I SO enjoyed this OS! The writing was fantastic.
I always love Sameer's POVs because they're funny, flirty or sarcastic. Naina's POV is usually so serious. This was the 1st time I enjoyed Naina's POV - it was laugh out loud funny! I was absolutely killed by the lines: "Did the sun rise from the west today? Why the hell was he in the library in the first place" and "Jhagda nahi karungi toh tum kiss kaise doge."
Whoa, these two have such combustible passion between them. They went from doing nothing to ready to do everything inside of 2 min lol. They were cute and funny and so essentially Sameer and Naina while indulging in passion.
Really great work! Any chance of making it a FF please (fluttering eyelashs at you lol)?
Edited by alinaza - 5 years ago
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