Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

VENOMOUS DESIRE-SEASON 2-MG FF

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Posted: 5 years ago

PROLOGUE

He entered the room seeing around him giving attention around him.He saw the room was totally messy with cobwebs & full of dust.Every inch said that it hasnt been cleaned for ages.He saw around him once again & felt some movement & turned towards it to see a pair of white milky legs smeared with dust.He moved his eyes upwards to get a cute small girl with two pony tail to her either side of the head.She was having so innocent face which showed fear & anger.Her brown eyes spitted fire but it had scare too.He walked towards her when she crawled back banging her back to the wall.She tried to crawl back & thought of moving the big wall but how can it be.But he was amused to see her futile attempt.He sat in his knees & stared straight to her eyes when she more snuggled to the wall scaring like hell.He moved forward in his knees & kept his hand on her milky thighs when her eyes widened.She immediately shoved his hands but he caught her hand.She immediately bit his hand & slapped her.He dint get angry but winced in pain.He saw her good-naturedly when she slapped him in full force that his neck creaked due to that.He dint saw his anger just turned & came near her when he got another slap from her to his other cheek.He dint showed his anger as he was so calm & once again saw her good naturedly.Then she more snuggled to the wall when he lifted her in his arms & took her outside.She closed her eyes becoz of the sunlight while he took a pitcher of lukewarm water & slowly poured it on her from head.She was shocked but hot water soothed her every cell.She opened her eyes to get bright sun light & saw towards him who had took her to that bright sunlight from the deep darkness.She felt relaxed & she felt his fingers move on her body slowly cleaning the dirt & dust & fear too!

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Posted: 5 years ago
wow Congrats on Season 2!!! thanks for posting! ðŸ˜ƒðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 5 years ago
Captivating prologue!!! superbly written! can understand her reaction! great that he found her! 

she is awed by his care! 

how did she get there?

Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
waiting for character sketch and Part 1~ Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
when will you commence Sweet Surrender, Heavenly love; and complete Colors of Love and Shaitan ki Pari?

waiting for next epilogue of VD1

sorry for asking on this thread!!! 
Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice prologue.waiting for update.
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Posted: 5 years ago
congrats
superb prologue
waiting
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Posted: 5 years ago
Congratulations on Season 2 
this is just Amazing 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Prologue is Captivating 
and makes me curious too
will be waiting for Part 1 
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