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Posted: 5 years ago
#41
Nice update dear
Loved it
Mahir & Vish tried to talk to them even mahir told bela but she didn't believe.
Vish donates her blood which was surprised both bro sis.
Waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42
Such a nice one
It was nice to see both of them understanding about their guilt
Waiting for next one
Keep going
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Posted: 5 years ago
#43
Very beautiful update 👏👏👏
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#44
tremendous update! superbly written!
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Awesome update Jasmine👏!!! Really sorry dear for late... VishHir tried a lot to say truth to BelTabh... But they ignored them... ViHi romance😳... Vikrant took Ruhi to a restaurant n bought her fav food... ViHi rain dance❤️... Mahir said d truth to Bela... But she didn't believe it... Ajitabh got shot... Vish took him to hospital... Bela behaved harshly to Vish... Poor Vish😭... Mahir consoled her... Oh Vish donated blood for Ajitabh on time... BelTabh doubts whether they misunderstood VishHir... Loved it to the core dear❤️... Eagerly waiting for BeHir n VishTabh moments... Want to know how BelTabh apologize for not believing VishHir... Thanks for the PM dear...
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Awesome update...
the need of better understanding...
little twist...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47
meera_02_82, Behiranonymous, Vrishthi04, Mahi114, gopsss, Sunshine-1, abhiya23, _nakshi_, asifiqbalsh, khwaishfan, Linsie
Thank you my dear friends

Thank you each n everyone of u 4 supporting me in this journey.This SS is ending here.Plz give a detailed comment on the last part.Plz do write ur favourite character,favourite scene,favourite jodi n why u liked them.

Edit credit to the real editors

Ahista .. Slowly.. Part 5

Mahir and Vishaka told everything to their parents.They were shocked.
Sumitra:For us you both did such a big sacrifice.

Arvind:It's our fault.Without understanding their friendship we forced them to get married.
Chanchan:Never thought that our decision will snatch away our children's happiness.


Andy:There is no need of any sacrifice.We will call off the engagement and you both can marry the person you love.


Mahir:No need dad.Everything is over.
Vish:Yes...nothing is left now.

Vish:The ones we love hate us.They don't understand our love.




Mahir Vish were upset.
Mahir:So Vish and I will marry each other.

Andy:But...
Vish:There is no need to change the decision.


Mahir and Vishaka walked off.
Sumitra:They have taken a decision against their happiness.But we will try to get them their happiness.If they really love them,they will come back to Mahir and Vish.If not,we will let Mahir and Vish to stick to their decision.
Andy:You are right Sumi.
Ajitabh and Bela heard the calling bell.
Bela opened the door.
They were Mahir and Vish's parents.
Andy-Sumitra:We are Mahir's parents.
Arvind-Chanchan:We are Vish's parents.
Ajitabh Bela were stunned.
Sumitra:Our children told us how much they love you both.
Ajitabh-Bela were stunned.
Arvind:It's our fault.We only forced them to get engaged.
Chanchan:For our happiness only they got engaged.

Andy:They love only you both.
Sumitra:Please understand their love and forgive them.It's our request.

Ajitabh Bela were upset.
Arvind:These stubborn people are going to get married in a few days as you both broke up with them.Tomorrow is Mehendi and day after tomorrow is Sangeet.
They were shocked.
Arvind:If you guys have ever loved Mahir and Vish sincerely come and stop the wedding.
The parents left.
Ajitabh Bela were very upset.
Bela:We really made a mistake bhaiyya.

Ajitabh:A big mistake which hurt all the hearts.


They both were in tears.
Their mother came there in wheel chair painfully.
Mother:I never knew that my children were undergoing so much of pain.I over heard whatever they said.Life gives second chance only to some people.You both are getting it.Don't let yourself lose your love.Go get them back.

Bela and Ajitabh hugged their mother crying.



Vishaka was thinking of Ajitabh and her moments with him while the mehendi lady was applying mehendi on her palms.
Lady:What's your to be husband's name?
Thinking of Ajitabh Vishaka uttered:Ajitabh.
Later when the mehendi was done Vish looked at her palm and was shocked to see A instead of M.


Vish:Let me ignore it.Just A is there on my palm,Ajitabh is not there in my life.
She wiped her teary eyes.

Sangeet function of Mahir Vishaka...

Many were dancing.
Everyone pushed Mahir-Vishaka to the dance floor.
Suddenly Somebody pulled away Vishaka from Mahir.They were stunned to see that person.It was Ajitabh.
Vish:Ajitabh!


Ajitabh:Yes your Ajitabh.
Vish:What are you doing?
Ajitabh:I just tried to stop you from dancing with Mahir as you should dance only with me.Since I am a police the way I stopped you from dancing was rough.
Vish:Why did you stop me?Why I should dance only with you?
Ajitabh kept his finger on her lips.
Ajitabh:Because this is a Sangeet function and I will be your bride groom.
Vish was shocked.Mahir was shocked.
The parents of Mahir and Vishaka smiled.


Vish:What?
Ajitabh:I am sorry.I gave you a lot of pain.I never paid any attention to what you said.But i truly regret.I am ashamed of myself.Please forgive me.Please don't be angry with me.Please don't hate me.


Vishaka's eyes got welled up with tears.
Vish:I can never be angry with you Ajitabh.Because I love you.I can't even think of hating you.
Even I did a mistake by hiding the truth.That's why you misunderstood me.
Ajitabh smiled emotionally.
Ajitabh:Will you give me a second chance?Please...will you marry me?
Vishaka was silent.
Vishaka's parents:Your love is true.So your love is near you.Accept him.
Mahir:You are lucky that your lover understood your love and came back to you.Say yes.
Vishaka smiled emotionally at Ajitabh:You don't know that every moment I was waiting for this moment when you come and propose to me.My dream got fulfilled.Yes Ajitabh...I will marry you.
Ajitabh became so happy that he held her hands.They smiled at each other.
Ajitabh:Ramonaji...
Vishaka:Don't call me Ramonaji anymore.
Ajitabh:Don't say like that.I can't call you Vishaka.
Vish:Who asked you to call me Vishaka?Call me Ramona..not Ramonaji.
He smiled:Ok Ramona.
They both giggled.

Mahir thought:Wish you were also here with me Bela.
Suddenly he heard a voice from behind.
"I am here Mahir".
He turned back.There Bela was standing.
Bela:Do you think that I won't come here when you wish for my presence?
Mahir smiled.Suddenly he became dull remembering their fight.
Bela:I know that I broke your heart.I am ashamed of myself for that.But trust me Mahir...My heart too broke into thousand pieces.Only if we come together we can rejoin those broken pieces.For that please forgive me.Please don't say no.

Mahir cupped her face:Our love is not that weak to ignore your apology and kick you out.Because you are always there in my heart.
Bela smiled emotionally:Thank you so much Mahir.Will you marry me?
Mahir pecked her forehead and said:Yes Bela.I am only yours.
She became so happy that she embraced him.

Andy:So the sangeet function is for Mahir Bela and Ajitabh-Vish.Let's play dance songs for the soon to be wed couples.
Both the couples smiled.


They played a song.
Ajitabh Vishaka and Mahir Bela started dancing.


Marhami sa chaand hai tu
Diljala sa main andhera
Ek dooje ke liye hain
Neend meri khwaab tera
Tu ghata hai phuhaar ki
Main ghadi intezaar ki
Apna milna likha issi baras hai na

Jo meri manzilon ko jaati hai
Tere naam ki koi sadak hai na
Jo mere dil ko dil banati hai
Tere naam ki koi dhadak hai na

Koi Bandhani joda odh ke
Baabul ki gali aaun chhod ke
Tere hi liye laaungi piya
Solah saal ke saawan jod ke
Pyar se thamna, dor bareek hai
Saat janmon ki yeh pehli tareekh hai

Dor ka ek main sira
Aur tera hai doosra
Jud sake beech mein kayi tadap hai na

Jo meri manzilon ko jaati hai
Tere naam ki koi sadak hai na
Jo mere dil ko dil banati hai


Tere naam ki koi dhadak hai na(Dhadak).



Since Bela did not have mehendi function they conducted a mehendi function at Bela's house.
Bela showed her hand to Mahir where Mahir's name was written.He smiled at her romantically.
Vishaka who had come there as a guest showed her hand which has A on it.
Ajitabh smiled:This is destiny.Ramona belongs to ACP Ajitabh.That's why unknowingly the initial of my name appeared on your hand.
Vish Ajitabh shared a romantic eye lock.

Song was played.
All the couples danced.


Kesariya mharo balma
Padharo mhari country ma re
Aao padhaaro
Kesariya mharo balma
Padharo mhari country ma re
Aao padhaaro na re...
Zing zing zing zing...

Aye.. dhadak chik dhum dhadkan bole
Jab tu chhat pe aaye...
Nain ladake tujhse man mandir mein
Jingle bell ho jaye

Dhoom dhadak chik dhum dhadkan bole
Jab tu chhat pe aaye...
Nain ladake tujhse man mandir mein
Jingle bell ho jaye
Tera haseen chehra aaha
Mere labon se nikla waaha
Dhoondh Google pe jaake milega Majnu
Mere jaisa kahaan?

Poori paltan ke saath
Leke baarat balma ye tera
Naache zing zing zing zing zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing
(x2)
Aaya 10 Kilometer paidal chalke
Main teri gali
Mujhko paani bhi na pucho
Khud motorcycle pe chali
Tu saheli ke sang jaake
Restaurant mein Pizza khaye
Dhoop mein bahar baitha baitha
Main chugta hoon moongphali
Chali teri sawaari jahaan..
Haan haan haan...
Chali teri sawaari jahaan
Sang chala main tere wahaan
Fan hoon baby tera
Laga hoon piche dum challe ki tarah
Chaahe jitna bhi daant
Chhode na saath balma ye tera
Naache zing zing zing zing zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing jhingaat
Jhing-jhing jhing-jhing jhing-jhing...
(x2)
Bhejun Mummy-Daddy ko ghar tere
Leke mera rishta
Ho shagun mein kaju, pista
Choodi, kangan with guldasta
Chai biscuit se munh meetha karke
Shaadi done ho jaaye
Na milega tere gharwalon ko
Dulha itna sasta
Baaki tamaam rishte hataa...

Baaki tamaam rishte hataa
Patli gali se unko kataa
Aur sajaa ke mandap tere bagal mein
Gori mujhko bitha
De de haathon mein haath
Ban jaaye baat balma ye tera...

Naache zing zing zing zing zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing zingaat
Zing-zing zing-zing zing-zing jhingaat
Jhing-jhing jhing-jhing jhing-jhing...
(x2)(Dhadak).

Haldi...

Ajitabh and Vish pasted haldi on each other's face passionately.
Mahir and Bela rubbed their cheeks with each others with burning passion to put haldi on each other.

They smiled at each other.



Mahir moved towards her face.She closed her eyes.Both were lost in each other.



Both the couples danced together romantically celebrating Haldi function.



Na maaregi deewangi meri Na maaregi aawargi meri Ki maaregi zyada mujhe
Maut se narazagi teri Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa Hai zidd kis baat ki teri Ki maaregi zyada mujhe Maut se narazagi teri Jaan 'nisaar hai jaan nisaar Tere pyaar pe mere yaar
Jaan nisaar hai, Ohoooho. Duniya jamaane se Rishte mitaye hai
Tujhse hi yaari hai hamari Ek baar to aa. Ho Maine nibhaya hai Kar ke dikhaya hai
Le teri baari Ek vaari tu bhi pyaar nibha Tu bhi pyaar nibha Oo Yaara.!! berukhi se hai badi Umar intezaar ki meri Ki maaregi zyada mujhe Maut se narazagi teri Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa Hai zidd kis baat ki teri Ki maaregi zyada mujhe Maut se narazagi teri Jaan 'nisaar hai jaan nisaar Tere pyar pe mere yaar Jaan 'nisaar hai jaan nisaar Tere pyar pe mere yaar Jaan

nisaar hai, Ohoooho.!!(Kedarnath).

Bela went to her bathroom to wash off haldi.Mahir followed her.
Bela:Mahir..what are you doing here?
Mahir:Shhh..don't say anything.Others will hear.I will wash off your haldi.It is my right.
Bela blushed.

Mahir brought a bowl of rose petals and decorated the tub water with it.
Mahir carried Bela to the tub.


He threw rose petals at Bela.Bela felt blessed.





Mahir poured water on every exposed part of Bela and washed off the haldi from her body.


Then both stood under the shower.

They shared intimate romantic moments when the water poured upon them.



Bela changed her dress and started drying her hair.Mahir kept observing her with a sweet smile.


Wedding...

Ajitabh Vishaka,Mahir Bela got married.








Vikrant Ruhi congratulated them.
Vikrant:We got engaged first.But you all got married first.



Ajitabh Vishaka and Mahir Bela smiled.


Ruhi:Come for our wedding next week.


They:Sure.

Vikrant Ruhi got married.


Vikrant cupped her face:I will always love you Ruhi.I will always take care of you.
Ruhi looked at him emotionally.
Ajitabh Vishaka and Mahir Bela wished them.
Music was played.
All of them danced cheerfully.


Oh... haaye..
Do nain sitaare hai chand sa mukhda
Kya kehna uska.. Afreen!
Daawat mein jaise ho shahi tukda
Uske jaisi na koi nazneen
Shaahi joda pehan ke
Aayi jo ban thann ke

Wahi toh meri Sweetheart hai
Sharmaaye si bagal mein
Jo baithi hai dulhan ke
Wahi toh meri Sweetheart hai
(x2)

Kaise main kahun shukriya
Uska mujhpe ehsaan hai
Naacheezon ki basti mein wo...
Jo banke aayi mehmaan hai
Lagta hai shaadi ghar mein
Uske aane se jaise
Chalke aayi hai khushkismati

Saari mehfil ki woh jaan bani hai
Kya kehna uska.. Afreen!
Muflis ke dil ka armaan bani hai
Uske jaisi na koi nazneen

Shaahi joda pehan ke
Aayi jo ban thann ke
Wahi toh meri Sweetheart hai

Sharmaaye si bagal mein
Jo baithi hai dulhan ke
Wahi toh meri Sweetheart hai





Wah wah ji wah wah
Kya baat hai!
Wah wah ji wah wah
Kya baat hai!
(Kedarnath)

The end


Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#48
Part 4
It was indeed an emotional part
They were so hurt that it made them feel betrayed and everything seemed a lie to Ajitabh and Bela
But loved the way how Mahir and Vish still loved their partners knowing they hate them and said so many hurting words
True love always finds its ways

Part 5

Good that the parents realised the love of theis kids and supported them
and went to their loved ones to persuade and ensure them about love
You written everything in a single part mehandi sangeet haldi Haldi romance
Their wedding and even ViKu Ruhi wedding also you covered Omg
But you ended so soon
You must have showed behir kids and their happy life also
But all is happy that ends happy
do come up with a new story of behir 😊
But i would love to appreciate your editing skills and posting pics depicting each and every scene is 👏
And added songs too 👍🏼
Edited by _nakshi_ - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#49
Mahir & Vish's parents were so sweet to give priority to their children's happiness and took the initiative to speak to Ajitabh & Bela.

The way you matched all the scenes with pictures in the entire story, especially for Behir's sangeet, haldi, hair drying scene and wedding is ❤️ All the beautiful Behir moments in one. Ajitabh & Vish were cute.

Since you have ended this one, do write one dedicated only for our Behir.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50
It was awesome
Perfect ending
Loved it
Thanks
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