Sajda tera sajda I'll worship you FS AkshAn Last part-pg4

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Part 1


A party...
Pandit-Preeti were dancing.

Suddenly Preeti sneezed.
Preeti:Sorry Pandit.Let me go to the washroom.
Pandit:Ok.
Preeti went to the washroom.When she returned she was shocked to see Pandit dancing with another girl.Pandit saw Preeti fuming in anger.

Preeti walked off angrily.Pandit ran after her.
Pandit:Preeti..listen to me.
Preeti:I don't want to hear anything.I just went just a few steps away from you and in my absence you started romancing another girl.

Pandit:Preeti..you are misunderstanding me.I was not romancing,but dancing.as you know she is my colleague.She was alone,so she just asked me for a dance.I could'nt say no she is my colleague.
Preeti:Why does she want to dance with a married man?It's your fault.You are not a baby.
You could have refused.But you did'nt do it.


Pandit:Preeti..I am sorry.
Preeti:I don't want to hear anything.
They reached home.Still they were fighting.Seeing this Guddan shouted:Will you guys please stop it?
Preeti:Di..this Pandit only started it.

Pandit:No Bhabhi.
Preeti:Because of you only I started fighting.
Guddan:Stop it and patch up.
Preeti:Patch up with him?No way.
Pandit:If you are not interested then even I am not interested for patch up.
Guddan:You both are spoiling your relationship because of ego and immaturity.Only when you lose your love you will understand it's pain.
Guddan's eyes were full of tears.She walked away
Pandit and Preeti became upset.They walked in different direction.


Guddan looked at hers and Akshat's wedding photograph.
Guddan:I know that you hate me.That's why you are taking up extra work to be away from me.
But I miss you Akshat.I am waiting for you to return home.I know that you will come soon as you can't avoid your dearest sister Uruvi's engagement party.Who thought that our beautiful relationship will ruin like this?


Flash back...

Hospital...
A nurse:Dr.Guddan..an emergency case is there.An Accident case.
Guddan:Bring him immediately.

An injured person was brought.Guddan examined him.
Guddan:Bring him to the operation theatre immediately.Get ready for the surgery.
Guddan did the surgery.
Later he got his consciousness.Guddan was relieved.
Guddan:Thank God you are alright.We got you from the accident spot.No one knows anything about you.What is your name?What are you doing?
His face became dull.
Guddan:Say..what is your name?

He:Doctor...doctor...I ...I can't remember my name.
Guddan was shocked.

He started crying.Guddan felt sad.
Unknowingly she caressed his head.
Guddan:Please don't be upset.You just had an operation and a surgery.You are still in shock.May be after some hours you will regain your memory.

After a day too He could not even recall his memory.Guddan realized that he has lost his memory.
Akshat:I lost my memory.Right doctor?
Guddan became upset.
Akshat cried bitterly.
Guddan:Look...you had a terrible accident.Your life got saved.That itself is a luck.You just lost your memory,not your life.You may get your memory later.Or you can create new memories.

Akshat:But doctor..I don't even have a name.I am nameless.I have no identity.
Akshat held her hand:Tell me do I have any name?

Guddan recalled the movie which she saw on the previous day.She remembered the male lead's name.
Guddan:Then I will give you a nice name.Akshat.How is it?
He smiled:Akshat..it's a good name.Thank you Doctor.
Guddan smiled.
Akshat:When will I get discharged?
Guddan:You just had a surgery.It will take some time.


Akshat:I am not in a hurry to leave the hospital.Because I have no home to go.This hospital is my only home doctor.

Guddan looked at him emotionally.

Present...


Uruvi attended phone call.
"Hi sweet heart".
Uruvi's face blossomed:Karn!
Karn:Ya.your Karn.
She blushed.
Karn:What are you doing?
Uruvi:I was just looking at the moon and stars.
Karn:You know what?Even I was looking at them.
Uruvi:You too?
Karn:We both doing the same thing is a beautiful coincidence.But not a surprise as our hearts and minds think alike.


She smiled.
Karn:Seeing the glittering stars I was reminded of your glittering eyes.And the moon reminded me of your beautiful face.That's how I decided to all you.
Uruvi blushed.
Karn:The atmosphere is so romantic.I wish i were with you now.
Uruvi smiled:Even I wish for it.But wait for 2 more days.It's our engagement.Then we can see each other.

Karn:I can't wait for that day.I am longing to see you.
Uruvi:Me too.
He smiled.
Karn:Till then give me something to keep it with me.
Uruvi:What?
Karn:Kiss.
She became shy:No no.

Karn:Why?I just asked for a kiss over the phone.Not on my body.Then why?Give yaar.
Uruvi:Ok ok..I will.
She closed her eyes and placed a kiss on the phone.Karn enjoyed it's feel.
Karn:Your kiss reached my cheek.Very romantic.
She was shy.
Karn:The next time hopefully your kiss will reach my lips.
Uruvi cut the call due to shyness.He giggled.

Preeti changed her dress and put the bed sheet properly.Pandit went near her.
Pandit:Preeti..
She did'nt mind him.
Pandit:Preeti..do you remember our confession moment?

Flash back...

Pandit gave a red rose to Preeti.She blushed.

Maine pucha ye dil se
Main kyu hoon jahan mein
Ek dhahkan boli tere liye



Pandit:Preeti..will you spread fragrance in my life till the end like this red rose?

Maine yaadein tarashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di tere liye



Due to surprise Preeti could not believe it:What?
Pandit:I love you Preeti.Will you marry me?

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye



Preeti nodded smiling:Yes..I love you too Pandit.

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye


She embraced him in excitement.


Joh main kehta hoon
Joh sunnta hoon
Joh sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hoon, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..


They looked at each other's eyes romantically.

Koi dard hoon gehra
Koi akks hoon pisra
Main kya hun bata de tere liye..



Pandit:Promise me that after marriage whatever fight takes place you won't leave me and go.
Preeti:I promise Pandit.I will never leave you.Because I want to fight with you always.
They both giggled.

Yaadon ka chehra
Koi khwaab sunehra
Main kya hoon bata de tere liye..



Pandit:I also promise that whatever fight will be there,I will patch up with you instead of prolonging the fight.
She smiled.

Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..


Suddenly she slipped only to fall in his arms.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..


Preeti:Let us take a selfie to cherish this precious moment.
Pandit:Yes Sure.
They took a selfie.

Main khoya saa ik lamha hoon
Bas is pal hoon tere liye
Main awara baadal hoon
Bas is pal hoon tere liye




Present...

Pandit:Do you remember what we had decided?I am keeping up my promise.I am ready for patch up.Because when I fight with you I am in pain which I can't bear.I am sorry Preeti.Please forgive me.

Preeti became emotional:Even I don't want to fight with you anymore.


Pandit smiled.

Mere har marz ki tu duaa hai
Hui hai qubool woh duaa hai
Yeh ulfat hai ya koi nasha hai
Jise chhuna chahe wo dhuan hai


Preeti embraced him emotionally.

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye


Jo main kehta hoon
Jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hun, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..

(Fitoor)

The next morning...
All Luthras were having break fast together.
Preeti:For Uruvi's engagement our cousin Shorvori is coming from US.

Akshat Parth Pandit's mother Rakhi:That's so nice.
Guddan:Mummiji..Shorvori's house is getting furnished as she has not lived in India for a long time.Can Shorvori stay here till her house gets ready?
Rakhi:Why not?Let her stay here.
Rakhi's husband Mahesh:Shorvori will be comfortable here with her two sisters and we will also treat her as our family member.After all she is the sister of our daughters in law.

Preeti and Guddan smiled.

Akshat,Parth,Pandit and Uruvi's younger sister Twinkle was walking in her college compound with her friend Pinky.Some boys said looking at Twinkle:Hey Twinku..you are looking beautiful...
Twinkle stared at them with a with a weird expression.
Twinkle:I know that I am beautiful.After all I have won many prizes in the beauty contests.Is there anything else to say?
One by one the boys asked her:Will you be my dance partner for the prom night?
Twinkle:Twinku does'nt dance with anyone like that.Twinku's dance partner should match her level.So bye bye.Try your luck next time.

The boys became dim:Ohhh

Twinkle walked away with Pinky.



Pinky:Twinku...all guys are after you.But you don't care about anyone.You like boys' attention.Then why?
Twinkle:Twinku likes only one boy's attention.Yuvraj..I just want Yuvraj to look at me.
Pinky:But he is not even looking at you.
Twinkle:That's why I am irritated.He is so handsome and charming that all the girls are after him.But he behaves as if he is blind.He does'nt even look at the college beauty Twinku.I don't know with what stone God has made him.How can he ignore me?He is the only person who has not admired my beauty.
Suddenly they saw Yuvraj passing up.Twinkle walked fast to reach him and collided with him purposefully.She began to fall.Yuvraj caught her by her waist.They shared a romantic eye lock.


Suddenly Twinkle realized that it was only her imagination.Yuvraj did not catch her and Twinkle landed up on the floor.Everyone was laughing.Twinkle was irritated.
Pinky walked towards her and whispered:What was the need to bump into him?See..still he did not look at you.Catch my hand and get up.
Twinkle:No...if Twinku wants something she will get it for herself.
Suddenly Twinkle pretended to cry loudly.Yuvraj who walked away heard this and turned back.
He walked towards Twinkle:What happened?Why are you crying?
Twinkle:Can't you see that I am lying down?I had a terrible fall and I am not able to get up now.
Yuvraj:Oh...don't worry.I will help you.
He picked her up in his arms.Twinkle felt dreamy.He placed her on the chair.
Twinkle pretended to cry.
Yuvraj:Now what happened:?
Twinkle:I am not able to move my leg.It's really paining.I think I won't be able to dance for the prom night.
Yuvraj:Don't be upset.I guess your leg sprained.That's why.I will make it alright.

He twisted her leg.
Twinkle screamed:Ahhh
Yuvraj:Now your leg is fine.Right?
Twinkle gave him a pale smile:Yes.Thank you.
Yuvraj:Now smile.You can dance for the prom night.
She smiled.
Twinkle:Who is your dance partner for the Prom night?
Yuvraj:I did'nt get anyone yet.
Twinkle:I also did not get anyone.
Yuvraj:Oh..
Twinkle:Since we both have no partner what about dancing together at prom night?

Yuvraj:But we don't even know each other's name.
Twinkle said in her mind:I had enquired about you when I saw you for the first time itself.So I know your name.
Yuvraj:Hi I am Yuvraj Khanna.
Twinkle:Hi ..I am Twinku.

They shook hands.

Twinkle:You will dance with me.Right?
Yuvraj:Ok.

Twinkle got excited.
Yuvraj:Take care.See you later.
Yuvraj walked off.Pinky went near Twinkle.
Pinky:What was the need of this sprain drama?Because of that he actually twisted your leg and you had to suffer from pain unnecessarily.

Twinkle:So what?I got Yuvraj's care and attention.He even agreed to dance with me.I am very happy.
Pinky smiled:Your dream is getting fulfilled Twinku.
Twinkle smirked:Ya..I told you Pinky.If Twinkle is determined to get something she will get it any way.Guess Yuvraj is falling in my charm.Who can resist Twinku's charm and glamour?
Pinky smiled.




Guddan picked up Shorvori from the airport and brought to Luthra house.Preeti ran to her in excitement.
Preeti:Hey Shorvori...
Shorvori:Hey Preeti...
Preeti hugged her.

Preeti:We missed you.
Preeti kissed her.

Shorvori:I also missed you guys.
Guddan:Now since we are together we will enjoy a lot.

Shorvori:Yes.We will relive our childhood days.

Guddan and Preeti introduced Shorvori to Pandit,Mahesh,Rakhi,Uruvi,Twinkle(Akshat-Parth Pandit's youngest sister) and Dadi.Shorvori touched the feet of elders and they got impressed with her.
Shorvori:I met Preeti's husband now.Where is your husband Guddan?
Guddan:He has gone to Delhi for an important meeting.He will come for the engagement.
Pandit:But one more person is there.Our eldest brother.
Parth came downstairs.
Rakhi:Parth beta..meet Guddan and Preeti's cousin sister Shorvori from US.

Parth looked at Shorvori.He got shocked.

Shorvori was in complete shock.


Rakhi:Shorvori will be staying here for some days.

Parth was again shocked.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lagta hai ki aaap Sony star Colorado or zeee sabhi Kuch dekhte Hain
Pls Bura maniyega magar yadi aaap sirf akshan par focus Kar k like to 😊😊
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Bechaari twinkle I liked the way as u included many characters from various shows
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow Jasmine👏
Will surely enjoy such a multicharacter FF on AKSHAN 😳

I don't know where to begin with ...
Firstly , my AKSHAN ...😳 I always wanted to read a hate- love story on them and I hope it's one such FF 😆

Secondly, My Ragini Ji who is now Uruvi ... but 1 request ... can u please change the Uruvi-Karn couple to
Ragini- Laksh ... I mean I badly ship Raglak as my username itself suggests 😳

So Namish Taneja + Tejasswi Prakash ... if u want can Google out


Thirdly , I also loved Twinkle and Yuvraj more than Twinkle-Kunj so happy ...😃

Fourthly, Parth-Shorvori are also cuties😳

Lastly, Preeti and Pandit too

Btw who is Mahesh and Give Rakhi's character picture as well

(P.S. This comment itself has become as long as an OS 😆 )
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Sorry.I am writing this FS 4 my friend.So I can't focus only on Akshan

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Lagta hai ki aaap Sony star Colorado or zeee sabhi Kuch dekhte Hain

Pls Bura maniyega magar yadi aaap sirf akshan par focus Kar k like to 😊😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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No prob.I love long comments.
Its having only 5 shots.
I am also a raglak fan.But I am writing this story 4 my friend who requested me to include Karn Uruvi here.So I can't change.Sorry.
I have added Mahesh Rakhi's pic


Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Wow Jasmine👏

Will surely enjoy such a multicharacter FF on AKSHAN 😳

I don't know where to begin with ...
Firstly , my AKSHAN ...😳 I always wanted to read a hate- love story on them and I hope it's one such FF 😆

Secondly, My Ragini Ji who is now Uruvi ... but 1 request ... can u please change the Uruvi-Karn couple to
Ragini- Laksh ... I mean I badly ship Raglak as my username itself suggests 😳

So Namish Taneja + Tejasswi Prakash ... if u want can Google out


Thirdly , I also loved Twinkle and Yuvraj more than Twinkle-Kunj so happy ...😃

Fourthly, Parth-Shorvori are also cuties😳

Lastly, Preeti and Pandit too

Btw who is Mahesh and Give Rakhi's character picture as well

(P.S. This comment itself has become as long as an OS 😆 )

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Posted: 5 years ago
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No need to change the cast dear😊...it's lovely...👏loving this mashup though I only know and liked preeti and pandit beside akshan😳
Update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

No prob.I love long comments.

Its having only 5 shots.
I am also a raglak fan.But I am writing this story 4 my friend who requested me to include Karn Uruvi here.So I can't change.Sorry.
I have added Mahesh Rakhi's pic



Nevermind😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful start with PreeDit👏👏Ohho jallu Preeti😉😆Pandit had a hard time convincing her😉So Guddan and Preeti are sis😊Seeing them fighting she advised them against it but they didn't stop at itShe was reminded of how she saved Akshat's life and gave him a name - Akshat😳Then what went wrong?...Pandit reminded Preeti of their promise to each other and how they confessed😳😳They patched up😊UrviKa excited for their engagement😳Their scene was so cute😳Twinku's intro was exactly like Poo from KKKG😉At last she got what she wanted😛Shorvari is PreeDan's cousin and will stay with them😊But why ParVori are shocked seeing each other?Do they know each other from before?Pics❤️
Edited by Vampire2468 - 5 years ago
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Superb start
Nice concept
Love it
Continue soon
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