like he did here. But at least we got to see that in your story.

I don't know how many more ways to compliment your writing. You are amazing and your writing is amazing πŸ‘

I have read many versions of Behir's SR in your stories and they all are different from each other. This is talent!


Thanks Claire!! I am running out of SR ideas now. We need to bug Sarah now for a few days for a fresh take on SR.!!πŸ˜†

But really!! Thanks dear!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: behirlover

ash you still havent left your negative wali theory and you want me to complete your redemption its a long way out there

Preeti, I miss you babe!! Come back soon... Just come back!! 😭 I can't do it without you. Please. 😭

see i am not behir to get smitten by anyone's puppy look pleasing face

I can see now what a cruel punishment this is. I don't know... I had almost completely forgotten to reply on this one. I am so sorry. Pree, I am missing you like hell. 😭

sumi is desperately frustrated sasu ma

That she is.

WO zombie isliye bane the k bas ye shuru inka har bar ka baccho wali kissy mai na man raha is bar

πŸ˜† God I miss your tharki thoughts!!

is bar bed tut jayega aisa kehar aayega behir ka tum dekhna

Woh toh tut hi gaya!! πŸ˜‰

see meri har bat me ek idea hota hai par tum sare pure nahi karti

Saare pure karungi, bas... You know na what I mean?

ye wali punishment ki bahot jarurat hai show me

Ab toh more than anything. Mahir/Krish needs to be punished. πŸ˜†

nothing is too much dear what we see on sat and sun is too much

That is so true!

mahir is not naagraj he just mahir

For me he is. Bella ka naagraj.

mujhe jyada nahi chahiye behir progeny yar disturbance bhi hota hai aur bella kitna handle karegi i dont want anything that hampers performance they can adopt as much as they want every time they do in between 9 months isase kya bacche bhi milenge aur behir bhi rahenge always together

Hehehe... πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

Naagrani loses control in front of mahir prani

Yaha nahi toh aur kaha?

they are leaving mandap along with barati

Yup.

i dont think so wo complaint wapis lenge kyunki bela ko bhi wahi saza milegi. ab knife fruit pe gire yar fruit knife pe fruit salad to banega hi

Sahi kaha tum ne. πŸ˜†

wow that will be great imagine all these things happening and mahir ab kahi bhi rahega to uska dhyan kaha bar bar jayega



Apani Bellaji pe... πŸ˜‰



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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Sunshine-1

Loved this one 😳



Thanks Sunshine. 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
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So, the frustrated writer in me jaag gaya yesterday, I penned down this part. There is going to be one more part. This is my frustration letting out FF. I hope you guys enjoy this one. Next part I will post later on.
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Part 2

Once again I found myself sitting in my bedroom, really exasperated with life. It had been almost six months since Mahir was supposed to marry Vish. And now here I was in the nurse's get up looking at my patient' (read husband) sleeping hugging a freaking teddy bear. But wait, I need to back up a bit. That day, after spending the most magical moments of my life with Mahir, I had exited the cave happy that me and Mahir had a plan. We were going to stage a fake wedding and then outsmart Sumitra. Or so we thought. Ground reality was vastly different. Sumitra had already smelt a huge rat when none of the naags and naagins could exit the house. When we got back she was waiting for us with Vish, Vikrant and Juhi as her captives.

I won't go into the details of the battle that followed. I find Sumitra and her saas-bahu serial taunts extremely boring. I am, in fact, ashamed of the fact that I once found that woman loving and caring. Anyways that now seems like it was centuries ago when she was the loving and caring Sumi ma. So back to the battle. The end result was, she managed to throw Vish and Vikrant off the cliff and was about to throw Juhi off when Ma (as in my mother) managed to rescue her and drag her off. She was very reluctant to go, but she would have been more of a hindrance than help as Sumitra had kissed her... Oops bitten her and Juhi was very dazed. I was relieved. I was barely holding up against that idiotic Yuvi. It was not as though I didn't have powers but they felt considerably weak like my battery was running low. Oops! I need to stop using these human terms, they piss off Vikrant. He is all about using only pure Hindi and NOT using smartphones unless absolutely necessary. He HATED it when me and Vish spoke in English. Vish on the other hand believed in experiencing the best of both the worlds.

Okay, back to my story. So I felt as though I was very weak. I had no idea why that was happening to me. Naag Guru and Aghori Baba later told me that it was because I had consummated with a human. I had sort of gone against the normal laws and so I was bound to feel weak for the next few hours. Later I found out that even normal human girls felt tired after their first time. So it was normal but the timing could not have been more horrible. My human husband was doing his best to protect me, but against a powerful naag, he was not able to last for long. Soon, injured and exhausted he fell back and Yuvi managed to gain an upper hand over me. Mahir watched in horror as Yuvi lifted me up bodily and threw down the cliff. The only saving grace was that I managed to hold on to a jutting rock and as I tried to pull myself up, Mahir extended his hand to me. With his help I was about to come up when Yuvi stomped hard on our hands, effectively making Mahir loose his grip and down I fell. I blacked out as I fell and the next thing I remember was opening my eyes in my ma's warm embrace.

Nearly six months had gone by in the human world. It turns out excessive use of power after unnatural consummation led to tiredness induced coma that lasted up to nearly six months. It had happened only twice before in the history. Mine was the third time. It was supremely embarrassing to think that future generations would remember me for this particular thing. Anyways, when I opened my eyes, my first reaction was, "Where is Mahir?

I was met with blank looks and that pissed me off. Why was no one ready to tell me where my husband was? Why was he not near me? As I shouted and raged, ma was trying her best to calm me down. Finally tired and exhausted, I sat down and ma narrated all that had happened in the last six months. It seems, Sumitra had dragged an unconscious Mahir from the cliff side and now she kept him imprisoned in the Sehgal House. From what they had been able to gather, Mahir had become very quite. He rarely spoke with anyone these days. He was constantly in his room and no one was allowed there except the family members. As in no staff member was allowed. We had managed to infiltrate the Sehgal House. Juhi now had a job as the day mid there. She had not suffered any long lasting damage from the kiss. Vish and Vikrant had recovered completely and were busy trying to get information about Sumitra. They came home rushing when they heard that I was awake once again. I was still a bit sceptical about their loyalty but ma insisted that I have a chat with them.

During that chat Vish told me that, that day when she tried to stab the baby, she was actually aiming at Mahir. They knew that it was impossible to carry Mahir out of the Sehgal House and hence they planned to stab him so that they could carry him to naaglok in an ambulance. But Sumitra caught her and bullied her into marrying Mahir by threatening her with Vikrant's life. Once I knew the whole story, I forgave them quickly.

I questioned the Naag Guruji about this tiredness induced coma returning after the second time I will be with Mahir, and he assured me that only the first time had repercussions. In fact second time was likely to give me some more powers. And then henceforth, each time me and Mahir would be together, my powers would be at their peak in the next few hours. Vish has slyly commented that me and Mahir should be kept locked in a room before I went out for my next battle. I had blushed badly, the memories of Mahir's touch and his loving caresses nearly driving me crazy.

Next day brought with it more news. Sumitra was looking for a nurse to look after Mahir. So we decided that I would disguise as a nurse and go to Sehgal House. While I simply had to take the girl's form, the real worry was why did Mahir need a nurse? And the specifications were so weird. It was as though they were looking for an Aaya for a child. Little did I know that my once fully grown husband now believed himself to be an eight year old, complete with a teddy bear and a stuffed Panda named Chomu.

Now I was faced with a tough task of getting the job. Changing my appearance to match the nurse who was supposed to show up did not mean I got her brains and her knowledge. For that I had to rely on my own common sense. Unfortunately for me, lessons in common sense were not given in our Naaglok so I would have to wing it as I went. So on the day of the interview, I showed up at the doorstep of the Sehgal House in my nurse's attire and look and was led to Sumitra's study. First shock came when I saw Kuhu, the Sehgal princess scrubbing floor while my father-in-law was wiping down the other surfaces. Although Juhi had warned of this, seeing it first hand was a different ball game altogether. Second shock was seeing Sumitra sit in the chair where the Andy Sehgal once sat. She had two more minions with her today. From the conversations that followed, I gathered that they were called Rohini and Aalekh and they were her sister and brother-in-law. Yuvi was no where to be seen.

Even before the interview began, a harassed looking Yuvi came in splattered in food and looking like he had been lying in a roosters nest. He was covered in feathers and cotton. Even before Sumitra could get a word in, he began his tirade of how Mahir had once again refused to have food and when he had threatened Mahir with a beating, Mahir had proceeded to throw food at him, all the while chasing him around the room. When finally satisfied, he (as in Mahir) had torn open yet another pillow and thrown the stuffing all over him. If he, Yuvi had to feed his crazy brother for one more day, he would run away to Himalayas to live a life of an ascetic. I rolled my eyes at that. Yuvi leading a celibate life was next to impossible and soon enough as soon as he spotted me, his eyes lit up and his hand involuntarily went to smooth his hair. But the problem was his hand came away with a bunch of feathers and I couldn't help but giggle at his horrified expression.

Sumitra abandoned my interview and told me I was hired on a temporary basis. If I could get Mahir to behave for the next twenty-four hours, the job would be mine. I was overjoyed. I was led to Mahir's room which was a mess and I saw Mahir sitting in one corner like a sulky child. He looked up at us once and stuck out his tongue at me. Sumitra had left me near Mahir's door and had made a hurried exit from there. So I was with my original face when I faced Mahir. He still showed no signs of recognising me. He continued to look sulkily at the bits of steamed broccoli lying near him. He was covered in food, his shirt stained.

I was still hoping that even this time around he was playing a prank on me, but that was not the case so far. I proceeded to clean the room, all the while hoping for some sign from him that this was all a huge misunderstanding. But none came and I was forced to admit that something was seriously wrong with Mahir. I wanted to break down there and then but I controlled myself with great difficulty. Once the room was clean, I went and offered him my hand which he refused to take. I knew I had to be extremely patient with him. If she played her cards right, she could gain his trust and only would she be able to figure what was wrong with him.

So I went to his bed where a panda soft toy was lying, face down. I picked him up and proceeded to speak with him, promising him an ice cream if he ate the food like a good boy. Out of the corner on my eyes, I saw Mahir perk up at the mention of an ice cream. I remembered Mahir had once told me that he loved ice creams as a child. So I continued to talk with the panda and soon enough Mahir was sitting beside me, introducing me to his "friends. The bear was apparently called Teddy and the panda was named Chomu.

I looked at Mahir. His hair was tousled and he had not shaved in at least three to four days. I was used to seeing a well kept and well groomed Mahir. This unkempt Mahir with dark stubble framing his face and food stains all over him looked like a complete stranger to me. I controlled my tears with great difficulty and told him that before lunch, he would have to take a bath. I rushed inside the bathroom before I burst into tears. I started filling up the bath tub for him and once it was full, I led him inside the bathroom and he promptly stripped down to his boxers. Mercifully he kept them on and jumped inside the tub and began playing in water. He wanted something called as boo-boo and when I looked at him puzzled, he pointed towards a bottle of bubble bath and I poured a generous amount in the bathtub.

He was delighted and he immediately began to make bubbles in the tub all the while chattering continuously. He told me about himself and how his mother was once a good woman but now she had changed. She constantly beat him up and threatened him. Yuvi also troubled him. So whenever he got the chance, he troubled Yuvi back. He also told me that his mother was huge snake and she threatened to bite him if he didn't obey her. He told me about how Ruhi was slowly growing and how he would look after her. From his chattering I gathered that Bultu would frequent the Sehgal House and he hated Sumitra. After about twenty minutes, I had a difficult time in getting him to shower and come out of the bathroom. I got completely soaked in the process. I was a tad bit uncomfortable with the way the dress clung to my body, but Mahir was busy being an innocent child, and he did not notice a thing. Finally I managed to get him out and towel him dry, all the while listening to him telling me a superman story. Once he was dressed, I went and heated up some food for him and fed it to him and tucked him off to bed.

So now I was sitting in my freaking bedroom, with my husband who was now behaving like a child, watching him sleep peacefully with a freaking teddy bear in his arms. As I gazed at him, I wondered what exactly had happened that he lost his senses so completely? As I watched him sleep, I spotted a medicine bottle lying there with only a couple of pills remaining. I read the name and just texted Vish to check out the purpose of that medicine. After sometime I received a text saying that, that particular medicine, if given in excess quantities made a normal human behave in a child like manner. And if given for prolonged time frame, the damage would be irreversible. The prolonged duration was a year or more. As far as I was aware, Mahir had been taking this medicine for not more than six months.

I threw away those remaining two pills. After some time Yuvi peeked inside the room cautiously and I immediately changed my face. He beckoned me out and I followed him. His reason of coming was to enquire about Mahir, but his real purpose was to simply flirt with me. The way he casually placed his hand on my waist and pulled me close reminded me of the days when I was engaged to him. His touch disgusted me and I wanted to get rid of him, ASAP. Just then I spotted Rohini moving around, and I had a sudden inspiration.

My eyes lit up and I casually asked him who that hot and sexy older woman was? He was startled, so I pressed on by saying, I loved older women, and that one just looked so delicious. Just as I expected, that pervert turned out to be a homophobic and he dropped his hand from my waist like he was scalded. Stammering and stuttering, he asked me if I liked girls to which I replied yes. He almost ran from there and I heaved a sigh of relief. Inside the room Mahir had woken up and was looking for me. He looked scared and as soon as I entered the room, he came forward and hugged me tightly.

It felt weird to be hugged by Mahir after all these months. It was so warm and comforting. I hugged him back and we swayed on the spot for some more time. Eventually we let go of each other and I led him to the bed and fed him some water. He was still shaking because of the nightmare so I took him to the kitchen and gave him some ice cream. Honestly speaking it was a nightmare to ensure that Mahir only saw my original face while the rest of the household saw my changed face but I somehow managed. Rohini came to the kitchen for something and was about to snatch Mahir's bowl when I started flirting with her. Rohini has the habit of wearing navel baring sarees. So it was not too difficult to trail my finger over her tummy lightly while looking at her in the eye. She looked terrified initially but then when I pressed myself closer to her, she bolted from the kitchen.

Mahir was laughing loudly at her terrified expression and I laughed with him. Later on, when we were in his room Mahir insisted on re-enacting that scene a couple of times. I was uncomfortably aware that Mahir was not in his senses when he was touching me and that I must stop him otherwise things could go out of control. So after a couple of times, I told him that we would do that scene again the next day. Rest of the evening was spent in playing games and generally having a gala time. That night at dinner, Mahir behaved well at the dinner table, eating even mushrooms from his soup which he did not eat even as an adult. Mahir would pick off mushrooms from his plate and they would eventually land up in my plate. I smiled at that memory. I must remember to tell him of this one time when he willingly ate mushrooms when he got better. Post dinner, I took him to his room, where he stripped down to his boxers once again and refused to wear the track pant and T-shirt that I had taken out for him. He was insisting on wearing his Hulk nightdress. Try as I might, I couldn't find that particular dress in his wardrobe. He refused to wear anything other than that particular dress.

My impression that my husband was extremely cute and adorable as a child quickly changed to he was just as annoying and stubborn as he was as an adult. Finally I managed to find that dress tucked away in the corner of his wardrobe and I made him wear that. But then refused to sleep saying that he was not sleepy. I managed to convince him that it was bed time and went out to Sumitra. It turns out she was extremely pleased with my work and she offered me extra money to stay at nights as well. And she reminded me to give those pills to Mahir. I agreed to take up the night job as well and went to back to Mahir's room to see him sitting up on the bed, looking for me.

I made him lie down once again and placed both Chomu and Teddy beside him and proceeded to lay down a mattress for myself on the floor. Sumitra had given me one. When he saw that I was sleeping on the floor, he, very innocently told me he would share his bed with me. I was his friend and friends shared everything. He had never had a real friend before so would I become his friend? Looking at his clear innocent eyes, my own eyes filled with tears. Before I could stop myself, I was hugging him tightly and even he was hugging me back like a small child. As soon as we both parted, he threw a corner of his blanket to me and pulled me close. I lay on my side and kept petting hid head till he dropped off to sleep. As soon as he was fast asleep, I texted Vish to come to Sehgal House.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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🀣 the sarcasm is apt πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘
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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Anees.

OMG !
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FINALLY IREAD IT ALL ASH !!

And I don't know where to start from


How beautifully have you written Ash ❀️ I feel like an idiot for not reading this until now AGAIN THANKS TO YOU for reminding.

WHAT DID YOU JUST DO IN THE END THO ?!!
MATLAB THAT CAVE PART HAD ME JUST GO LIKE OOMMGGG WHAT IS THISS ?!!!WOW WOOOWWW'
Also ,Mahir fakinh it all 🀣

I DIED THERE 🀣

BELA's kissing MODE TURNING ON AND MAHIR ENJOYING IT TO THE FULL , CAN CVS PLEAAASEE READ THIS !!!!


I LOOVED IT ASH !!



OMG!!! When did you unres it??? I never noticed. 😭


Okay I will get back to you tomorrow. Too sleepy right now .πŸ₯±


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Finally I woke up. πŸ˜†



Thanks Anees. I am glad that you approve. πŸ˜‰ Your twinnie already does. Now I know I am on the right path to achieving the ultimate THARKI degree. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
#50
It was so funny to imagine the naagrani talking about the aftermath of "being with Mahir" with the naaguru!
I hope that wasn't the end of it, please!
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