Samaina FF - The Reluctant Groom and His Accidental Bride Ch 23 pg 134 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Iamvid

Loved it Loved it Loved it. Thanks for this awesome FF. Eagerly waiting for the next one.

Thanks dear! So pleased that you are enjoying this FF 😊

Will try to update tomorrow :)

Love, May

Originally posted by: Rizz_1987

Hi May,

Belated happy birthday dear.

Coming to the updates...thank you ...thank you...thank you so much for such a wonderful update.

Starting from Sameer noticed Naina when she arrived...hold her hand in car n in the bedroom instead of guest room...kya twist he yaar👏👏

N last line pink lace ...ab kaha jayega hamara buddhu...

Pls update the next part soon...pls pls

Riz

Thanks for your wishes Riz 😊

So happy that you liked the update and all the Samaina interactions! Pink lace ne jaadu jagaya hai... 😉

Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai aur humara buddhu kab seedha hota hai!

Love, May

Originally posted by: Sue123

Hey Happy Birthday to u..

The update was wow.. There were so many lovely moments in this update..He admiring her beauty, holding hands, putting up the band aid etc..

Munna Pandit asking him not to upset her further with his talks, Pandit claiming that very soon Sameer will change his mind abt Naina using the guest room were such beautiful things.

In short just loved the entire part.. Looking fwd for more😉

Can you please PM me for your future updates..

Thanks to the wishes dear and happy to read that you enjoyed the overall update along with Samaina interaction!

Will PM you going forward 😊

Love, May

Originally posted by: Vidhimehra

Belated happy bday may...hope you enjoyed ur day.

And thanks for gvg so lovely uodate. All scene of bidai bridal makeup after bidai rituals very so lively . Then sharingbed amd silky nighty...then sameer head full of vivid images...quite interesting.

Hope for an early update.

Thanks for the wishes dear! I had a lovely time with my family 😊

Good to read you liked the description of the bidai scene and everything around it.

Samaina scene are always the icing on the cake, right? 😆

Hope you enjoy the next update too!

Love, May

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

May it was an amazing update, I loved how the bidaai ceremony and that morning was described so realistically ... That electricity issue and naina going to Swati's place for getting ready, aisa exact same situation hote dekha hai maine in real life😆so the detailing aspect was too good . And u should have used Pandit's famous dialogue from the show Bhaisahab bhaisahab bomb lag rhi hai😆... Sam muh se toh na bola bhabhi hai teri but expressions se convey kar diya😃 ... Finally bidaai done and the car scene where Sam holds her hand as giving her the assurance was too good , Sam babu care toh krte hai par jatate nahi hai😳,coming to the bedroom scene again it seemed so realistic naina trying to adjust in the new life just like the new brides too and the bathroom juggle of 45minutes😆and Sam waiting outside trying to calculate how much time will she take in getting ready agar nightwear mein change krne k liye itna leti hai😆and then naina falling and Sam helping her with first aid and taking care she is ok ... It was overall a balanced update with right amount of emotion humour and tinge of romance😳loved it so much

Thanks so much Suman and I am so pleased to read that you found it a balanced update! 😊

I was recalling few old memories when I came up with that idea for power failure. My home town always had so many power cut issues especially in rainy seasons, that I had to just bring that in here! 😆

Pandit's reaction is very much inspired by that scene in the show! But since it would have been incomplete without Sameer'a Dialogue I decided to change it a little 😉

And you enjoyed the Samaina interaction too! 😳

Love, May

Hey update soon...we're waiting

Originally posted by: Rashi0812

Belated happy birthday dear

Loved it

Sameer admiring her from the moment she entered & stealing glances during the pooja😳naina's entry here reminded me of naina's entry after she became GS...bhaisaab bhaisaab atom bomb lag rahi😆😆

Sameer holding her hand in the car & then bandage scene❤️

Whole Bidaai scene😭👍🏼

Sameer beta ek din golu ko thank you zaroor bologe😆

Thanks for the wishes dear and good to know that you enjoyed the last update.

Yeah, I was thinking of the GS entry too while writing Pandits reaction 😆

Glad you liked all the Samaina interactions and I agree ek din Golu ko bada wala thank you toh banta hi hai! 😉

Love, May

Originally posted by: samspriyanka09

Happy Birthday may,

Loved the update.

Thanks for the wishes dear and so happy to read that you loved this update 😊

Love, May

Originally posted by: E-reader

Hi May,
Wish you a very happy new year and a belated happy birthday.

I read this quote somewhere recently (forgot the owner of the quote!!)
"every word that a writer writes is unlocked differently by the eye and mind of a reader .And so logically every reader interprets in a different way.
In that sense, the comments or compliments that I say are purely my interpretation of the story and the writing.

I will be honest with you , the last two chapters did not hook me completely, not because of less of Naina Sameer scenes but there were few sections that diverted my attention and to me as a reader felt not necessary and I couldn't invest into the contents completely :(.

I read this chapter and oh boy!!! You got this reader's attention completely this time :). Your writing took me straight and placed me right at the center of the scenarios happening in the story!!.
I could imagine Sameer and Naina doing pooja with Naina's outer peaceful facade but inner turmoil, with sameer's uneasiness , with Nanaji's uncertainty of how to handle the situation, with Vishaka's happiness of seeing both son and daughter-in-law together, with Chachaji and Chachiji happy to see Naina finally going to her husband and in-laws house but sad at the same time that she will be no longer there with them, Taiji and Tauji happy that finally their reputation is intact and Naina is indeed going to in-laws and their doubts that Bidaai will never happen didn't come true. Last but not least Preeti's anger on Sameer because of the way he treated her sister but she is also angry on herself thinking of her inability to not do anything to make the situation better for her sister!!!
Of course the interactions between the husband and wife was icing on the cake.
All in all, it was a paisa vassul chapter for me !!.

My apologies if I have upset you with my honest opinions regarding the last two chapters but as a reader , I'm a greedy one and really want the writer to make me invest and imagine the story and characters completely like the way you have done with this chapter.
More than you, I am looking forward and hoping that the upcoming chapters will make me feel the same emotion that I felt with this one.
I don't hesitate to say this that you are one of the writers who knows best how to handle drama and also how to handle the thin line of making a scene sensuous instead of vulgar. keep up the good work and looking forward for many more to come :)

Thanks so much for the wishes dear! I had a lovely time 😊

First of all, I loved that quote that you have included at the beginning of your comment! It is so true!! So many times I read an acclaimed book or even a classic and am unable to connect with it the way I would have expected to. So, completely understand what you are saying.

And I am not in the least upset dear! In fact all feedback is always truly welcome. I am a complete amateur and this is my first attempt at writing a proper long story. I am definitely expecting it to be lacking in some or maybe many ways and only hope to learn from the input shared by the readers.

I am happy that you felt reconnected to the story with this last chapter. And loved the bit about being able to maintain the thin line between sensual and valgur.

Hope you enjoy the future updates!

Love, May

Lovely update and liked all the description part.. But fixated towards all the leg pulling of relatives of sameer and Naina.. If Pralay and Deepika were high on sugar in the function then now Sameer will be high on that pink laces and modern blouse 😉.. Want to read more on that in your next update.. Pl come up soon..