Guddan

AKSHAN OS MERI bigdi Tu hi sanwaar

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Posted: 5 years ago

Akshan os - MERI bigdi Tu hi sanwaar.

Hi guys I know there is about three months for Holi but I was watching the movie toilet:ek prem Katha yesterday so couldn't stop myself. From writting it. Yashi I will write another os also in two or three days. 

N a merry Christmas to all stay blessed n party hard ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


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Guddan has left the house a week before holi.( I m not making her leave again but suppose that it happens at a week before holi).


Since there wedding day a lot has changed between guddu n aj. They have started accepting each other. But today when Durga accused her AJ didn't stand for her so she decided to leave.


After her leave just the next day they all came to know about the marriage fiasco n perv saazish.


They were all ashamed.


Durga personally went to Gupta house to take her sasumaaa back but guddu didn't agreed. She forgive her but she didn't want to come.


Night before holi AJ was in his balcony looking at the guddu's chits. Just then maa arrived n ask her "lallla le AA MERI gudiya ko waapis" AJ replied"maa MERI ye majaaal Jo aap Kuch mange or main na laun aapki bahu or MERI biwi ko main le Kar hi aaunga."


He called revati n asked about the party for Holi n ask her to do some special arrangements.

Next morning everyone was playing Holi except guddu. She was in her room didn't want to come outside. Just then heard a sound"Mera gusssa rangon pe kyon Nikal Rahi ho MERI Zindagi colour full led banaye rakhe rahne Ka waada Kar k Khud black n white ho Rahi ho." 


G- aap chale jaiye Yaha se aapko Jo Karna tha aap Kar Chuke ab MERI Zindagi k faisle main Khud Kar lungi.


A- neeche chal k Holi khel lo bus mere sath ye hamari pahli Holi h or agar tumhari naraazgi door na ho to Shayad akhri BHI.


Saying this he left.


AJ knew that she will come.he asked revati to get the arrangement. There was a setup of barsaane ki latth maaar Holi. Where woman hit their husbands with latth n man has a dhaaal or shield in their hands to save their self.


Just then guddu arrived n saw the arrangement. It didn't took a second for her That it was AJ who has planned all this she saw all woman hitting their husband.


Just then the song plays



AJ came forward to her..

Tere Daras Ko Aise Tarsun


I am waiting for a glimpse of You since so long 


Ke Ab Aaya Mohe Hosh


That finally now I feel as if I am conscious


Aaj Laga Ke Maati Teri Mati


I want to apply this soil of Yours on me today, O mother! 


Mita Doon Saare Dosh


And I want to remove all faults/shortcomings

Ho... O...


He started to come closer n holder her hands smilingly. He hold his ears in apologies. Guddan moved away.


Then he started dancing behind her.

Tune Na Bulaya Par Main Teri Gali Aaya


You didn't call me still I came to Your lane (the lane where You live/reside)


Le Le Saare Badle Jo Maine Tohe Sataaya... Ho...


Take all Your revenge if I have troubled You ever


Tune Na Bulaya Par Main Teri Gali Aaya


You didn't call me still I came to Your lane


Le Le Saare Badle Jo Maine Tohe Sataaya...


Take all Your revenge if I have troubled You ever.


He just hold her n gave her the laathi n hold the shield in his hands.

Gori Chhod Na Piya Ko Tu Aaj


O girl! Don't forgive Your beloved today


Jo Aaye Na Yeh Baaj


If he still doesn't change his ways/mannerism


Lage Meethe Tere Vaar


Your attacks/blows are like a sweet kind of pain

Gori Tu Latth Maar... (x2)


O girl! Hit me with a cane/stick/staff


Waarun Tohpe Saara Pyaar


I want to showcase all my love for You


Gori Tu Latth Maar...


O girl! Hit me with a cane


Guddu started taking rounds around her.


She was pushing him.

Haan... 


Meri Kori Chunariya Jo Tujh Tak Pahunchi


When my white/colourless chunari reached You


(Chunari/Dupatta is a cloth covering the top of a dress and sometimes even used a veil)


Tune Rang Daari... Re Tune Rang Daari...


You coloured it, You coloured it


Meri Sohni Ankhiyaan Jo Tujh Tak Pahunchi


When my beautiful eyes reached(gazed at) You


Hui Kajraari... Re Hui Kajraari...


They became lined with kohl, they became lined with kohl


She hold his shoulder with her one hand n was crying.


Meri Bheegi Najariya Jo Raina Bhar Jaagi


My drenched eyes that remained awake all night long


Tere Sang Laagi Re, Tere Sang Laagi


Are now attached to You, are now attached to You


Teri Meethi Si Battiyaan Jo Maine Suni


When I listened to Your sweet talks


Mere Mann Laagi Re, Mere Mann Laagi


My heart felt attached to You, my heart felt attached to You.


After this Akshat again started dancing n just sat in a position of proposal n was holding the shield so that guddu can beat him.

Chhod Ke Yeh Sansaar Main Toh Aaya Tere Dwaare


Leaving the whole world behind, I have come to Your doorstep


Joda Tujhse Naata Maine Tod Ke Bandhan Saare


I have made this bond with You breaking all other bonds/relations


After thinking something she started hitting his shield with her full force. N was crying her heart out.

Bolo Radhe Radhe Radhe (x2)


Hail Radha!(Chant the name of Radha!)


(Referring to Lord Krishna and Radha who in India are considered to be mystical lovers as well as worshipped God and Goddess)


Radhe Radhe Radhe Bolo Radhe Radhe Radhe


Hail Radha!


She started to leave when Akshat hold her hands. N stopped her.

Tujhe Pe Sab Kuch Haar Diya Hai Ab Jo Kuch Sazaa De


I've sacrificed everything that is mine in You, now punish me as You deem right


Tu Mujhse Main Tujhse Door Dono Aadhe Aadhe


When we are distant from one-another we are both incomplete

Bolo Radhe Radhe (x2)


Hail Radha!


Radhe Radhe Bolo Radhe Radhe


Hail Radha!

Apne Kaanha Se Meri Arzi Laga De...


Please make my request/prayer reach Your beloved Lord Krishna


Then he left his shield which shocked everyone. He was surrendering himself to the love of his life or should say his life.

Gori Chhod Di Le Maine Yeh Dhaal


O girl! Look I have put aside my shield now


Tu Rang De Laal


Colour me red


Meri Bigdi Tu Hi Sanwaar


You are the only one who can fix my broken fate

Gori Tu Latth Maar... (x2)


O girl! Hit me with a cane


Guddan hit him twice or thrice n started crying. Then she just throw the laathi n hugged her love n her life. His Akshat.


Waarun Tohpe Saara Pyaar


I want to showcase all my love for You


Gori Tu Latth Maar...


O girl! Hit me with a cane

Sorry if u guys found it boring Ragu I m writing another one on guddu leave pls have some patience sweety.


N one more thing agar Pasand na Aaye ho to BHI comment Kare so that I can know my mistake.


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Posted: 5 years ago
https://youtu.be/2WIm3PLAo-w


Here is the link of the song from movie toilet ek prem Katha
 
In the movie the heroine left Akshay Kumar but here our guddu can't๐Ÿ˜†

Pls do comment how was that
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Posted: 5 years ago
Sweet song vali OS ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Akshat romantic haan ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Was imagining them as such ๐Ÿ˜†


Aur vaise Gori tu vo bhi OS kal likh daal ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
Yeh bahut acha that bilkul song ke saath match hogaya
Loved it a lot
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice os kavya 
I just imagining guddan akshat in place of akshay and bhumi 
Through out the song
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Posted: 5 years ago
Oh ya I did watch that movie few months back ๐Ÿ˜†
Infact in my ff, AJ and Guddan's age is same as Akshay and Bhumi's age in the movie ๐Ÿ˜†
AJ was feeling really guilty
I loved how he convinced Guddan to play Holi
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Posted: 5 years ago
Cute os๐Ÿ˜›
Aj itne pyar mn pagal ho gaye apni wife ke pyaar mn ki usse lath maar holi khelne ke liye bhi tayar hai๐Ÿ˜†

I also watched that movie
Lovely๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
Well I haven't watched the film but read about lathmar holi I think it's played in Gokul and barsana.
You have well crafted it no doubt but honestly mujhe thoda boring laga as pure OS main sirf gaana hi tha this was that I could feel
Sorry and Merry Christmas 
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Posted: 5 years ago
nice os dear
merry xmas