Samaina FF - The Reluctant Groom and His Accidental Bride Ch 23 pg 134 - Page 62

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

My dear May , I just love this story too much. I am getting addicted to it. The plot ofcourse has a perfect romantic touch and I love the pace of narration. What I liked the most about this update is the writing . Absolutely brilliant piece of work. The detailing that you do in your updates is mind blowing. I love the use of Hindi and English in the same update...and you seem to have mastered the art of transitioning from one language to the other with out making the readers realize of this change.

Now coming to Sameer...what do I say...poor fellow , he thought he knew what he was doing but today I feel after listening to his mom's past , he seemed lost. His perspective to women and marriage has changed for sure...at least there is a beginning. And both stuck in the same room is forced to interact. I must appreciate the older folks ( Nana ji and his friend ) for this decision.

Naina on the other hand cribbing about his comments on what she should wear to college was hilarious. Her feeling jealous after seeing him blush looking at the chocolate was so heart touching. Poor girl. Somehow I am very selfish in this case. I don't like seeing Naina J...not sure why...I feel very bad whenever she feels jealous...but Sameer feeling jealous and possessive makes me happy ...as a woman I feel such an act from a man towards his wife shows his affection for his wife...where as when you see a lady feeling jealous, I feel there is the presence of another woman in his life...I guess that is the psychology behind my thought...I know rather childish...rofl...so a lil bit of possessive and jealous Sameer is always a treat.

I am wondering how he would react when he knows she is going to work with some other organization..will he still maintain that she is not his wife when they go to collage...so many thoughts...and by the way...my dear girl...where is the Meeta scene??? 😭 You didn't update that in this chapter. I was eagerly waiting for that...I hope you will give that in the upcoming one.

May , please update the next one as soon as you can ...till then I will keep reading this chapter again and again...

Thanks Ashu! So good to read that you are enjoying the inclusion of both Hindi and English in the narration. I personally find it quicker to write in English, but find that having the dialogues in Hindi gives it a different feel. And now after so many updates it's getting easier and quicker too. 😊

Nanaji and his friends idea of forcing them to interact more by staying in close quarters... well age and life experience does bring its advantages, right? Samaina are not school going in this story when they meet but are still very young. It takes time to grow emotionally.

It's okay.. I get it. Jealous Naina ka overdose hi gaya hai Sab ko! 😆 though you have raised a very interesting point and perspective.. jealousy in a guy is interpreted as possessiveness and welcomed, while when seen in a woman it is seen as a sign of insecurity. I guess something to do with evolution and early civilisation where multiple females of the pack/tribe would be competing with each other for one male's attention. Chalo aage Jealous Sameer pe concentrate karenge. 😉

Meetha scene se Sab ke itne expectations hai! Bahoot pressure feel ho raha hai mujhe 😆 Sameer raat ko biwi ko chocolate kheela raha hai, isse jyada kya meetha ho sakta hai? 😆 will have something coming up soon!

It's always a pleasure to get another writers input, so thanks again dear!

Love, May

Originally posted by: Richa0305

Hey May,

Thank you for the PM and such a wonderful update.

Firstly , I want to hug you for the comment made by sameer " blouse kum aur torture device zyada hai"
🤣🤣🤣

Omg , I was rolling on bed laughing holding my stomach...this was so hilariously amazing. Ab aayega maza bacchu ko

Omg, so now sameer has interest in Naina's dressing sense...what she should wear and what she should not. Wow...sahi kaha naina ne...biwi mein interest nai hai...but uske kapro mein hai...waise taiji ki di hui sarees se humari naina bach gayi aur kya chahiye.

Poor vishakha, she thinks she can bridge gap between her and sameer through naina...little does she know that naina is herself clueless about her relation with sameer. This was such a irony so perfectly written by you , a mother in law is depending on her new bahu for mending her broken relation with her son...and bahu is clueless about her future.

Wow, so they are laughing together on taiji's saree...thanku for this treat.

Naina is such a darling to still wish and pray good fortune for sameer. Only indian wife's can have such big hearts...in such short span she forgot about all the pain he gave her and here she is praying for his success and omg...naina is jealous...ofcourse , she has loved sameer from the starting unknowingly . Towards the end, I simply loved how sameer noticed a selfless naina...Even he was shocked to observe that genuine happiness and pride on her face for his success. Ya very true , how can someone be so genuine and forgiving.

Loved the update. Their conversations...their chocolate sharing...sameer noticing her while eating chocolate and of course that line "blouse km torture device zyada hai" is the hero of this update.

Love

Ruchi

Thanks Ruchi 😊

Bechara tortured soul.. kare bhi toh kya! He was probably not expecting effects of the blouses to haunt him to much 😆

Hey, I really loved the irony that you have highlighted here about Vishaka hoping Naina can help her mend her relationship with Sameer, when Naina herself is in such a precarious situation. The word irony had not come to my mind while writing those scenes.. but it absolutely fits when I read your comment. So a special thanks for that!

Glad you liked the last scene where his perception of her is starting to change. I am sure it goes both ways.. Naina must be seeing something unexpected in him too. Both need sometime to start seeing the other for who they are.

Hope you enjoy the next update too! And thanks for the hug 😊

Love, May

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi May!

You know commenting on your thread feels like doing homework of your favourite teacher and favourite subject.You know everything,punctual,attentive and all but submit your homework at last..In hope of making it look best😆

Sorry darling ..You have all the haq to be angry on me.😳

Coming to updates--

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The updates remind me so much of James Joyce.Joyce had this beautiful line in his one of master pieces."His lips would not bend to kiss her." This particular line ran over the whole chapter but each time the line had a different emotional tone to it.Like wise Sameer is stubborn and would not bend to accepting her and his own primal emotions for her.

But this is what makes it all tantalising.The grip on storyline is crystal clear. I am absolutely loving how both are coming close emotionally.

Reading so many stories on and off forum,I find your stories have a certain hidden content thats magnetic.The feeling of being real and ''apna''. The scenes are so real and natural that i feel like peeking at Naina and the family scenes with my binoculars.

That tree falling and disrupting electricity is something each of us will relate to.The ordeals that follow.And on top of that,Naina's bidaai was underway.Must have felt like some evil's eye cast upon that hour.

The way Naina is dealing with everything gaily and gravely ,it takes momentous inner determination and strength.Knowing from insides that the vehicle of marriage has lost one supporting wheel,still the way she is trying to balance it on a single wheel of her part..

Its such a glad thing to read how she has found indirect support and direct love from all others.Deepika has been such a mood uplifter and cute friend of Naina. But still the emptiness and loneliness is palpable.

<div>Not to forget that falling from the sofa was so relatable.My good ness, it hurts and hurts bad.Another such a relatable plight.So Mr.Husband finally bent ,but not to kiss but to put band aid.

Now he wants his beautiful doll to be all decked up in best of dresses and not Taiji's worst choices.Interesting.

Okay.I can feel in the background SRK'S song playing --"Haule haule ho jaayega pyaar."😉

The interaction with Nanaji and Visakha are so heart warming.I loved how Visakha is such a softy and cried remembering her late husband.Sameer seems to be in so much misconceptions and wrong interpretations about both ladies of his life.And a relationship can only grow,when absolutely all misunderstandings are clear and the seed of immense faith ,trust and love has been sown.

I am waiting for the moment when Naina gets the apprenticeship,moves away to guest room and physically they are apart.We only start valuing the things we own when we lose it.

I think its needless to say how brilliantly you are going with this story. And how beautifully you are managing time to update on time.Such an inspiration you are.👏

Thank you for the PMs and tolerating my late reviews.

Keep coming with your best.

With love

Minu

Minu, first of all I loved that line His lips would not bend to kiss her. It is so poignant! I have not read James Joyce, but will give him a try sometime.. though such works are sometimes a little beyond me 😳

I am never angry at any of my readers dear. Everyone is busy balancing and juggling so much! Though comments are always very eagerly awaited, please don't feel pressured.

Power cut was a homage to my hometown, where this was a way of life! 😆 so glad you found it relatable. That and the fall from the sofa! I can see you definitely found that relatable. Hope there was a Sameer around to apply a band-aid for you too 😉

I loved your analogy about the vehicle which has lost one of this wheels and that Naina is still trying to keep going, if only for the sake of appearances. Yes, it's good that she is feeling supported by other members of the family, but without him it doesn't amount to much.

Sameer's issues have started with this rejection by his mother or his perception of that relationship. I am in no way excusing Vishaka here, but he needs some closure to be able to move on.

Thanks again dear for all the encouragement and insightful reviews.

Love, May

May please update . Not difficult to wait . .

Originally posted by: Dharapriya

How. What a beautiful update. Their conversation was awesome. Just love it. Good he started thinking about Naina. Thank god taiji wali sarees finally Naina wont be wearing now. But jitna padhu chota hi lagta hai update. Hope u post next update very soon.

Thanks dear!

Taiji wali sadiya pehen ke Naina ko college toh bhej hi nahi sakte thay! Kum se Kum shaadi ke baad toh humari heroine ko acha wardrobe mila chahiye 😆

Will try to update ASAP.

Love, May

Originally posted by: Samaina9

Nice update...update more...waiting 4 the nxt update...want clg track again...

Thanks dear and will try to update in a day or two 😊

Love, May

Originally posted by: sumathiaishu

Ty for pm nd beautiful update. Always looking forward for the next update.

Thanks dear. Happy to read that you enjoyed the last update 😊

Love, May

Originally posted by: Dreamy_3

Hey Sims amazing update I just loved it
I love the way you write by giving importance to each and every character and situation and the level of detailing is perfect :)
So sameer ko farak parta hy different blouses sy ehmm ehmm :p bechara khud hi confuse hy I loved how both have now started talking to each other and how naina understood that sameer was disturbed
Naina ki jealousy was so cute :p and sameer taking interest in her dresses Ahan interesting ahista ahista dil pighal rha but khud ko pata nahi :p
I loved sameer Vishaka conversation I wash sameer ko aur b pata chaly us k parents k relation k bary main the way he was thinking about it again and again showed how he was so unaware aysy jysy kisi aur hi world main rehta tha and this is something very new for him I want naina to help him in this phase and comes out of his fears and insecurities
I really like how sameer has started thinking about naina's behaviour he has slowly getting to know real naina naina who loves him unconditionally and will give him all the happiness the purest soul made for only for her sameer
Eagerly waiting for next update:)

Hi, this is May here. Sims is writing another FF. But the comments are relevant to my FF, so it's fine 😊

So pleased that you are enjoying the detailing.

Sameer and Naina are slowly getting to know each other and also trying to figure out how to get along in these circumstances.

Blouse and other tortures are required, as we cannot let our hero off the hook so easily, right? 😆

Love, May

Originally posted by: Dee12340

Too GOOD. ALOO K PARANTHE ,TORCHER DEVICE, chocolate and most important biwi to chahiye nahi but ...

Thanks dear and glad you are enjoying all the little tortures and Samaina reactions 😆

Love, May

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Loved it. Brilliant piece of work. Loved everything about this update. Vishakha-sameer conversation was warming. This made a huge difference in Sameer.

Sameer and Naina are slowly feeling comfortable with each other. Loved their conversations. Part I liked most is... That he didn't like Taiji's selection😆. Now I'm wondering how they will go to college. I know their timings are different. Still what will Sameer do I mean how he is gonna behave to Naina at college😛

Will he be able to resist talking to her? Loved their slow bonding.

Thanks Shelly! So pleased you liked the Sameer Vishaka conversation. It wasn't a very big or in-depth one.. but hopefully relevant enough for him to start thinking in a positive direction.

So many questions about the future now! 😆 Do keep reading to get the answers 😊 I hope I will be able to do justice to all the excited readers expectations!

Love, May